高中英語寫作公開課詳案-課堂實(shí)錄(含上課內(nèi)容及板書)

WritingGoodMorning,class.TodayisveryspecialforI’mgoingtohavealessoninfrontofsomanyteachers.Feelingnervous,Iskippedbreakfastthismorning.Haveyoueatenbreakfastyet?Yes.Goodboy.Yourmumwillbegladtohearthat.Thoughmostofyouhaveformedthehabitofhavingtopmealoftheday,Iamdefinitelysurethatsomeofyoumaynothavebreakfastorskipbreakfastforthisorthatreasonjustlikeme.Comparedwithbreakfasteaters,thepersonswhodon’thavebreakfastregularlyarecalledbreakfastskippers.Yesterdayyouwroteashortcompositionbasedonthistopic.Nowlet’slookatitagain.最近的一項(xiàng)調(diào)查表明，浙江大約30%的中學(xué)生沒有吃早餐的習(xí)慣。請你說明此現(xiàn)象發(fā)生的原因，并就此發(fā)表個人看法，提出相關(guān)建議。詞數(shù)：120左右Accordingtothedescription,howmanypartsshouldthispassagebemadeupof?Three.Thefirstpartisphenomenondescription.Inthesecondpartweshouldlistsomepossiblereasonsleadingtothisphenomenon.Andthelastpartshouldcontainourpersonalopinionsandsuggestions.(板書：phenomenon;reasons;comments)Nowlet’sfocusonthefirstpart.Ithinkonesentenceisenoughtodescribethephenomenon.Nowtakeoutyourwrittenwork.FirstI’dlikeyoutoshareyourwritingwithyourgroupmatesandchoosethebestsentenceofyourgroupandthenshowittothewholeclass.(展示幾位學(xué)生的第一段現(xiàn)象描寫的句子)Whichsentencedoyouthinkisthebest?Theirsentencesareconciseandtothepoint,whichreflecttheprinciplesofwriting.Concisemeanswritewithnounnecessarywords.(板書：Beconcise;Tothepoint)Whilewritingweshouldkeeptheminmind.NowIshowyousomesentencestructuresandyoucanrefertothemasareference.(展示教師準(zhǔn)備好的句子)1.最近的一項(xiàng)調(diào)查表明.Arecentstudyshows…Accordingtotherecentsurvey…Recently,asurveyhascarriedout,showingthat……h(huán)aven’tformed/developedthehabitofhavingbreakfast.2.Nowlet’scometothesecondpart:thepossiblereasonswhymiddleschoolstudentsdon’thavebreakfast.(請學(xué)生說說他們寫的作文中的原因，教師板書：lackoftime,beinahurry,studylateandgetuplate;havenoappetitefor(…spoilone’sappetite);beonadiet(keepslim;loseweight)Yes,youhavethoughtofmorereasonsthanIhadexpected.Butcanweputallthereasonsintoourshortpassage?Sure,weshouldchoosesomeandleavesomeout.Buthowtoconnectthemcoherentlyandsmoothlyisabigproblem.(板書：Becoherentandsmooth).Ifapieceofwritingiscoherent,itspartsareconnectedinaclearandreasonableway.Nowpleasediscussingroupsandeachgroupchoosesthebestwrittenone,whichshouldbeconciseandcoherent.(學(xué)生討論，之后展示幾個好的樣本)Nowletmeshowyousomeexpressionsasareference.(教師幻燈片展示：表示原因：)Thereareseveralreasonsaccountingforthisphenomenon.Anumberoffactorsaccountfor/leadto/contributeto/resultinthisphenomenon.Thereasonsforthisphenomenoncanbelistedasfollows.板書設(shè)計(jì)：Part1:PhenomenonlackoftimebreakfastskippersbeinahurryConnections:Part2:ReasonsstudylateandgetuplatesmoothPrinciplesofwritinghavenoappetitefor…logical1.Beconcisebeonadiet(keepslim,loseweight)2.TothepointPart3:CommentsViewpoint