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連俊霞國內(nèi)考試部北京新東方學(xué)?？佳袑懽鞴ヂ?/32書信寫作滿分策略格式和語域恰當：二分之一分數(shù)拿到；包含全部內(nèi)容：再加一分；使用正確語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯：再加二分；文字連貫、層次清楚：再加二分；附加分：書寫整齊

語域：正式——使用禮貌表示，不用縮略語(對公)半正式—能夠使用縮略和口語表示(對私)非正式（省略號）——考試不用2024/5/7writing22/32一、書信類應(yīng)用文寫作1.1注意事項（英語一）Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter.Use

“LiMing”instead.（英語二）Use“ZhangWei”instead.

Donotwritetheaddress.寫作時允許在作文中使用提醒語中出現(xiàn)過關(guān)鍵詞，但使用提醒語中出現(xiàn)過詞組或句子將被扣分。如影響交際，產(chǎn)生歧義或難以看懂，分數(shù)將降低一個檔次。2024/5/7writing33/32一、書信類應(yīng)用文寫作1.2書信格式

903ElmSt.Liberty,Ohio80701December18,Dr.WaltWhitmanChairman,DepartmentofPhysicsPennsylvaniaStateUniversityUniversityPark,Pa.16802DearDr.Whitman,Sincerelyyours,LiMing2024/5/7writing4.稱呼（頂頭寫），正文（空Dear），落款（靠右寫）4/321.2書信格式1.2.1稱呼格式不知道對方姓名：

ToWhomItMayConcern，DearSirorMadam，(一定男女搭配)知道對方姓名，（對公）DearMr.

Green，DearMrs.Bush，DearMissWang，DearMs.Li，

（對私）DearBob，DearLucy，熟人，題目中無姓名Dearfriend，DearBob/Tom，啟示：稱呼后面用逗號，首字母大寫(or例外)2024/5/7writing55/321.2書信格式1.2.2落款格式ToWhomItMayConcern，Iamwritingto……

Sincerelyyours，LiMing啟示：Sincerelyyours,萬能用

LiMing/ZhangWei后面沒有點2024/5/7writing6.6/32一、書信類應(yīng)用文寫作1.3書信三點式（1）寫作目標段——細化段——重申或者期待段總：8句；長句：3句左右（2）已考信函類別：辭職信()；申請信()；道歉信()；提議信(&)；感激信(英語二)；推薦信（）；祝賀信（英語二）2024/5/7writing77/321.3書信三點式1.3.1寫作目標慣用表示(1)直入主題Iamwritingto(informyouthat)…(2)自我介紹Asastudentofouruniversity/acitizen,Iamwritingto(informyouthat)…1.3.2細化段注意事項包含全部內(nèi)容（背景改寫，題目要求）層次清楚——first,second,…兩個左右復(fù)雜句2024/5/7writing88/321.3書信三點式1.3.3重申或期待段(1)表示感激：Thankyouforyourtimeandconsideration.(2)重申主題：Iamsorryagainforalltheinconveniencecaused.Thankyouagainforyourhospitality.(3)表示期待：Iamlookingforwardtoyourearliestreply/hearingfromyousoon.Iamlookingforwardyourpropersolutiontothisproblem.

2024/5/7writing99/32一、書信類應(yīng)用文寫作1.4書信寫作步驟審題——確定稱呼，信件類別，內(nèi)容要求書寫稱呼與答題紙上開始寫作——內(nèi)容全部覆蓋（背景&要求）不忘落款——Sincerelyyours,檢驗2024/5/7writing1010/32年Restrictionsontheuseofplasticbagshavenotbeensosuccessfulinsomeregions.“Whitepollution”isstillgoingon.Writealettertotheeditor(s)ofyourlocalnewspaperto1)giveyouropinionsbrieflyand2)maketwoorthreesuggestions背景改寫：TheuseofplasticbagshasbeenrestrictedsinceJune1,,buttheresultisnotthatgood/satisfying.Inotherwords,“WhitePollution”isnotstoppedradically.2024/5/7writing11背景要求1要求2被動改寫稱呼提議信11/32年書信框架DearEditors,/ToWhomItMayConcern,Asacitizen,Iamwritingtoexpressmyopinionabout“WhitePollution”.

細化（題目背景改寫，提議內(nèi)容）Thankyouforyourtimeandconsideration.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearliestreply.

Sincerelyyours,LiMing34words2024/5/7writing12.12/32范文DearEditor,I'masincerereaderofyournewspaperandIlikeyourdiscussionofthesocialproblems.NowIwanttogivesomeopinionsofmyselfaboutthe"WhitePollution".Asweknow,regulationwasmadetosolvetheprobleminJune1stof.Theuseofplasticbagswasrestrictedinthesupermarketandmanyothershopsfreely.Atthebeginning,itwascarriedonwell,butnowIfoundplasticbagswereusedinsomesmallshopsforfreeorwithnopay.2024/5/7writing13regular/loyalonforfreefindare背景改寫13/32年范文Iamwritingtotellyouthatweshouldsolvethisproblemsoonwiththehelpofyournewspaper.Youcouldmakesomeinvestigatorsaboutitandwritesomereportsofit,soastoappealtoallthepeople'sattentionsofoursociety.

Sincerelyyours,LiMing格式正確覆蓋全部內(nèi)容使用銜接伎倆詞匯與語法正確2024/5/7writing14investigation.兩點提議14/32年（英語一）Writealettertoafriendofyourstorecommendoneofyourfavoritemoviesand2)givereasonsforyourrecommendation.Yourshouldwriteabout100wordsonANSWERSHEET2.Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter.User“LiMing”instead.Donotwritertheaddress.(10points)2024/5/7writing1515/32年書信框架Dearfriend/Bob，

Iamwritingtorecommendawonderfulmovietoyou——“ForrestGump”.Ibetyouwillloveit.…

Ihopeyoulikeit,andlookforwardtoyourearlyreply.Sincerelyyours,LiMing36words2024/5/7writing1616/32年范文Dearfriend/Bob，

Iamwritingtorecommendawonderfulmovietoyou——“ForrestGump”.Ibetyouwillloveit.Iwouldliketosharetheamazingfilmwithyouinthat:First,itsplotisgreatandmeaningful,especiallythepartthatForrestneverstopsdoingwhathelikesandachievesthefinalsuccess;

2024/5/7writing17目標親近原因1：情節(jié)17/32年范文…;second,totellthetruth,Iwasmovedbythemovietotearsbecauseofhismother’sselflesssacrificeforherboy,whichremindsmeofpracticingfilialpietytorepaymyparentsfortheirdevotiontomybirthandgrowth.Ihopeyoulikeit,andlookforwardtoyourearlyreply.Sincerelyyours,LiMing114words2024/5/7writing18原因2：感人且教育定從期待18/32年（英語二）SupposeyourcousinLiMinghasjustbeenadmittedtoauniversity.Writehim/heralettertocongratulatehim/her;andGivehimsomeadviceforthecollegelife.Yourshouldwriteabout100wordsonANSWERSHEET2.Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter.User“ZhangWei”instead.Donotwritertheaddress.(10points)2024/5/7writing1919/32201英語二書信框架DearLiMing,IamwritingtocongratulateyouonyourgraduationfromhighschoolandenteringPekingUniversity,oneofthetopuniversitiesinChina.…Congratulationstoyouagain.AndIwishyougoodluckinthepursuitofahigheracademicdegree.Sincerelyyours,47wordsZhangWei2024/5/7writing2020/32范文DearLiMing,IamwritingtocongratulateyouonyourgraduationfromhighschoolandenteringPekingUniversity,oneofthetopuniversitiesinChina.

YourfamilyandIaresoproudofyouforwhatyouhavegot,andyoudeserveallofthisonbasisofyourprevioushardwork.Furthermore,collegeisanewbeginningandachancetomakefurtherimprovementofyourselfandyourexperience.2024/5/7writing2121/32….Hence,itisadvisabletocherishthetimetostudyandenjoywithyourfriends.Besides,trytoparticipateinsomecollegeandsocialactivitiestoenhanceyourlifeexperience.Congratulationstoyouagain.AndIwishyougoodluckinthepursuitofahigheracademicdegree.Sincerelyyours,ZhangWei122words2024/5/7writing2222/32書信寫作總結(jié)1.1注意事項——”LiMing”“ZhangWei”1.2書信格式——稱呼，落款1.3書信三點式——寫信目標段，細化段，重申或期待段，范文解析2024/5/7writing2323/32二、摘要寫作2.1摘要寫作格式AbstractThisarticlefocusesonmainreasonsthataccountfortherapidglobalizationsince1950s…XXXX2024/5/7Writing241.標題必須有，首字母大寫2.文章不分段3.落款必須無24/32二、摘要寫作2.2摘要寫作內(nèi)容（1）總—Thisarticlefocuseson…Thispassageemphasizes…Thispaperprovidesanoverviewof…（2）分—段意總結(jié)（注意過渡：first，second…）（3）總—總結(jié)全文（首尾呼應(yīng)）Inall,thisessaymakesaspecificanalysisof….2024/5/7Writing2525/32二、摘要寫作2.3摘要寫作注意事項（1）短句為主（2）第三人稱為主（3）現(xiàn)在時為主2.4摘要寫作步驟（1）寫標題——以免答題時忘記（2）找段意——段首句或尾句（3）中翻英——以句子動詞為關(guān)鍵，主謂賓次序翻譯（4）加過渡——句子之間邏輯關(guān)系2024/5/7Writing2626/32二、摘要寫作2.5實踐寫作——綱領(lǐng)樣題（1）標題——FundamentalCausesofEconomicGlobalization（2）段意1——全球化技術(shù)基礎(chǔ)。（3）段意2——全球化經(jīng)濟基礎(chǔ)。a.市場經(jīng)濟體制成為各國發(fā)展經(jīng)濟首選；

b.力量不停壯大跨國企業(yè)成為經(jīng)濟全球化中堅力量；c.國際經(jīng)濟組織是經(jīng)濟全球