Unit 7 Abilities單元話題寫作指導(dǎo)與演練（必做）

第頁Unit7Abilities單元寫作指導(dǎo)與演練單元寫作早知道寫作任務(wù)本單元的話題是“個(gè)人能力”。每個(gè)人都有自己的獨(dú)特之處,在學(xué)習(xí)和生活中學(xué)生們應(yīng)善于發(fā)現(xiàn)和展現(xiàn)自己的長處。本單元學(xué)習(xí)了如何寫推薦信來推薦某人。在具體的寫作中,學(xué)生應(yīng)做到以下幾點(diǎn):1.能正確認(rèn)識并描述自己和他人的能力;2.能掌握書寫推薦信的正確格式;3.在書寫推薦信時(shí),應(yīng)注意語言簡潔得體,條理清晰。常用表達(dá)常用詞匯1.recommend推薦2.hard努力地3.clever聰明的4.carefully認(rèn)真地5.polite有禮貌的6.helpful有幫助的7.kind善良的8.amemberof……的一員9.recommend...for...推薦……為……10.begoodat擅長……11.dowellin在……方面做得好12.takecareof照顧13.beableto能14.makefriendswith和……交朋友15.getonwellwith與……相處融洽16.attheageof...在……歲時(shí)17.lookforwardto期待18.haveapopulationof...有……人口常用句子1.Jimstudieshardandheisgoodatwriting.吉姆學(xué)習(xí)努力,并且擅長寫作。2.Hethinkscarefullyandplanseverythingwell.他考慮仔細(xì),計(jì)劃周密。3.Hebegantolearntoplaythepianoattheageoffive.他5歲時(shí)開始學(xué)習(xí)彈鋼琴。4.Whenheisfree,heoftenvisitsanoldpeople’shome.他空閑時(shí)經(jīng)常去敬老院。5.Weshouldstudytogetherandhelpeachother.我們應(yīng)該相互學(xué)習(xí),相互幫助。

請你寫一封推薦信，推薦你們班的同學(xué)林濤獲得今年的青年獎(jiǎng)，詞數(shù)80左右。要點(diǎn)如下：1.林濤是一個(gè)聰明又誠實(shí)(honest)的男孩，他心地善良又勇敢，總是為他人著想；2.非常樂于助人，樂意和別人分享東西；3.昨天，在他回家的路上，發(fā)現(xiàn)一個(gè)8歲的小男孩迷了路，花了2個(gè)小時(shí)幫助男孩找到了回家的路，男孩的父母很感謝他。DearSir.IwouldliketorecommendLinTaoforthisyear'sYouthAward.LinTaoisacleverandhonestboy.Heiskindandworryaboutothers.Heisreadytosharethingswithothersandreadytohelpothersatanytime.Yesterday,hefoundaneight-year-oldboylosthiswayonhiswayhome.Hespenttwohourshelpingtheboyfindhiswayhome.Theboy'sparentswereverygratefultohim.WeallthinkLinTaoshouldgettheaward.Wehopeyouagreewithus.Yoursfaithfully,WangQiang這是一篇以第三人稱來寫的推薦信，要注意寫信的格式。內(nèi)容很簡單，要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出。時(shí)態(tài)主要用到一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)。正文分兩段，能把所給的要點(diǎn)全部寫出，結(jié)尾回應(yīng)主題。文章時(shí)態(tài)使用正確，變化自然一現(xiàn)在，人們的環(huán)保意識有了很大程度的提高，但仍然存在一些不好的行為，我們有義務(wù)參與環(huán)保的宣傳以及實(shí)際行動(dòng)中去。假如你是David，請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)所給信息給環(huán)保俱樂部（EnvironmentClub）李主席寫一封申請信，希望能成為該俱樂部的志愿者（volunteer），為環(huán)境保護(hù)盡一份責(zé)任。個(gè)人信息1.就讀于第一中學(xué)八（1）班，擅長科學(xué)；2.經(jīng)常DIY……（舉例說明）；3.樂于助人……（舉例說明）；環(huán)?，F(xiàn)狀1.煙霧使空氣質(zhì)量差……；2.能見度低……；幾點(diǎn)想法1.呼吁（callon）政府應(yīng)采取措施治理空氣污染；2.……要求:1.文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名和校名；2.段落清楚，中心突出，意思連貫；3.內(nèi)容必須包含以上信息，需根據(jù)要求適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；4.詞數(shù)不少于100詞。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearMr.Li,I’mwritingtoyouforapplyingtobeavolunteerofEnvironmentClub.It’sourdutytoprotecttheenvironmentandIwouldliketodosomethingtohelp.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IhopeIcangetthechancetohelpprotecttheenvironment.Yoursfaithfully,David【答案】例文DearMr.Li,I’mwritingtoyouforapplyingtobeavolunteerofEnvironmentClub.It’sourdutytoprotecttheenvironmentandIwouldliketodosomethingtohelp.I’mDavidfromClass1,Grade8ofNo.1MiddleSchool.IwanttojoinEnvironmentClubtobeavolunteer.IamapoliteboyandIamreadytohelpothers.Onthebus,Ioftengivemyseattotheelderly.IalsolikeDIY.Imadealotofthingsmyself.Heavysmoghitsomeareasofourcountry.Theairqualityissopoorthatithascausedpeople’shealthproblems.Ithashadabadeffectonourstudy,workandlife.Smogweatherhaslowvisibility.Itoftencausestrafficaccidents.Theschoolsinsomeareashavetobeclosed.Thegovernmentshouldtakemeasurestocontrolairpollution.Peopleshouldtrytogooutbybusratherthanbycar.Besides,peopleshouldplantmoretreesandflowers.Iwilltakeactiontoprotectenvironmentatonce!Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.IhopeIcangetthechancetohelpprotecttheenvironment.Yoursfaithfully,David【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為書信；②時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；③提示：寫作提示已給出，考生應(yīng)注意要增加1—2個(gè)想法，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使上下文連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，由于開頭已給出，故接下來具體介紹自己；第二步，具體介紹自己。從“就讀學(xué)校、所在年級、品質(zhì)”等方面介紹自己；第三步，具體闡述環(huán)?，F(xiàn)狀和自己的想法。第四步，結(jié)尾已給出。表示希望能夠獲得幫助保護(hù)環(huán)境的機(jī)會(huì)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①haveabadeffecton...對……有不良影響②bereadytodosth.準(zhǔn)備好做某事③poor劣質(zhì)的④cause引起⑤takemeasures采取措施⑥r(nóng)atherthan而不是⑦besides此外⑧atonce立刻[高分句型]①Theairqualityissopoorthatithascausedpeople’shealthproblems.（so...that...引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句）②Iwilltakeactiontoprotectenvironmentatonce!（動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語）二2023年3月23日是第六十三個(gè)世界氣象日(WorldMeteorologicalDay)，主題為“天氣氣候水，代代向未來”。學(xué)校本學(xué)期會(huì)舉辦“氣象日活動(dòng)推廣人”評選活動(dòng)，假如你是李華，請你為自己寫一封信給校長(Mr.Brown)推薦自己，并就“作為中學(xué)生，我們可以做些什么來保護(hù)我們的地球”談?wù)勛约旱淖龇ê徒ㄗh。內(nèi)容提示：1.簡要介紹你的情況，可包括年齡、喜好等。（請勿出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名）2.你覺得我們可以做些什么來保護(hù)我們的地球？小事做起(startwithsmallthings)，比如主動(dòng)打掃，不亂丟垃圾，節(jié)約水電……綠色出行(choosethegreentravel)，比如步行上下學(xué)，坐公共汽車、騎自行車……3……(適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充)寫作要求：1.要點(diǎn)齊全，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.條理清晰，語句通順，書寫規(guī)范；3.字?jǐn)?shù)80左右，開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearMr.Brown,IamwritingtoyoutorecommendmyselfastheactivityprompterofWorldMeteorologicalDay.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldgivemethischance.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yourstruly,LiHua【答案】DearMr.Brown,I’mwritingtoyoutorecommendmyselfastheactivityprompterofWorldMeteorologicalDay.Allowmetointroducemyselffirst.MynameisLiHua.Iamaneleven-year-oldmiddleschoolstudentwhoisinterestedinprotectingourearth.Inmyopinion,hereissomethingwecandotomakeourworldbetter.Firstofall,thekeytothisistostartwithsmallthingsinourdailylife.Forexample,wecanoffertodothecleaningactively,stoplittering,andstarttosavewaterandelectricity.What’smore,thewayoftravelingshouldalsobetakenintoconsideration.Tobespecific,choosingthegreentravelisanexcellentidea,whichmeanswalkingorridingabiketoschool,aswellastakingthebusinsteadofacar.Inaddition,ifIbecometheprompter,Iwillholdeventslikespeechcontesttoraisepeople’sawareness.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldgivemethechance.Lookforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yourstruly,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一封書信作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)主要以“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”為主；③提示：寫作話題已給出，考生應(yīng)注意準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等，清楚連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想，進(jìn)而完成寫作任務(wù)。[寫作步驟]第一步，首先直接說明想要推薦自己為氣象日活動(dòng)推廣人的人選；第二步，從興趣愛好和認(rèn)為可以做哪些事來保護(hù)地球等方面介紹推薦自己的原因；第三步，總結(jié)并希望自己能夠有幸被選上。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①Inmyopinion

在我看來；②savewaterandelectricity

節(jié)約用水和用電；③aswellas

也，以及；④Inaddition除此之外。[高分句型]①Iamaneleven-year-oldmiddleschoolstudentwhoisinterestedinprotectingourearth.（beinterestedin對……感興趣；定語從句）；②Tobespecific,choosingthegreentravelisanexcellentidea,whichmeanswalkingorridingabiketoschool,aswellastakingthebusinsteadofacar.（Tobespecific具體地說；動(dòng)名詞作主語；定語從句）；③Inaddition,ifIbecometheprompter,Iwillholdeventslikespeechcontesttoraisepeople'sawareness.（條件狀語從句）三假如你是Jack，你在某網(wǎng)站上看到一家志愿者組織招聘志愿者。你對此很感興趣，請你根據(jù)下面的提示，寫一封郵件申請一項(xiàng)志愿者工作。志愿者工作：1.Toworkinanoldpeople’shouse2.Tohelpkidsinanafter-schoolprogram提示問題：1.Whichvolunteerjobdoyouwanttodo?(二選一)2.Whatareyourhobbies?3.Whatcanyoudotohelppeople?4.Whydoyouwanttodothevolunteerjob?5.Whenareyoufreetodothejob?要求：1.大小寫，標(biāo)點(diǎn)書寫規(guī)范，語句通順，內(nèi)容全面，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，卷面整潔。2.70詞左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearSirorMadam,I’dliketovolunteerto___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Jack【答案】例文：DearSirorMadam,I’dliketovolunteertoworkinanoldpeople’shome.Inmyfreetime,Iliketodanceandsingsongs.AndI’malsogoodatplayingchess.Icanplaychessorsingsongstocheertheoldpeopleup.Icanalsowashclothesorcleantheirrooms.IthinkwhenIdosomethingforthem,Ifeelhappy.IcandothevolunteerjobonFridayeveningorattheweekends.Ilookforwardtoyourreply.Yours,Jack【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇電子郵件，申請志愿者工作；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏信息提示的內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，并且突出寫作的要點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。直接說明要做哪個(gè)志愿者工作；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。重點(diǎn)介紹了你的愛好，你能做什么及可以做志愿者的時(shí)間；第三步，書寫結(jié)語。表達(dá)希望成功入選的美好愿望。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①begoodat擅長②cheertheoldpeopleup讓老人振作起來③lookforwardto期待[高分句型]①Icanplaychessorsingsongstocheertheoldpeopleup.（todo表目的）②IthinkwhenIdosomethingforthem,Ifeelhappy.（賓語從句）四假設(shè)你是Frank，在某英文網(wǎng)站上看到招募一批暑假志愿者（volunteer），幫助小學(xué)生度過一個(gè)有意義的暑假。請根據(jù)表格的信息，寫一封自薦信。Personality(性格)kind,helpful...Abilities(能力)●knowhowtotalkwithchildrenwell●...Plans●teachthemtosingEnglishsongs●...注意：1.文章需包括表格所有內(nèi)容，并適當(dāng)拓展；2.詞數(shù)80詞左右（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名或校名。DearSmith,IamFrank,amiddl