2024屆高三英語二輪復習：讀后續(xù)寫歷年高考高分作文匯編素材

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2023年6月我的寫作之路

WhenIwasinmiddleschool,mysocialstudiesteacheraskedmetoenterawritingcontest.Isaidnowithoutthinking.Idid

notlovewriting.MyfamilycamefromBrazil,soEnglishwasonlymysecondlanguage.Writingwassodifficultandpainfulfor

methatmyteacherhadallowedmetopresentmypaperonthesinkingoftheTitanicbyactingoutaplay,whereIplayedallthe

parts.Noonelaughedharderthanhedid.

So,whydidhesuddenlyforcemetodosomethingatwhichIwassuretofail?Hisreply:"BecauseIloveyourstories.If

you'rewillingtoapplyyourselfIthinkyouhaveagoodshotatthis.^^Encouragedbyhiswords,Iagreedtogiveitatry.

IchosePaulRevere?shorseasmysubject.PaulReverewasasilversmith（銀匠）inBostonwhorodeahorseatnightonApril

18,1775toLexingtontowarnpeoplethatBritishsoldierswerecoming.Mystorywouldcomestraightfromthehorse?smouth.

Notabrilliantidea,butfunny;andunlikelytobeanyoneelse'schoice.

Whatdidthehorsethink,ashespedthroughthenight?Didhegettired?Havedoubts?Didhewanttoquit?Isympathized

immediately.Igottired.Ihaddoubts.Iwantedtoquit.But,likeReveredhorse,Ikeptgoing.Iworkedhard.Icheckedmy

spelling.Iaskedmyoldersistertocorrectmygrammar.IcheckedoutahalfdozenbooksonPaulReverefromthelibrary.Ieven

readafewofthem.

WhenIhandedintheessaytomyteacher,hereadit,laughedoutloud,andsaid,“Great.Now,writeitagain.,,Iwroteit

again,andagainandagain.WhenIfinallyfinishedit,thethoughtofwinninghadgivenwaytotheenjoymentofwriting.IfIdidn't

win,Iwouldn'tcare.

注意：

1.續(xù)寫詞數應為150個左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.

Iwenttomyteacher'sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.

Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.Withmyhearthammeringhard,Irippedthe

ordinaryenvelopesentbythecommitteeopen,notexpectinganythingpleasant.However,muchtomysurprise,thereslippedouta

glisteringgoldenmedal,withabig“Top1"andmyinitialsonit.Believeme,youcan'timaginehowear-splittingmycrywas,

thoughIdidn'tcareabouttherankbutmyworkpayingoff.Laterintheawardpresentation,Icouldn'thelpcurvingmylipsintoan

,,

ear-to-eargrin,andanexpertinthejudgingpanelremarkedmynovelas"highlyinnovative,"fulloftalent'*orsomethinglike

that.

ButallIwantedtodowastalkingtomyteacher.

Iwenttomyteacher飛officeaftertheawardpresentation.TherewereseveralstudentsaroundhimwhenIhandedhimthe

medalwithslightlytremblingarms,butIhadneverseenhimlaughingharderthanhedidatthatmoment.Fornearlyaminute,the

ringinglaughterwithexhilarationechoedintheoffice,andIfoundmyselfinhistightembracethen,"YouAREmybeststudent,

bro.^^Hesaid,givingmeamightypatonmyshoulder."Justwriteandgoahead."Tearsmingledwithbothpleasureand

thankfulnessstreamingdown,IfeltlikeRevere'shorseonceagain.Ihadgottired.Ihadhaddoubts,1hadwantedtoquit,butI

mustkeepgoingandworkhardbecausemyfuturewastherewaitingforme.

Notes:

1.withmyhearthammeringhardhammer=bearveryfastv.反復敲打，連續(xù)擊打(尤指發(fā)出大聲)

2.rip....open把…撕破

3.glistering閃耀的

4.initials(名字的)首字母

5.imaginehowearsplittingmycrywas想象一下我的哭聲是多么震耳欲聾

6.payoff成功，奏效

7.curvingmylipsintoanear-to-eargrin把我的嘴唇彎成一個合不攏嘴的笑容

8.theringinglaughterwithexhilaration充滿興奮的銀鈴般的笑聲

9.Tearsmingledwithbothpleasureandthankfulnessstreamingdown,IfeltlikeReveredhorseonceagain.

(1)mingleAwithB(使)與…結合；使混合；使聯(lián)結

(2)mingledwithbothpleasureandthankfulness作后置定語修飾tears

(3)Tearsstreamingdown作獨立結構

10.協(xié)同

(1)...thoughIdidn*tcareabouttherankbutmyworkpayingoff.

(2)....butIhadneverseenhimlaughingharderthanhedidatthatmoment

(3)Ihadgottired.Ihadhaddoubts,1hadwantedtoquit,butImustkeepgoingandworkhardbecausemyfuturewasthere

waitingforme.

2023年1月首考蜂鳥感恩

Iwasinvitedtoacookoutonanoldfriend'sfarminwesternWashington.Iparkedmycaroutsidethefarmandwalkedpasta

milkinghousewhichhadapparentlynotbeenusedinmanyyears.Anoiseatawindowcaughtmyattention,soIenteredit.Itwas

ahummingbird(蜂鳥)，desperatelytryingtoescape.Shewascoveredinspider-webs(蛛網)andwasbarelyabletomoveher

wings.SheceasedherstruggletheinstantIpickedherup.

Withthebirdinmycuppedhand,Ilookedaroundtoseehowshehadgottenin.Thebrokenwindowglasswasthelikelyanswer.

Istuffedapieceofclothintotheholeandtookheroutside,closingthedoorsecurelybehindme.

WhenIopenedmyhand,thebirddidnotflyaway;shesatlookingatmewithherbrighteyes.Iremovedthestickyspider-webs

thatcoveredherheadandwings.Still,shemadenoattempttofly.Perhapsshehadbeenstrugglingagainstthewindowtoolong

andwastootired?Ortoothirsty?

AsIcarriedheruptheblackberry-linedpathtowardmycarwhereIkeptawaterbottle,shebegantomove.Istopped,andshe

soontookwingbutdidnotimmediatelyflyaway.

Hovering(懸停)，sheapproachedwithinsixinchesofmyface.Foraverylongmoment,thistinycreaturelookedintomyeyes,

turningherheadfromsidetoside.Thensheflewquicklyoutofsight.

Duringthecookout,Itoldmyhostsaboutthehummingbirdincident.Theypromisedtofixthewindow.AsIwasdeparting,my

friendswalkedmetomycar.Iwasstandingbythecarwhenahummingbirdflewtothecenterofourgroupandbeganhovering.

Sheturnedfrompersontopersonuntilshecametome.Sheagainlookeddirectlyintomyeyes,thenletoutasqueakingcalland

wasgone.Foramoment,allwerespeechless.Thensomeonesaid,t4Shemusthavecometosaygoodbye.”

注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數應為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題紙的相應位置作答。

Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.

Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.

Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.AsIpulledup（停車）outsidethefarmandwalkedonthefamiliarblackberry-

linedpathagain,mygaze（凝視）involuntarily（無心地，不自覺地）restedonthemilkinghouse.Apparently,thebroken

windowhadbeenfixedbymyfriendsaftermyleavelasttime.Naturally,itbroughtmebacktotheencounterwiththelovely

creature,whosebrighteyesandexceptionalintelligenceleftmeanindelible（不可磨滅的，擦不掉的）impression.Forawhile,I

setmymindarestandwenttothedinnerparty.Duringthecookout,thehostalsoaddedthatthebirdsometimeswouldstayoutof

themilkinghousefbrawholedayandalltheguestswereamazedatit.Scenesofthehummingbirdkeptpresentingthemselvesto

me,andtherewasawaveofanticipationtoseeitagaininmymind.However,itdidn'tcometrue.Alittleupset,Isqueezedinto

（擠進）thecaraftermyfriendswalkedmetoit.

Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.Hoveringinthebluesky,sheturnedfrompersontoperson

desperatelyasiftosearchfbrsomething.Excitedbyherunexpectedappearance,Iflewoutofthecarandstretchedoutmycupped

hands.Themomentsherecognizedme,sheletoutasqueakingcall（吱吱叫）andperchedon（棲息在...上）mypalms,nudging

（輕推，輕觸）myfingerswithitsfurryhead.Sothefamiliarsqueal（尖叫聲）wasn'tafantasy,andherwholeday'swaiting

madefbr（促成）thereunion.Seeminglysensingmyfeelings,shebeatherwings（拍打翅膀）andsoared（翱翔）highintothesky,

humming（哼）acheerfullittletune."Shemusthavecometosaygood-byetoyouagain,oneofmyfriendsaid.Atthatmoment.I

feltthattheconnectionbetweenuspaledeverything.

2023年1月四省聯(lián)考人與松鼠

MyhusbandandIenjoyseeinglifethroughtheeyesofourchildren.Ifsamazingtowatchastheydiscovertheirworld.

Whilewewereoutdoorslastsummerenjoyingthesunshine,ouroldestdaughter,Kaytlin,calledmetothedoorway.

Beneaththestepswasababyredsquirrel.

Wewatcheditfromadistance,notwantingtodisturbitorscareoffitsmother.Butafteralongwait-andlookingall

aroundourhouseforsignsofanestoramother-werealizedthetinysquirrelwaslost.

Shakingterribly,hewasweak,thin,andhungry.Wetriedtofindanexperttohelp,buttheInlandFisheriesandWildlife

websiteshowedthattherewerenowildlifeexpertsinourarea.Aftersomequickresearch,weconcludedthatthebestway

togivethesquirrelafightingchancewastocareforhimourselves.Soatriptothelocalstoreformilkandsupplieswasin

order.

Moreresearchtaughtushowmuchtofeedhim,howtoestimatehisage,howandwhentowean（斷奶）him,andthat

weshouldlethimgoassoonashecouldsurviveonhisown.

OurdaughtersandItookturnsinfeeding“Squirt."Kaytlintookonthemostresponsibility.Shetaughthimtoeatfrom

abottle,andshewokeinthenightforhisfeeds.

Toourrelief,Squirtsoonbecamehealthyandstrong.Withinafewweekshebecamemoreactive.Hewouldchatter（吱

吱叫）forhisnextmeal,playfullygoaroundthegirls,andliedownonthemforsleep.Itwasn'tlongbeforehewasweaned

ontosolidfoodandreintroducedtothewild.

Hisfirstfewvisitstothegreatoutdoorswerefunny.Justlikeachild,hewouldplayinthegrasssomeandthenrunback

toKaytlinforsafety.Soonshehadhimclimbingtreesandfindingnestmaterial.

注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數應為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

Onedayinthetrees,Squirtmetupwithafamilyofgraysquirrels.

Onenight,Squirtdidn7comebacktoourhouseanditrainedhard.

Onedayinthetrees,Squirtmetupwithafamilyofgraysquirrels.Atfirst,Squirtwassomehowintimidatedtoencountersuch

afamilynearhishalf-donenest.SohejustscurriedoffthetreeandhidhimselfbehindKaytlin.Thenthecurioussquirrelpokedhis

headout,eyesscanningthesquirrelswhilethefamilyweredoingthesame.Uponseeingthis,Kaytlintookoutsomeacomsand

placedthemonthegrass.Minuteslater,thefamilycamedown.Thoughindifferentcolor,Squirtmingledwiththebabygraysquirrels

verysoon.Theykeptchatteringwhilenabbingtheacorn,asiftheywerebrothersandsisters.Afterthatday,heplayedalmostall

dayinthetrees.

Onenight,Squirtdidn'tcomebacktoourhouseanditrainedhard.Kaytlindecidedtolookfbrhim.Iaccompaniedhertothe

treethatwasSquirfsmostcommonplayground.Shemovedtheflashlightthroughthefoliage,expectingthefamiliarfigure.

Suddenly,shespottedsomethingredflashingby.Bythelightoftheflashlight,thepicturethatthesquirrelshuddledtogetherina

treeholecameintooursight.Kaytlinturnedtomenervously,"Mom,wemusttakehimhome.”“Doyoustillrememberwhatthe

researchsaid?”Iasked.ThenKaytlinfellsilent.Afterawhile,sheplacedtheacomsshegrabbedbeforegettingoutunderthetree,

”Yes,Ibelievehecouldsurvivewithhisfamilies."It*samazingtoseeaworldinasquirrelfbrmydaughter,andagrowthinagirl,

fbrme.

Notes:

1.intimidated害怕的；受到恐嚇的

2.encounter邂逅

3.scurry碎步疾跑

4.pokehisheadout伸出頭

5.scan掃視

6.acoms［植］橡子

7.comedown著陸；降落；從空中墜落

8.minglewith相交往

9.chatter吱吱叫

10.nabtheacorn抓住橡子

11.flashlight手電筒

12.foliage（植物的）枝葉，葉子

13.huddletogether蜷縮在一起的

2022年06月David跑步

Itwasthedayofthebigcross-countryrun.Studentsfromsevendifferentprimaryschoolsinandaroundthesmalltownwere

warmingupandwalkingtheroute（路線）throughthickevergreenforest.

IlookedaroundandfinallyspottedDavid,whowasstandingbyhimselfofftothesidebyafence.Hewassmallfbrtenyears

old.Hisusualbigtoothysmilewasabsenttoday.Iwalkedoverandaskedhimwhyhewasn'twiththeotherchildren.Hehesitated

andthensaidhehaddecidednottorun.

Whatwaswrong?Hehadworkedsohardforthisevent!

Iquicklysearchedthecrowdfbrtheschoofscoachandaskedhimwhathadhappened.UIwasafraidthatkidsfromother

schoolswouldlaughatheexplaineduncomfortably.4tIgavehimthechoicetorunornot,andlethimdecide.

Ibitbackmyfrustration（懊惱）.Iknewthecoachmeantwell-hethoughthewasdoingtherightthing.Aftermakingsure

thatDavidcouldrunifhewanted,Iturnedtofindhimcomingtowardsme,hissmallbodyrockingfromsidetosideasheswung

hisfeetforward.

Davidhadabraindiseasewhichpreventedhimfromwalkingorrunninglikeotherchildren,butatschoolhisclassmates

thoughtofhimasaregularkid.Healwaysparticipatedtothebestofhisabilityinwhatevertheyweredoing.Thatwaswhynone

ofthechildrenthoughtitunusualthatDavidhaddecidedtojointhecross-countryteam.Itjusttookhimlonger-thafsall.David

hadnotmissedasinglepractice,andalthoughhealwaysfinishedhisrunlongaftertheotherchildren,hedidalwaysfinish.Asa

specialeducationteacherattheschool,IwasfamiliarwiththechallengesDavidfacedandwasproudofhisstrongdetermination.

注意：

1.續(xù)寫詞數應為150左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答.

Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn'tlookatme.

IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.

Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn7lookatme.Heloweredhisheadandrubbedhishands.Obviouslyhewas

stuckbetweenarockandahardplace.Tryingtobreakthesilence,Itappedhimontheshouldergently."Youarespecial,butthafs

youruniqueness.Todayyou'reheretoshowthatuniquenesswithallyourdiligenceanddetermination”,Iventuredinanencouraging

voice.Mysimplewordsspokenfromtheheart,foundtheirwaystraightintohis.Heraisedhisheadandstaredintomyeyes.Isensed

thathisdilemmagavewaytotrustinmewithhiseyestwinklingwithdeterminationandhope.ThatfamiliarDavid,hard-working,

determined,fullofpositiveenergy,cameback.

IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.Iclenchedmyfistandwavedathim.Hegavemea

determinedlook,asiftosaythathewouldnotchangehismind.Hetookadeepbreathtocalmhimselfdown,andthentoedthe

linereadytorun.Withabang,everyrunnershotlikeanarrow.Atfirst,everyone5sattentionwasfocusedonthewinner.Butas

David,thelastone,madeittothefinishingline,timeseemedtostandstill.ThunderousapplausebrokeoutwiththenameDavid

echoingagainandagain.Maybeifweknewwhatotherpeoplewerethinking,we'dknowthatnoone'sordinary.Andweall

deserveastandingovationatleastonceinourlives.

Notes:

1.lowerhisheadandrubhishands低下頭，搓手

2.bestuckbetweenarockandahardplace=becaughtinadilemma陷入了進退兩難的境地

3.taphimontheshouldergently輕輕地拍他的肩膀

4.withallyourdiligenceanddetermination用你的勤奮和決心

5.venturev.小心地說，謹慎地做

6.Mysimplewordsspokenfromtheheart,foundtheirwaystraightintohis.我簡單的心里話，直接進入了他的心里。擬人

7.clenchmyfist緊握拳

8.Withabang,everyrunnershotlikeanarrow.比喻

9.ButasDavid,thelastone,madeittothefinishingline,timeseemedtostandstill.夸張

10.astandingovation起立鼓掌

2022年6月第一次社區(qū)服務

Ineededtodosomethinginmycommunity（社區(qū)）inordertocompletethecommunityservicehoursrequiredtograduate

fromhighschool.Someofmyfriendshadsigneduptospendtimeatasoupkitchen,soIdid,too.Itseemedlikeagoodthingtodo.

Ithoughtthatwewouldjustbepassingoutdinnerstothoseinneed,butIfoundoutwewouldbedoingeverythingfrom

preparingtoservingthedinner.Webeganpreparingthefood,frommixingsaladdressingtoseparatingfrozenmeat.Muchstill

neededtobedonebeforedinnerwasserved,butalreadyoutsidethebuildingmanyhomelesspeopleweregathering.Itwasn*tuntil

acoupleofhourslaterthatweopenedthedoorsandbeganservingdinner.

Asthelineofpeoplecametowardme,Igotalittlescared.I'dcomefacetofacewiththehomeless:HowshouldIact?How

wouldtheytreatme?Wouldtheyhatemeforhavingmorethantheydid?WhilesomeofthepeoplelookedveryfHendly,someof

themlookedsodangerous.Ididn*thavetoomuchtimetoworryaboutit.Iwasassigned（分酉己）toservethesaladwiththelady

nexttome.ShesmiledatmeandsaidifIneededhelp,she'dberightthere,whichIfoundquitecomfbrting.

Ihadneverseensomanypeoplewantingfood.Theywereofallagesandnationalities.Mostofthemworeclothesthatwere

tomanddirty.Somelookedliketheyhadtallygivenuponlife,whileothersseemedtobemakingthebestofthesituation,smiling

andjoking.Somewerebetteroffthanothers,buttheyallneededagoodmealandawarmplacetoeat.Itsaddenedmetothinkof

howmanypeopletherewerewhodidn*thaveaplacetocallhomeandtheonlyfoodtheygotcamefromasoupkitchen.

注意：

1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數應為150左右；

2.至少使用5個短文中標有下劃線的關鍵詞語；

3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；

4.續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關鍵詞語。

Paragraph1:Astheycameinmydirection,Iputonmybrightestandhappiestsmile.

Paragraph2:1wassohappythatIhadearnedmyservicehoursinthisway.

Astheycameinmydirection,Iputonmybrightestandhappiestsmile.NervousasIfelt,Ididmyutmosttokeepmyselfcalm

andhandoutthedelicately-wrappedmealtothoseinneed,withmyhandstrembling.Uponseeingit,everyoneofthembeamed

withsmile,gentlymurmured“Thankyou“andbowedtomesincerely,whichbroughtwarmthstraightintomyheart.Thepassing

timewitnessedthesmoothprocessofthisevent.Itwasnotuntilthenightwipedoutthelastrayofsunthatwefinishedour

communityserviceforthehomeless.

IwassohappythatIhadearnedmyservicehoursinthisway.NotonlydidIclearmypreviousprejudiceagainstthosewho

seemedtobedangerousandunamiable,butalsoIextendedahelpinghandtothosewhowantedfoodandclothes.Isuddenlycame

torealizethatnoteveryonewasblessedwithfortuneandbomtobewealthy.Therefore,weshouldalwayskeepgratefulforwhat

lifeblesseduswith.However,wedidhavethepowertoshareourhappinesswithothers,thatis,spreadinglove.Loveis

everything,liketheclearmoonhanginghighinthesky,spreadingitscomfbrtingmoonlightselflesslytoeveryone.

Notes:

1.doone'sutmosttodosth.使勁渾身解數做…

2.unamiableadj.不友好的

3.beblessedwith..有幸得到

4.thatis即,也就是說

2022年1月傲嬌學霸與迷糊學渣

WhenDr.Hendersonwasassigning（指定）projectmatesforhispsychologyclass,Isecretlyhopedhewouldpairmewith

mybestfriendoratleastaclassmateIcouldhavesomefunwith.Aboveall,Ihopedhewouldn'tassignmetoworkwiththe

fiercelycompetitive,extremelyseriousfellowwhoalwaysworedarkclothesandapparentlyhadapersonalitytomatch.Asfate

（命運）wouldhaveit,Dr.HendersonverydeliberatelymatchedeveryoneinclassandannouncedthatIwouldbeworkingwith

theonepersoninclassIwantedtoavoid.

Iwentuptomynewteammateandintroducedmyself.HelookedatmeasthoughIweren'tthere.Ifelthetreatedmeas

thoughIwouldholdhimbackandprobablymakehimfailtogetanAinthecourse.Hewasn'tmeanorabusive;hejustgaveme

theimpressionhecoulddowhateverprojectwedreamedupbetterifhediditalone.

Needlesstosay,Ididn*tlookforwardtoanentiretermofbeingbrushedoff,butItriedtomakethebestofitanddidn'tsay

anythingforfearthatIwouldmakethingsworse.

Theprojectrequiredeachteamtodevelopahypothesis（假說）,setupanexperimenttotestthehypothesis,dothe

statisticalanalysisandpresentthefindings.Whatevergradetheteamreceivedwouldbesharedbybothstudents.

WhenmyteammateandImettodiscussourproject,Iwasuneasy.Herewasthischallengingstudentwhohadareputation

forsingle-mindednessandgoodgrades-theexactoppositeofme.Iwasoutmatched.Iactuallywantedtodroptheclassatone

point,butstoppedshortbecauseIdidn'twanttogivehimthesatisfactionofmychickeningout.Idecidedtosticktoitnomatter

what.

Afterlongdiscussionswesomehowagreedtodoastudyonthepsychologicalwell-beingofteenagers.Iwasn'tsurewhatit

meantexactly,butatleastwehadatopic.

注意：

1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數應為150左右；

2.至少使用5個短文中標有下劃線的關鍵詞語；

3.結部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；

4.續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關鍵詞語。

Para1.Westartedtomeetregularlytodrawupourplans.

Para2.OnedayIgotwordthathewasadmittedtohospitalforaseriousdisease.

Westartedtomeetregularlytodrawupourplans.Withhisrichacademicknowledgetobackhimup,myteammatequickly

cameupwithadetailedplanofevaluatingourpeer'smentalhealthstatesandtryingtoassociatethemwithhowourparticipantsget

alongwiththeirfamilymembers.Reachinganagreement,wehurriedourselvestogetdowntobusiness,myteammatehandingout

questionnaireswhileIdidmostoftheinterviewing.Everytwodayswemetatthelibrarytodothepaperworkanddiscusseditover

lunch.Seriousasthefellowwas,itgraduallyoccurredtomethatheactuallypossessedacuriousmindandwasamazinglytalkative

whenitcametoscientificresearchwhichquenchedhisthirsttolearn.Itdidn'ttakelongbeforeIbeganlookingforwardtopresenting

theproject.

ThenonedayIgotwordthathewasadmittedtothehospitalforaseriousdisease.Startledandanxious,Igotbutterfliesinmy

stomachasitwasnearthebigdaywhenwewereoughttodothepresentation.Rushingtothehospital,Iwasgreetedbymyteammate,

lyingonthebed,withapalefacebutaweaksmileonhislips.Itseemedasifhecouldsensemydiscomfortbecausehereassured

methathewouldshowuptoschool.4tWeareahappybandofbrothers,aren'twe?"ThemorningofthefollowingMondaywitnessed

oursuccessandhowourjointeffortsblossomedintoan"A"andrapturousapplausefromDr.Henderson.Tearsblurringmyvision,

Iquietlysaidthankstomyteammateandheldhisfeeblehandstightly,forInotonlylearnedteamspiritbutIalsoreapedinvaluable

friendship.

Notes:

1.backsb.up支持；證實（某人所言）

2.quenchhisthirsttolearn滿足了他的求知欲

3.feebleadj.虛弱的

4.reap獲得

2021年6月母親節(jié)的驚喜

AMOTHER'SDAYSURPRISE

ThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother'sDay.Howpleasedand

proudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.They

hadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.

Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboil

theporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggs

intoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,Jeffturnedonthesecond

stoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotand

thebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,she

turneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.

ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverand

putoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.Jenna

toldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJefFshandtouchedthehotburnerandhegavea

cryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthe

panhadturnedblackaswell.

注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數應為150左右。2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.

Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.

Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Facedwiththemessthetwinshadmadeofthe

kitchen,Fatherfeltannoyedbuttriedtocontainhimself.Jennaranuptohim,whispering“We…Wejustwanttomakebreakfastfbr

MomasaMother'sDaygift."Afterhelearnedwhatitwasallabout,hisannoyancegavewaytoreliefanddelight.Immediately,he

joinedthemandtheystartedalloveragain.SoontheFrenchtoastandchickenporridgewereready,thekitchenfilledwiththescent

ofbreakfastandthesweetnessofafamily.Lookingatthework,thethreeexchangedanunderstandingsmile.Aftersignalingthem

tokeepitasecret,Fatherslippedintothebedroom,pretendingtoknownothingaboutit.

ThetwinscarriedthebreaJrfastupstairsandyvoketheirmotherup.Stillalittlesleepy,Motherfailedtofigureoutwhatthey

wereupto."HappyMother'sDay!'Thetwinsgreetedher."Wemadebreakfastforyouasyoudothatforus.Mom,welove

you!”Thoughstillinherpajamas,Mothertookabiteofthetoastandsippedthehotporridge.Lostinthedeliciousbreakfastand

purelovefromhertwins,shesobbed,withdelightfultearsstreamingdownherface.Lovingly,shepressedtwogentlekisseson

theirforeheads,proudlyenjoyingtheirbestwishes.Fatherwasstandinginthedoorway,recordingthistouchingscene.Thewhole

roomwasbathedinahappyMother'sDayatmosphere.

Notes:

(l)(Sb.)befacedwithsth.面對…，去be動詞，作狀語makeamessofsth.把…弄糟糕containoneself抑制自己的感情give

wayto...給…讓路，為…所代替exchangeanunderstandingsmile交換了一個理解的微笑slipintothebedroom溜進臥室failto

figureoutwhattheywereupto沒搞清楚他們要干什么sipthehotporridge喝著熱粥

(2)時間表達：after.immediately;soon;

(3)形容詞短語作狀語：Facedwith...;Lostin...;Stillalittlesleepy

(4)副詞/形容詞增加細節(jié)：Lovingly,shepressedtwogentlekissesontheirforeheads,proudlyenjoyingtheirbestwishes,

delightfultears.

Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Seeingthemess,Fatherfrozewithshock,asif

rootedtotheground.Fromtheblackbreadandthespilledporridge,hesuddenlyfiguredouttheirsecret.Asmileofunderstanding

flashedacrosshisface.Herealizedtheirintention.HejoinedtheminpreparingtheMother'sDaysurpriseimmediately.Theystarted

alloveragain.Everythingwentsmoothly.Thechickenandriceweredancingharmoniouslyinbed,theboilingwat