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XXX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍2024/3/28XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍UnityToooftenawriteristemptedtogatherrandomthoughtsintoseveralsentences,indentthem,andcallthemaparagraph.Lookatthefollowingexample.Itbeginsnowhereandgoesnowhere.Ithasnopurpose.Hereishowtheparagraphonamathtestcouldbecomedisunified:XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍UnityAdisunifiedparagraph:Ifeelquiteconfidentaboutthemathtestthatisscheduledfortomorrow.Theinstructorhastoldusexactlywhattostudy,andmygradesonhomeworkhavebeengood.Afterthetest,SusanandIaregoingtoeatandthengotoamovie.Sheistakingmeoutbecauseitismybirthday.Lastweekweweregoingtogotothehomecominggame,butshewassickandwedidn’tgettogo.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍Unity

Ifeelquiteconfidentaboutthemathtestthatisscheduledfortomorrow.(topicsentence)Theinstructorhastoldusexactlywhattostudy,andmygradesonhomeworkhavebeengood.(supportingsentence)

Afterthetest,SusanandIaregoingtoeatandthengotoamovie.(topicsentence)Sheistakingmeoutbecauseitismybirthday.(supportingsentence)Lastweekweweregoingtogotothehomecominggame,butshewassickandwedidn’tgettogo.(topicsentence)XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍UnityTheparagraphhasnounitybecauseithasnosingletopic.Itbeginswithamathtestanddraftsintothreedifferentthings:(1)themathtest(2)hisupcomingdatewithSusan(3)themisseddatelastweekEachofthesetopicsmightbedevelopedintoaparagraphorevenacompletestory,butallthreecertainlydonotbelongtogetherinoneparagraph.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍UnityAunifiedparagraphIfeelquiteconfidentaboutthemathtestthatisscheduledfortomorrow.Theinstructorhastoldusexactlywhattostudy,andmygradesonhomeworkhavebeengood.Infact,IsupposethatmathhasalwaysbeenoneofthesubjectsthatIenjoythemost.Ihavealreadyspenttwohoursreviewingpages115-140.TonightSusanandIwilldevoteanotherhourortwotopracticingwithsomeofthesamplesproblems.ThenIwillbeready.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍UnityWhyisthisparagraphunified?Unlikethefirsteffort,thisparagraphisnowunifiedbecauseeachofthefivesupportingsentencescanbedirectlylinkedwiththecontrollingidea.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍UnityTheunityofparagraphwouldbedestroyedbyinsertinganysentencethatisnotrelatedtothekeyword(s)inthetopicsentence.

Thisiswhywritingatopicsentenceisagoodidea.Onceyouhavewrittendownthemainidea,youcanbecertainthateveryothersentencesupports,developsorexplainsthatidea.Thecontrollingideaisusuallyindicatedbyasinglewordoraphraseinthetopicsentence,whichisknownasthekeyword(s).Inthesampleparagraph,thekeywordisconfident.Alldetailsarepresentedtosupport,develop,andexplainthestudent’sconfidence.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍UnityExercisesIdentifyandunderlinethetopicsentencesoftheparagraphbelow.Anelectroniccomputercangatherawiderangeofinformationformanypurpose,onceitisgivenaprogram.Forthescientistitcangetinformationfromouterspaceorfromthedepthoftheocean.Inbusinessandindustrythecomputerpreparesfactoryinventories,keepstrackofsalestrendsandproductionneeds,mailsdividendchecks,andmakesoutcompanypayrolls.Itcankeepbankaccountsuptodateandmakeoutelectricbills.Ifyouareplanningatripbyplane,thecomputerwillfindoutwhatrouttotakeandwhatspaceisavailable.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍Unity

ExerciseAnalyzeandmakecommentsonthestructureofthefollowingparagraph,oryouanswerthefollowingthreequestions:A.Isthereanytopicsentenceintheparagraph?B.Whichwordisthekeywordcontainedintopicsentence?C.Isthisparagraphunified?XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍Unity

WhalesWhalesareamongthemostintelligentmammalsevertoinhabittheearth.Scientistsstudyingwhalesratetheirintelligenceonalevelwithhigherprimatesbecauseoftheircomplexgroupbehavior.Forexample,theseimpressivemammalshavebeenseenteachinganddiscipliningtheiryoung,helpingwoundedfellowwhales,andplayingindefinitegamelikepatterns.Whalescontinuallyneedtosearchforfoodinordertosurvive.Asfishpopulationdecreasesbecauseofoverfishing,thewhale’squestforfoodbecamemoredifficult.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍unityThisparagraphisnotunifiedbecauseitbeginswithwhaleintelligenceanddraftsintofoodproblems.Whenyouwriteaparagraph,youshouldstayonthetracksetbyyourtopicsentence.Acoherentandunifiedparagraphshouldbewrittenasfollows:XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍UnityWhalesareamongthemostintelligentcreaturesevertoinhabittheearth.Scientistsstudyingwhalesratetheirintelligenceonalevelwithhigherprimatesbecauseoftheircomplexgroupbehavior.Forexample,thesehugeandimpressivemammalshavebeenseenteachinganddiscipliningtheiryoung,helpingwoundedfellowwhalesandplayingindefinitegamelikepatterns.Theyareabletocoordinatecomplexgroupactivitiesbecauseoftheirapparentlyeffectivecommunicationssystemofsonarclicksandpings.Allinall,scientificevidenceshowsthatwhaleshaveahighorderofsocialorganization.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍TransitionalwordsOncetheparagraphhasstatedthecentral,controllingidea,thesupportingsentencesinthewritingmustbelinkedtogethersothatthereadercanconnecteachideatotheprecedingonewithease.Thewriterusestransitionalwordsorphrasestomaketheseconnectionintheparagraphclearlyandsmoothly.Rememberthattransitionalhelptoformbridgesfromoneideatoanotherandfromoneparagraphtoanother.Thereadercrossesthebridge,connectingonesentencetoanotherifthetransitionalwordsaregoodones.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍TransitionalwordsNowreadthefollowingtwoparagraphsandmakeacomparison.Paragraph1Hereisaquick,simplewaytoshowthatairpressesonthings.Filladrinkingglasswithwater.Coverthemouthoftheglasswithastiff,smoothcard.Holdthecardtightlyonthetopoftheglass.Turntheglassandcardupsidedown.Takeawaythehandholdingthecard.Thecardwillnotdropoff.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍TransitionalwordsParagraph2Hereisaquick,simplewaytoshowthatairpressesonthings.Firstly,filladrinkingglasswithwater.Then,coverthemouthoftheglasswithastiff,smoothcard.Andthen,holdthecardtightlyonthetopoftheglassandturntheglassandcardupsidedown.Nowtakeawaythehandholdingthecard.Thecardwillnotdropoff.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍TransitionalwordsNote:Thesecondparagraphisbetterthanthepreviousonebecausethetransitionalwordsareused,whichrelatetheprecedingthoughttothesucceedingthough,andthushelponeideaintheparagraphflowsmoothlyintothenextidea.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍TransitionalwordsExercisesReadthefollowingparagraphsandchangethewordsunderlinedintopronounsorsynonyms.Someresearchersbelievethatthekeystomemorystoragearechemical.Andinfact,averyspecific“memorychemical”hasalreadybeenisolated.Ratsnormallyprefertobeindarkplaces,ratherthanbrightlylightedplaces.Butifaratisgivenanelectricshockeverytimetheratrunsintoadarkbox,theratwilllearntofearthedark.Researcherstrainedratsinthiswayandthentriedinjectingvariouschemicalsfromrats’brainsintountrainedrats.Theresearchersfoundachemicalthatmadeuntrainedratsfearthedark,too.Theresearchersnamedthischemicalscotophobin,fromwordsmeaning“fearofthedark,”andtheseresearchersdiscoveredthatthischemicalworksnotonlyonrats,butalsoonmiceandevengold-fish.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍Someresearchersbelievethatthekeystomemorystoragearechemical.Andinfact,averyspecific“memorychemical”hasalreadybeenisolated.Ratsnormallyprefertobeindarkplaces,ratherthanbrightlylightedones.Butifaratisgivenanelectricshockeverytimeitrunsintoadarkbox,it

willlearntofearthedark.Scientists

trainedratsinthiswayandthentriedinjectingvariouschemicalsfromtheirbrainsintountrainedrats.Theresearchersfoundachemicalthatmadeuntrainedratsfearthedark,too.Theynamedthischemicalscotophobin,fromwordsmeaning“fearofthedark,”andTheydiscoveredthatitworksnotonlyonrats,butalsoonmiceandevengold-fish.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍

Fillineachblankwithatransitionalwordthatwillhelpmoveoneideasmoothlyintothenext.Theinformationatthelefttellswhatkindsoftransitionalwordsyouneed.

XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍ContrastAddResultThetrueMusician＿＿Platobelievedthatmusicplayedastrongpartinaman’seducation,hedidnotignoreotherareasoflearning.Music,thoughrhythmandharmony,couldbringgracetothesoul＿amaneducatedinmusiccoulddevelop

atruesenseofjudgment;＿＿h(yuǎn)eXX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍Wouldbeabletorecognizequalityinartandnatureandcouldrespondwithpraiseforgoodthings.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍RhetoricalQuestionsRhetoricalquestionsareusedforfocusingyourwriting.Arhetoricalquestionisaquestionthewriterdoesnotexpectareadertoanswer.Suchquestioncanbeusedtosumuppointssupportedinthepreviousdiscussionortosuggestananswerthatthewriterwillsupplyinparagraphsthatfollow.Forexample,youmightbeginaparagraphwiththequestion“Whydon’tIhaveatelephone?”andthenyouaretoldwhythetelephoneisnotneeded.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍RhetoricalQuestions

Whydon’tIhaveatelephone?NotbecauseIpretendtobewiseorposeasunusual.Theretwochiefreasons:becauseIdon’treallylikethephoneandbecauseIfindIcanstillworkandplay,eat,breatheandsleepwithoutit.Whydon’tIlikethetelephone?BecauseIthinkitisapestandatime-waster.Itmaycreateaunnecessarysuspenseandanxiety,aswhenyouwaitforanexpectedcallthatdoesn’tcome;orirritatingdelay,aswhenyoukeepringinganumberthatisalwaysengaged.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍EconomyEconomyisavirtueinwritingbecausethefewerthewords,thelessthereader’seffortingraspingwhatwearesaying.Thelesshiseffort,thelessthepossibilityofconfusion.Inaddition,economyismoreforcefulthanwordiness.Themostimportantprinciplehereistheprincipleofreductionwheneverpossible,reduceasentencetoaclause,aclausetoaphrase,aphrasetoaword.Thefollowingpassageisessentiallywell-written,butitiswordy.Byapplyingtheprincipleofreductionwecanincreaseitsforce.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍EconomyUsuallywecanachieveeconomybyomittingunnecessarywordsandslightlyalteringsentencestructure.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍EconomyThedoctorlistenedfortheheartbeatthatwasnottobefound.Thedoctorlookedupandtookadeepswallow.Thedoctorremovedhisstethoscopeandcoveredthedeadmanwithablanket.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍EconomyRevised:Thedoctorlistenedfortheheartbeat,looked,swalloweddeeply,thenremovedhisstethoscopeandcoveredthedeadmanwithablanket.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍EconomyEliminatetheunnecessarywordsinthefollowingsentencesandthenslightlyalterthestructureofthesesentences.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍EconomyWordysentences:1)Itwasafigmentofherimaginationthatsomeonewasstartingather.2)AswewalkedinthedirectionofhomeIfeltasifIhadneverbeenhappier.3)OnthetableHenryhadplacedasmallobjectthatwasthecoloroflavender.4)Shelookedasthoughshewasangry.5)Inthenextbooththeresatoneofbest-knownactorsofourtime.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍Economy6)Aftertheconferencehadconcluded,thecommitteechairmancametoshareexperience.7)FallisthetimeoftheyearthatIlikebest.8)Inmanyschoolstheyhaveregularfilmoperators.9)Wefindthepresentsituationthatexistsatthemomentintolerable.10)Thisproblemhasariseninthecaseofchemistryandphysics.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍EconomyRevised:1)Sheimaginedthatsomeonewasstaringather.2)Aswewalkedhome,IfeltIhadneverbeenhappier.3)OnthetableHenryhadplacedasmalllavenderobject.4)Shelookedangry.5)Inthenextboothsatoneofthebest-knownofourtime.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍Economy6)Aftertheconference,thecommitteechairmancametoshareexperience.7)FallisthetimethatIlikebest.8)Manyschoolshaveregularfilmoperators.9)Wefindthepresentsituationintolerable.10)Thisproblemhasariseninchemistryandphysics.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍SkillfulrepetitionofwordsRepeatingwordsskillfullyheremeansjudiciouslylimitingtherepetitiontothosesentenceswewishtohavethegreatestforce.Itdoesnotmeanindiscriminaterepetition,whichiswhollyineffective.Notehowinthefollowingparagraphthewordpowerisskillfullyrepeated:XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍SkillfulrepetitionofwordsPleasenotehowinthefollowingparagraphthepowerisskillfullyrepeated:Hehasthepowertoenterandtobecomewhatheseesandpaints.Itisapowerbequeathedtohimbyhischildhood,apowercommontomostchildren,butonelostawayfromthemwhentheytakethatlongchangetowardthephysicalandmateriallifeofadults.Itisthepowernotsomuchtorecognizewhatistheretobeseen,butevenwhilegazingatittoimagineitasifithadneverbeforeexisted:apowerwithoutandtorediscoverlifecontinuously.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍SkillfulrepetitionofwordsReadthefollowingparagraph.Noticehowsomewordsorsentencepatternsinthesentencearerepeated.Whatdoestherepetitiontellyouaboutthemessageoftheparagraph?XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍SkillfulrepetitionofwordsItiseasytofindscapegoatsforthepollutionproblem:toblametheindustrialist,toblamescientist,toblameadvertisingorcapitalism,orinonecomprehensivecondemnation,toblamesociety;buteveryonewhodrivesacarorburnselectricity,orflushesatoilethasashareoftheblame;itisnotblamingthatisneeded,butaconscientiousandconsistentattempttomakeblameunnecessary.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍SentenceVarietyShortsentencesareexcellentforcommunicatingaseriesofactions,emotions,orimpression;longersentencesaremorelikelytobeappropriateforanalysisorexplanation.Ifyouconsistentlyconstructshort,simplesentencesinaparagraph,yourwritingwillsoundmonotonousandmayseemimmature.Conversely,ifyouwritesentenceswhicharelonganddense,yourparagraphwillbehardtoread.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍SentenceVarietyInordertomakeyourparagrapheffectiveandvivid,youhavetomixshort,simplesentenceswithlonger,complexorcompoundsentences.Themainthingistobesureyouhavesomevarietyinsentencestructurewithinyourparagraph.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍SentenceVarietyTherearethreecommontechniquesyoumayusetovaryyoursentencesinlength,structureandorder.a.

SentenceCombiningb.StructureChangingc.

TransformationXX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍SentenceVarietya.SentenceCombiningYoucancombinesentencesbyusingcommas,semicolons,conjunctionsorrelativepronouns.Weak:Aluminumislightandstrong.Itiswidelyusedinindustry.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍SentenceVarietyRevised:Sincealuminumislightandstrong,itiswidelyusedindustry.Aluminumislightandstrong,soitiswidelyusedinindustry.Aluminumiswidelyusedinindustrybecauseitislightandstrong.

XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍SentenceVarietyWeak:MaxwellPerkinswasbornin1884andhediedin1947.HeworkedforCharlesScribner’sSonforthirty-sevenyears.HewasheadeditorofScribner’sforthelasttwentyofthesethirty-sevenyears.HewasalmostcertainlythemostimportantAmericaneditorinthefirsthalfofthetwentiethcentury.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍SentenceVarietyRevised:MaxwellPerkins(1884-1947),headeditorofCharlesScribner’sSonforthelasttwentyofhisthirty-seventearswiththatcompany,wasalmostcertainlythemostimportantAmericaneditorinthefisthalfofthetwentiethcentury.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍SentenceVarietyCombinethefollowingsentencestoshowtheirlogicalrelationship,usingcommas,semicolons,conjunctionsandrelativepronounswhereyouneedthem.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍1.Ironandsteelareengineeringmetals.Thesemetalsarewidelyusedinindustrial.2.Naturedoesnotprovideamaterial.Thematerialcandoallthething.Wewantthismaterialtodoallthethings.Letusmakethismaterialourselves.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍SentenceVariety3.Theprojectwasfinallycompleted.Wehaddoneagoodmonth’swork.4.Theengineersareinvestigatingaproblem.Theproblemiswhethercolortubesarereliableforautomotiveuse.Cathode（陰極）raytubesareroutinelyusedinaircraftandshipradars.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍5.Theeffortisbackedbytheindustrialdivision.ThiseffortiscalledtheStandardHardwareInterfaceProgram.Thejoboftheindustrialdivisionisnottofostertechnologicaladvancesinindustrial.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍SentenceVariety6.Weseeairplanes.Mostoftheairplaneshavewings.Theyaredriventhroughtheairbyapropeller（推進(jìn)器）.7.Weuseminerals.Practicallyeverymineralsisfoundintheocean.Sofaronlysalt,bromine,andmagnesium（鎂）aresuccessfullyminedfromtheoceans.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍SentenceVariety8.Existingbeefisnutritious.Synthetic（人造的）beefisapparentlygoingtobemuchmorenutritious.IsawanitemintheChinaDaily.Wearegoingintoproductiononsyntheticbeef.Thissyntheticbeefwillcost5yuanakilogram.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍9.Mostcollegeprofessorsareunconventionalandoutspoken.Theyseldomwearconservativeclothes,nordotheyhaveclean-shavenfaces.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍10.RolandJamesisthethirdcandidateforourengineeringposition.Hehasgraduatedfromanexcellentprogram.Hehasnopracticalexperience.Hecomeshighlyrecommended.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍1.Ironandsteelthatarewidelyusedinindustrialareengineeringmetals.Engineeringmetals,ironandsteel,arewidelyusedinindustrial.Ironandsteelareengineeringmetalswhicharewidelyusedinindustrial.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍2.Ifnaturedoesnotprovideamaterialthatcandoallthethingswewantitto,letusmakeoneourselves.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍3.Theprojectwasfinallycompleted,andwehaddoneagoodmonth’swork.Theprojectwasfinallycompleted;wehaddoneagoodmonth’swork.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍4.Theengineersareinvestigatingwhethercolortubesarereliablesincecathoderaytubesareroutinelyusedinaircraftandshipradars.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍5.Theeffort,whichiscalledtheStandardHardwareInterfaceProgram,isbackedbytheindustrialdivision,whosejobistofostertechnologicaladvancesinindustrial.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍6.Mostoftheairplanesweseehavewingsandaredriventhroughtheairbyapropeller.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍7.Practicallyeverymineralweuseisfoundintheocean,butsofaronlysalt,bromine,andmagnesiumaresuccessfullyminedfromtheocean.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍8.IsawanitemintheChinaDailythatwearegoingintoproductiononsyntheticbeef,whichisapparentlygoingtobemuchmorenutritiousthanexistingbeef,andwillcost5yuanakilogram.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍9.Mostcollegeprofessorareunconventional,outspoken,andsomewhatinformal;theyseldomwearthree-piecesuitsorclean-shavenfaces.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍10.1)AlthoughRolandJames,thethirdcandidateforourengineeringposition,hasgraduatedfromanexcellentprogramandcomeshighlyrecommended,hehasnopracticalexperience.

XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍2)RolandJames,thethirdcandidateforourengineeringposition,hasgraduatedfromanexcellentprogramandcomeshighlyrecommended,buthehasnopracticalexperience.

XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍3)AlthoughRolandJames,thethirdcandidateforourengineeringposition,hasnopracticalexperience,hehasgraduatedfromanexcellentprogramandcomeshighlyrecommended.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍SentenceVarietyb.StructureChangingYoucancombinesentencesbychangingoneoftheverbsintoan–ingor–edform.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍Weak:Acomputercanworkoutlonganddifficultproblems.Itisbasedonthesinglebinarysystem.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍Revised:Basedonthesinglebinarysystem,acomputercanworkoutlonganddifficultproblems.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍SentenceVarietyCombinethefollowingsentencesinasensiblewaybychangingoneoftheverbsintoan–ingor–edform.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍1.Thousandsofmaterialsarefoundontheearth’ssurface.Theyarecombinedwitheachother.2.Wehaveseensomeobjects.Thoseobjectsarevibratingbutnotproducingsound.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍3.Themetalhasbeentestedmanytimes.Itisfoundverystrong.4.Copperisagoodconductor.Itisusedtoconductheatandelectricity.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍SentenceVariety5.Onceironisexposedtotheair,itsoonturnsbrown.6.Thereare104elements.Theyareknownintheworld.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍7.Theelectrosareextremelylight.Eachelectroncarriesanegativechargeofelectricity.8.Almostallmetalsaregoodconductorsofelectricity.Silveristhebestconductorofall.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍SentenceVariety9.Mymotherwasbroken.Itmustberepairedintwodays.10.Theweightofabodyisaforce.Wemayuseunitsofweightasunitsofforce.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍1.Thousandsofmaterialsarefoundontheearth’ssurfacecombinedwitheachother..XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍2.Wehaveseensomeobjectsvibratingbutnotproducingsound.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍3.Testedmanytimes,themetalisfoundverystrong.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍4.Beingagoodconductor,copperisusedtoconductheatandelectricityXX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍5.Ironexposedtotheairsoonturnsbrown.6.Thereare104knownelementsintheworld.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍7.Theelectrosareextremelylight,eachcarryinganegativechargeofelectricity.8.Almostallmetalsaregoodconductorsofelectricity,silverbeingthebestconductorofall.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍9.Imusthavemymotherrepairedintwodays.10.Theweightofabodybeingaforce,wemayuseunitsofweightasunitsofforce.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍SentenceVarietyc.

TransformationYoucanrewritethefollowingsentencesinsuchawaythateachonemeansexactlytheother.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍Example1:ThephonerangduringtheTVprogramIwaswatching.WhileIwaswatchingtheTV(program),thephonerang.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍Example2:Theresearcherpromisedtogiveusanearlycall.“I’llgiveyouanearlycall,”saidtheresearcher.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍SentenceVarietyRewriteeachofthefollowingsentences,butdonotchangethemeaning.1.Youremovethecardboardlidfromthepan,andthenyoupreheattheovento523degrees.After＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍2.Aweightisliftedandworkisdone.When＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍SentenceVariety3.Themassofabodydoesnotnecessarilyremainconstantduringitsmotion.While＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿.4.Thepeoplebehindusweretalkingloudlywhilewewerewatchingthedemonstrationofarobot.During＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍5.Weleftbeforetheendofthedemonstrationofarobot.Thedemonstrationofarobot＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍6.Youhadtowriteatechnicalreportontheexperimentafteryou’daccomplishedit.After＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿.7.Oxygenisheavierthanair.Airisn’t＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿.8.D.c.isnotsogoodasa.c.inmanyways.A.c.＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍9.Smallerwirescarrylesscurrentthanlargerones.Largerwires＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿.10.Inthesixtiesworkingconditionsweren’tasgoodastheyarenow.Now＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍11.Petrolanddieselvehiclespollutetheenvironmentmorethanelectricones.Electircvehicles＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿.12.Wesellhydrogenenergytothegasuseratthecornerstation.Hydrogenenergy＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍13.Therewillbemorespaceforparkingcarsincitiesthanthereusedtobe.Theredidn’t＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿.14.Ioughttorepairmybicycle.Mybicycleneeds＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍15.Youcan’tseethefamousscientistwithoutanappointment.If＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿.16.Myadviceistogenerateelctricityfromhydrogen.If＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍17.Ifyoulookintoyourradioset,youcanseethetransistors.Look＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿.18.Thereisnochangeinthemotionofabodyifaresultantforceisnotactinguponit.Unless＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍19.Holdapieceofredglassinfrontoftheeyeandeverythinglooksredorblack.If＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿.20.Ifthefrictionhadnotbeensogreat,thepumpwouldnothavebeendamaged.Thepumpwasdamagedbecause＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍21.Heworkstoohardandthat’swhyhe’salwayssotired.If＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿.22.“Don’tforgettobringyourpassportswithyou,”saidshe.Shereminded＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍23.Idon’tknowanyonewhocreatesenergy.Nobody＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿.24.Idon’toftenresorttopillsandmixturestocuremyillness.Ihardly＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍25.Nobodycanmakeaperpetualmachine.Itisimpossible＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿.26.Manyoftheapplicantsheinterviewedwereverywellqualified.He＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍27.We’llgetreadybeforethegovernment’sapproval.Bythetime＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿.28.Itwasn’tagoodideaforyoutoaddothermetalstothepurealuminium.You＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍29.I’mafraidIcan’taffordacomputernow.Acomputer＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿.30.Wemaydomanythingswithelectricity.Manythings＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍EffectiveSentences

UnityCoherenceConcisenessEmphasisVarietyXX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍EffectiveSentences

Faulty:BorninasmalltowninSoughChinaintheearlier50s,hegrewuptobeafamousmusician.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍Revised:HewasborninasmalltowninSouthChinaintheearlier50s.Inhischildhoodhelikedtosingsongs.Laterheenteredaconservatory.Inthe70shebecameafamousmusician.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍EffectiveSentencesFaulty:DuFuwasoneofthegreatestpoets.Revised:DuFuwasoneofthegreatestpoetsoftheTangperiod.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍EffectiveSentencesFaulty:Amanisjudgednotonlybywhathesaysbutbyhisdeeds.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍Revised:Amanisjudgednotonlybywhathesaysbutalsobywhathedoes.Amanisjudgednotonlybyhiswordsbutalsobyhisdeeds.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍EffectiveSentencesFaulty:Wethoughtshewascharming,intelligent,andaverycapableyoungwoman.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍Revised:Wethoughtshewascharming,intelligent,andverycapable.Wethoughtshewasacharming,intelligent,andverycapableyoungwoman.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍EffectiveSentencesFaulty:Wehavegreatfaithandhighhopesforher.XX英文寫作短時間提高秘籍Re