高考英語觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比類作文寫作技巧

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寫作技巧三班的同學(xué)進(jìn)行了一場有關(guān)英語學(xué)習(xí)的討論。討論的題目是：學(xué)習(xí)英語要不要從兒童時(shí)期開始？請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表中的提示寫一篇短文，介紹討論的情況。

一些同學(xué)認(rèn)為

另一些同學(xué)認(rèn)為1．應(yīng)從兒童時(shí)期開始學(xué)習(xí)英語2．兒童時(shí)期記憶力好，可以記住很多單詞3．能為以后的英語學(xué)習(xí)打下堅(jiān)實(shí)的基礎(chǔ)1.不應(yīng)從兒童時(shí)期開始學(xué)英語2.兒童時(shí)期既要學(xué)漢語拼音又要學(xué)英語，易混淆3.會(huì)影響漢語學(xué)習(xí)和今后的英語學(xué)習(xí)討論未取得一致意見注意：1．文章的起始句已給出；2．詞數(shù)：100左右〔不包括已給的起始句〕；3．參考詞匯：根底—foundation漢語拼音—Chinesepinyin審題

文體：時(shí)態(tài)：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：

議論文一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)1．贊同兒童時(shí)期開始學(xué)英語。2．兒童記憶力好，記單詞多。3．為今后打根底。4．反對(duì)從兒童時(shí)期開始學(xué)英語。5．既學(xué)漢語拼音又學(xué)英語易混淆。6．影響今后的漢語和英語的學(xué)習(xí)。7．結(jié)尾句。

Thestudentsofclass3hadadiscussionaboutwhetheritisnecessarytostartlearningEnglishfromchildhood.

Opinionsaredividedonthisissue.

SomeofthemthinkthatEnglishlearningshouldstartfromchildhood.Aslittleboysandgirlshaveaverygoodmemory,theycanlearnalotofEnglishwordsbyheart.ThiswillhelpthemlayasolidfoundationfortheirfutureEnglishlearning.

Butothersdonotagree.

YoungchildrenhavetolearnChinesepinyinatschool.IftheystudyChinesepinyinandEnglishatthesametime,itwillbeverylikelyforthemtomixthemup.ThiswilldoalotofharmnotonlytotheirChineselearningbutalsototheirfutureEnglishlearning.

Inshort,thestudentshavenotarrivedatanyagreementyet.

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Thestudentsofclass3hadadiscussionaboutwhetheritisnecessarytostartlearningEnglishfromchildhood.

Opinionsaredividedonthisissue.

SomeofthemthinkthatEnglishlearningshouldstartfromchildhood.Aslittleboysandgirlshaveaverygoodmemory,theycanlearnalotofEnglishwordsbyheart.ThiswillhelpthemlayasolidfoundationfortheirfutureEnglishlearning.

Butothersdonotagree.

YoungchildrenhavetolearnChinesepinyinatschool.IftheystudyChinesepinyinandEnglishatthesametime,itwillbeveryeasyforthemtomixthemup.ThiswilldoalotofharmnotonlytotheirChineselearningbutalsototheirfutureEnglishlearning.

Inshort,thestudentshavenotarrivedatanyagreementyet.What’smore,

What’sworse,作文模板

__________hadadiscussionaboutwhether__________.Opinionsaredividedonthisissue.________ofthestudentsthink_________should________._____.What’smore,_______.

Ontheotherhand,______ofthestudentsthink_______shouldn’t______.What’sworse,______.

Inshort,_______havenotarrivedatanyagreementyet.介紹討論的主題(開頭句)：我們舉行了一場討論，討論內(nèi)容是學(xué)生是否可以……

Wehadadiscussionaboutwhetherstudentsshouldbeallowedto…我們已經(jīng)作了一個(gè)調(diào)查，調(diào)查內(nèi)容是學(xué)生是否可以……

We’vehadasurveyonwhetherstudentsshouldbeallowedto…我寫信是要告訴你我們的一場討論，討論內(nèi)容是否可以……

I’mwritingtotellyouaboutadiscussionwehavehadaboutwhetherstudentsshouldbeallowedto…過渡句Opinionsaredividedonthisissue.

Opinionsaremainlydividedintotwogroups.Differentpeople,however,havedifferentopinionsonthismatter.Differentpeople,however,thinkquitedifferentlyonthismatter.在這個(gè)問題上大家意見有分歧。主要有兩種不同意見。然而，在這件事上不同的人有不同的看法。介紹正方觀點(diǎn)：Sixtypercentofthestudentsarefortheidea.

Sixtypercentofthestudentsthinkitnecessaryto…Somepeoplethinkthat…Accordingtothem,allofusshould...Somebelievethat…Theyareoftheopinionthat…進(jìn)一步介紹正方觀點(diǎn)What’smore,wecan…aswellas…Besides,it’s…,which…介紹反方觀點(diǎn)However,…ofthestudentsthink…Ontheotherhand,…ofthestudentsthink…However,othershavedifferentopinions.But…ofthestudentsthink…Othersarguethat…Intheiropinion,…進(jìn)一步介紹反方觀點(diǎn)What’sworse…What’smore…Inaddition,…Besides,…Plus,…First,…Second,…Third,…總結(jié)句Inshort,noagreementhasbeenreachedyet.Sofar,noagreementhasbeenreached.Inshort,thestudentshavenotarrivedatanyagreementyet.范例1：假設(shè)你事實(shí)李華，你班同學(xué)最近開長了一場討論，主題是：高三學(xué)生要不要參加體育鍛煉，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面所提供的信息，寫一篇短文，介紹討論的情況，并發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)．比例５５％４５％你的觀點(diǎn)觀點(diǎn)支持反對(duì)主要理由１．應(yīng)該每天進(jìn)行體育鍛煉２．做早操，打乒乓球，打籃球，但時(shí)間不要過長３．鍛煉能增強(qiáng)體質(zhì)減少疾?。矗憻捘苁勾竽X休息，使學(xué)習(xí)效果更好．１鍛煉浪費(fèi)時(shí)間２．鍛煉使人疲勞３．鍛煉以后很興奮，較長時(shí)間不能學(xué)習(xí)４．鍛煉中可能受傷．．．．．．1.關(guān)鍵詞語體育鍛煉做早操增強(qiáng)體質(zhì)減少疾病休息學(xué)習(xí)有效果浪費(fèi)時(shí)間投入學(xué)習(xí)受傷takeexercisesdomorningexercisesbuildupthebodyreducethediseasehaveareststudymoreeffectivelyawasteoftimepayattentiontostudybehurt2.作文結(jié)構(gòu)1.….havehadadiscussionaboutwhetherstudentsofSenior3shouldtakephysicalexercises.Asweknow,everycoinhastwocoins./Differentstudentshavedifferentideas.2.55%ofthestudentsthink………….suchas(舉例)……..〔原因〕…..3.Ontheotherhand,45%ofthestudentsbelieve…….(原因〕……..4.Inmyopinion,Ipreferto

3.范文：

Recently,wehavehadadiscussionaboutwhetherstudentsofSenior3shouldtakephysicalexercises.Asweknow,everycoinhastwocoins.

55%ofthestudentsthinktheyshouldtakeallkindsofexerciseseveryday,suchasdoingmorningexercises,playingtabletennisandplayingbasketball,butnotspendtoomuchtimeonthem.Asaproverbsays,”allworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy."Exercisebuildsuptheirbodyandreducelotsofdiseases.Sportsletthemhaveagoodrestsothattheirstudywillbemoreeffective.

Ontheotherhand,45%ofthestudentsbelievetakingexerciseisawasteoftimeandtiring.Aftertakingexercise,theyaretooexcitedforalongtimetopayattentiontotheirlessons.Andit’spossibletobehurtinsports.

Inmyopinion,Iprefertotakeproperexercisesinmysparetime.

范例２：某中學(xué)生英語報(bào)社正開展一場題為“Youngteachersorelderlyteachers，whichdoyouprefer?”請(qǐng)你依據(jù)下面表格所提供的要點(diǎn)寫一篇短文，向該報(bào)社投稿。

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你的觀點(diǎn)?

注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右，開頭語已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總數(shù)；2．短文必須包含表格的全部內(nèi)容。要求觀點(diǎn)明確，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，緊湊連貫學(xué)生作品1：

Comparewith

youngteachers,Ipreferelderlyteachers.Therearesomereasonsbelow.

Foronething,mostofelderlyteachersarepatientinteaching.They

notonly

sparenoeffort

toteachthestudents,butalso

giveclassescarefully.Theywill

doalltheycantomakethestudentsunderstand

theteaching

content.Whatgoodteachers!Foranotherthing,elderlyteachersarefullofteachingexperience.Thisisalsothemostimportant,

especiallyforusseniorstudents.

Thisisonlymyopinion.Ithinkyoungteachersarealsogood.點(diǎn)評(píng)：亮點(diǎn)：1、觀點(diǎn)鮮明，詞匯句型的運(yùn)用比較靈活2、過渡詞及連詞的使用使文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊連貫、條理清楚。2、審題不全面，忽略了對(duì)青年教師這局部信息的處理。這一點(diǎn)是比較大的失誤。∧1)2)3)1)Compared2)more3)trytomaketheclasseslivelyandinteresting缺乏之處：1、個(gè)別地方的表達(dá)需要改進(jìn)。學(xué)生作品2:

Opinionsaredividedonthisquestion.

Somestudentswholiketheelderlyteachersmorethantheyoungonesthinkthattheelderlyonesaremorepatientinteaching,morecarefulinexplainingandalsohavealotofexperience.

However,theothershaveadifferentopinion.Theythinktheteacherswhoareyoungarefullofenergy.Besides,theirteachingislivelyandtheydaretobringinthenewideas.Well,inmyopinion,Ilikeboththeelderlyteachersandtheyoungonesbecausefromthemwebothcanlearnalot.點(diǎn)評(píng)：亮點(diǎn)：1、段落清楚，要點(diǎn)齊全，句式表達(dá)比較靈活，能適當(dāng)運(yùn)用復(fù)句。2、過渡詞運(yùn)用也比較熟練。需要改進(jìn)的地方：1〕2)3)＼4)1)prefertheelderlyteacherstotheyoungones2)withexplanations3)the去掉4)TheyoungteachersOnepossibleversion:

Opinionsaredividedonthisquestion.Somestudentsmaylikeelderlyteachers'teachingbecausetheythinkelderlyteachershavemoreteachingexperienceandthattheytendtobepatientandcarefulwithexplanations.Howe