專題7.寫作技巧?？荚掝}

寫作技巧&?？荚掝}寫作技巧{中考作文評分標準}結構+要點+邏輯+語法+亮點一（1）結構：中考最流行的結構就是三段式，“觀點——要點——總結”審題，緊扣中心，首尾段寫出中心句子以達到收尾呼應。第一段：簡單明了，開門見山，不超過2句話第二段：分23點說為什么第三段：經(jīng)過第二段的論證，可以得出結論。但請注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升華。也可以提出希望和建議等。

（2）要點：文章寫的再好，只要缺少要點就會扣分。所以文章的第二段的要點，要做到全且圍繞中心，再適當拓展每個點的內(nèi)容。不要逐字逐句翻譯，要避生就熟，盡量用最熟悉最有把握的短語句型要點表達出來。（3）邏輯：最常用的就是表示遞進的，轉(zhuǎn)折的，總結的邏輯詞放在句首打逗號。除了first,second,third,finally等還可以使用高級點的。①遞進：firstofall(首先)，what'smore(還有)，besides(還有)，Lastbutnotleast(最后)，inaddition(還有)，②總結：inaword,allinall(表示總結的)。③轉(zhuǎn)折：but,yet,however。④提出建議：inmyopinion=asfarasIamconcerned。舉例：forexample，suchas+名/賓/動ing，andsoon(等等).（4）語法：注意單詞的使拼寫，時態(tài)，語態(tài)，主謂一致等。（5）亮點：多用學過的或自己積累的高級詞匯，詞組，句型便是我們得到一等文的最有力的絕招。因此多積累詞匯和短語，成績較好的可嘗試寫較復雜的從句。二1.表并列補充關系的(遞進關系)：Firstofall（首先），What’smore（甚至）/What’sworse（更糟糕的是），even（甚至），Especially（特別是），Besides（還有），Moreover（甚至），F(xiàn)urthermore（還有），Inaddition（還有），notonly…butalso（不但…而且），atthesametime（同時），Mostimportantly（最重要的是），Lastbutnotleast（最后）2.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關系的：However，Onthecontrary（相反），but，Although+clause（從句不與but連用），Despite/Inspiteof+n/doing（盡管…但是…）3.用來陳述正反方的不同觀點（一般用于議論文章中）：Ontheonehand…Ontheotherhand…（一方面，又一方面）；Some…,whileothers…（一些人認為…而另一些人認為…）；Everythinghastwosides…(事物都具有兩面性)；somepeopleholdtheviewthat…whiletheothersprefertheviewthat…（一些人堅持這種觀點，而另一些人更喜歡另一種觀點）4.表因果關系的：Because（不與so連用），As（由于，因為），So,Therefore（因此），Asaresult（結果），thanksto（多虧），becauseof/asaresultof（由于），without，withthehelpof...（在…的幫助下）【寫作步驟】?？荚掝}個人介紹每到畢業(yè)季，學生們都會以各種方式表達對老師的感謝之情，如“因畢業(yè)希望老師批準永久請假”“最后一堂課唱歌送別班主任”等。悲歡的背后是老師對學生的關懷和學生對老師深深的敬意。請根據(jù)下列提示和要求，以“ILoveYou,MyEnglishTeacher”為題，寫一篇短文。提示：1．What'syourEnglishteacherlike?2．Whydoyoulikehimorher?要求：1．短文須包括提示的兩個問題，可適當發(fā)揮；2．短文中不要出現(xiàn)真實的地名、校名和人名；3．詞數(shù)80左右(開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))。【佳作欣賞】ILoveYou,MyEnglishTeacherIhavemetmanygoodteachersinthelastthreeyears.MyEnglishteacherMr.Huangisoneofthem.Nowletmetellyousomethingabouthim.Mr.Huangisofmediumheightandalittlethin.Healwayswearsapairofglasses.Heisverystrictwithusbutcaresabouteverystudent.Whenthestudentsfrompoorfamiliesareintrouble,heisalwaysreadytohelpthem.IlikemyEnglishteacherbecausehehasmanygoodwaystomakeourclasslively.ManystudentsfallinlovewithEnglishbecauseofhim.Iloveyou,myEnglishteacher!Iwillneverforgetyouforever.節(jié)日介紹假如你是王昆，你的美國網(wǎng)友Tom對中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日“春節(jié)”非常感興趣。請你以“MyFavoriteFestival”為題，寫一封e-mail給他做一下介紹。要求：1.要點包括：節(jié)日簡介、節(jié)日準備、節(jié)日活動等；2．詞數(shù)要求：100左右；3．提示：theSpringFestival，traditional，gettogether，cleanup，bedressedin…【佳作欣賞】△Subject：MyFavoriteFestivalFrom：WangKunDearTom，TheSpringFestivalisthemostimportanttraditionalfestivaltoChinesepeople.Severaldaysbeforethenewyear，peoplebegintoprepareforit.Myparentsbuymeat，fishandvegetables.Housesarecleanedup.Ontheeveofthenewyear，thewholefamilygettogetherandhaveabigdinner.Afterthemealwewatch“theSpringEvening”onTVuntiltwelveo'clock.Onthefirstdayofthenewyear，eachofusindressedinnewclothes.Whenmeetingothersoutside，wesay“HappyNewYear”toeachother.Wepaynewyearcallstofriendsandrelatives.Thatdaymyparentsandrelativesgive“RedBags”(money)tothechildren.Allofushaveagreattime.WangKun環(huán)境保護隨著全球環(huán)境的惡化，越來越多的人選擇過低碳生活。請寫一篇英語短文，提倡你的同學們加入低碳一族。要點如下：1．節(jié)約用水、用電、用紙；2．去超市自備購物袋；3．不要購買不必要的衣服；4．不要購買一次性的杯子和碗筷；5．步行或騎自行車上學。注意：1.80詞左右(開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))；2．可適當增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫?！炯炎餍蕾p】Withtheglobalwarminggettingworse，morepeoplechoosetolivealow-carbonlifeforthepurposeofreducinggreenhousegases.Asstudents，wecanchoosetolivealow-carbonlife，too.Inourdailylife，weshouldsavewater，electricityandpaper.Remembertoturnoffthewatertaporreusewater.We'resupposedtousebothsidesofthepaper.Weoughttoturnoffthelightswhenweleavearoom.Wecanbringourownshoppingbagswhenwegotothesupermarket.Don'tbuyunnecessaryclothesbecauseitisakindofwaste.Don'tbuycups，bowlsorchopstickswhichcanbeusedonlyonce.Ifpossible，we'dbettergotoschoolonfootorbybike.Let'stakeactionandbealow-carbonpeople!安全問題學生安全問題已引起學校、家長、社會的高度關注，為了進一步增強中學生的安全意識，提高自我保護能力，某校開展了以“Howtokeepsafe？”為主題的英語演講比賽。請你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇演講稿。要求：1.內(nèi)容必須包括所給的全部要點，可適當發(fā)揮；2．表達清楚，語句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范；3．詞數(shù)80～100左右，文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：becareful，gobad，turnoff，tap(自來水龍頭)，obey【佳作欣賞】Howtokeepsafe?Hello，everyone！I'mgladtosharemyideasabouthowtokeepsafehere.Asmiddleschoolstudents，weshouldpayattentiontothefollowingtokeepsafe.First，weoughttoeathealthilyandsafely.Eatingthefoodthatgoesbadwillbeharmfultoourhealth.Second，thesafetyintrafficisalsorequiredformostofourstudentsrelyonthepublictransportationeveryday.Ifweareindanger，wecancallthepoliceforhelpintime.Wealsohavetobecarefulaboutthefriendswemakewithespeciallyonline.What'smore，weshouldbecarefulwhenweuseelectricity.Lastbutnotleast，it'sdangeroustoswimintheriver.Inshort，safetymustefirst!Thanksforlistening.情感表達假如你是Mike，你的朋友Susan近來心情不好，請你給她發(fā)一封e-mail，提出合理性的建議，幫助她調(diào)節(jié)心情。要求：80～100詞。參考詞匯：sing，takeawalk，dosports，writethediary，watchTV，listentomusic，goshopping，goswimming，gooutside…【佳作欣賞】DearSusan，Whenyouarenotfeelingwell，thefollowingsuggestionsmaybesuitableforyou.Firstly，gooutside！Dosomethingactive.Forexample，takeawalk，goswimming，orjustlieonthegrassandwatchcloudspass.Secondly，dosomethingyou'regoodat！Ifyoulikemusic，thenyoucanlistentomusicandsingloudly!Thirdly，startadiary.Writedownyourthoughts，dreams，problemsoranythingyouwant!Inall，ifyouwanttofeelwellaboutyourself，youmustbelieveinyourself!Bestwishes!Yours，Mike計劃愿望親愛的同學，初中的學習生活即將結束，迎接你的是近兩個月的輕松假期。有的同學計劃去旅游；有的安排走親訪友；有的想要上網(wǎng)(surftheInternet)、看電視、聽音樂，有的在娛樂休息之余打算讀些書、學點生活技能、參加一些實踐活動，還有的……那么你想好做什么了嗎？請用英文寫出你的假期計劃。詞數(shù)：80左右(開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))。要點提示：1.Whatareyougoingtodo?2．Howareyougoingtoplanyouractivities？Why?3．Whatdoyouexpectyouringholidaywillbelike?【佳作欣賞】Thesummervacationising.Whatareyougoingtodothisvacation？I'mgoingtoBeijingthissummer.Iwillvisitsomeplacesofinterest.Forexample，IwanttovisittheGreatWallwithmyparents，becauseIwanttobe“atrueman”．AndIalsowanttovisittheTian'anmenSquare.Iamlookingforwardtomeetingforeigners.BecauseIwanttopracticespeakingEnglishwiththem.ThenIwanttojointheChildren'sPalaceandtolearntoplaytheguitar.Iwanttobeagoodsingerinthefuture.Ithinkbeingasingerisverycool.MyfavoritesingerisMichaelJackson.IhopeIcanhaveahappyvacation.Whataboutyou？Whatareyougoingtodothissummer?健康生活據(jù)報道美國學生每天要運動70多分鐘，而我國學生花在運動上的時間只有12分鐘。請根據(jù)下面你校學生課外時間分配情況的調(diào)查圖，寫一篇英語短文，談談你的看法，并呼吁改變當前的這種狀況。要求：1.短文中必須包括餅狀圖所給出的所有信息；2．短文中不得涉及真實的人名、校名和地名；3．詞數(shù)：80詞左右(已給出的開頭不計入詞數(shù))。參考詞：accordingtothesurvey根據(jù)調(diào)查【佳作欣賞】Let'sSpendMoreTimeDoingSportsItisreportedthatAmericanstudentsspendmorethan70minutesonphysicalactivitieseveryday.However,inChinastudentshaveonly12minutesforphysicalactivities.ThenwhatdoourChinesestudentsdoafterschool?Nowletmetakeourschoolforexample.Accordingtothesurveyofourschool,40%ofourafter－schooltimeisspentdoinghomeworkand25%isforwatchingTV.Playingputergamestakesup20%ofourfreetime.Wehaveonly15%ofourfreetimeforphysicalactivities.Itisquiteclearthatwehavespenttoolittletimeonphysicalactivities.Ireallyhopethatthesocietyandschoolcandosomethingtochangethesituation.Studentsshouldbeencouragedtogoouttodosomesports.Asastudentweshouldalsotryourbesttotakepartinsportsasmuchaspossible.快樂成長同學們，三年的初中生活就要結束了，在我們的成長過程中，既有快樂，也有煩惱。請用英文寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括：1．你在學?；蚣依镌?jīng)遇到的最大的問題或煩惱；2．你解決問題或煩惱的過程；3．你的感想。要求：80～100詞。文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。【佳作欣賞】Mymiddleschoollifeisingtoanend.Duringthethreeyears，notonlydidIhavehappytime，butIhadkindsofproblems.MybiggestproblemwasthatIusedtobeshy.SometimesIreallydidn'tknowwhomIshouldaskforhelpwhenIwasintrouble.First，Ilearnedhowtomunicatewithothersandmakeasmanyfriendsaspossible.ThenwhenIwasintrouble，Iaskedmyclassmatesorfriendsforhelpbecausewewerethesameageandwecouldunderstandeachothereasily.Besides，Ialsotoldmyteachersorparentsaboutmytroubleandaskedfortheirhelp.Theywerefullofloveandhadrichexperience.Now，Iammoreoutgoingthanbefore.Icangetalongwellwithpeoplearoundme.建議觀點眾所周知，良好學習習慣的養(yǎng)成對中學生極為重要。請以“Howtodevelopourgoodlearninghabits”為題寫一篇英語小短文，向同學們提出以下建議：寫作要點：1.課前為新課做準備；2.課堂上認真聽課，做筆記；3.課后按時完成作業(yè)并多做閱讀。寫作要求：1.語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；2.寫作要點齊全，并做適當發(fā)揮；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名或地名，否則不得分；4.詞數(shù)：80左右。標題已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)?！炯炎餍蕾p】HowtodevelopourgoodlearninghabitsAsmiddleschoolstudents,it'sveryimportantforustodevelopourgoodlearninghabits.Whatshouldwedotoformourgoodlearninghabits?First,weshouldgetreadyfornewlessonsbeforeclass.Second,wemustlistentotheteachersandtakenotescarefullyinclass.Third,itisnecessaryforustofinishourhomeworkontimeafterclass.Atthesametime,we'dbetterdomorereadingeveryday.Weshouldalsostudyhardandaskforadvicewhenwehaveproblems.Trytomakestudyplansforourselves.It'sveryuseful.Ithinkifwekeepondoingthese,wewillbesuccessfulinthefuture.語言學習世界在發(fā)展，文化在交融，英語已經(jīng)成為人們溝通交流的重要橋梁之一。通過幾年的英語學習，你一定積累了許多成功的經(jīng)驗。請以“HowtoLearnEnglishWell”為題，結合下面的圖表信息，寫一篇英語短文。內(nèi)容要包括聽、說、讀、寫四個方面。提示：1.短文應包括圖表中的全部信息，條理清楚，行文連貫；2.短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名和地名；3.詞數(shù)不少于80，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。HowtoLearnEnglishWellEnglishisbothimportantandusefulintoday'sworld.Howcanwelearnitwellthen?First,weshouldoftenlistentothetapesorEnglishsongs.WatchingEnglishmoviesisalsogoodforus.Second,weshouldspeakEnglishinclassasmuchaspossible.Don'tbeworriedaboutmakingmistakes.Themoreyouspeak,thefewermistakesyou'llmake.We'dbetterjoinanEnglishclubandkeeppractisingwithothers,especiallywithforeigners.Third,weshouldreadmoreEnglishnewspapersandmagazineswhichprovideuswithlatestnewsandimproveourabilities.Fourth,weshouldrecitesomegoodarticlesanddevelopahabitofkeepingdiaries.Aslongaswedomorelistening,speaking,readingandwriting,wewilllearnEnglishwell.家鄉(xiāng)變化為了響應“美麗鄉(xiāng)村”建設計劃的號召,校園開展征文活動。請你根據(jù)提示信息,發(fā)揮想象力,以“TheBeautifulCountrysideinMyEyes”為題,寫一篇英語短文。要求:★80詞左右,開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù);★必須包括上述提示要點,可適當發(fā)揮。語句通順,意思連貫,書寫規(guī)范;★文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名和地名。參考詞匯:方便的convenient,自然的natural,出現(xiàn)appear,人口population,保護protectTheBeautifulCountrysideinMyEyesThankstothepolicyofBuildingBeautifulCountryside,Ibelievethatgreatchangeswilltakeplaceinmanyvillagesinourcountry.

Ithinkbeautifulcountrysideshouldbeasfollows.Firstofall,thetrafficshouldbemoreconvenientthanbefore.Theremustbemanywideroadsandgreenvehicles.Second,theenvironmentshouldbebetter.Wecanenjoymorenaturalsceneryinthefuture.Third,livingconditionswillbegreatlyimproved.Manybigandbrighthouseswithyardswillappeargradually,whichwillbringpeopleamuchmorefortablelivingenvironment.Lastbutnotleast,thepopulationwillbereasonable.Peoplewilltrytheirbesttoprotecttheirnewhome.Thesearemyideas.Whataboutyours?

優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)A勤儉節(jié)約“靜以修身，儉以養(yǎng)德”，勤儉節(jié)約是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德。無論生活富足與否，我們都應該提倡節(jié)約，杜絕浪費。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“節(jié)約是美德”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇80詞左右的短文投稿，談談生活中你是怎么做的，以及這樣做的意義。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。提示：(1)Whatdoyoudoinyourdailylife?(2)Whydoyoudoso?參考詞匯：thrifty節(jié)約的；virtue美德It'soneofourtraditionalvirtuestobethrifty.Beingthriftyisagoodvirtuewhichhasbeenpasseddownfromgenerationtogeneration.It'sagoodideatostartoninourdailylife.Firstofall，IconstantlycheckthelightsandthetapstomakesurethattheyareoffWhenleavingthehouse.Besides，neverhaveIwastedanyfood.What'smore，Idon'tspendtoomuchmoneyonunnecessarythingsandsavemoneyregularly.ThereasonwhyIdosoisthatIwanttomakeadifferencetomylife.Astheoldsayinggoes，“Wastenot，wantnot.”Imakeupmymindtobethriftyasmuchaspossible.Ithinkeveryoneshouldtakeactiontosticktothisvirtue.B誠信誠信是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)價值觀，是做人的根本。在我們的生活中，總是會遇到一些不講誠信的現(xiàn)象。你班將圍繞“誠信”開展一次演講活動，以宣傳誠信美德。請你根據(jù)下面要點準備一篇演講稿。要點：(1)列舉至少一例生活中缺失誠信的例子(如商家賣假貨)；(2)誠信缺失的危害；(3)講誠信的意義所在；(4)我們中學生怎樣在學習和生活中踐行誠信。要求：(1)必須包含以上要點，