考研小作文沖刺

考研小作文沖刺

1.投訴信

范例1：YoutookaninterviewinacorporationlastWednesday.Buttheinterviewer

criticizedinaveryunfairwayandmadeyoufeelextremelyembarrassed.Now,write

alettertothedepartmentconcerned,makeacomplaint,stateyourreasonsandsuggest

asolution（s）.

DearSirorMadam,

Iamajobapplicantwhohadparticipatedintheinterviewheldbyyourcompany

lastWednesday.IfeelbadtotroubleyoubutIamafraidthatIhavetomakea

complaintconcerningthisundesirableexperience.

Thereasonformydissatisfactionhasnothingtodowiththeoutcomebutthe

toneofyourinterviewer,Mr.Wang.Firstandforemost,whenIwasaboutto

illuminatemythoughtregardingthepositionIappliedfor,hebegantoblamemefor

myso-callednonsenseaccordingtohisperspective.Inaddition,hiscynicaleyesight

alwaysmademefeeluncomfortable.Underthesecircumstances,Ifounditdifficult

tobringmypotentialintofullplayduringtheinterview.

Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldtakemyletterinto

consideration,whatIreallywantisjustanapologyfromhim,andIwouldliketo

havethismattersettledbythisFriday.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreplyat

yourearliestconvenience.（162words）

Yourssincerely,

LiMing

Dear,

Iam（自我介紹）.1feelterribletotroubleyoubutIamafraidthatIhave

tomakeacomplaintaboutthisundesirableexperience.

Thereasonsformydissatisfactionareasfollows.（總體介紹）.Firstand

foremost,（抱怨的第一個方面）.Inaddition,（抱怨的第二個方

面）.Underthesecircumstances,Ifindit（感覺）（抱怨的方面給你

帶來的后果）.

Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldtakemyletterintoconsideration,

andIwouldliketohavethismattersettledby（設(shè)定解決事情最后期限）.Iam

lookingforwardtoyourreplyatyourearliestconvenience.

Yourssincerely

LiMing

范例2：Writealettertotheheadofatrain,andcomplainaboutitsbadservices.

DearSirorMadam,

Asaregularpassengerofyourtrain,Iamcompletelydisappointedtofind

thattheserviceyouprovideisfarfromsatisfactory.Therefore,Iamwritingthis

lettertodrawyourattentiontothematterinthehopethatthepresentsituation

willbegreatlyimproved.

Asweallknow,punctualityisessentialtotherailwayservice.Yet,thetrainis

delayedfromtimetotime,whichbringsmemuchtroubleandinconvenience.Worst

ofallisthebadmannersofyourstewardsandstewardesses.Fromtheirservices,we

cannotunderstandthesaying,“Thecustomersarethegod.”

Wouldyoupleasetakethismatterintoseriousconsiderationandgivemea

satisfactoryreplyatyourearliestconvenience?Ireallyappreciateyourtimeand

efforts.(127words)

Yourssincerely,

LiMing

2.感謝信

Dear,

Iwouldliketoextendourmostsinceregratitudefor_感謝事由_____.I

sincerelyappreciateyouraidin

Icouldnotenjoysuchawonderfultrip/arriveatsuchsplendidachievements

withoutyourgenerousassistance,andIwillneverforgetyourpainstakinglaborand

fullcooperation.

IhopethatImayrepayyourkindnessbydoingsth..Again,Ifeel

mostobligedtothankyouoncemoreandlookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.

Yourssincerely,

LiMing

范例L考研面試后致教授的一封感謝信

DearProfessors,

Iamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforthechanceyougavemelast

Fridayfortheinterviewregardingthepostgraduatestudyinyourprestigious

university.

Ireallyappreciatedtheopportunitytolearnfromsomanyknowledgeable

professorsofpsychologyschool.Thefacultycertainlyseemstobehighlyskilledin

teachingandresearchinginthisfield.Ithinkfurtherstudyinthisdisciplineisas

rewardingasitischallenging.Moreover,Igainedastrongsenseofhappinessin

devotingmyselftoscientificresearch.

IamconfidentthatIpossessthequalitiesandpotentialstobecomea

promisingpostgraduatestudentinpsychology.Ibelievetheforthcomingstudyand

researchingexperienceswillpreparemeverywellformyfuturepsychological

exploration.Iamlookingforwardtoournextmeeting.Thankyouagainfor

consideringmeforthisopportunity.

范例2：一封感謝信給車禍?zhǔn)鹿屎鬅嵝膸椭愕娜?/p>

DearMr.Shakespeare,

Iamwritingtoexpressmyheartfeltgratitudetoyourgeneroushelp.Iam

referringtothatunfortunateaccidenttheotherday,whenIwasknockedoffmybike

byataxi.

Ifithadnotbeenforyourtimelyassistanceingivingmefirstaid,Ifearthat

theconsequencesmighthavebeenmuchserious.Everyoneagreesthatitwasyour

quick-wittedresponseinthatemergencythathasledtothissatisfactoryoutcome.(強

調(diào)句型):

Althoughnowadayspeopleinmountingnumberstalkabouttheneedtobe

unselfish,weseeveryfewpeoplepracticewhattheypreach.Ifthereweremore

peoplelikeyou,thisworldwouldbeamuchnicerplace.(116words)

Yourssincerely,

LiMing

3.邀請信

范例1：邀請教授做報告

Directions:

WritealettertoProfessorWhite,aworldfamousprofessormajoringinChinese

philosophyandreligiousstudies,andinvitehimtoparticipateinaconferencetobe

heldinyouruniversity.

DearProfessorWhite,

IamverypleasedtoinformyouthatBeijingUniversityisorganizingan

academicconferenceentitled“Sino-USConferenceonPhilosophyandReligious

Studies”onDecember8,2011inBeijing.

YouarecordiallyinvitedtoparticipateinthisimportantChineseacademicevent

tobeourguestspeaker.Youwillbewelcometoparticipatefullyintheactivitiesof

theconference,includinglectures,seminars,andotherrecreationalactivities.Your

roundtripairticket,accommodationandmealexpenseswillbesubsidized.

Welookforwardtoseeingyouinthisconferenceandtohavingyouas

significantpartofthisevent.Ifyouacceptthisinvitation,pleaseadviseusof

yourdateofarrival,sothatwecouldmakenecessaryarrangements.(118words)

Yburssincerely,

LiMing

私人邀請信

Dear,

Iwillbeholding活動at_地點on_時間inorderto

___目的—.Asyouareaclosefriendofourfamily,myparentsandIwouldvery

muchlikeyoutojoinusinthiscelebrationandshareourjoy.

Theoccasionwillstartat,andactivitiesinclude,

and.Inaddition,therewillbe.Iamsureyouwill

enjoyagoodtime.

Myfamilywouldfeelhonoredbyyourpresence.

Yourssincerely,

LiMing

公務(wù)邀請信

Dear,

Onbehalfoforganizingcommitteefortheconference,Ihavethehonortoinvite

youtoourconferenceentitled”會議題目"onDecember19,2011inBeijing.（我代表

會議組織委員會，榮幸地邀請您來參加我們將于2011年12月19日在北京舉行的…

會議）

Itwouldgiveusgreatpleasureifyoucoulddeliveraspeechonthetopicof

duringthevisit.Iamsurethatitwouldbeimmenselybeneficialtothe

teachersandstudents'furtherstudyandresearchinthisfield.Besides,youwillbe

welcometoparticipatefullyintheactivitiesoftheconference,includinglectures,

seminars,andotherrecreationalactivities.Yourroundtripairticket,accommodation

andmealexpenseswillbesubsidized.

Welookforwardtoseeingyouinthisconferenceandtohavingyouas

significantpartofthisevent.Ifyouacceptthisinvitation,pleaseadviseusofyour

dateofarrival,sothatwecanmakenecessaryarrangements.

Yourssincerely,

LiMing

4.詢問信

范例1:Directions：YouarepreparingforanEnglishtestandareinneedofsome

referencebooks.Writealettertothesalesdepartmentofabookstoretoaskfor：

（1）detailedinformationaboutthebooksyouwant；

（2）methodsofpayment；

（3）timeandwayofdelivery.

DearSirorMadam,

Iamwritingtoyououtofanurgentneedofareferencebook.

AsIamgoingtotakethePostgraduateEntranceExaminationintwomonths,I

desperatelyneedtoimprovemyEnglishwritingskills.Iwouldliketobuyabookthat

willinformmealotabouthowtowriteanexcellentcomposition,enablemetowrite

asmanywordsasrequiredandavoidmakingseriousmistakes.Iwishtopaythecost

ofthebookviatheInternet.Besides,Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucould

sendmethebookbyEMSassoonaspossible.

Thankforyourtimeandefforts.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreplyatyour

earliestconvenience.（120words）

Yourssincerely,

LiMing

Dear，

Iam（自我介紹）Iamwritingtoseeifitispossibleforyouto

providemewithinformationregarding（要詢問的內(nèi)容）

Firstofall,（第一個問題）Secondly,（第二個問

題）Iwouldalsoliketoinquire（最重要的問題）Wouldyoupleasesend

mesomerelevantbookletsontheabove-mentionedaspects?

Thankyouforyoukindness,andyourpromptattentiontothisletterwillbe

highlyappreciated.

Yourssincerely,

LiMing

5.備忘錄/報告

范例：Youarethepresidentofacompany.WriteamemotoGeorgeGordonByron,

thevice-presidentontheemployee'strainingoncomputer,tellinghimtheneedto

traintheemployees,detailedinformation,andaskhimtowriteaplan.

Date：January7,2012

To：GeorgeGordonByron

From：LiMing

Subject：ComputerTrainingoftheStaff

Aswediscussedearlierthisweek,Iagreewithyouthatourfirmisfacedup

withproblemofthehighrateofcomputerilliteracyofthestaff.Weneedtomake

upaplanfortrainingouremployeesinthenewfield.

Iwouldlikeyoutodesignourownin-housecomputer-trainingprogram.We

hadbetterclassifytheemployeesandputthemthroughtheprograminturn.

Writeupabriefproposal,describingwhatyouthinktheprogramshould

cover.Assumetheclassrunsfourhoursaweekfortenweeks.Also,assumepeople

havenopriorcomputerknowledgeoranyformalcourseworkincomputerscience.

6.求職信

DearSirorMadam,

IhavereadyouradvertisementinChinaDailyon9Decemberforthepost

ofaccountant,andIwouldbegratefulifyoucouldconsidermefavorablyasan

applicantfortheposition.

MyprofessionaltrainingandexperienceallprovethatIamqualifiedfor

thejob.IgraduatefromtheDepartmentofAccountinginGuanghuaManagement

SchoolofBeijingUniversityin2010.Youwillnotefrommyenclosedresumethat

IwasawardedFirst-prizescholarshipfourtimesformyoutstandingacademic

performance.Aftergraduation,IworkedasanaccountantinNewOriental

EducationandTechnologyGroup.

Ihaveenclosedaresumeforyourreference.Iwouldliketoextendmy

heartfeltappreciationifyoucouldletmeknowtheresultofmyapplicationin

duecourse.(138words)

Sincerelyyours,

LiMing

7.求學(xué)信+詢問信

Directions:

Youwanttostudyatacertainforeignuniversity.Writealetterto

1)Askaboutthesituationthereasregardsaccommodationandfees,

2)Possiblescholarships,and

3)Whatqualificationsoneneedsforacceptance

DearSirorMadam,

IamaChinesestudentwhowishestoapplyforadmissionintoyourprestigious

university.Myplanistostartmycoursenextterm,andIwouldbegratefulifyou

couldprovidemewithcertainessentialinformation.

First,whatqualificationsdoIneedtofollowacourseofstudyatyouruniversity?

Ialreadyhaveabachelor'sdegreefromBeijingForeignStudiesUniversity,butI

wonderifthereareanyfurtheracademicrequirements.Second,howmucharethe

tuitionfees?AlthoughIintendtobeself-supporting,Iwouldbeinterestedtohearif

thereareanyscholarshipsavailableforinternationalstudents.Third,whatisthe

situationasregardsaccommodation?

Ilookforwardtoyourreply,andtoattendingyouresteemedinstitution.(126words)

Sincerelyyours,

LiMing

8.社團招新啟示

范例：英語俱樂部招新啟示一-四級真題

WelcometotheEnglishClub

January7,2012

WelcometoEnglishClub!Itcouldserveasaplatformtoshowyour

outstandingabilitiesandhelpyoudeveloparangeofgreatskills.

Youcanbeinvolvedinavarietyofactivitiesincludingstagingmusical

dramas,holdinggroupdiscussions,watchingOscar-winningmovies,andsoon.

Theseafter-classactivitiescouldofferyouampleopportunities.First,youractive

participationishelpfultostrengtheningthesenseofresponsibilityandmanaging

interpersonalrelations.Second,variousactivitiesorganizedbyuscouldraise

yourlevelofproficiencyinEnglish.AgoodcommandofEnglishempowersyou

toenjoycompetitiveedgeoveryourpeers.

Youcanfileawrittenapplicationtoourstaffofficeoremailusvia

englishclub@163.com.ThedeadlineforentriesisJanuary22.Comeon,joinus

now!(127words)

EnglishClub

歡迎加入英語俱樂部

2012年1月7日

歡迎加入英語俱樂部！它能成為一個平臺，展示你卓越的才能，并幫助你開

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我們的行政辦公室提交書面申請或通過englishclub@163.com發(fā)送電子郵件。報

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英語俱樂部

9.摘要:大綱樣題答案

FundamentalCausesofEconomicGlobalization

Economicglobalizationhasbeenprogressingrapidlysincethebeginningofthe1950s.

Severalfactorshavecontributedtosuchdevelopment.Firstly,advancementsin

scienceandtechnologyhaveofferedatechnicalfoundationbyprovidingthematerial

basisandthetechnicalmeans.Meanwhile,asolideconomicfoundationforsucha

globalizationhasbeenlaidbythemarketeconomywhichisprevailingovertheworld.

Otherfactorsincludethepillaringandpropellingroleofmultinationalsin

micro-economicoperations,theevergrowingcoordinatingandcontrollingpowerand

functionexercisedbysuchinternationaleconomicorganizationsasWTO,IMFand

WBintheinternationaltradeandfinance.（100words）

10.各類書信模板

⑴辭職信模板

Dear,

ThisistoinformyouthatIintendtoresignfrommycurrentposition.Ifeel

reluctanttogiveupmypresentjob,butIfinditisinappropriateformetotakethe

positionas（接職務(wù)，如aneditor）forthefollowingreasons.

Tostartwith,Ihaveexpectedthejobtobeinterestingandchallenging,which

turnsouttobetheopposite.Inaddition,.（第二個原因）

Lastly,.（第三個原因）

PleaseletmetotakethischancetothankyoufortherewardingexperienceIhave

acquiredduringmyemployment.Isincerelyhopethatyouwouldapproveofmy

resignation.Iamdeeplysorryforanyinconveniencecaused.

Yourssincerely,

LiMing

⑵申請大學(xué)的推薦信

DearSir/Madam,

AsaProfessorofBeijingUniversity,Iamverypleasedtorecommend___人名

—,oneofmyfavoritestudent,forhisapplicationtoyourprestigiousuniversity.

Iwasveryimpressedby___人名—whoserichknowledgeandkeeninsightin

thesubjectindicatesthatheisaveryintelligentindividualinthefield.Basedonmy

interactionwithhim,Ibelievethat_人名possessesverystrong

capability.Moreover,itisworthnotingthathestandsoutofhisclassmatesfor

excellentacademicperformance.Inaddition,hehasapleasantpersonalityandahigh

motivation,andhealwaysbehavesingoodmanners.

Therefore,Idonothesitatetorecommendhimasanidealcandidateforthe

university.Iamsureyouwillmakeawisedecisioninenrollinghim.Ifmore

informationregardingthispromisingcandidateisneeded,pleasefeelfreetocontact

me.

Yourssincerely,

LiMing

⑶感謝信

Dear，

Iwouldlikethislettertobetakenasanexpressionofheartfeltgratitudetoyou.

Ifithadnotbeenforyourassistanceingivingmeaid,Ifearthattheconsequences

mighthavebeenmuchserious.Duringthe,youhavegivenmegenerous

helpand.

Thus,Ireallyappreciate,andIhopethatImayrepayyourkindness

by----------------

Finally,Ifeelmostobligedtothankyouoncemore.

Yourssincerely,

LiMing

（4）投訴信：用于比較嚴(yán)重的情形

DearSir/Madam,

Iamwritingthislettertoyoutomakesomecomplaintsabouttheterrible

treatmentIhaveexperienced,whichmakesmeextremelyunhappy.

Ithinkyourstoreshouldtakefullresponsibility.Asmyrightswereseverely

violated,Iherebydemandyoutopayformyloss.AstheConsumers'RightLaw

states,Iwouldrequireanadditionalcompensation.Apartfromthis,Irequireserious

apologies.Andconsideringtheseriousnessofthematter,Iwithholdmyrighttosueif

mydemandsarenotproperlyhandled.Iinsistthatyoushouldgivemeasatisfactory

reply.

Yourpromptattentiontomyinquirywouldbehighlyappreciated.

Yourssincerely,

LiMing

⑸建議信：用于比較嚴(yán)重的情形

Dear,

Youaskedforadviceconcerning（建議的事由）andIwouldliketotry

tomakesomesuggestions.

Firstofall,youmayconsider.（considerdoingsth.第一個建議）

Secondly,Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialif.（第二個建議）Lastly,IfI

wereyou,Iwould.（第三個建議）

Ihopeyoufindtheseproposalspractical.Iwouldbereadytodiscussaboutthis

matterwithyoutofurtherdetails.

Yourssincerely,

LiMing

（6）請求信模板

Dear,

Iamwritingtoseekyourassistanceindoingsth.（說明在哪方

面請求幫助）

Iwonderwhetheritisconvenientforyouiftwothingsregardingthismatterare

takenintoaccount.Foronething,.（需要考慮的第一個方面）For

another,.（需要考慮的第二個方面）

Yourpromptattentiontomyrequestwouldbehighlyappreciated.

Yourssincerely,

LiMing

⑺道歉信模板

過去沒有完成的事情

Dear,

Iamwritingthislettertoapologizetoyouformyfailingto_dosth.

Thereasonisthat.IamsorrythatIcannotfinishitintime,

butisitpossiblethatImakeupthelossby?Ifso,Iwillput

everythingelseasidetodoit.

Idohopethatyoucanunderstandmysituationandacceptmyapology.Iam

lookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.

Yourssincerely,

LiMing

將來不能做的事情

Dear,

IamterriblysorrythatIamunableto_dosth..Itismainly

becauseatthattimeIwillbefullyoccupiedbywhichisquiteoutof

myexpectation,andthatwillconflictwithyourarrangement.ThereforeIamforcedto

adjustmyscheduleandcannotmakemypresenceonyour.Isincerely

hopethatyouwillenjoyagoodtime.Bytheway,canwehavedinnertogethersome

timenextweek?Ihopetoseeyousoon.

IamreallysorryagainandItrustthatyouwillunderstand.

Yourssincerely,

LiMing

（8）祝賀信模板

Dear,

ItwaspleasanttolearnthatyouhavebeenadmittedbyBeijingUniversity.I

wouldliketoexpressmybestwishesandwarmestcongratulationstoyou.

ThisoutcomeiswhatIhaveexpected.BeingadmittedbyBeijingUniversityhas

beenyourwishformanyyears,andyoudevotedallyourenergiestoit.Itproves“No

pains,nogains”.You'vesetaverygoodexampleformeandenhancemyconfidence

tohavetheexaminationnextyear.

BeijingUniversityisthebestinthespecialtyyouwilllearninChina,sothisisa

perfectopportunitytoaccomplishanMAdegree.Youwillgetwhatyouwantaslong

asyoucontinuetostudyhard.Congratulationsandallgoodwishestoyou!

Yourssincerely,

LiMing

考研大作文沖刺

1.負(fù)面信息…酒駕…社會責(zé)任意識

思維拓展

實際上，本文的內(nèi)容和行文思路，不僅僅適用于醉酒駕車，還適用于所有關(guān)

于安全事故和社會責(zé)任的圖片話題。例如，火災(zāi)、漏油事故、施工事故、違反交

規(guī)等等一系列與安全或社會責(zé)任感相關(guān)的話題，都可以參考此文。

高分范文

Whatascaryandsensationalsceneitis!Inthedrawing,thedriver,asdrunkenas

afiddler,isdrivingfastontheroad,withalargebottleofbeeronthetopofhiscar.

Whatisconveyedbythepicturehasbothrealisticandalarmingimplicationsfor

eachmemberofthecountry.

Theprofoundmeaningofthevividdrawingcanbeelaboratedintermsofboth

awarenessofsecurityandsocialresponsibility.Foronething,consciousnessof

safetyshouldbeoneofourtoppriorities.Lifeisone-wayjourney:youcannot

experienceittwice.Solifeistoberespectedandawed.Itiscrueltoandinhumaneto

endanylifewithacarelessdrivingundertheinfluence(DUI).Foranother,toactasa

responsiblememberofthesociety,eachofusshouldbearsocialresponsibility.We

donotliveonlyforourselvesbutalsoforthosewhoweloveandwholoveus.Itis

irresponsibletoclaimeitherlivesofdriversorlivesofothervictimsarenotimportant,

leavingthefamiliesandrelativesintodeepgriefand,maybe,greatlivingburden.

Inshort,itisimperativethatlegislativemeasuresshouldbetakenbythe

authoritytopunishdrunkdriversseverelysuchassuspendingtheirdrivinglicenses

orevenputtingthemintojail.Besides,themassmedia,suchasTV,radioand

website,shouldworktogethertoenhanceawarenessofsecurityandsenseof

responsibilitytoreducetherateofcaraccident.

翻譯

這是一幅多么可怕的觸目驚心的場景?。≡谶@幅圖中，爛醉如泥的司機正在

馬路上飛速行駛，車上還頂著一大瓶啤酒。這幅圖所傳達的意義，對我們國家的

每一位成員，都具有現(xiàn)實和警醒的意義。

這幅栩栩如生的圖畫的深刻意義可以從安全意識和社會責(zé)任感兩個角度闡

釋。一方面，安全意識應(yīng)該是我們首先要重視的問題。生命是一次單程旅行：你

不能經(jīng)歷兩次生命。所以我們應(yīng)該敬重生命、敬畏生命。由于醉酒駕車的疏忽而

宣告任何一條生命的結(jié)束是殘忍的、不人道的。另一方面，作為這個社會負(fù)責(zé)任

的一員，我們每個人都應(yīng)該去承擔(dān)社會責(zé)任。我們不僅僅是為了自己活著，我們

也為那些我們所愛的和愛我們的人活著。無論是聲稱司機的、還是受害者的生命

不重要，都是不負(fù)責(zé)任的。因為這會給他們的家人和親戚帶來巨大的悲痛和沉重

的生活負(fù)擔(dān)。

總而言之，權(quán)威機構(gòu)應(yīng)當(dāng)采取嚴(yán)厲的法律措施去嚴(yán)懲酒駕的司機，例如吊銷

駕照或監(jiān)禁，除此以外，大眾傳媒，如電視、廣播、網(wǎng)絡(luò)應(yīng)通力合作提高公眾的

安全和責(zé)任意識以減少車禍?zhǔn)鹿省?/p>

①sensational[sendsei/anal]a.聳人聽聞的；轟動社會的；極好的

②fiddler[,fidlo]n.游手好閑的人asdrunkenasafiddler爛醉如泥

2.人生哲理話題…豁達與樂觀

思路點撥

圖畫中的一只小綿羊，正呆在一塊大石頭的陰影下面。但是它樂觀、豁達地

認(rèn)為，有陰影，那么就說明有陽光。這幅圖無疑向我們傳達了一種健康的人生哲

學(xué)：樂觀生活、達觀處世。由于這是一篇人生哲理類文章，所以文章安排可以相

對自由一些：第一-段：描述圖畫；第二段：利用正反舉例論證悲觀與樂觀的差距

+總結(jié)句；第三段：倡導(dǎo)一種樂觀生活、達觀處世的人生態(tài)度和人生哲學(xué)。

思維拓展

本文也可以從世界觀、人生觀的角度入手。相反，如果是一幅表明悲觀厭世

的圖片，我們也可以采取同樣的手法進行處理。

高分范文

Asisapparentlyrevealedinthecartoonabove,thesheepliveshappilyinan

optimisticstateofmind,ignoringthethreatofadarkshade,becausehebelievesthat

wherethereisshadow,thereissunshine.Whatisconveyedinthepictureisboth

positiveandilluminating.

Asfarasthepurposeofthedrawerisconcerned,Ithinkheintendsto

remindusoftheimportanceofoptimism.Ifthesheepinthecartoonfeelsanxious

andpessimisticaboutthedarkshadealldaylong,hecanbynomeanshavea

comfortableandpleasantlife.Exampleslikethisarenumerous,butIthinkthe

followingonewillbeconvincingenough.Ifthereishalfacupofwater,the

pessimistmaycryoveritbecausetheyhaveonlyahalf,whiletheoptimistmaycheer

foritbecausetheystillhaveahalf.Obviously,theywillhavedifferentperceptions

andfeelingstowardthesamelife.

Thereisnodenyingthat,mostoptimistshaveahighhappinessindex,whichcan

hardlybeexperiencedbypessimists.Therefore,wemustreadourlifewithapositive

attitude.What'smore,theoptimisticattitudecaninfectothersstrongly,meaningthat

wewillfindthatallthefriendsaroundusareoptimisticifweobservetheminthe

sameperspective.Asaresult,anatmosphereofoptimismandhappinesscouldbe

naturallysetup.Therefore,let5skeepthefamouslineofShelley,thewell-knownpoet,

inmindforever,thatis,“Ifwintercomes,canspringbefarbehind?"

譯文

上面的漫畫清楚地表現(xiàn)出這只山羊不顧陰影的威脅仍然保持樂觀，因為它相

信有陰影的地方就一定有陽光。圖片中反映的問題是積極的和富有啟發(fā)性的。

我認(rèn)為作者要表達的意義是要提醒我們保持樂觀心態(tài)的重要性。如果漫畫中

的山羊終日悲觀地生活在陰影中，它將永遠無法獲得舒適和幸福的生活。類似的

例子千千萬，但是我認(rèn)為下面的例子就足夠有說服力。如果這里有半杯水，悲觀

的人會抱怨只剩下半杯了，而樂觀的人在慶幸還有半杯可以喝。顯然，面對同樣

的生活，他們會有不同的感受。

毫無疑問，樂觀者擁有更高的幸福指數(shù)，而悲觀者永遠也體會不到。因此我

們必須以積極的態(tài)度面對生活。而且樂觀的情緒能強烈地感染他人，這就意味著

如果我們以樂觀的視角面對周圍的朋友們，他們也會同樣地樂觀。于是，樂觀和

幸福的氣氛自然而然地就建立起來了。因此，讓我們把著名詩人雪萊的名句銘記

在心吧：冬天來了，春天還會遠么？

★非常重要：本題題目要求最后-一段也可能會變成：supportyourviewwithan

example/examples

這時候，我們可以把文章的結(jié)尾改寫為：

Examplesofoptimisticattitudetowardlifecaneasilybefoundanywhereinour

world.HowwouldhaveZhangHaidi,sufferingfromthehighparaplegia,madesuch

glowingachievementsinlife,withoutherstrongmindandoptimisticattitude?Facing

theseriousdiseasesandhardshipsinlife,shedidnotchoosetoholdback.Instead,she

hasbeencourageousand