雅思大作文段內(nèi)擴(kuò)展及首尾段

TASK2purpose：essay/dissertation考查提出解決方案的能力；舉例說明觀點(diǎn)的能力；對比證據(jù)和意見的能力等1精選課件ppt…Rubric:(I6P31)(fact+)opinion+question+instructionYoushouldspendabout40minutesonthistask:2精選課件ppt.Writeaboutthefollowingtopic:Today,thehighsalesofpopularconsumergoodsreflectthepowerofadvertisingandnottherealneedsofthesocietyinwhichtheyaresold.3精選課件ppt.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?Givereasonsforyouranswerandincludeanyrelevantexamplesfromyourownknowledgeorexperience.Writeatleast250words.4精選課件ppt大作文準(zhǔn)備天龍八“步”熟讀劍5，劍6范文，理解評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)題型；每種題型對應(yīng)的結(jié)構(gòu)題材歸類素材提綱（落實(shí)細(xì)節(jié)）思維高頻短語建立精彩句庫（換寫，仿寫，擴(kuò)寫）每2天一篇；?？?；5精選課件pptQuestiontypes：IAgreeorDisagree?(+Aor-A)--I6P31（見上）

opinion+(+Aor-A)--I3P52fact+opinion+(+Aor-A)6精選課件pptWhenacountrydevelopsitstechnology,thetraditionalskillsandwaysoflifedieout.Itispointlesstotryandkeepthemalive.Towhatextent(/howfar)doyouagreeordisagree(withthisopinion)?7精選課件pptIIAdvantagesVsDisadvantages(+Aor-A)

I5P53Insomecountriesyoungpeopleareencouragedtoworkortravelforayearbetweenfinishinghighschoolandstartinguniversitystudies.advantagesanddisadvantages8精選課件pptIIIDiscussBothViews(AorB)I6P53Successfulsportsprofessionalscanearnagreatdealmoremoneythanpeopleinotherimportantprofessions.Somepeoplethinkthisisfullyjustifiedwhileothersthinkitisunfair.Discussbothviews；youropinion9精選課件pptIVComparisonandcontrast(AorB)Researchindicatesthatthecharacteristicswearebornwithhavemuchmoreinfluenceonourpersonalityanddevelopmentthananyexperienceswemayhaveinourlife.Whichdoyouconsidertobethemajorinfluence?I5P9910精選課件pptVProblem+Reasons+Solutions(PRS)I4P101Inmanycountriesschoolshavesevereproblemswithstudentbehavior.Whatdoyouthinkarethecauseofthis?Whatsolutionscanyousuggest?11精選課件ppt評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)三大要素：內(nèi)容，結(jié)構(gòu)，語言讀雅思大作文范文學(xué)習(xí)寫作的內(nèi)容，結(jié)構(gòu)，文章行文和邏輯。12精選課件ppt寫作內(nèi)容及結(jié)構(gòu)：IAgreeorDisagree?(+Aor-A)Today,thehighsalesofpopularconsumergoodsreflectthepowerofadvertisingandnottherealneedsofthesocietyinwhichtheyaresold.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?13精選課件pptPara1開頭指出現(xiàn)象/事實(shí);restatetherubric（換詞，換句型，換種說法）；字?jǐn)?shù)：30-40w；

14精選課件pptPara2&3正文：四種寫法一邊倒：--完全同意(在開頭段提出觀點(diǎn)表同意；para2R1；para3R2；…)--完全不同意（在開頭段提出觀點(diǎn)表不同意；para2R1；para3R2；…）不完全同意或不同意15精選課件ppt--para2同意的部分；R1，2；para3不同意的部分R1,2--para2基本贊同；R1，2…;para3inwhatcases題中觀點(diǎn)站不住腳Para4結(jié)尾總結(jié)以上觀點(diǎn)字?jǐn)?shù)：30-40w16精選課件pptIIAdvantagesVsDisadvantages

(+Aor-A)Insomecountriesyoungpeopleareencouragedtoworkortravelforayearbetweenfinishinghighschoolandstartinguniversitystudies.Discusstheadvantagesanddisadvantagesforyoungpeoplewhodecidetodothis.17精選課件pptPara1開頭：指出現(xiàn)象/事實(shí)restatetherubric（換詞，換句型，換種說法）；Para2advantages(2-3個)Para3disadvantages(2-3個)18精選課件pptPara4結(jié)論：“我”的觀點(diǎn)。偏向advantages或disadvantages；理由（2個）；字?jǐn)?shù)：50w；注意：結(jié)論部分，無論是傾向優(yōu)點(diǎn)還是缺點(diǎn)，都不要重復(fù)正文部分的語句。對策：（如：偏向優(yōu)點(diǎn)）1.總結(jié)第二段的觀點(diǎn)，由specific到general；2.重復(fù)第二段觀點(diǎn)，但要用重述法。贊成的一邊適當(dāng)多寫一些內(nèi)容。19精選課件pptIIIDiscussBothViews(AorB)I6P164Successfulsportsprofessionalscanearnagreatdealmoremoneythanpeopleinotherimportantprofessions.Somepeoplethinkthisisfullyjustifiedwhileothersthinkitisunfair.DiscussboththeseviewsandgiveyourownopinionI6P5320精選課件ppt開頭Para1擺現(xiàn)象；restatetherubric；

21精選課件ppt正文：有傾向性；Para2A，簡單陳述其理由，然后針對所述理由展開駁論。Para3B(理由2-3個)注：傾向A寫法正好相反22精選課件ppt無傾向性Para2A，簡單陳述其理由，然后針對所述理由展開駁論。Para3B，簡單陳述其理由，然后針對所述理由展開駁論。結(jié)論P(yáng)ara4“我”的觀點(diǎn)。標(biāo)明傾向性AorB，或者保持中立并提出自己獨(dú)特的觀點(diǎn)。23精選課件pptIVComparisonandcontrast(AorB)Researchindicatesthatthecharacteristicswearebornwithhavemuchmoreinfluenceonourpersonalityanddevelopmentthananyexperienceswemayhaveinourlife.Whichdoyouconsidertobethemajorinfluence?I5P99范文：I5P16924精選課件pptIVComparisonandcontrast(AorB)Researchindicatesthatthecharacteristicswearebornwithhavemuchmoreinfluenceonourpersonalityanddevelopmentthananyexperienceswemayhaveinourlife.Whichdoyouconsidertobethemajorinfluence?I5P99范文：I5P16925精選課件pptPara1開頭restatetherubric；指出fact(s)說明有哪些可能的選擇；Para2為什么A，B…是可能的選擇，Para3“我”的選擇(oneofA，B…，ornoneofthesebutanotherone)；R1，2…Para4結(jié)論概括para2和para3的觀點(diǎn)。26精選課件pptVProblem+Reasons+Solutions(PRS)Inmanycountriesschoolshavesevereproblemswithstudentbehavior.Whatdoyouthinkarethecauseofthis?Whatsolutionscanyousuggest?I4P10127精選課件pptPara1開頭指出problem；restatetherubric；Para2R1,2...Para3S1,2…Para4結(jié)論概括para2和para3的觀點(diǎn)。Note：S和R要一一對應(yīng)。28精選課件ppt銜接，邏輯性1.foranessayasawhole:topicsentence(thesisstatement)2.foreachparagraph:topicsentence3.段落間,段內(nèi)都要注意銜接。標(biāo)明并列，遞進(jìn)，轉(zhuǎn)折等主要關(guān)系。學(xué)習(xí)1篇范文，體會內(nèi)容，結(jié)構(gòu)及連接手段29精選課件ppt觀點(diǎn)前置----段內(nèi)擴(kuò)展：30精選課件ppt原因Example1:

Therearemorejobopportunitiesreadilyavailableinthebigcitiesthaninthesmalltowns.31精選課件pptTheeconomicconditionsinthebigcitiesaregenerallybetterthanthoseinthesmalltowns,which,inreturn,attractsmoreinvestmentfromcommercialcorporationsandcompanies.

32精選課件pptTherefore,comparedtomostsmalltowns,therearealwaysmoremodernandinternationalcompanieswhichcanoffercityresidentsnumerousjobopportunities.33精選課件pptExample2:Bigcitiescanprovidecityresidentswithmoreeducationopportunities.34精選課件pptEducationinstitutionsarealwaysbuiltintheareawithabigpopulationwiththeintentionofservingandeducatingpeople.35精選課件pptTherefore,comparedwithsmalltowns,bigcitiesalwayshavemoreschools,collegesanduniversitieswhichcanoffermanyeducationalopportunitiesforbothchildrenandadults.

36精選課件ppt原因---展開的常用句型

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無須過渡詞37精選課件ppt擬無Example1Themostobviouslyimportantcharacteristicofairplanetravelisthehighspeedinvolved.

38精選課件pptIttookweekstocrosstheAtlanticorPacificoceansinsideaship.Todaywiththeadventofairplanesinourlives,thosesametripscanbecompletedinamatterofhours.

39精選課件pptAhundredyearsago,whenwedidn’thavetheflightsinthesky,andwhentherewereonlyships,theonlytransportationfacilityacrosstheocean,aninternationaljourneywasexhaustingandtime-wasting.40精選課件pptExample2Eatingatrestaurantcansavealotoftime.41精選課件pptWecanhardlyimaginethesituationwithoutrestaurantsinourlives.Livingunderthehigh-pressureandfast-pacedlivingstyle,peoplehavefoundtheyneedrestaurantwhentheydon’thaveenoughtimetoenjoytheirowncooking.42精選課件pptWithoutrestaurantsandtheservicesofferedbythem,peoplewillhavetospendlongtimegoingtogroceriesandcookingbythemselves.43精選課件ppt常用句型Without…Ifwedon’thave…inourlives,…Wecannotimaginethesituationwithout…44精選課件pptOnehundredyearsagowhenwedidn’thave…inourlives,…Thingswouldbecompletelydifferentwithout…inourlives.45精選課件ppt方面展開Example1Comparedwithsmalltowns,therearemoreconvenientlivingconditionsinbigcities.46精選課件pptInthebigcities,thereareconvenientshoppingcentersforpeopletobuydailynecessities；publictransportationsystemcantransfercityresidentsfromoneplacetoanothereasily;inentertainingplacescitizensgetfunandenjoylife;andeventherearemoretheaterstoshowthelatestmovies…47精選課件pptExample2Doyouagreeordisagree?Azoohasnousefulpurpose.(disagree)48精選課件pptByobservingandstudyingthebehaviorsandhabitsofanimalsinthezoo,wecanlearnthebasicrulesofsurvivingandlivingintheworld.

49精選課件pptAmonkeyhastofighttowinwhenhedecidestobealeaderofthegroup;birdsshowtheirbeautifulplumeandvoiceiftheywanttoattracttheirpartners;andalltheanimals,iftheywantalifefreeofworries,responsibilities,andpressure,havetosacrificetheirfreedom.

50精選課件ppt常用句型Thisreasoncanbereflectedinthefollowingaspects.Wecanseethisineveryaspectof…First,second,inaddition,moreover,also…Severalfactsseveralaspects51精選課件ppt數(shù)據(jù)：Example1Therearemorejobopportunitiesreadilyavailableinthebigcitiesthaninthesmalltowns.52精選課件pptAccordingtothesurveyconductedbyTessessData,astatisticorganization,80%commercialandindustrialcorporationsandcompanies,includingbothdomesticcompaniesandinternationalcompaniesarelocatedinthebigcities,whichoffermorethan80%workingpositionsforthosewhoareworkingandlivinginthecities.53精選課件ppt常用句型Accordingtoarecentsurvey,…

Thelatestsurveysshowthat…

Aninvestigationshowsthat…Asurveywascarriedouton…,theresultsofwhichweresurprising.Accordingtoaninvestigation,…Arecentsurveyrevealedthat…54精選課件ppt舉例Example1Somepeopleprefertoliveinasmalltown.Othersprefertoliveinabigcity.

55精選課件pptForexample,therearefarmoresupermarkets,buslines,theatersinParisthaninLestie,averysmalltowninnorthFrance.OnaveragepeopleinPariscangototheatereveryweektoenjoythelatestmovieswhereasthoseinLestiehavetotakehoursoftraintogotothecitytheatersforamovie.Generally,peopleinPariscanenjoymuchbettershoppingenvironmentthanthoseinLestie.56精選課件pptExample2Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Technologyhasmadetheworldabetterplacetolive.Disagree57精選課件pptOneexampleinpointisInternet,oneofthemostpervasivemoderntechnologyinourlives,whichhasmadeourworldevenmorecomplicatedandisolated.58精選課件pptWiththeadventofInternetinourlives,mostyoungpeoplehavealreadymovedtheirlivestothecyberworld.Theystudy,work,chat,evengameonline.Peoplelosttheirpreviouswayofgaming,fromwhichtheycanenjoythefunofcooperatingandcommunicating.

59精選課件pptAlso,theyareawayfromthetraditionalwayofliving,fromwhichtheycanenjoythebasicandsimplelivesofhumanbeings.60精選課件ppt常用句型Insteadofimprovingourwayofliving,Internethasmadetheworldamorecomplicatedandisolatedplacetolivein.

61精選課件pptTheexamplethatcansupportmyideais….Theexampleof…cansupportmyidea.…isagoodexamplewhichcansupportmyidea.62精選課件pptTosupportmyidea,thereisonegoodexample.Agoodexampleinpointis…Agoodexampleis…Totake…asanexample.Themostobviousexampleofthisreasonis…Forexample,…Forinstance,…

63精選課件ppt對比：Somepeopleprefertoworkforalargecompany.Othersprefertoworkorasmallcompany.64精選課件pptEmployeesinthebigcompaniescanalwaysownmorechancestoacquiremoreknowledgeandexperience.Inbigcompanies,professionalsandexpertsemployedcanoffermoreexpertiseandskills,whichyoucanhardlyfindinasmallcompanywhichcanbarelyaffordtoemployanexpert,orwherethereisnoneedtohaveexpertsatall.65精選課件pptInbigcompanies,professionalsandexpertsemployedcanoffermoreexpertiseandskills,whichyoucanhardlyfindinasmallcompanywhichcanbarelyaffordtoemployanexpert,orwherethereisnoneedtohaveexpertsatall.66精選課件ppt常用句型However,but,incontrastontheotherhand67精選課件ppt開頭段68精選課件pptIntroduction----背景引入

Inthefuture,studentsmayhavethechoiceofstudyingathomebyusingtechnologysuchascomputersortelevisionorofstudyingattraditionalschools.69精選課件pptWeliveinaworldinwhichtechnologygivesusmanyopportunitiestoimproveeveryaspectofourlives,includingarts,sciences,politics,andeducation(時代特征).Oneofmostobviousimpactwhichthetechnologyhasoneducationisthatithaschangedtraditionalstudying-in-classlearningpattern(走向主題).70精選課件pptNowwegetchancetostudyathomebyusingtechnologysuchascomputerortelevision(論述主題).Thisnewlearningpattern,whichIstronglyrecommendtoeveryone,willbenefitusalot.71精選課件pptIntroduction----對方讓步

Manypeoplehaveacloserelationshipwiththeirpets.Thesepeopletreattheirbirds,cats,orotheranimalsasmembersoftheirfamily.72精選課件pptFormanykids,familypetsarenotjustanimalskeptforamusementorcompanionship;thefamilypetsaretreatedastheirbestfriendsandcompanionswhonotonlyprovideunconditionallove,butalsoteachthemaboutfriendship,73精選課件pptresponsibility,loyalty,andempathy.Theylovetotreatthemastheirfamilymembersandprefertokeepthemintheirrooms.(對方觀點(diǎn))74精選課件pptHowever，theyfailtorealizethatpetsarestillanimals,whichmay,firstly,makeseriousinjurytokidsaroundthem;inaddition,therearealwaysvariousbacteriaanddiseasesbearing.Therefore,Idon’tthinkit’sagoodideatotreatthepetsasfamilymembers.(我方觀點(diǎn))75精選課件ppt觀點(diǎn)駁斥句型Peopleseemtofailtotakeintoaccountthefactthatuniversityalsobringstudentsvaluableknowledgeineveryfield..76精選課件pptHowever,thisopinionisnowbeingquestionedbymoreandmorecityresidents,whocomplainthatthemigrantshavebroughtmanyseriousproblemslikecrimeandprostitution77精選課件pptIntroduction----主題重述

Insomecountries,teenagershavejobswhiletheyarestillstudents.Agree？78精選課件pptTheschooldebateovercollegestudents’takingapart-timejobcanalwaysarousewidespreadinterests.Thosewhoobjecttoitarguethatstudentsshouldnotspendtheirprecioustimeinthisway.Peoplewho79精選課件pptadvocateit,ontheotherhand,claimthatbytakingamajor-relatedpart-timejob,studentscanfurtherimprovetheiracademicstudies.轉(zhuǎn)述主題+理由AsfarasIamconcerned,Ibelievethatparttimejobswillbringstudentsbenefits.我方觀點(diǎn)80精選課件ppt理論重述句型It

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problemthat…h(huán)ascausedwidepublicconcern81精選課件pptIntroduction----概念展開Neighborsarethepeoplewholivenearus.Inyouropinion,whatarethequalitiesofagoodneighbor?

82精選課件pptNeighborsarethenearestpeopletousinthedarkesthoursofthenight.Theyaretheoneswholiveclosesttous,soclosethatthereisperhapsnomorethanacementedwallbetweenus.概念展開83精選課件pptBeingagoodneighborisadutythateveryoneshouldfulfillandapersonhasmanyresponsibilitiestowardshisneighbors;therefore,oneshouldalwaysbeagoodneighborsothatheisalsotreatedinthesamemannerwhenheisneeded.進(jìn)入主題84精選課件ppt事實(shí)引入句型Accordingtoarecentsurvey,fourmillionpeopledieeachyearfromdiseaseslinkedtosmoking.

Thelatestsurveysshowthatquiteafewchildrenhaveunpleasantassociationswithhomework.

Thedeathrateofnew-bornbabiesinthatregion,theresultsofwhichweresurprising.85精選課件pptAninvestigationshowsthatfemaleworkerstendtohaveafavorableattitudetowardretirement.Asurveywascarriedoutonthe…86精選課件pptIntroduction----多種引用方式的疊加使用

Agreeordisagree?Televisionhasdestroyedcommunicationamongfriendsandfamily.87精選課件pptTV,oneofthemostpervasivemoderntechnologies,whichhasenteredpeople’slivesseveraldecadesago,hasgreatimpactonbothourlife-styleandourthought.概念介紹88精選課件pptAccordingtoarecentsurveyconductedbyStatisticsBureauofGuangdongProvince,astatisticorganizationinChina,teenagersaveragelyspend14hourswatchingtelevisioneachweekbutonlysixhourswiththeirfamilymembersinChina.數(shù)據(jù)切入89精選課件pptIamintotalagreementwiththeclaimthatTVhasbroughtanunfavorableinfluenceontherelationshipbetweenthemandtheirfamilymembers.觀點(diǎn)+過渡90精選課件ppt原因引入句型Myreasonsarelistedbelow:Therearenumerousreasonsfor…,butIwouldonlyexploreafewofthembelow:Thereareseveralreasonsandagreementstosupportmyidea.Here,Iintendtoexplaincoupleofreasons.91精選課件pptiagreewith…forthefollowingreasons:myargumentsarelistedasfollows.Iwilltrytoprovemypointbythefollowingideas.themostimportantreasonwhyIagreewiththeabovestatementisthatIbelieve…92精選課件pptintroduction---Position:AsfarasIamconcerned...

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with…Itendtobelievethat…Ialwaysholdastrongpositive/negativeattitudetoward…93精選課件ppt…,whichIstronglyrecommendtoeveryoneMostofpeople,includingme,cannotagreewiththeopinionthat…Istronglyrecommendthat…94精選課件pptPosition---下文壓縮句:Example1:LivinginthebigcitiesisabetterchoiceThereasonwhyIprefertoliveinthebigcitiesisthattherearemorejobopportunities,educationopportunitiesandbetterlivingconditionsinthebigcitiesthaninthesmalltowns.95精選課件pptExample2:EatingintherestaurantsisabetterchoiceIprefertoeatatrestaurantsbecauseitsavesmealotoftime,offersavarietyoffoodchoiceandbeautifulfoodgarni