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202401蘇州零模讀后續(xù)寫講解與下水作文第二節(jié)
讀后續(xù)寫(滿分
25
分)閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫一段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Attheendofmyjunioryear,electionforstudentbodyofficers
causedquiteanexcitementamongstudents.Itappeared
thatDebbiewouldrununopposedforpresident.
Talking
among
agroupofdissatisfiedgirls,I
whispered,“Theremustbesomeone
who’drunagainsther.”SuddenlyLiz
focusedherattentionon
me.“Whynotyou?”“Me?Noway.Iworkafterschool.Ican’tstayforallthosemeetings.”Myclosestfriend,Linda,smiled,“Whynot?Justthink
howgreatoursenioryearwouldbe!Youcouldgetarealseniortrip
approved
andgetbetterbandsforthedances.”Mylittlegroupcontinued
toignore
myprotests
astheyimaginedthewonderfulchangesIcouldmake.Bytheendoftheweek,they’dgottenenoughsignatures
toput
mynameontheballot
(選票).
DebbieandIhadverydifferentcampaignstyles.
BecauseIwasalwaysskippingaround,Iearnedthename“Rabbit”.Signssoon
appearedaroundcampuswiththeslogan(口號)“MakeyourvotescountwithRabbit!”Myplatformaimedformorefunandlessrestrictions.Weworeuniforms
and
Iadvocatedmorefreedressdaysandabroaderinterpretationof
whatwasacceptableonregulardressdays.Myopponent,
ontheotherhand,avoidedanyimplicationofsillinessonherposters.Catchysloganshadnoplaceinherseriouscampaign.
Whatsheoffered
wastheopeningLawntoallstudentsandareformattingoftheyearbook
thatwouldmixninththroughtwelfthgradersratherthanhighlightseniorsinoversizedphotos.Gonewouldbetheyearbookwithseniors’quotesandmany
exciting
activities.Lowerclassmen(低年級生)lovedDebbie’sidea;wouldbeseniors,however,wereangry.Myclassmatessupportedmeandwereconfidenttheycouldpersuadeenoughlowerclassmentovotemyway.EachdayIgotreportsofafewmoreoflowerclassmen
ing
tomyside.Onelectionday,Ifeltfairlyconfident.Iwasevenlookingforwardto
quitting
myjoband
focusing
onschoolpolitics.注意:1.
所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為
150
左右;2.
續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,
每段的開頭語已為你寫好??赡苡绊懺睦斫獾脑~語:studentbodyofficers
(學(xué)生會干事):通常是由學(xué)生選舉產(chǎn)生的學(xué)生組織領(lǐng)導(dǎo)人員rununopposedforpresident
無對手競選總統(tǒng)
runagainst同…競選agroupofdissatisfiedgirls
一群不滿意的女生whisper低聲說focusedherattentionon把注意力集中在myclosestfriend我最親密的朋友getaseniortripapproved高中學(xué)習(xí)之旅得到認(rèn)可band樂隊ignoremyprotest忽略我的抗議getenoughsignature獲得足夠簽名Myplatformaimedformorefunandlessrestrictions.我的平臺旨在增加樂趣,減少限制。abroaderinterpretation廣義上的解釋onregulardressdays
在日常著裝日opponent對手implication
暗指silliness愚蠢,糊涂catchyslogans
朗朗上口的標(biāo)語areformattingoftheyearbook學(xué)校年刊的格式變化highlightseniorsinoversizedphotos用超大的照片突顯高中生seniors’quotes
高中生的引語wouldbesenior未來的高中生Keywords(關(guān)鍵詞):junior,election,Debbie,runforpresident,runagainst,senior,I,workafterschool(job),vote,support,confidentMainidea(主旨大意,劃線詞為關(guān)鍵詞):
Attheendofmy
junior
year,
Debbie
seemedto
runforpresidentofthestudentbodyofficers.Myclassmatespersuaded
me
to
runagainsther.They
supported
mealotandIbegantohavemore
votes.My
confidence
builtup,lookingforwardtothe
election
day.下水作文劃線詞為關(guān)鍵詞或原文詞的重現(xiàn)However,bytheendoftheday,thevoteswerecountedandDebbiewasdeclaredthewinner.
And
I
hadonlyonevotelessthan
Debbie!Disappointmentseizedme!Atthesametime,Ifeltashamedofmyself,
for
IhadpicturedmorethanoncetodefeatDebbie,
and
Ihadbeenthinkingmy
platform
hadmoreadvantages.What’smore,my
classmates
wereso
supportive
tome.HowcouldIfacethem?Irushedtothelibraryandfoundacorner,
sittingalone,weepingandlost
inabadmood.73WThat’swhenInoticedmyteacherMr.Laskey,whoturnedtomeandsmiled.“Congratulations!”
Hearing
this,Iwastotallyatsea.Mr.Laskeystrokedmyhead,
saying
gently,“Iadmireyouforbeingsocourageoustochallengeyourself!Thereisnodoubt
thatDebbieisoutstanding,
but
soareyou!Youareabsolutely
promising!”
Greatly
encouraged,Iwipedmytears,
bidding
farewelltoMr.Laskeyand
walkingconfidently
tomy
supporters.
ThoughIdidn’tbee
president,
Iwasstillexcited
tobe
oneofthe
studentbodyofficers.Ithankedthem,anddecidedtoserveboth
juniors
and
seniors
wholeheartedly.
86W修改稿(劃線部分為好詞好句:However,bytheendoftheday,thevoteswerecountedandDebbiewasdeclaredthewinner.
I
hadlostbyasingle
vote,anarrowmarginthatfilledmewithamixofdisappointmentandshame.I
had
envisioned
defeating
Debbie,convincedthatmyplatformheldgreateradvantages.Theunwaveringsupportofmyclassmateshadfueledmyconfidence,and
therealizationthatIhadfallenshortweighedheavilyonmyheart.
Ihurriedtothelibrary,foundaquietcorner,andsatalone,weepingand
engulfedinagloomymood.That’swhenInoticedmyteacherMr.Laskey,whoturnedtomeandsmiled.“Congratulations!”
Takenaback,
Icouldonlystareathiminastonishment.
Mr.Laskey,
sensingmybewilderment,gentlystrokedmyheadandsaid,
“Iadmireyourcouragetochallengeyourself.Debbieisundoubtedlyoutstanding,but
youare
incredibly
promising.”
Hiswords,spokenwithsincerityandencouragement,liftedmyspiritslikeagentlebreeze.
Iwipedawaymytears,
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