主題11 學習技能-2021年中考英語作文素材大全

主題11

—學習技能

I.主題詞匯

asamiddleschoolstudent,akindofskill,forthesereasons,dependon,withthehelpofsb.,putmy

heart,beinterestedin,makeoutbodiesstrong,practisedoingsth.Carefully,learnfrom,one's

favouritetraditionalskill,sparenoefforttodosth不遺余力做某事，tryone'sbesttodosth

II.常用句型

1.ThisisthefirstreasonIwanttolearnswimming.Thesecondoneis...

2.Iwanttolearnswimmingby...

3....Isanimportantskillinourlife.

4.Aswehavegrownup,weshouldnolongerdependonparents,soweshouldlearn...

5.Althoughtheknowledgeinourbooksisimportant,defiferentskillsinourdailylifearealso

important.

6.Lifeisfullofchallenge,sowecan'tstopthestepoflearning.

7.I'msureitwillbeoneofthemostdelicioussoupsinthedishes.Vmeagertomakeit.

Ill.模擬試題

Howcanwelearnaskill?

A.Whatdoyouwanttolearn?(swimming,cooking,readingbooks...)

B.Whydoyouwanttolearnit?(Giveatleasttworeasons.)

C.Howwillyoulearnit?

要點分析：

1.著重寫一個你喜歡的技能

2.第三點要展開寫

3.最后要從這個技能的學習中得到一個啟示

4.寫作思路

學習新技能的一些小建議

1.1willlearntocookfrommymother.Ithinkthedisheswhichmymothercooksaredelicious.Iwill

learnwashing,cuttingandcookingstepbystep.

2.Iwanttolearnswimming.Tilgototheswimmingpooltolearniteveryweekwhetherifsrainyor

windy.Swimmingisanimportantskillinourlife.

3.Tillearnitwiththehelpofmymother.IthinkifIputmyheartintoit,Iwill...

4.WhenIgrowup,Iwillgotoadrivingschoolandlearnhowtodrivefromcoaches.Afterhavinga

drivinglicense,Iwillpractisedrivingcarefully.

5.范文講評

Iagirlwhoisinterestedincars.Iwanttolearnhowtodriveassoonaspossible.Ithinkdriving

isveryexcitingandbydrivingIcangetcloserwiththecars.

WhenIgrowup,Iwillgotoadrivingschoolandlearnhowtodrivefromcoaches.Afterhaving

adrivinglicense,Iwillpractisedrivingcarefully.InChina,peopleunder18arenotallowedtohave

drivinglicenses,sotheonlythingIcandonowistolearnthelawaboutdriving.

IbelieveIwillbeagoodteacher.

點評與評分

整篇文章條理清晰，意思連貫，語句通順。亮點之處是例子新穎，拋開了常見的一些實例。按

中考作文20分計算，屬于第二檔的文章，可得14/6分。需改進之處：

1.學習開車的第二個理由不太妥當，可以改為：學會開車可以給我們的生活帶來便捷。

2.學習的過程還需要更詳細些。

3.學會開車后還得注意安全駕車。

修改稿

Iamagirlwhoisinterestedincars.Iwanttolearnhowtodriveassoonaspossible.Ithink

drivingisveryexciting,anditbringmemoreconveniencewhenIgoingsomewhere.

WhenIgrowup,Iwillgotoadrivingschoolandlearnhowtodrivefromcoaches.First,Iwill

haveacertaintimetopractisedriving.Second,Iwillremembersometipsaboutdrivingskills.Third,

drivingcarefullyisthemostimportantthing.Afterhavingadrivinglicense,Iwilldrivecarefullyon

theroadandpaymoreattentiontosafety.InChina,peopleunder18arenotallowedtohavedriving

licenses,sotheonlythingIcandonowistolearnthelawaboutdriving.

IbelieveIwillbeagooddriver.

范文選登

1、TheskillIwanttolearnmostiscooking.Iwanttolearntocookbecausemyparentsarealways

busy,andIhavetoeatoutalone.IfIcancook,Icancookformyself.Thatwouldbefantastic.Iwill

learntocookfrommymother.Ithinkthedisheswhichmymothercooksaredelicious.Iwilllearn

washing,cuttingandcookingstepbystep.WelcometomyhomeandtastemydishesafterIhave

learnit.

2、Swimmingisakindofskill.Itcanmakeourbodiesstrong.ThisisthefirstreasonIwanttolearn

swimming.Thesecondreasonisswimmingcanprotectourselvesandotherpeople.It'sapitythat

whenyouseeachilddrown,youcan'thelphimjustbecauseyoucan'tswim.Forthesereasons,I

wanttolearntoswim.I'llgototheswimmingpooltolearniteveryweekwhetherit'srainyor

windy.Swimmingisanimportantskillinourlife.

3、Aswehavegrownup,weshouldnolongerdependonparents,soweshouldlearnskillstodo

somethingbyourselves.Iwanttolearntoridebike.First,ifsconvenientandhelpful.Second,ifI

learnit.Icangoeverywherebymyself.That'sgreat.Tillearnitwiththehelpofmymother.Ithink

ifIputmyheartintoit,Iwillbegoodatridingbikes

范文鏈接

Learntocook

AsaGradeNinestudent,IshoulddosomecookingwithmymumbecauseIwanttobe

independent.SoIbegintolearnitfrommymum.Firstly,Ilearntobuyfreshvegetables.ThenI

washthemclean.Afterthat,Icutthemintopieces.Later,Iputsomeoilinthepan,heattheoiland

putvegetablesinit.Atlast,Iaddsomesaltinitandservethemintoabowl.Ipractisecooking

weekly,andnowIcancookdeliciousfood.

Inmyopinion,whenweleamanewskill,weshouldoftenpractiseitandnevergiveup.Asthe

famoussayinggoes,“Practisemakesperfect."Theharderyoutry,thebetteryoudo.

2.Iwanttolearntocook

Lifeisfullofchallenges,sowecan'tstopthestepoflearning.Althoughtheknowledgeinour

booksisimportant,differentskillsinourdailylifearealsoimportant.Forthetimebeing,Iwantto

learntocook.First,itwillbeconvenientifIcancook.IcancookanydeliciousfoodIwanttoeat.

Second,ifmyparentsarebusy,Icancookdinnerfbrthemtomakethemhappy.Althoughit'snot

easyfbrmetocookdeliciousfood,IbelieveifItrymybest,nothingcomesbetweensuccessandme.

3.I'meagertomakesoup

Makingsoupisoneofmygreatestloves.Itbringsmealotoffun,SoIwanttomakeluosong

soupbymyself.

Tomakethisnicesoup,first,Ibuyabigpieceofbeef,somefreshvegetablesandtomatosauce.

Next,Icutthebeefandboilitforafewminutes.Then,Iputsomevegetablesintoit,andaddtomato

sauce.Thetastysoupisfinished.

I'msureitwillbeoneofthemostdelicioussoupsinthedishes.Tmeagertomakeit.

4.DIY

DIYisoneofmygreatestloves.Greetingcardsarefuntomake.Ialsobuymanyoldthingsand

trytomakethemlooknewwithsomepaintandglue.Iamlearningsomesimplecarpentry,too.I

wantabookcasebutdon'thaveenoughmoney,soIbuilditbymyself.Thismakesmesohappyand

proud.DuringholidayswhenIhavemuchfreetime,I'mgoingtomakesomeotherthingslikemodel

planes.Iamsureitwillbegreatfun.

5.Weshouldlearntodochores

Doingchoresisveryimportantforeverychild.Itcanmakeustakeabreakfromour

schoolworkandcareforourparents.Italsohelpstodevelopourself-helpskillsforourfuturelife.

Soevenwearestillyoung,weshouldlearntodothat.Whenwearefree,wecanhelpourparents

washthedishesanddothelaundry.Afterwegetup,weshouldmakeourbedbyourselves,andhelp

cleanthebedroomandotherrooms.Ifweexperiencethelabourofdoinghousework,wewilllove

ourparentsmore.

6.Chinesepapercut

a.Chinesepapercuthasalonghistoryofover2,000years.Itcanbeseeninmanydifferent

partsofChina.Manypeople,nomatteryoungorold,arefondofit.

PeopleinnorthernpartofChinadowellinmakingpapercut.Theycutpaperintodifferent

shapes,likeanimals,flowersandsoon.

IthinkChinesepapercutsarenotonlybeautifulbutalsoveryuseful.Peopleusuallyputthem

ondoorsorwindowswhentheycelebratesomethinghappy,especiallyfortheSpringFestival.More

andmorepeopleareinterestedinit.

b.Asweallknow,paper-cuttingasanoldChinesetraditionalskill,isusedwidelyinourcountry.

Ifsalsomyfaouritetraditionalskill.Therearemanyreasonsforit.Forexample,paper-cuttingfor

windowdecorationisaspecialtypeofit.Itnotonlydecoratesourhomebutalsobringsushappiness

andluck.Moreimportantly,tolearnthetraditionalskillcanhelpusteenagersrememberthehistory

andtakecareofthewealthofourculture.SoIthinkeveryskillisprecious,butpaper-cuttingismy

favourite.

真題在現(xiàn)

Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic"Iwanttoinvent"（以《我想要發(fā)明》為題，

寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。）

(注意：1.在答題紙上將題目補充完整。2.文中不得出現(xiàn)任何姓名，校名及其他相關信息,

否則不予評分。)

Usethefollowingpointsasareferenceo(以下提示僅供參考)

Itcanbeusedto...

Itwillbeexciting/necessary/helpfulto...

★審(Read)的：簡開

從作文標題“Iwanttoinvent"中可得知，主要的寫作內(nèi)容應為我想要發(fā)明XXX,

其中XXX通常為一件物品,且該物品最好在現(xiàn)實生活中不存在。接下來再仔細閱讀所給提示：

1.Itcanbeusedto...2.Itwillbeexciting/necessary/helpfulto...讀完后會發(fā)現(xiàn)，提示中并沒有

給出太多的框架性引導性問題，對于此類文章，則需要結(jié)合實際情況，按照傳統(tǒng)作文寫作的三

大段，重新整合思路。

新的思路基本上可圍繞1.What2.Why3.How這三個方面展開，但由于中考對作文的詞數(shù)

有限制，為了避免文章過長，可挑其中兩個方面再加一個conclusion來進行書寫，如l.What

2.why3.Conclusion?假設在文本中我們采用第一個寫作思路，即可將題目中所給的已知條件

定為l.Whatdoyouwanttoinvent?2.Whydoyouwanttoinvent?2.Whydoyouwanttoinventit?

3.Conclusion,從而得出寫作方向：1.我想要發(fā)明的東西是……2.我想要發(fā)明該物品的原因

是……3.希望該物品可以……

★寫(Write)

根據(jù)之前所講寫作步驟：作文題目一寫作框架一添加素材一初稿,

Step1

即可進行如下書寫步驟的拆解：

1.Whatdoyouwantto開篇：Iwanttoinvent...

invent?中間：Because...

2.Whydoyouwantto

結(jié)尾：Inventionsare.../I

inventit?

接下來，我們需要思考，涉及到人際關系類話題時，可以運用哪些詞匯及句式，才會使文章的內(nèi)容

變得豐富。

詞匯大搜羅

?名詞：

1.air2.body3.car4.conclusion

5.human6.Internet7.invention8.jam

9.joy10.kind11.life12.light

13.opinion14.people15.pollution16.problem

17.progress18.school19.situation20.society

21.technology22.thing23.topic24.traffic

25.work26.world

?動詞：

1.attack2.begin3.cause4.enable

5.go6.have7.invent8.know

9.like10.make11.mention12.must

13.solve14.try15.want16.will

17.work

?形容詞：

1.afraid2.all3.better4.common

5.great6.Hot7.invent8.more

9.most10.various

?副詞：

1.especially2.recently3.usually

連接詞及短語大搜羅

?表時間

recently,when

?表層次

First,second,third

?表總結(jié)

inaword,inconclusion,inshort

?表因果

so,therefore,because,becauseof

?表遞進

and,moreover,what'smore

表達方式大搜羅

1.Wemustadmitthat...我們必須承認....

2.Thereisahottopicabout...有一個關于....的熱點話題

3.Formypart,...就我而言,..

4.Whenweinvent...,wecan...當我們發(fā)明....,我們就能....

5.Wemust...我們必須...

運用以上單詞、連接詞以及句式,就可以在已寫出的文章框架(開篇、中間、結(jié)尾)的中心句

基礎上，添加必要的寫作素材，從而形成文章的初稿,如下：

初稿：

Iwanttoinventaflyingcar

Wemustadmitthathigh-technologyhasagreatinfluenceonourlife.Thelightmakesusnotbe

afraidofdarknessanymore,andtheInternetenablesustoknowtheworldbetter.Recently,thereisa

hottopicaboutthingswewanttoinventmost.Formypart,Ilikeaflyingcarmost.First,trafficjam

isacommonsituation,especiallywhenwegotoworkorgohome.Second,peopleareusuallylate

forschoolorwork.Third,variouskindsofdiseasesbegintoattackhumanbodybecauseoftheair

pollutioncausedbythecar.Whenweinventaflyingcarsuccessfully,wecansolvealltheproblems

mentionedabove.Inconclusion,withouthigh-technology,thesocietywon'tmakeprogress.

Therefore,wemusttryourbesttoinventnewthings.

★美(Beautify)

根據(jù)之前所講寫作步驟:初稿--包裝句子,

Step2

=包裝句子

則可發(fā)現(xiàn),文章在句式方面出現(xiàn)了如下問題:

初稿:

Iwanttoinventaflyingcar

Wemustadmitthat⑴high-technologyhasagreatinfluenceon(2)ourlife.Thelightmakesus

notbeafraidofdarknessanymogandtheInternetenablesustoknowtheworldbetter⑶.Recently,

thereisahottopicaboutthingswewanttoinventmost.Formypart(4),Ilikeaflyingcarmost(5).

First(6),trafficjamisacommonsituation,especiallywhenwegot。workorgohome⑺.Second,

peopleareusuallylateforschoolorwork.Third,variouskindsofdiseasesbegintoattackhuman

bodybecauseof(8)theairpollutioncausedbythecar.Whenwcinventaflyingcarsuccessfully,we

cansolvealltheproblemsmentionedabove⑼.Inconclusion(10),withouthigh-technology,the

societywon'tmakeprogress.Therefore,wemusttryourbesttoinventnewthings(11).

(1)單純使用賓語從句

(2)使用單詞過于簡單

(3)五大基本句型+句意表達不明確

(4)短語使用過于簡單X2

(5)五大基本句型X2+單純使用最高級

(6)單詞使用過于簡單X2

(7)用詞表達不準確+表達啰嗦

(8］短語使用過于簡單X2

(9)單純使用時間狀語從句+單純使用主動句

(10)短語使用過于簡單X3

(11)單詞及短語使用過于簡單

根據(jù)以上問題，可將初稿修改成如下版本：

終稿：

Iwanttoinventaflyingcar

Nevercanwedenythathigh-technologyhasafar-reachinginfluenceonourlife.Itisthe