2020考研英語(yǔ)之作文真題答案解析

年考研英語(yǔ)一作文真題答案解析

SectionⅣWriting51.【題干】direction:YouaretowriteanemailtoJamesCook,anewly-arrivedAustraliaprofessor,recommendingsometouristattractionsinyourcity.Pleasegivereasonforyourrecommendation.Youshouldwritenearlyontheanswersheet.Dotnotsignyourownnameattheendoftheemail.use"LiMing"instead.Donotwritetheaddress.(10points)【答案】參考范文：DearProf.JamesCook,WelcometoChina.Iknowyoulovetraveling,soI’mwritingthislettertorecommendtoyouoneofmyfavoritescenicspot—Harbin,whichisanoldnortherncityofChina.Ithinkyoumustlikeitforthereasonsasfollows.Tobeginwith,thereareanamountofbeautifulscenicspots,suchastheIceandSnowKingdominwinter,theSunisland,theCentralStreetandsoon.Inaddition,youcouldtasteagreatnumberofsnacksontheaveragestreet.Lastbutnotleast,thepeopleofHarbinareoverwhelminglyhospitableandenthusiastic,whichisfamousalloverChina.Owingtothereasonsdiscussedabove,Iwon’thesitatetorecommendthisscenicspottoyou.Iamsureyouwillenjoyit.Bestwishesforyou!Yourssincerely,LiMing真題解析今年英語(yǔ)一的小作文不出預(yù)料，再一次考查到了推薦信。在英語(yǔ)一的考試當(dāng)中，推薦信已經(jīng)考查過兩年了。例如我們英語(yǔ)一在2011年就考查過向你的朋友推薦一部電影。具體題目要求是Writealettertoafriendofyoursto1)recommendoneofyourfavoritemoviesand;2)givereasonsforyourrecommendation.2015年考察的是youaregoingtoholdaclubreadingsession.Writeanemailofabout100wordsrecommendingabooktotheclubmembers.Youshouldstatereasonsforyourrecommendation.而今年的作文題目要求給新來的澳大利亞國(guó)籍教授JamesCook介紹你城市的touristattraction。因此，考生不用驚慌只要把2011年或2015年的小作文，主要是推薦原因部分，稍作修改即可成文。這就啟發(fā)我們2018屆的同學(xué)們要高度重視歷年真題，因?yàn)榭歼^的話題或是書信類型會(huì)反復(fù)考查。那么今年的作文具體該如何來寫呢?今年考題的Direction要求向新來的JamesCook教授推薦旅游景點(diǎn)。根據(jù)題目的要求，我們可以判斷本文為公務(wù)信函，語(yǔ)域?yàn)檎秸Z(yǔ)域，即不能出現(xiàn)縮寫、省略問句和和口語(yǔ)表達(dá)。稱呼：DearProf.JamesCook,注意稱呼中，Prof后面的句點(diǎn)不能丟，稱呼最后的逗號(hào)號(hào)不可丟，也不能寫成冒號(hào)。當(dāng)然如果稱呼不寫Prof.寫成Mr.JamesCook也是可以的。正文第一段：寫作內(nèi)容需涵蓋兩點(diǎn)：1：歡迎Cook教授來中國(guó);2：寫信目的，表明推薦。用到了這樣的表達(dá)WelcometoChina.Iknowyoulovetraveling,soI’mwritingthislettertorecommendtoyouoneofmyfavoritescenicspot-Harbin,whichisanoldnortherncityofChina.第二段：寫作內(nèi)容為推薦原因?？梢詮娜齻€(gè)角度來考慮：美景、美食和熱情的人們。用到了這樣的表達(dá)：Ithinkyoumustlikeitforthereasonsasfollows.Tobeginwith,thereareanamountofbeautifulscenicspots,suchastheIceandSnowKingdominwinter,theSunisland,theCentralStreetandsoon.Inaddition,youcouldtasteagreatnumberofsnacksontheaveragestreet.Lastbutnotleast,thepeopleofHarbinareoverwhelminglyhospitableandenthusiastic,whichisfamousalloverChina.第三段：再次強(qiáng)調(diào)寫信目的。Owingtothereasonsdiscussedabove,Iwon’thesitatetorecommendthisscenicspottoyou.Iamsureyouwillenjoyit.最后，表達(dá)祝福Bestwishesforyou!落款：Yourssincerely,特別提醒sincerely后面逗號(hào)不能丟;簽名：LiMing特別注意Ming后面一定不能出現(xiàn)句點(diǎn)。落款和前面左、右對(duì)齊都可52.【題干】Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingpictures.Inyouressay,youshould1)describethepicturesbriefly.2)interruptthemeaning,and3)giveyourcommentsYoushouldwriteneatlyontheANSWERSHEET(20points)【答案】參考范文Asissymbolicallymirroredinthecaricatures,thereemergetwocircumstances,carryingsharpcontrastimplications.Inthefirstcartoon,afashionableboy,lyinginhisslingchaircomfortably,islookingathiswholeshelfofbooksandsaying,“Ipossessamultitudeofbooks”.Onthecontrary,thesecondportrayaldemonstratesanindustriousstudentwhoissittinginfrontofthedeskandmakesarealisticplanthathewouldliketofinishreading20booksintotalwithinayear.Theauthorofthecartooninvitesustofocusonatruththatendlessplansparalyzeactions.Therearesimplynogreatsuccessandachievementsintheworldthatarenotachievedthroughhardworkanddiligence.Similarly,adreamcanberealizedwhenyoudecidetoworkforitandpersistcontinuously.Everyonedesirestosucceed,butnotallhisdreamscancometrueuntilheworkshardtoimplementhisplans.Peoplegiveuptheirdreamsforthisorthatreason.Thosewhosedreamsbecometruehaveatleastonethingincommon,thatis,theyalwaysholdfasttotheirdreamsandalwayskeeptheirfeetontheground.Justaroundus,forinstance,theathleteswhogainthegoldmedals,theartistswhoareprevalentwiththepublic,andeventhestudentswhoentertheuniversityafteryearsofhardstudyandpreparation,arealldream-holders.Accordingly,tosucceed,weneedtosparenoeffortsandholdfasttoyourdreamsjustasournationstickstoourChineseDream.Thepathtodreamsmaynotbesmoothandwide,andevensomesacrificesareneeded,butholdontotheend,youwillfindthereisnogreaterhappinessthanmakingyourdreamcometrue.真題解析今年的英語(yǔ)一大作文題可以說完全在我們的預(yù)料之中，甚至比我們想象的要簡(jiǎn)單的多，據(jù)廣大考生反映審題基本不存在問題。雖然考研圖畫作文，從來不給一個(gè)主題，但是對(duì)于考生來說，正確審出主題還是相對(duì)比較容易實(shí)現(xiàn)的。值得關(guān)注的是，今年考題反映的是我們常說的那句話：理想很豐滿，現(xiàn)實(shí)很骨感。如何跨越理想和現(xiàn)實(shí)的鴻溝，這是一個(gè)長(zhǎng)久以來一直討論的話題。這里完全可以結(jié)合考研真題中的個(gè)人品質(zhì)類話題，談一談實(shí)現(xiàn)理想所需要的精神。那么此話題中很多表達(dá)方式，寫作方式都與過去的真題如2007年的自信心缺乏、2012年的悲觀與樂觀等真題作文如出一轍。所以真題是最寶貴的復(fù)習(xí)資源!2016年跨考各類考研寫作課程均對(duì)真題進(jìn)行過詳細(xì)講解，相信今年英語(yǔ)一的同學(xué)面對(duì)此作文應(yīng)會(huì)從容不迫。我們簡(jiǎn)單來看看如何審這兩副圖，左邊的圖片中，一個(gè)學(xué)生坐在躺椅里悠哉悠哉，看著自己有許多書卻沒說讀上哪怕一本;右邊的圖片中，一位勤奮的學(xué)生拿著一本書仔細(xì)讀著，并且很現(xiàn)實(shí)地計(jì)劃著一年?duì)幦∽x完20本書。圖表描述參考如下：Asissymbolicallymirroredinthecaricatures,thereemergetwocircumstances,carryingsharpcontrastimplications.Inthefirstcartoon,afashionableboy,lyinginhisslingchaircomfortably,islookingathiswholeshelfofbooksandsays,“Ipossessamultitudeofbooks”.Onthecontrary,thesecondportrayaldemonstratesanindustriousstudentwhoissittinginfrontofthedeskandmakesarealisticplanthathewouldliketofinishreading20booksintotalwithinayear.第二段可以從兩方面來論證，一方面強(qiáng)調(diào)如果只有想法而不行動(dòng)是不利于理想的實(shí)現(xiàn)，另一方面從正面論證腳踏實(shí)地一步一步完成理想的道理。參考如下：Theauthorofthecartooninvitesustofocusonatruththatendlessplansparalyzeactions.Therearesimplynogreatsuccessandachievementsintheworldthatarenotachievedthroughhardworkanddiligence.Similarly,adreamcanberealizedwhenyoudecidetoworkforitandpersistcontinuously.Everyonedesirestosucceed,butnotallhisdreamscancometrueuntilheworkshardtoimplementhisplans.Peoplegiveuptheirdreamsforthisorthatreason.Thosewhosedreamsbecometruehaveatleastonethingincommon,thatis,theyalwaysholdfasttotheirdreamsandalwayskeeptheirfeetontheground.Justaroundus,forinstance,theathleteswhogainthegoldmedals,