Unit 4 My day.-【同步寫(xiě)作課】2023-2024學(xué)年七年級(jí)上冊(cè)英語(yǔ)單元寫(xiě)作深度指導(dǎo)（牛津譯林版）

第頁(yè)Unit4Myday單元寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)與演練近三年考情分析話(huà)題考查熱度日?；顒?dòng)介紹日常的家庭和學(xué)校活動(dòng)本單元的話(huà)題是“日?；顒?dòng)”，要求學(xué)生能簡(jiǎn)單介紹日常的家庭和學(xué)?；顒?dòng)，本單元寫(xiě)作要求同學(xué)們能根據(jù)相關(guān)信息提示簡(jiǎn)單地介紹自己或他人日常的家庭和學(xué)?；顒?dòng)。內(nèi)容包括具體幾點(diǎn)鐘、日?；顒?dòng)及具體內(nèi)容等。在具體的寫(xiě)作中，學(xué)生應(yīng)做到以下幾點(diǎn)：1.能用時(shí)間介詞in,on,at;2.能用頻度副詞描述動(dòng)作發(fā)生的頻率；3.能正確使用標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)；4.能正確書(shū)寫(xiě)英語(yǔ)句子。（以思維導(dǎo)圖的形式呈現(xiàn)）【詞匯積累】1.restn.休息,歇息2.havefun玩得高興3.havelessons上課4.after-schooladj.課外的,課后的5.activityn.活動(dòng)6.homeworkn.家庭作業(yè)7.gotobed去睡覺(jué)8.usuallyadv.通常,經(jīng)常9.neveradv.從不,絕不10.belatefor遲到【句型積累】1.Sheoftenchatswithherfriendsorplay

intheplaygroundafterclass.2.Shedoesn'thavemuchtimetoplay

tennis.3.Shehasadancinglesson.Shedances

forhalfanhoureveryday.4.Fromreading,Icanlearnalotaboutthe

world.5.Doingmorningexerciseshelpsusget

readyforaday.6.Ilikeallthelessonsatschool.Because

ourteachersareniceandthesubjectsare

interesting.7.Wehavetoomuchhomework,soIdon't

likeit.8.IamnotgoodatMaths.Becauseitis

difficultformetolearn.【寫(xiě)作步驟】步驟一：確定介紹日?；顒?dòng)的內(nèi)容和順序。步驟二：列舉介紹日?；顒?dòng)的句型，多多益善。步驟三：成段成篇，修改完善。假設(shè)你是李梅，你的美國(guó)筆友Linda想了解一下你的學(xué)校生活。請(qǐng)你給她寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，介紹一下你的學(xué)校生活。要求：1.語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)意連貫；2.詞數(shù)60左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】DearLinda,Hereismyschoollife.Theschooldaystartsat8:00a.m.Wedomorningexercisesfirst.Ihavesixclasseseveryday.MyfavouritelessonsareChineseandEnglish.Myteachersandclassmatesareveryfriendly.IamamemberoftheSwimmingClub.Sometimes,Ipractiseswimmingwithmyfriends.Schoolisoverat4:50p.m.Ilikemyschoollifeverymuch.Allthebest,一、詞匯。A.根據(jù)句意及首字母、中文提示或英文釋義完成單詞。1.Thegirlenjoys(聊天)withherfriendsontheInternet.2.Attheweekendwehavealotof(家庭作業(yè))todo.3.Theygotoschoolata(fifteenminutes)pastseveneveryday.4.Thelittleboy(notoften)playsfootballbecausehedoesn'tlikesports.5.Amyisrfortheparty,butsomeofherfriendsdon'tcome.B.選擇合適的單詞，并用其適當(dāng)形式填空。likeactivitylearnmakeone6.Ourschoolhasaparents'meetingamonth.7.Mycousineggs,andhenevereatsthem.8.Takingpartinsomeafter-schoolisfun.9.Jimisreallygoodatnewthings.10.Idon'tknowhowmydoghappy.二、單項(xiàng)選擇。()1.—Booksareourfriends.doyoureadbooks?—Ireadbookseveryday.A.HowoftenB.HowsoonC.HowlongD.Howmany()2.—WhenisyourmathslessononFriday?—.A.IntheclassroomB.FromMondaytoWednesdayC.From8:15to9:00D.Foraboutanhour()3.Theboyissleepinginthenextroom.Don't.A.waketohimB.wakeuphimC.wakehimtoD.wakehimup()4.Teachers’DayinChinais10SeptemberwhileSouthKorea’sTeachers’DayisMay.A.on;onB.in;inC.on;inD.in;on()5.Let'sdosomemorningeveryday.A.exerciseB.exercisingC.exercisesD.anexercise()6.Hehopesaswimmerinthefuture,soheisbusypractisingafterschool.A.tobe;swimmingB.willbe;swimC.canbe;toswimD.be;swimming()7.HeoftenpractisesChinesewithhisfriends.A.speakB.tospeakC.speakingD.speaks()8.Lisadoesn’tlikeherfriendsontheInternet.A.chatwithB.tochatandC.chattingwithD.chattingand()9.Danielplayscomputergamesnowbecausehehasalotofhomeworktodo.A.usuallyB.seldomC.oftenD.always()10.—Iamgoingtotakeadrivingtesttomorrowmorning.—Well..A.HaveagoodtimeB.I'mhappytohearthatC.GoodluckD.Congratulations三、根據(jù)中文提示完成句子。1.在課堂上，我們從老師那里學(xué)到很多。Wetheteachersinclass.2.我喜歡吃蘋(píng)果。它們對(duì)我有好處。Ilikeeatingapples.Theyme.3.孩子們每天下午玩游戲玩得很開(kāi)心。Thechildrenhavegreatfuneveryafternoon.4.她媽媽經(jīng)常在早上6點(diǎn)30分的時(shí)候叫醒她。Hermotherat6:30a.m.5.湯姆經(jīng)常上學(xué)遲到。Tomisoften.答案一、A.1.chatting2.homework3.quarter4.seldom5.readyB.6.once7.dislikes8.activities9.learning10.tomake二、1.A句意：“書(shū)籍是我們的朋友。你多久讀一次書(shū)?”“我每天讀書(shū)。”howoften多久一次;howsoon多久;howlong多長(zhǎng)時(shí)間;howmany多少。根據(jù)答語(yǔ)可知就頻率提問(wèn)用howoften。2.C句意：“你星期五的數(shù)學(xué)課是在什么時(shí)候?”“從8點(diǎn)15分到9點(diǎn)?！?.Dwakeup接人稱(chēng)代詞時(shí),需把代詞放于wake與up之間，此空意為“把他叫醒”。4.C具體的某一天前用on;月份前用in。5.Cexercise意為“訓(xùn)練活動(dòng),練習(xí)”時(shí)為可數(shù)名詞,其復(fù)數(shù)為exercises,此處的morningexercises意為“早操”。6.A句意：他希望將來(lái)成為一名游泳者，因此他放學(xué)后忙于練習(xí)游泳。hopetobe希望成為;practisedoingsth.練習(xí)做某事。7.C表示“練習(xí)做某事”用practisedoingsth.。8.Clikedoingsth.喜歡做某事;chatwithsb.和某人聊天。9.B句意：丹尼爾現(xiàn)在很少玩電腦游戲了，因?yàn)樗性S多家庭作業(yè)要做。10.C根據(jù)上句“明早我要參加駕駛考試”推知下句應(yīng)表示祝福。三、1.learnalotfrom2.aregoodfor3.playinggames4.oftenwakesherup5.lateforschool（一）根據(jù)所給信息寫(xiě)一篇描述Linda日常生活的短文。詞數(shù)：不少于70。Linda是一個(gè)忙碌的學(xué)生。她每天早上6：00起床，8：00開(kāi)始上課，9：00做早操。上午上四節(jié)課，下午上三節(jié)課。她喜歡跳舞，每周四下午要上舞蹈課。她喜歡看電視，但平時(shí)作業(yè)多，只能在星期天看。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Lindaisabusystudent.Shegetsupatsixeverymorning.Herlessonsstartateight,andshedoesmorningexercisesatnine.Shehasfourlessonsinthemorningandthreelessonsintheafternoon.Shelikesdancing.AndshehasdancinglessonseveryThursdayafternoon.ShelikeswatchingTV.Butshehasalotofhomeworktodoandshedoesn'thavemuchtimetowatchit.SheonlywatchesitonSundays.題干解讀：該題目屬于材料作文寫(xiě)作，根據(jù)文章所給材料，寫(xiě)一篇描述Linda的日常生活的記敘文。寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：該題目時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，采用第三人稱(chēng)；先介紹Linda的起床、上課時(shí)間，以及課程安排；再介紹Linda的喜好。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意保持主謂一致。（二）學(xué)校各個(gè)興趣小組正在招募新會(huì)員。假設(shè)你是Lucy，想?yún)⒓觮heWritingClub。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面提供的材料，寫(xiě)一個(gè)60詞左右的申請(qǐng)。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)Name:LucyAge:12Class:Class3,Grade7Hobbies:ReadingandwritingFavouritelessons:Chinese,EnglishThereasonforjoining(加入)theclub:Learnalotaboutwriting,makefriendsDearChairperson(主席),I'dliketojointheWritingClub.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanksforyourtime.Bestwishes.Yours,Lucy【答案】范文：I'dliketojointheWritingClub.IamLucyfromClass3,Grade7.Iamtwelveyearsold.Readingandwritingaremyhobbies.MyfavouritelessonsatschoolareChineseandEnglish.IreadmanybookswhenIamfree.IthinkIcanlearnalotaboutwritingintheclub.IfIaminyourclub,Icanmakemanynewfriends,too.Thanksforyourtime.Bestwishes.Yours,Lucy試題分析：這是一篇材料作文，提示內(nèi)容就是本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)。這些要點(diǎn)構(gòu)成寫(xiě)作的基本框架。我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說(shuō)出自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)寫(xiě)，要注意主謂一致等問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。（三）Helen被評(píng)為2016年“校園之星”。假如你是學(xué)校英語(yǔ)報(bào)的小記者，采訪(fǎng)Helen后得到下表信息。請(qǐng)你據(jù)此寫(xiě)一篇文章，向全校學(xué)生介紹Helen健康生活、快樂(lè)學(xué)習(xí)的事跡。不少于50詞。Starof2016Helenisthestarof2016inourschool.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________EveryonethinksHelenisagoodgirl.【答案】例文Helenisthestarof2016inourschool.Helenalwaysknowshowtobehealthy.Shehasmanyhealthyhobbies.Wecanoftenseeherplaysports.Shealwaysdoessomeactivitieslikeplayingbasketballorvolleyballafterschool.SheisalsoamemberoftheArtClub.Helenlikesallofherlessons,andsheisgoodatthem.Sheenjoysreading.Shesaysshecanlearnalotabouttheworldbyreading.EveryonethinksHelenisagoodgirl.這是一篇介紹人物的作文，向全校學(xué)生介紹一下2016年的“校園之星”海倫健康生活、快樂(lè)學(xué)習(xí)的事跡。作文要用第三人稱(chēng)來(lái)描述，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意主謂一致關(guān)系。不能漏掉表格中的任何一個(gè)信息，適當(dāng)運(yùn)用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，條理清楚，符合邏輯關(guān)系。（四）根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容，寫(xiě)一封電子郵件給你的朋友Jack，向他介紹你一天的生活。郵件的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出。要求：字?jǐn)?shù)60；語(yǔ)句通順連貫。6:00a.m.Getup5:40p.m.Gohome6:40a.m.Havebreakfast6:00p.m.WatchTV7:30a.m.Domorningexercises6:30p.m.Havesupper8:25—11:50a.m.Havelessons7:00p.m.Dohomework4:40p.m.Playsports9:30p.m.Gotobed_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文DearJackThankyouforwritingtome.Iwanttotellyouaboutmylife.Igetupat6:00inthemorning.At6:40,Ihavebreakfast.ThenIdomorningexercisesat7:30.Ihavelessonsfrom8:25to11:50everymorning.After4:40intheafternoon,Ioftendosomesportswithmyclassmates.Iplaysportsforaboutonehour,thenIgohome.SometimesIwatchTVbeforehavingsupper.BeforeIgotobed,Imustfinishmyhomework.Ittakesmeabouttwohours.At9:30,ImustgotobedbecauseIwillgotoschoolthenextday.That'smylife.Whataboutyours?Pleasee-mailmesoon!WangLin【范文點(diǎn)評(píng)】本題是根據(jù)表格描寫(xiě)一天的生活，在寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意使用正確的語(yǔ)句；語(yǔ)言表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣。寫(xiě)作步驟：一、閱讀提示，弄清所有信息，明確寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)。1.6點(diǎn)起床，6點(diǎn)40吃早飯，在7點(diǎn)半做早操。2.每天上午從八點(diǎn)25到11點(diǎn)50上課。下午4點(diǎn)40放學(xué)。3.放學(xué)后跟同學(xué)做一個(gè)小時(shí)的運(yùn)動(dòng)，然后回家。4.在6點(diǎn)半吃晚飯前通常會(huì)看半個(gè)小時(shí)的電視。5.吃過(guò)晚飯從7點(diǎn)開(kāi)始做作業(yè)，大約要花費(fèi)兩個(gè)半小時(shí)。6.9點(diǎn)半睡覺(jué)。二、根據(jù)要點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)出關(guān)鍵詞、短語(yǔ)或句子。三、組詞成句。連句成篇。注意使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)?！军c(diǎn)評(píng)】本題考查對(duì)本單元所學(xué)知識(shí)的綜合運(yùn)用，熟練使用相關(guān)短語(yǔ)、單詞和句型，注意詞性的搭配，時(shí)態(tài)的把握，人稱(chēng)的使用等細(xì)節(jié)問(wèn)題。（五）《校園英語(yǔ)》雜志社正在組織一次有意義的PK活動(dòng)—你的好友你來(lái)談。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提供的信息，以“Myfriend”為題寫(xiě)一篇短文。提示：1、我最好的朋友叫Millie，是陽(yáng)光中學(xué)的學(xué)生；2、她每天早上6：00讀英語(yǔ)，并且英語(yǔ)成績(jī)優(yōu)異；3、她對(duì)我很好，總是幫我學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)；4、我們經(jīng)常在操場(chǎng)的樹(shù)下一起玩游戲；5、她每周二和周五去學(xué)校圖書(shū)館，有時(shí)放學(xué)后和我一起練習(xí)打排球。要求：1、包括信息中提及的所有內(nèi)容，語(yǔ)句通順，條理清楚。2、字?jǐn)?shù)60左右，可適當(dāng)加以發(fā)揮(文章開(kāi)頭已寫(xiě)出，字?jǐn)?shù)不計(jì))。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyfriendMybestfriendisMillie.SheisastudentofSunshineMiddleSchool.ShealwaysreadsEnglishat6:00eveningmorning.AndsheisgoodatherEnglish.SheisnicetomeandalwayshelpsmewithmyEnglish.Weoftenplaygamesunderthetreeontheplayground.ShegoestotheschoollibraryeveryTuesdayandFriday.Sometimesshepracticesplayingvolleyballwithme.Ilikeherverymuch.【范文點(diǎn)評(píng)】這是一篇提供情景提綱的命題作文。要點(diǎn)提示很詳細(xì)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)只需要把各個(gè)提綱加以發(fā)揮，注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語(yǔ)法規(guī)則的正確性，就不會(huì)造成審題不清而偏離主題，但要注意，文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個(gè)提綱的要點(diǎn)。感覺(jué)要點(diǎn)提示，本文需要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，相對(duì)較簡(jiǎn)單?！军c(diǎn)評(píng)】做英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)時(shí)，要注意認(rèn)真審題，分析體裁，確定時(shí)態(tài)：分析內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組：注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞。最后，注意不要犯語(yǔ)法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤。（一）假如你是Irving，現(xiàn)在在中國(guó)讀書(shū)，請(qǐng)你給你的朋友Mike寫(xiě)一封信談?wù)勀阍谥袊?guó)的生活。學(xué)習(xí)上學(xué)時(shí)間:8:00-16:50;有許多的課程;擅長(zhǎng)漢語(yǔ),最喜歡畫(huà)畫(huà)。運(yùn)動(dòng)與活動(dòng)經(jīng)常打籃球和游泳，每周都要去舞蹈俱樂(lè)部。飲食在學(xué)校吃午餐，飲食健康，有米飯、蔬菜、魚(yú)類(lèi)和，口味很好。節(jié)假日與中國(guó)同學(xué)一起過(guò)年(theChineseNewYear)。感受……要求：1)詞數(shù)60左右，信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2)所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容必須包括提供的所有信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3)語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，語(yǔ)法正確，字跡工整；4)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文DearMike,Iaminthisnewschoolforhalfayear.IwouldliketotellyousomethingaboutmylifeinChina.Myschoolstartsat8:00andisoverat16:50.Ihavemanylessons.IamgoodatChineseandIlikedrawingbest.IoftenplaybasketballandgoswimmingafterschoolandIgototheDancingClubeveryweek.Ihavelunchatschool.Thefoodishealthy.Ihaverice,vegetables,fishandfruit.Theyareverynice.IspendtheChineseNewYearwithmyChineseclassmates.Lifeisinterestinghere.Youwillalsolikeitifyoucome.Pleasewritetomesoon.Yours,Irving【范文點(diǎn)評(píng)】這是一篇提綱作文，題目中已經(jīng)給出了很多信息和要點(diǎn)。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，要注意審題，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)。從題目要求可知，這篇文章是Irving寫(xiě)信給介紹自己的好友Mike介紹自己在中國(guó)的生活情況，所以要用第一人稱(chēng)寫(xiě)，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。注意書(shū)信的格式。在組織語(yǔ)言的時(shí)候，要注意表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性。句子要完整，表達(dá)要清晰，句子之間要流暢?！军c(diǎn)評(píng)】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。頻率副詞及短語(yǔ)的使用,如:often,everyeveryweek等恰切地表達(dá)了Irving的生活習(xí)慣;文中還使用了begoodat,playbasketball,goswimming等,這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。（二）Sally品學(xué)兼優(yōu)，是你們班推薦的“十佳學(xué)生”人選。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文,介紹一下Sally。提示:1.Howoldissheandwhichgradeisshein?2.Whatisherfavoritesubject?Why?3.Whatareherhabitsineatingandsports?4.Whatdoesshelikedoingonweekends?要求:1.60詞左右;要求：語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括所有內(nèi)容提示，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，60詞左右。短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)的人名、校名等。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________