Unit 3 Welcome to our school.-【同步寫作課】2023-2024學(xué)年七年級上冊英語單元寫作深度指導(dǎo)（牛津譯林版）

第頁Unit3Welcometoourschool！單元寫作指導(dǎo)與演練近三年考情分析話題考查熱度學(xué)校環(huán)境認(rèn)識新學(xué)校（位置、大小、人員、結(jié)構(gòu)、學(xué)?？颇浚┍締卧脑掝}是“學(xué)校環(huán)境”，認(rèn)識并介紹新學(xué)校，要求學(xué)生能簡單介紹自己或他人的學(xué)校，本單元寫作要求同學(xué)們能根據(jù)相關(guān)信息提示簡單地介紹自己或他人的學(xué)校。內(nèi)容包括位置、大小、人員、結(jié)構(gòu)、設(shè)施、學(xué)?？颇亢蜕蠈W(xué)的交通方式等。在具體的寫作中，學(xué)生應(yīng)做到以下幾點：1.能用I,you,she,he,it,we,they等主格人稱代詞及其對應(yīng)的賓格形式;2.能按照空間或者一定的邏輯順序介紹學(xué)校環(huán)境；3.能正確使用標(biāo)點符號：4.能正確書寫英語句子。（以思維導(dǎo)圖的形式呈現(xiàn)）【詞匯積累】1.meetingn.會議;集會2.gaten.大門3.soadv.如此,這么;非常4.frontn.前面5.buildingn.建筑物,房子,樓房6.groundn.地,地面7.brightadj.明亮的8.modernadj.現(xiàn)代的:新式的【句型積累】Istudyat…Thereare...classroomsin...Wehave/donothaveaplayground/alibrary/ahall...Itisnot…but…Ilivefarawayfrom/neartheschool.Itakeabus/walktoschool.Igotoschoolbybike/bybus/onfoot...Ittakesme...togettoschool.去學(xué)校的交通方式及所需時間Igotoschoolonfooteveryday.=Iwalkto

schooleveryday.Irideabiketoschooleveryday.=Igoto

schoolbybikeeveryday.Itakeabustoschooleveryday.=Igoto

schoolbybuseveryday.Ittakesmeabouthalfanhour(twenty

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myschool.Myschoolisreallybig.Thereisabig

playgroundinfrontofourclassroom

building.Wecanplayfootballwithour

friendsafterclass.Therearemany

classroomsinmyschool.Ourclassrooms

arecleanandbright.Therearemanytall

buildingsinmyschool.Therearealsolots

oftreesandflowersinmyschool.Ourteachersareallkindtous,sowelike

themverymuch.Wehavemanynew

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togetherandchatwitheachother.假如你是王林，請你根據(jù)下面的提示，寫一篇英語短文介紹一下自己的學(xué)校。提示：1)介紹學(xué)校的學(xué)生人數(shù)；2)介紹學(xué)校的建筑物；3)介紹你們的老師。注意:1)詞數(shù)60左右:文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的校名和人名。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】DearJackThankyouforwritingtome.Iwanttotellyouaboutmylife.Igetupat6:00inthemorning.At6:40,Ihavebreakfast.ThenIdomorningexercisesat7:30.Ihavelessonsfrom8:25to11:50everymorning.After4:40intheafternoon,Ioftendosomesportswithmyclassmates.Iplaysportsforaboutonehour,thenIgohome.SometimesIwatchTVbeforehavingsupper.BeforeIgotobed,Imustfinishmyhomework.Ittakesmeabouttwohours.At9:30,ImustgotobedbecauseIwillgotoschoolthenextday.That'smylife.Whataboutyours?Pleasee-mailmesoon!WangLin【范文點評】本題是根據(jù)表格描寫一天的生活，在寫作時應(yīng)注意使用正確的語句：語言表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣。寫作步驟：一、閱讀提示，弄清所有信息，明確寫作要點。1.6點起床，6點40吃早飯，在7點半做早操。2.每天上午從八點25到11點50上課。下午4點40放學(xué)。3.放學(xué)后跟同學(xué)做一個小時的運動，然后回家。4.在6點半吃晚飯前通常會看半個小時的電視。5.吃過晚飯從7點開始做作業(yè)，大約要花費兩個半小時。6.9點半睡覺。二、根據(jù)要點，寫出關(guān)鍵詞、短語或句子。三、組詞成句。連句成篇。注意使用一般現(xiàn)在時?！军c評】本題考查對本單元所學(xué)知識的綜合運用，熟練使用相關(guān)短語、單詞和句型，注意詞性的搭配，時態(tài)的把握，人稱的使用等細(xì)節(jié)問題。一、詞匯。(每小題2分，共20分)A.根據(jù)句意及首字母或中文提示完成單詞。1.Theweekendiscoming.MyfamilyaregoingonhinTongli.2.Therearemanytallbuildingsontheosideoftheroad.3.Youmusthave(特殊的)shoesforskating.4.Theboyisreadytoanswertheteachers'(問題)atanytime.5.Wewanttoinvitesomeforeignfriendsto(慶祝)the100thbirthdayofourschool.B.用所給單詞的適當(dāng)形式填空。6.Lastyear,Itooklotsof(photo)whenIwasinHongKong.7.Ialwaysgetalotofnice(present)onmybirthday.8.—Thanksfor(give)ussomecandyasatreat.——You’rewelcome,9.Therearedifferent(kind)ofbooksinthelibrary.10.Iwanttoknow(much)aboutyourfamily.二、單項選擇。(每小題2分，共20分)()1.—Whatisyourfavourite?—TheSpringFestival.A.foodB.sportC.subjectD.festival()2.Kateisnotatschool.Sheis、holidayinLondon.A.atB.onC.inD.for()3.—WhenisHalloween?——.A.OnOctober1B.OnDecember25C.OnOctober31D.OnAugust15()4.ItisforyoutoreadEnglishinthemorningifyouwanttolearnitwell.A.differentB.importantC.specialD.difficult()5.—doeshelikewinterbest?—Becausehecangoskating.A.WhyB.WhatC.WhichD.How()6.——doyougoswimminginsummer?—Twiceaweek.A.WhyB.WhattimeC.WhichD.Howoften()7.TheChinesefireworkstowelcomethenewyear.A.wakeupB.talkofC.turnoffD.letoff()8.IwanttoadragonattheDragonBoatFestival.A.dressatB.dressinasC.dressupD.dressupas()9.—HappyHalloween!——A.HappyNewYear!B.Thesametoyou.C.Thankyou.D.Don'tsaythat.()10.Peopleeatsweetdumplingsforgoodluckat/on.A.ChristmasB.theMid-AutumnFestivalC.theLanternFestivalD.Halloween三、句型轉(zhuǎn)換。(每小題4分，共20分)1.HongKonghasmanyfestivalsfromdifferentcountries.(改為一般疑問句)HongKongmanyfestivalsfromdifferentcountries?2.Myfatherandmymothergivememanypresentsonmybirthday.(對畫線部分提問)youmanypresentsonyourbirthday?PeoplecelebrateChristmasinmanyways.(對畫線部分提問)peoplecelebrateChristmas?4.Thegirloverthereunderthetreeismycousin.(對畫線部分提問)yourcousin?5.Helookslikeaghostinthecostumes.(同義句轉(zhuǎn)換)Heasaghost.答案一、A.1.holiday2.other3.special4.questions5.celebrateB.6.photos7.presents8.giving9.kinds10.more二、1.D根據(jù)答句可推知上句詢問的是節(jié)日。2.B表示“度假”用固定短語onholiday。3.C萬圣節(jié)前夕是在10月31日。4.B句意：如果你想學(xué)好英語，那么對你來說在早上讀英語是重要的。5.A由答句中的Because可知,問句用Why提問。6.D句意：“你夏天多久去游一次泳?”“一周兩次。”why為什么;whattime幾點;which哪一個;howoften多久一次。根據(jù)答句可知是對頻率進(jìn)行提問。7.D句意：中國人燃放煙花來迎接新的一年。letofffireworks燃放煙花。8.D句意：在端午節(jié)我想裝扮成一條龍。dressup打扮;dressupas裝扮成,打扮成。9.B回答節(jié)日祝福語用“HappyHalloween!”或“Thesametoyou.”。10.C根據(jù)句中“吃元宵”可知是“元宵節(jié)”。三、1.Does;have2.Whogives3.Howdo4.Whichgirlis5.dressesup（一）Lucy在發(fā)郵件給網(wǎng)友Sally，向她介紹自己的新學(xué)校。請你幫助Lucy完成下面的郵件，內(nèi)容包括：學(xué)校不大，只有幾間教室，但干凈且現(xiàn)代化；學(xué)校沒有圖書館，但有漂亮的閱覽室，學(xué)生們可以……：操場在……的前面，學(xué)生們可以……；老師們很友好，我們很喜歡他們。詞數(shù)：70左右。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】DearSally,Howareyou?Iamhappytotellyousomethingaboutmynewschool.Itisnotbig.Thereareonlyafewclassrooms.Buttheyarecleanandmodern.Wedon'thavealibrary,butwehaveabeautifulreadingroom.Wecanreadbooksinit.Ourplaygroundisinfrontoftheclassrooms.Weoftenplaythereafterclass.Ourteachersareverykind.Welikethemverymuch.Yours,Lucy【范文點評】本題是寫一篇給定材料的書面表達(dá)，寫作的話題為露西的新學(xué)校，在寫作時應(yīng)注意符合題意，根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；語言表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣?！緦懽鞑襟E】一、閱讀提示，弄清所有信息，明確寫作要點。1.很高興向你講述我們的新學(xué)校。2.學(xué)校不大，只有幾間教室，但干凈且現(xiàn)代化3.學(xué)校沒有圖書館，但有漂亮的閱覽室，我們可以在里面看書。4.操場在教學(xué)樓前面，我們經(jīng)常下課后在上面玩耍。5.老師們很友好，我們很喜歡他們。二、根據(jù)要點，寫出關(guān)鍵詞、短語或句子。behappytodo;tellsbaboutsth;thereare;afew;readingroom;infrontof;afterclass;bekind;verymuch.三、組詞成句。連句成篇。注意使用一般現(xiàn)在時?！军c評】本題考查對本單元所學(xué)知識的綜合運用，熟練使用相關(guān)短語、單詞和句型，注意詞性的搭配，時態(tài)的把握，人稱的使用等細(xì)節(jié)問題。（二）假如你叫曹陽，在網(wǎng)上結(jié)識了一位網(wǎng)友Peter，并收到他發(fā)給你的一封郵件，請你仔細(xì)閱讀這封郵件，根據(jù)郵件的內(nèi)容給Peter寫封回信。DearCaoYang,I'mverygladtomakefriendswithyou.Iamwritingtoaskaboutyourschoollife.Whatdoesyourschoollooklike?Howmanyclassroomsdoyouhave?Whatisyourfavoritesubject?Doyoulikeyourteachers?Whatdoyouoftendoafterschool?Iamlookingforwardtoyourletter.YoursSincerely,Peter要求：1、回信應(yīng)包含郵件中所有要點，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2、詞數(shù)80左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。3、不得出現(xiàn)真實校名及姓名DearPeter,Thanksforyourletter.Now,letmetellyousomethingaboutmyschoollife.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopewecanbegoodfriends.YoursSincerelyCaoYang【答案】范文：DearPeter,Thanksforyourletter.Now,letmetellyousomethingaboutmyschoollife.Myschoolisbigandbeautiful.Ithassometeachingbuildings,classbuildingsandahugeplaygroundwithmanytreesaroundit.Wehave30classroomslikeartrooms,musicroomsandsoon.IlikemathsbestbecauseIamgoodatdealingwithnumbers.Ithinkitismagicandwonderful.Myteachersareallkindandhelpful.Ifyouhaveanyproblem,youcanturntothemforhelpanytime.Ioftenplaythepianoandhavedrawinglessonsafterschool.Ihopewecanbegoodfriends.YoursSincerelyCaoYang[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文；②時態(tài)：采用“一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)”；③提示：根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容給Peter寫封回信，要求包含郵件所有內(nèi)容。[寫作步驟]第一步：開門見山，引出學(xué)校是什么樣子；第二步：具體闡述學(xué)校的樣子；第三步：闡述自己的最愛科目、課后活動；第四步：總結(jié)全文，表達(dá)愿望。[亮點詞匯]①begoodat擅長②dealwith處理③playthepiano彈鋼琴[高分句型]①Ithassometeachingbuildings,classbuildingsandahugeplaygroundwithmanytreesaroundit.(with結(jié)構(gòu))②Ifyouhaveanyproblem,youcanturntothemforhelpanytime.(if從句)（三）假設(shè)你叫Frank，你英國的筆友Simon想了解你，下面是他給你第一次寫來的交友電郵，向你詢問各方面的信息和情況，請根據(jù)電郵要點，給他寫一封回信。回信開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearFrank,I'mgladtowritetoyou.I'mSimonfromtheUK.I'minGrade7atamixedschoolnearLondon.Ilikemeetingdifferentpeople,andIwanttotravelaroundtheworldwhenIgrowup.Canyoutellmesomethingaboutyourself,yourschoolandschoollife?Ireallylookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Bestwishes,Simon注意事項：1.郵件須包括所有要點；2.詞數(shù)70個左右。郵件開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3.郵件中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息；4.郵件必須寫在答題卷對應(yīng)的位置上，寫在試卷其他部分無效。DearSimonIamgladtowritebacktoyoutointroducemyselfandsomethingaboutmyschoolandschoollife.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Allthebest,Frank【答案】例文DearSimon,Iamgladtowritebacktoyoutointroducemyselfandsomethingaboutmyschoolandschoollife.I'm12.I'mnottall.Myhairisveryshort,andIwearglasses.Myschoolisnotbigbutbeautiful.Ithasalibrary.Wealwaysborrowbooksfromit.Infrontofthelibrary,thereisamodernhall.Wesometimeshavemeetingsthere.Thereisabigplaygroundinmyschool.MyclassmatesandIoftenplaysportsafterclass.Ienjoymyschoolandlovemyschoollife.Allthebest,Frank1.題干解讀：該題目屬于郵件作文寫作，要求按照所給的要點提示寫一封回信，介紹你和你的學(xué)校。注意寫作時要點要齊全，同時也可進(jìn)行合理而又緊扣主題的發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第一、三人稱來敘述；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時；文章開頭已給出，寫作時，注意承接上文，根據(jù)要點提示具體介紹個人情況，所在學(xué)校以及學(xué)校生活；文中一定要包含題干中列出的所有要點；可以運用一些短語和常用句型為文章增添色彩；注意單詞書寫的準(zhǔn)確度，語法運用的準(zhǔn)確度，上下文注意連接的流暢度，以及邏輯合理。（四）假設(shè)你是陽光中學(xué)七年級一班的學(xué)生Amy，請你以“Myschoollife”為題，結(jié)合以下問題，介紹一下你的學(xué)校生活。1.Whatschooldoyoustudyat?Whatisyourschoollike?Whatisinyourschool?2.Whatsubjectdoyoustudyatschool?Andwhatisyourfavoritesubject?Andwhy?(兩點原因)3.Whatdoyouliketodoafterschool?Andwhy?(兩點原因)要求：1.表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；2.必須包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.100詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；4.不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。MyschoollifeHello,I'mAmy.Istudyat_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyschoollifeHello,I'mAmy.IstudyatSunshineMiddleSchool.IaminClassOne,GradeSeven.Myschoolisbigandbeautiful.Thereareeighteenclassroomsinit.Wealsohaveanartroom,amusicroomandtwocomputerrooms.Atschool,welearndifferentkindsofsubjects,suchasChinese,Maths,English.Amongallthesubjects,IlikeEnglishbest.BecauseEnglishisinterestingandmyEnglishteacherisverynicetous.Afterschool,Iliketodosports.Theyaregoodforme.Ilikeplayingvolleyballbest.BecauseIamgoodatit.Iamintheschoolvolleyballteam.Itcanalsomakemestrongandhappy.Ialwayshaveagoodtimeatschool.【詳解】1.題干解讀：題目要求以“Myschoollife”為題，介紹自己的學(xué)校生活；要求包含提示中所有的信息，并進(jìn)行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，且不得出現(xiàn)真實信息。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：此作文時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱采用第一人稱。此作文可采用4段落格式：第一段：主要介紹自己學(xué)校的信息，比如學(xué)校名稱、學(xué)校的設(shè)施以及學(xué)校怎么樣；第二段：介紹自己學(xué)習(xí)的科目，最喜歡哪門學(xué)科以及原因；第三段：介紹自己課后活動以及原因；第四段：總結(jié)全文，表示自己在這個學(xué)校很開心。（五）假如你是Millie，在SunnySchool學(xué)習(xí)，請你給你的表妹Sandy介紹你學(xué)校的情況并希望她來參觀，請根據(jù)以下要點寫一封信。要求：1.包含所有要點，第五點請用1-2句作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.語句流暢，字跡工整。3.詞數(shù)在80詞左右。要點：1.坐落在山腳下，安靜，漂亮，長滿了鮮花和綠樹。2.是個學(xué)習(xí)的好地方，數(shù)千學(xué)生在這兒學(xué)習(xí)。3.課后可以去操場做運動，去圖書館借各種各樣的書。4.每天有公交車到市中心，乘地鐵到這兒大概20分鐘。5.我希望…(1-2句作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮)DearSandy:IstudyatSunnySchoo1.I'dliketotellyousomethingaboutmyschool._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Millie【答案】例文DearSandy:IstudyatSunnySchool.I'dliketotellyousomethingaboutmyschool.Myschoolisatthefootofahill.It'squietandbeautiful.It'sfullofflowersandtrees./Thereareflowersandtreesaroundit.Itisagood/wonderfulplacetostudy.Thousandsofstudentsstudyhere.Afterclass,wecandosportsintheplayground,andwecanborrowallkindsofbooksfromthelibrary.Therearebusestothecitycentereveryday.Ittakesabout20minutestogetherebyunderground.Ihopeyoucancometovisitmyschool.Welcometomyschool!Bestwishes!Millie試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文給出了一些要點，并給出了作文的開頭和結(jié)尾。我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點表達(dá)出來，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來寫，要注意主謂一致等問題。寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。寫作亮點:這篇短文多次使用連接詞and,固定短語如atthefootof;fullof;Thousandsof;allkindsof等等,這些都為文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。（一）根據(jù)以下提示，幫助桑迪給湯姆回一封電子郵件。詞數(shù)70左右。提示：1.明天是中國傳統(tǒng)的(traditional)中秋節(jié);2.中秋節(jié)通常在九月或十月；3.那天，家庭成員都趕回家吃團(tuán)圓飯；4.人們還吃一種特殊的食物——月餅，人們邊吃月餅邊賞月；5.孩子們玩燈籠，他們玩得很開心。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文DearTom,TomorrowistheMid-AutumnFestival.It'sa

traditionalfestivalinChina.Nowletmetellyou

somethingaboutit.TheMid-AutumnFestivalusuallycomesin

SeptemberorOctober.Allthefamilymembers

comebackhomeonthatday.Wealwayshaveabig

dinnertogether.Afterdinner,weusuallyenjoythe

fullmooninthegarden.Wealsoeataspecialkind

offood—mooncakes.Childrenoftenplaywith

lanterns.Theyallhavelotsoffun.Lotsoflove,Sandy（二）根據(jù)下列提示信息，寫一篇關(guān)于節(jié)日的文章。提示：1.不同的人喜歡不同的節(jié)日。我最喜歡的節(jié)日是春節(jié)。2.在春節(jié)那天，我可以穿新衣服，還能得到紅包；晚上看春節(jié)聯(lián)歡晚會(TheSpringFestivalGala);有時燃放煙花。3.我的哥哥最喜歡中秋節(jié)，因為他愛吃月餅，他也喜歡欣賞滿月。4.我的筆友(penfriend)桑迪(Sandy)最喜歡萬圣節(jié)前夕,因為……注意：時態(tài)準(zhǔn)確，表達(dá)清楚，層次分明，結(jié)構(gòu)完整。70詞左右。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________