譯文對(duì)比評(píng)析從哪些方面

譯文對(duì)比評(píng)析從哪些方面匆匆英譯文對(duì)比賞析（1）匆匆譯文1：TransientDays譯文2：Rush（2）燕子去了，有再來(lái)的時(shí)候；楊柳枯了，有再青的時(shí)候；桃花謝了，有再開(kāi)的時(shí)候。譯文1：Ifswallowsgoaway,theywillcomebackagain.Ifwillowswither,theywillturngreenagain.Ifpeachblossomsfade,theywillfloweragain.譯文2：Swallowsmayhavegone,butthereisatimetoreturn;willowtreesmayhavediedback,butthereisatimeofregreening;peachblossomsmayhavefallen,buttheywillbloomagain.（3）但是，聰明的，你告訴我，我們的日子為什么一去不復(fù)返呢?——是有人偷了他們罷：那是誰(shuí)?又藏在何處呢?是他們自己逃走了罷：現(xiàn)在又到了哪里呢?譯文1：But,tellme,youthewise,whyshouldourdaysgobynevertoreturn?Perhapstheyhavebeenstolenbysomeone.Butwhocoulditbeandwherecouldhehidethem?Perhapstheyhavejustrunawaybythemselves.Butwherecouldtheybeatthepresentmoment?譯文2：Now,youthewise,tellme,whyshouldourdaysleaveus,nevertoreturn?----Iftheyhadbeenstolenbysomeone,whocoulditbe?Wherecouldhehidethem?Iftheyhadmadetheescapethemselves,thenwherecouldtheystayatthemoment?（4）我不知道他們給了我多少日子；但我的手確乎是漸漸空虛了。譯文1：Idon’tknowhowmanydaysIamentitledtoaltogether,butmyquotaofthemisundoubtedlywearingaway.譯文2：IdonotknowhowmanydaysIhavebeengiventospend,butIdofeelmyhandsaregettingempty.（5）在默默里算著，八千多個(gè)日子已經(jīng)從我手中溜去；譯文1：Countingupsilently,Ifindthatmorethan8,000dayshavealreadyslippedawaythroughmyfingers.譯文2：Takingstocksilently,Ifindthatmorethaneightthousandsdayshavealreadyslidawayfromme.（6）像針尖上一滴水滴在大海里，我的日子滴在時(shí)間的流水里，沒(méi)有聲音，也沒(méi)有影子。譯文1：Likeadropofwaterfallingoffaneedlepointtotheocean,mydaysarequietlydrippingintothestreamoftimewithoutleavingatrace.譯文2：Likeadropofwaterfromthepointofaneedledisappearingintotheocean,mydaysaredrippingintothestreamoftime,soundless,traceless.（7）我不禁頭涔涔而淚潸潸了。譯文1：Atthethoughtofthis,sweatoozesfrommyforeheadandtearstrickledownmycheeks.譯文2：Alreadysweatisstartingonmyforehead,andtearswellingupinmyeyes.（8）去的盡管去了，來(lái)的盡管來(lái)著；去來(lái)的中間，又怎樣地匆匆呢?譯文1：Whatisgoneisgone,whatistocomekeepscoming.Howswiftisthetransitioninbetween!譯文2：Thosethathavegonehavegoneforgood,thosetocomekeepcoming;yetinbetween,howswiftistheshift,insucharush?（9）早上我起來(lái)的時(shí)候，小屋里射進(jìn)兩三方斜斜的太陽(yáng)。譯文1：WhenIgetupinthemorning,theslantingsuncaststwoorthreesquarishpatchesoflightintomysmallroom.譯文2：WhenIgetupinthemorning,theslantingsunmarksitspresenceinmysmallroomintwoorthreeoblongs.（10）太陽(yáng)他有腳啊，輕輕悄悄地挪移了；我也茫茫然跟著旋轉(zhuǎn)。譯文1：Thesunhasfeettoo,edgingawaysoftlyandstealthily.And,withoutknowingit,Iamalreadycaughtinitsrevolution.譯文2：Thesunhasfeet,look,heistreadingon,lightlyandfurtively;andIamcaught,blankly,inhisrevolution.(11)于是----洗手的時(shí)候，日子從水盆里過(guò)去；吃飯的時(shí)候，日子從飯碗里過(guò)去；默默時(shí)，便從凝然的雙眼前過(guò)去。譯文1：ThusthedayflowsawaythroughthesinkwhenIwashmyhands;vanishesinthericebowlwhenIhavemymeal;passesawayquietlybeforethefixedgazeofmyeyeswhenIamlostinreverie.譯文2：Thus--thedayflowsawaythroughthesinkwhenIwashmyhands,wearsoffinthebowlwhenIeatmymeal,passesawaybeforemyday-dreaminggazeasIreflectinsilence.（12）我覺(jué)察他去的匆匆了，伸出手遮挽時(shí)，他又從遮挽著的手邊過(guò)去；天黑時(shí)，我躺在床上，他便伶伶俐俐地從我身上跨過(guò)，從我腳邊飛去了。譯文1：Awayofitsfleetingpresence,Ireachoutforitonlytofinditbrushingpastmyout-stretchedhands.Intheevening,whenIlieonmybed,itnimblystridesovermybodyandflitspastmyfeet.譯文2：Icanfeelhishastenow,soIreachoutmyhandstoholdhimback,buthekeepsflowingpastmywithholdinghands.Intheevenings,asllieinbed,hestridesovermybody,glidespastmyfeet,inhisagileway.（13）我掩著面嘆息。但是新來(lái)的日子的影兒又開(kāi)始在嘆息里閃過(guò)了。譯文1：Ihaveasigh,myheadburriedinmyhands.But,inthemidstofmysighs,anewdayisflashingpast.譯文2：Iburymyfaceinmyhandsandheaveasigh.Butthenewdaybeginstoflashpastinthesigh.（14）在逃去如飛的日子里，在千門(mén)萬(wàn)戶(hù)的世界里的我能做些什么呢?只有徘徊罷了，只有匆匆罷了；在八千多日的匆匆里，除徘徊外，又剩些什么呢?譯文1：Livinginthisworldwithitsfleetingdaysandteemingmillions,whatcanIdobutwaverandwanderandliveatransientlife?WhathaveIbeendoingduringthe8,000fleetingdaysexceptwaveringandwandering?譯文2：Whatcanldo,inthisbustlingworld,withmydaysflyingintheirescape?Nothingbuttohesitate,torush.Whathavelbeendoinginthateight-thousand-dayrush,apartfromhesitating?（15）過(guò)去的日子如輕煙，被微風(fēng)吹散了；如薄霧，被初陽(yáng)蒸融了；譯文1：Thebygonedays,likewispsofsmoke,havebeendispersedbygentlewinds,and,likethinmists,havebeenevaporatedbytherisingsun.譯文2：Thosebygonedayshavebeendispersedassmokebyalightwind,orevaporatedasmistbythemorningsun.（16）我留著些什么痕跡呢?我何曾留著像游絲樣的痕跡呢?我赤裸裸來(lái)到這世界，轉(zhuǎn)眼間也將赤裸裸地回去罷?但不能平的，為什么偏要白白走這一遭啊?譯文1：WhattraceshaveIleftbehind?No,nothing,notevengossamer-liketraces.Ihavecometothisworldstarknaked,andinthetwinklingofaneye,Iamtogobackasstarknakedasever.However,Iamtakingitverymuchtoheart:whyshouldIbemadetopassthroughthisworldfornothingatall?譯文2：Whattraceshavelleftbehindme?HaveIeverleftbehindanygossamertracesatall?Ihavecometothisworld,starknaked;amItogoback,inablink,inthesamestarknakedness?Itisnotfairthough:whyshould