高一上短文改錯(cuò)技巧

高考改錯(cuò)技巧圖木舒克中學(xué)

杜秀娟2

TheStoryaboutGrowingPainsismyfavoriteAmericanTVplaybecauseitisveryinterested.Theplay._______tellshumorousstoriesthathappenintheSeaver’s.______family.Withsuchstoriesitmakepeoplethink._______aboutlife,butthereforeattractstheaudience.Itis._______alsoawindowwhichwecanlearnaboutAmerican._________society.Andthereweremanymeaningfulthingsthat.______areworththinkof,suchastherelationshipbetween.______parentsandchildreninalotofAmericanfamily.It.______isquitedifferentfromthoseinChina.Theplayis._______verypopular.We’dbetternottomissthechance._______toenjoyit.interestingmakesandarethinkingfamiliesthat∧tothefrom/through3如何做短文改錯(cuò)題

從句子的角度分析：〔1〕查時(shí)態(tài)是否一致1、Theyofferedmecoffeeandotherdrinks,wehaveagoodtimetalkingandlaughing2、Myfavouritesportisfootball.Iwasamemberofourfootballteam.3、Irememberedherwordsandcalmdown.4〔2〕查主謂是否一致1、Anyonemayborrowbooksanditcost

nothingto…2、Playingfootballnotonly…butalsogiveus…3、…clearupmysteries.Butthenthereisalwaysmoremysteriestolookinto…5〔3〕查指代是否一致1、Andthey

mustnotbreaktherulestoooftenifwewanttowinthegame.2、Iusedtolovescienceclass---allofthem---3、IlikedthoseclassesbecauseIfeltthatithelpedme.6〔4〕查上下文修飾語是否一致1、TheywanttoknowaboutChinaandaskmealotofquestion.

2、Westudyquiteafewsubject.3、Shesaidthatsheandmyclassmateall…4、I’llspendallthewholeweekendreadingandprepare

forit.5、Itwasverykindforthemtomeetme.75〕查行文邏輯是否一致1、ItisaveryimportantexambutIcan’taffordtofailit.2、Mostpeoplecanquicklygetforhelpfromadoctororgotoahospitalsince

theyareill.3、Shewassmilingbutnoddingatme.Iremembered.8逐句找錯(cuò)，錯(cuò)在那里？動(dòng)詞形，名詞數(shù)．還要注意形和副．代詞格，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟介詞短語須關(guān)注．習(xí)慣用法要記?。谠~連詞常光臨．9此考點(diǎn)歸納的是除動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)與非謂語動(dòng)詞之外的動(dòng)詞考點(diǎn)，它包括被動(dòng)語態(tài)、情態(tài)動(dòng)詞、動(dòng)詞形式的變化、動(dòng)詞用法辨析、動(dòng)詞be的誤加與漏用等。NMET2000：Nowmypictureandprizeishanginginthelibrary.＿＿＿＿NMET’2003：Shelikeditverymuchandreadsittotheclass.＿＿＿＿Ofcourse,whenmymotherwasasked,“Haveyou…〞______are____————一、動(dòng)詞形readwas10Helieddownbythesideofthepathtorest.(lied改為lay，lie表示“躺〞時(shí)，其過去時(shí)是lay)(全國(guó)卷)(2)CharlesandLindawereseeingnearthetopofthebuilding.(seeing改為seen，因?yàn)閺暮x上看，此處謂語應(yīng)用被動(dòng)語態(tài))(全國(guó)卷)(3)Booksmaybekeepforfourweeks.(keep改為kept，因此處要用被動(dòng)語態(tài))(全國(guó)卷)11(11)Itwasverycold.Thesnowliedthickontheground.(12)TherewillhaveanEnglishfilmintheschoolhalltonight.(13)Afterthat,theboydecidednottoasailor.(14)Aftersupper,myfatherwouldgooutforawalkandthencomebacktoseenewspapers.(15)Heartomecarefully.WhatI’msayingisveryimportant.laybebereadListen12短文改錯(cuò)的名詞考點(diǎn)主要涉及名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)問題，即在該用復(fù)數(shù)的地方誤用其單數(shù)，或在該用單數(shù)的地方誤用其復(fù)數(shù)。NMET2001：

…sothatI’llgetgoodmarks

inallmysubject.

＿＿＿＿NMET2003:Theirwordwereagreatencouragementtome._____

subjectswords二、名詞數(shù)13(1)Westoppedtorestforawhileandtodrinksomewatersfromastream.(全國(guó)卷)(2)Weclimbeverywhere,notonlyinAmerica.WehavebeentoEuropemanytime.(3)Therearebranchlibraryinmanyvillages.(4)Ihopethatyoutwocouldcomeandvisitussometimessoon.watertimeslibrariestime14主要涉及冠詞的誤加和漏用，有時(shí)也考查不定冠詞與定冠詞以及零冠詞的用法區(qū)別(包括a與an的區(qū)別)。其中，涉及最多的是，當(dāng)一個(gè)單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞表示泛指時(shí)，其前漏用不定冠詞；另外注意習(xí)語中的冠詞三、冠詞連詞常光顧Afterahourorsowebegantofeelveryfrightened.Idecidedtoclimbthetreetoseewherewewere.Somepeoplereadthebooksorwatchtelevisionwhileothershavesports.(4)Goodhealthisperson’smostvaluablepossession.anaa15連詞常光臨Wetriedtofixitandtherewasnothingwecoulddo.ItoldMother,Father,Sister,allmyfriendsherewhatagreattimeIhad.It’sanimportantexambutIcan’taffordtofailit.

Shewassmilingbutnoddingatme.

對(duì)連詞的考查主要涉及and,but,or,so等幾個(gè)表示并列、轉(zhuǎn)折、選擇、因果等關(guān)系的詞語。嚴(yán)格說來，這類錯(cuò)誤主要屬于行文邏輯的錯(cuò)誤。butandandand161.Iwoulddescribemyselfasshyandquietly.2.Heaskedangryifwehadfinishedthework.quietangrily四、還要注意形和副17

短文改錯(cuò)對(duì)形容詞與副詞的考查主要涉及形容詞和副詞比較等級(jí)的誤用(尤其是在本身已是比較級(jí)的詞前誤加more)、形容詞與副詞的混用(如修飾動(dòng)詞時(shí)誤用形容詞或修飾名詞時(shí)誤用副詞)等，另外，用作表語時(shí)該用形容詞的卻誤用了名詞、簡(jiǎn)短副詞(如in,down等)的誤加與漏用、涉及形容詞搭配的as…as結(jié)構(gòu)、how與what的混用等也是常考的考點(diǎn)。18Afteranhourorsowebegantofeelveryfrightening.Charlessaid,“AssoonasIseearealytallbuilding,Iwanttoclimbit.LastSunday,policecarshurrytothetallerbuildinginNewYork.Asaresult,peopleinthemodernworldgenerallylivemuchmorelongerthanpeopleinthepast.Forinstance,onenightheplayedstrongandloudlymusictillfouro’clockinthemorning.frightenedreallytallestloud19主要有現(xiàn)在分詞、過去分詞，動(dòng)名詞和不定式錯(cuò)誤。例如：Myparentsloveme…andwilldoalltheycanmakesure…

2.

Wefedmonkeys,visitingtemplesandtoldstories.3.SoonIbegantoenjoytalktomyselfonpaper.

tovisitedtalking五、非謂語，細(xì)辨別20主要考查習(xí)慣搭配方面的根底知識(shí)，其錯(cuò)誤表現(xiàn)形式主要有三種：多詞、少詞和搭配錯(cuò)誤。例如：1:Suddenly,IcaughtasightofmyEnglishteacher.2:Myteacheradvisedmetokeepmydiary.a六、習(xí)慣用法要記牢21不同的句子成分要用不同的詞類；不同的語境要選擇不同的詞語。只有對(duì)句子結(jié)構(gòu)和成分作細(xì)致的分析，才能找出用詞不當(dāng)?shù)腻e(cuò)誤。例如：1:Idon’tknowthattheydon’t

liketotalkwithme.2：IliveinBeijing，whereisthe

capitalofChina.whywhich七、句子成分多分析22(1)Inthelastfiveyearsthatthey’veclimbedchurches,highbuildingsandtelevisiontowers.(2)Charlessaid,“AssoonIseeareallytallbuilding,Iwanttoclimbit.

(1)Heisthemanhiscarwasstolen.(2)That’sthehotelwhichwewerestayinglastsummer.(3)That’sthepalacewherewevisitedlastsummer.(4)Isuddenlywokeupinmid-night.AnditwasalongtimeIgottosleepagain.(5)Inthepastfewyearswhenwe’veplantedthousandsoftreesalongtheriveraswhosewhereWhich/thatbefore23短文改錯(cuò)應(yīng)注意的問題

四不改:①標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不改。②大小寫不改。③詞序錯(cuò)誤不改。〔不是不改，而是按錯(cuò)詞或少詞來改)。④在綱外生詞不改。文中出現(xiàn)帶漢語注釋的詞，在句中不可能用錯(cuò)。24AtChristmasEve,Jimwentwithhis1._____fathertochooseaChristmastree.Theychoose2._____abigone.Itwasalmostastallerastheroom!3._____Theyputtheminthecornerofthesitting4._________On_________chose_______tall_______it動(dòng)詞形介詞短語常?？迹?xí)慣用法要記住還要注意形和副代詞格，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟25room.Katewascovereditwithalotof5._____Christmaslight.Thesittingroomlooked6.____reallybeautifullyatthemoment.Therewas7.________afireburninginthefireplace,buttheChristmas8.____treelightsareshinningbrightly.Jimandhis9.____parentssinginganddancinghappily.10.____＼was＼_______lights_____________beautiful____andwere∧were動(dòng)詞形還要注意形和副動(dòng)詞形名詞數(shù)冠詞連詞須關(guān)注____26

Ioftendreamofateacher.Idreamofstandingonthe______platformintheclassroomandgivelessonstolovelyboys.______andgirls.Iteachthem,playwiththem,butwatchthem.______growingup.IamalwaysyoungwhenIwasstaying.______withthem.Iknowthereisnoteasytobeateacher.You.______havetolearninordertoteach.Withoutenoughknowledges.______youcanneverlearnwell.Whatismore,youhavetobe.______friendswithyourpupilsandtakegoodcareofhim..______Onlyinthiswaycanyouareagoodteacherandwin______respectfromthem.ThoughIamastudentnow,Iwillworkasveryhardtomakemydreamcometrue. ______∧beinggivingandamitknowledgeteachthembePractice27Ilovecamping.It’smyfavoritewaytospentthe summervacation.Lastyear,myfamilyandIwentcampinginthecountryside.Itwasoneofthemostexcited experiencesIhadneverhad.Wesleptinatentandwentonalongwalkeveryday.Wecookoverafireandthe foodalwaystastedwonderfully.Forawholeweek,I sawlovelymountainviewsorbreathedfreshair.AtnightIheardthegentlewindblowinginthetree,andIfeltsopeaceful.Itdoesn’tcostmuchtocamp,andwhatIbelieve it’sthebestwaytogetclosenatureandenjoyitsbeauty. ∧1.Don’tlosehearts,you’llbesuccessfulintime.1_______

2.Ineedsomemoreinformations.2_______

3.Thesemachineslookthesame,buttheyareofdifferentkind.3_______

4.Peoplerememberhimforhiscontributiontothecountry.4__________heartinformationkindscontributions名詞和數(shù)詞返回1.Ataverybeginning,Ichooseaplayandactors.1_the_

2.Youcan’tconsiderhimahonestman.2_______

3.InChina,childrenusuallystartschoolatanageofseven.3_______

4.TheplayissetintheParis.4_______

5.Itisnecessaryfortheteacherstoaddthearttotheirteachings.5_______

6.Ican’tstopbecauseI’minhurry.6_______anthethethea冠詞返回1.Knowingisonething;doingisother.1_______

2.ThisisthebestfilmwhichIhaveeverseen.2_______

3.Ialsoenjoyedthedayswhenwespenttogether.3___________

4.Theoneswhatyoudecidenottokeepcanbetraded

withotherpeople.4___________

5.Hedrovetoofast,andthepolicestoppedher

andhandedhimaticket.5_______

anotherthatthat/which/xthat/which/xhim代詞返回1.Thoughitwascold,buthewentoutwithoutacat.1_________

2.Helikessports,butIlikemusic.2_________

3.Pickoutthewrongsentencesbutcorrectthem.3_________

4.Workhard,andyou’llsucceedsoonerandlater.4_________

5.Whateveryoudo,andI’llberightherewaitingforyou.5_________

6.Thiskindofcarcostsalotofmoney,andhecanaffordit.6_________butbutandorwhileand連詞返回1.Shelooklikeenjoyingtheconcerttheotherday.1________

2.Waterpollutionoftenbringondisease.2________

3.Thestudentswatchestheteacherdoingtheexperiment.3________

4.Hecareforcollectingcoins.4________

5.Sofar,hemadealivingbypickingupwastes.5_______

6.Theyoungmandressedinbluearemybrother.6_______

7.Thechurchburneddownyesterdaydatefromthe18thcentury.7________

8.Heissaidsavingmoneytobyabicycle.8_______

9.Moneyisspendtolookafterpeoplewithillnesses.9_______

10.Shewaspersuadedtakingthejob.10_______

11.Compareto1992,thepriceofgrainwasincreasedabout50%.11________

12.JudgeFromhisaccent,heisasoutherner.12_______

13.Sheisusedtoliveinthecountryatpresent.13_______

14.Weshouldstopthechildrenfromplayfire.14_______

15.Withaboyledtheway,theystartedtowardsthevillage.15_______lookedbrin