Unit 1 Past and present -【同步寫作課】2023-2024學(xué)年八年級(jí)下冊(cè)英語(yǔ)單元寫作深度指導(dǎo)（牛津譯林版）（學(xué)生版）

第頁(yè)Unit1Pastandpresent單元寫作指導(dǎo)與演練近三年考情分析話題考查熱度家鄉(xiāng)變化社會(huì)發(fā)展本單元寫作要求同學(xué)們能用所學(xué)的詞語(yǔ)和句型簡(jiǎn)單地介紹家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)生的變化。介紹的內(nèi)容主要為家鄉(xiāng)過(guò)去的情況、現(xiàn)在的變化、感想和打算等。在具體的寫作中，學(xué)生應(yīng)做到以下幾點(diǎn)：1.能用一般過(guò)去時(shí)描述家鄉(xiāng)過(guò)去的情況；2.能用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)描述現(xiàn)在的變化；3.能利用多種句式，豐富寫作內(nèi)容；【詞匯積累】1．重要的2．發(fā)生3．改善4．關(guān)系；聯(lián)系5．從……中學(xué)到很多6．飼養(yǎng)寵物

7．太陽(yáng)能8．過(guò)去常常9．代替10．變成11．在很短的時(shí)間內(nèi)12．以……速度【句式積累】※開(kāi)頭句1._______________________________________________________________這些年來(lái)，在……發(fā)生了很多變化。2._______________________________________________________________在最近的幾年中，在……發(fā)生了很大變化?！虚g句1._______________________________________________________________十年前，它是一個(gè)貧窮的地方。2._______________________________________________________________例如，自從政府采取了一些有效措施，環(huán)境發(fā)展地更好了。3._______________________________________________________________自從那時(shí)起，……飛速發(fā)展。4._______________________________________________________________但是現(xiàn)在，開(kāi)放政策以后，我們的家鄉(xiāng)變得越來(lái)越富有。5._______________________________________________________________許多像電腦、新的學(xué)校和新的建筑變得越來(lái)越普遍。6._______________________________________________________________幾乎所有人都有了手機(jī)甚至私家車?！Y(jié)尾句1._______________________________________________________________我為我們的……而自豪，并且希望未來(lái)為我們的……而自豪。2._______________________________________________________________做為一名……，我很自豪。我也為……的強(qiáng)大而振奮。3._______________________________________________________________看到我的家鄉(xiāng)的變化我感到很自豪而且振奮。歡迎來(lái)到我的故鄉(xiāng)并親自體驗(yàn)它的變化?！局V語(yǔ)積累】1.Peoplemisstheirhometownswhengrowingmature,birdsmisstheirnestswhengrowingold._______________________________________________________________2.Tomakeyourhometownbeautiful,youneedtoplanttreesandflowers._______________________________________________________________Thewaterinmyhometownisfairywater,andthesoilinmyhometownisgold._______________________________________________________________3.Whetheryouarecloseornot,youarefromyourhometown.Whetheritisbeautifulornot,there’swaterinthecountryside._______________________________________________________________【萬(wàn)能寫作模板】Inthepast,myhometownwas（過(guò)去的特點(diǎn)）,peopleliveda/anlife.Thehouseswereand.Pollutionwas,andtherewas.Theroadswereand,andpeoplewenttowork.Nowgreatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometown.Theenvironmenthasbecomemuchbetter.（開(kāi)始介紹變化）Thereislessandlesspollution.Theroadsareand.Themountainshaveturned.Theriversareandtheskyis.Therearetrees,flowersandgrasseverywhere.Peoplelivealife.Theirhousesareand.Manypeoplehavetheirowncars.Everyyearthousandsofpeoplefromallovertheworldcometovisitourcity.I’msuremyhometownwillbecomebetterandbetterinthefuture.（表達(dá)感受）Ialsohopemorepeoplewillvisitmyhometown.（表達(dá)愿望）請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面提示，結(jié)合你的成長(zhǎng)經(jīng)歷，以“Changestomyhometown”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇90詞左右的短文，介紹家鄉(xiāng)的過(guò)去和現(xiàn)在變化。最后談?wù)勛约旱母惺堋?.環(huán)境：

過(guò)去：房屋矮小破舊，道路狹窄……現(xiàn)在：搬進(jìn)新公寓，街道寬闊整潔2.生活：

過(guò)去：聽(tīng)廣播，看電視

現(xiàn)在：網(wǎng)上沖浪（surfontheInternet）……3.交通方式：過(guò)去：步行，騎自行車

現(xiàn)在：坐地鐵或開(kāi)車，火車站和飛機(jī)場(chǎng)投入使用多年（beinuse）4.交流方式：過(guò)去：寫信保持聯(lián)系

現(xiàn)在：……5.感受：……ChangestomyhometownMyhometownhaschangedalotoverthepastfewyears.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、閱讀下列短文，根據(jù)短文內(nèi)容，從每個(gè)方框內(nèi)所給11個(gè)詞匯中選擇10個(gè)意義相符的詞匯，必要時(shí)進(jìn)行詞形變化，填入空白處。all,

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anythingNowwecanseemoreandmoreelectricbikesinthestreet.Electricbikesareeasytoride.Theyrunfastandmake1pollution.Sotheybecomeverypopularinmanybig2inChina.Buttheelectricbikesalsocause3trafficaccidents.4Chinaplanstomakeanewrulefortheelectricbikeriders.If5electricbikeisheavierthan40kilosandcangofasterthan20kilometersanhour,itsridermustgetalicense(執(zhí)照).Itmeansridershavetopassdrivingtestsbeforetheyride6electricbikesontheroad.Peoplehavedifferentideas7theplan.Somewelcometheplanbecausetheythinkitwillmakethestreetmuch8.Butsomearenothappywiththenewruleatall.Oneridersaid,“Idon’twanttogetalicenseor9.That’s10muchtrouble.”What’syouridea?Doyouagreewiththeplan?二、完成句子1.自從2015年以來(lái)，我的家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)生了巨大變化。________________________________________inmyhometownsince2015.2．我媽媽在這家超市工作了三年。Mymotherinthesupermarketthreeyearsago.3．現(xiàn)在，很多人通過(guò)微信來(lái)交流。Nowadays,manypeopleWeChat.4．現(xiàn)在很多沙漠已經(jīng)變成了良田。Nowmanydesertshavegoodlands.5．這些工廠已經(jīng)采取了一些行動(dòng)來(lái)保護(hù)環(huán)境。Thefactory.6．現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)絡(luò)使交流容易多了。TheInternetnow.7．自從上個(gè)月以來(lái)，我們一直通過(guò)電子郵件保持聯(lián)系。Wesincelastmonth.8．MissGaohastaughtChineseintheschoolfor5years.(改為同義句)MissGaohastaughtChineseintheschool.9．JuliahasnoteverbeentotheWestLake.（改為同義句）JuliabeentotheWestLake.10．Alicealwayswenttotheparkinthemorninglastyear.（改為同義句）Alicegototheparkinthemorninglastyear.11．ShebegantoteachEnglishintheschoolin2005.（改為同義句）SheEnglishintheschool2005.12．IhavealreadyreceivedanofferfromHarvardUniversity.(改為否定句)IreceivedanofferfromHarvardUniversity.13．Hisfatherusedtosmokealot.（改為反意疑問(wèn)句）Hisfatherusedtosmokealot,?14．Thegovernmenttookactiontoimprovethesituationlater.(改為一般疑問(wèn)句)thegovernmentactiontoimprovethesituationlater?1．請(qǐng)以“Myhometown”為題，寫一篇關(guān)于家鄉(xiāng)過(guò)去和現(xiàn)在變化的短文。要求：字跡工整、語(yǔ)言精練、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、條理清晰，80詞左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．假如你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格內(nèi)容提示，給你的筆友Mary寫一封郵件，介紹一下你的家鄉(xiāng)SunshineTown這些年來(lái)的變化。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：過(guò)去現(xiàn)在環(huán)境狹窄骯臟的道路；到處堆放的垃圾兩旁種有樹(shù)木花草的寬廣干凈的街道；還有高樓和商店生活房子又舊又??；娛樂(lè)只有收音機(jī)和電視機(jī)房子是新的公寓套房；娛樂(lè)有手機(jī)、電腦和網(wǎng)絡(luò)等交通步行或自行車出租車、小車、火車、飛機(jī)、地鐵等感受……注意：1.內(nèi)容必須包含表格中的所有信息；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.文中不得透露個(gè)人信息；4.詞數(shù)80左右（文章的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。DearMary,Howiseverythinggoingwithyou?Iamwritingtotellyouthechangesinmyhometown.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua3．假設(shè)你們學(xué)校要開(kāi)展一個(gè)以“家鄉(xiāng)的過(guò)去與現(xiàn)在”為主題的英語(yǔ)有獎(jiǎng)?wù)魑幕顒?dòng)，請(qǐng)你以“Thechangesinmyhometown”為題，從道路、交通以及環(huán)境條件等三方面來(lái)描述你所居住的小鎮(zhèn)發(fā)生的變化。寫作要求：1.字跡工整、規(guī)范；2.字?jǐn)?shù)：100詞左右；3.語(yǔ)句通順，無(wú)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校。Thechangesinmyhometown________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．某英文報(bào)舉辦“家鄉(xiāng)的變化”主題征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提示，以“TheChangesinMyHometown”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文。過(guò)去生活貧困，房屋小而破舊。污染嚴(yán)重，到處是垃圾。道路臟且狹窄，上班靠步行和自行車?，F(xiàn)在住房寬敞明亮；污染減少，環(huán)境變得很漂亮。道路寬敞干凈，許多人有自己的汽車上下班；每年有成千上萬(wàn)來(lái)自各地的游客來(lái)參觀。將來(lái)希望……（兩點(diǎn)）要求:

1.短文不少于100詞。2.語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，字跡工整。3.內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的要點(diǎn)，需適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。TheChangesinMyHometownInthepast,myhometownwasverysmall,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．假如你是李華，你的一個(gè)美國(guó)網(wǎng)友Bob想了解你家鄉(xiāng)的變化，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的思維導(dǎo)圖寫一封英文電子郵件給他，并表達(dá)你的感受。注意事項(xiàng)：1、郵件內(nèi)容根據(jù)思維導(dǎo)圖自擬，要求語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，符合題意。2、字?jǐn)?shù)100詞左右，郵件的開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。DearBob,I’mgladtotellyouthegreatchangesinmyhometown.Manychangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometownovertheyears.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua6．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示，結(jié)合你的成長(zhǎng)經(jīng)歷，以“Changestomyhometown”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇80詞左右的短文。過(guò)去現(xiàn)在將來(lái)至少列舉兩例說(shuō)明過(guò)去的情況。環(huán)境優(yōu)美：空氣新鮮；碧水藍(lán)天：污染減少你對(duì)家鄉(xiāng)未來(lái)的暢想（至少一句）。交通便利：各種交通方式：地鐵已經(jīng)beinuse（投入使用）___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．請(qǐng)以“Thechangesinmyhometown”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，向你的網(wǎng)友描述家鄉(xiāng)的變化及你的感受。內(nèi)容包括以下要點(diǎn)：變化過(guò)去現(xiàn)在環(huán)境青山綠水，空氣新鮮路多，樓多，人更多交通自行車或步行公交車、出租車或火車問(wèn)題發(fā)展少綠化少注意：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名：2.詞數(shù)在80~100之間。Thechangesinmyhometown________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．學(xué)校英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部正組織題為“Greatchangesinmyhometown”的征文比賽。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，寫一篇短文參賽。1.Whatwasyourhometownlikeinthepast?(environment,life,transport...)2.Whatisyourhometownlikenow?(environment,life,transport...)3.Whatdoyouthinkofthechanges?注意事項(xiàng)：(1)

詞數(shù)：90詞左右（文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；(2)

文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、班級(jí)等信息；(3)

文章必須包含所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順。Greatchangesinmyhometown

Withthedevelopmentoftechnology,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometownovertheyears.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．學(xué)校網(wǎng)站英語(yǔ)欄目組織征文活動(dòng)“GreatChangesinMyHometown”，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，寫一篇短文投稿。GreatChangesinMyHometown1.Whatwasyourhometownlikeinthepast?2.Whatgreatchangeshavetakenplaceinyourhometown?3.Whatdoyouthinkofthegreatchanges?注意事項(xiàng)：(1)詞數(shù)：120詞左右；(2)文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名班級(jí)等信息；(3)文章必須包含所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順。GreatChangesinMyHometownWiththedevelopmentoftechnology,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometowninthepastfewyears.Inthepast,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面提示，結(jié)合你的成長(zhǎng)經(jīng)歷，以“Changestomyhometown”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇90詞左右的短文，介紹家鄉(xiāng)的過(guò)去和現(xiàn)在變化。最后談?wù)勛约旱母惺堋?.環(huán)境：

過(guò)去：房屋矮小破舊，道路狹窄……現(xiàn)在：搬進(jìn)新公寓，街道寬闊整潔2.生活：

過(guò)去：聽(tīng)廣播，看電視

現(xiàn)在：網(wǎng)上沖浪（surfontheInternet）……3.交通方式：過(guò)去：步行，騎自行車

現(xiàn)在：坐地鐵或開(kāi)車，火車站和飛機(jī)場(chǎng)投入使用多年（beinuse）4.交流方式：過(guò)去：寫信保持聯(lián)系

現(xiàn)在：……5.感受：……ChangestomyhometownMyhometownhaschangedalotoverthepastfewyears.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________1．（2021·貴州黔西·統(tǒng)考中考真題）假如你是振興中學(xué)的學(xué)生。名叫張華。你校英文網(wǎng)站“ZhengxingEnglishwebsite”想報(bào)道近年來(lái)同學(xué)們家鄉(xiāng)的變化。請(qǐng)你以“Changesinmyhometown”為題對(duì)你的家鄉(xiāng)進(jìn)行一次采訪，并將你的所見(jiàn)所聞?dòng)糜⑽膶懸黄獔?bào)道。向?qū)W校英文網(wǎng)站投稿。內(nèi)容包括：1.家鄉(xiāng)過(guò)去的情況（舉2個(gè)例子）；2.家鄉(xiāng)現(xiàn)在的變化（舉2個(gè)例子）；3.鄉(xiāng)村振興開(kāi)展以來(lái)你的感想和打算（2點(diǎn)）；寫作要求：1.結(jié)構(gòu)完整，表達(dá)通順，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，書寫清晰。2.文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)的人名和學(xué)校名稱等信息。3.詞數(shù)80左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：鄉(xiāng)村振興：ruralrevitalization鄉(xiāng)村致富：makeourcountryrichandstrongerChangesinmyhometownWehadagreatvictoryinpovertyrelief（脫貧）inmyhometownaccordingtothelocalnewsreport.Afewdaysago,Iwentbacktomyhometown.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．（2023·遼寧營(yíng)口·中考真題）假設(shè)你是李華，你所在城市將舉辦以“MyCountry，MyPride”為主題的中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)演講比賽。請(qǐng)你寫篇演講稿，簡(jiǎn)要闡述中國(guó)