高中英語(yǔ)北師大版選擇性必修一UNIT 2 Period 7　Writing-A Life Story

Period7Writing—ALifeStorySUCCESSUNIT2細(xì)讀文本寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)實(shí)踐演練細(xì)讀文本Readthearticleandchoosethebestanswer.1.WhywasLangPingnamed“IronHammer”？A.BecausesheplayedonChina’snationalvolleyballteamduringthe1980s.B.Becausesheplayedvolleyballinastrongandpowerfulstyle.C.Becausesheledherteamtowinaseriesofsuccess.D.Becausesheplayedvolleyballwithahammerinherhand.Activity1

Readforsomedetails.√2.WhenLangPingwasacoach，

.A.shefirstworkedasacoachforChina’snationalteamB.shewenttoAmericain1995C.theChinawomen’snationalteamwasverystronginthe1990sD.theChinawomen’snationalteamwonthegoldmedalinthe2015

WorldCup√3.WhichisNOTthereasonwhypeoplelikeLangPing?A.Shewascommittedtovolleyballcareer.B.Shehascontributedalottothevolleyballsport.C.ShehasimprovedtherelationshipbetweenChinaandItaly.D.Shetookapositiveattitudetowhatshemetandwasreadytotakeon

challenges.√4.HowdoestheauthorintroduceLangPing?A.Bytimeorder.B.Bygivingexamples.C.Bygivingcomments.D.Byintroducinghercontributions.√Ⅰ.Matchthemainideawitheachparagraph.Activity2

Readforthestructures.Ⅱ.Fillintheblanksaccordingtothearticle.introductionImportantlifeexperiencesMajorawards/achievementscommentsⅠ.Towritealifestoryofaperson，weshouldintroducesomespecialortypicalinformationofhim/herinanorderoftime.Readthepassageagainandfindoutthetimepointsandwhathappenedtohim/heratthattime.______________________________________________________________Activity3

Readforsomegoodsentences.答案

①LangPingplayedonChina’snationalvolleyballteamduringthe1980s.②LangPingwasamemberoftheteamwhentheyachievedaseriesofsuccessincludinggoldmedalsatthe1984Olympics，the1982WorldChampionshipandthe1981and1985WorldCups.③Afterretiringasanathletein1986

shehasbeensuccessfulasavolleyballcoachintheUnitedStatesandItaly.④In1995，shereturnedtobecomethecoachofthewomen’snationalteamwhentheteamwasstruggling.⑤Underherleadership，theteamcamebacktothetop，winningthe2015WorldCup.⑥Thatyear，LangPingwasgiventheBestCoachandtheSportsSpecialContributionawards.⑦Shewasalsonamed“TouchingChinaPersonality”of2016.Ⅱ.FindoutsometypicalphrasesdescribingLangPinginthepassage.答案

①oneofChina’smostrecognisedathletes②themostpopularfigure③strongandpowerfulplayingstyle④herpositiveattitudeandherabilitytotakeonchallenges⑤successfulasavolleyballcoach⑥commitmenttoChinesevolleyball⑦theBestCoach⑧hugeinfluenceonthesportofvolleyball返回寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)本單元的寫(xiě)作任務(wù)是寫(xiě)一篇人物傳記。在描寫(xiě)人物時(shí)，我們可以通過(guò)以下三個(gè)部分來(lái)展開(kāi)：第一部分：先總體介紹人物，然后介紹人物的出生年月、地點(diǎn)、家庭背景或外形特征等。第二部分：列出人物的品質(zhì)和個(gè)性，并以具體的事例進(jìn)行說(shuō)明，在選取事例時(shí)，應(yīng)該選取典型事例，抓住人物特征；列舉人物的主要經(jīng)歷、事跡或成就。第三部分：介紹人們對(duì)人物的評(píng)價(jià)或談?wù)撃愕膫€(gè)人感受。[常用表達(dá)]1.Bornin...，he/sheisa...2.Heisa...(外形特征)personwith...3.Whenhewasin...，hewasenthusiasticabout...anddeterminedto...4.Hehasatalentfor...5.In...(具體年份)，hegraduatedwithhonor/wonagoldmedalforthefirsttime.6.Heappliedhimselfto/wascommittedto...7.Hemadeagreatcontributionto...andwashonoredasoneofthemostimportant...8.Hesetsagoodexampleto...andheisrespectedandadmiredbymanypeople.9.Notonlyishe/shepassionateaboutscience，butalsohe/sheis...10.Soharddoesheworkthathedevotesalmostallhislifetimeto...返回實(shí)踐演練請(qǐng)以“MadameCurie”為題，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，要點(diǎn)如下：1.居里夫人(MadameCurie)為世界著名的女科學(xué)家，1867年出生于波蘭一個(gè)教師家庭，卒于1934年。2.從小愛(ài)學(xué)習(xí)并希望成為科學(xué)家，24歲赴巴黎就讀于巴黎大學(xué)，學(xué)習(xí)刻苦。3.一生致力于科學(xué)研究，于1903年和1911年兩次分別獲諾貝爾物理學(xué)獎(jiǎng)和諾貝爾化學(xué)獎(jiǎng)。4.居里夫人將作為一位偉大的女性永遠(yuǎn)為人們所懷念。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。第一步審題謀篇[審題]寫(xiě)作要求是寫(xiě)一篇人物傳記。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1.確定文體：這是一篇說(shuō)明文，寫(xiě)作中應(yīng)注意常規(guī)格式；2.主體時(shí)態(tài)：介紹人物經(jīng)歷以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主；寫(xiě)評(píng)價(jià)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主；3.主體人稱：第三人稱。[謀篇]第一段：介紹居里夫人的身份和生卒時(shí)間。第二段：簡(jiǎn)單介紹居里夫人的學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷，重點(diǎn)介紹她的成就。第三段：人們對(duì)于居里夫人的評(píng)價(jià)。第二步遣詞造句[核心詞匯]1.出生于……

______________2.下定決心做 ___________________3.被錄取；被接收 __________________4.取得好結(jié)果，取得成功 ________5.致力于 ___________________________6.被授予……

_____________7.被譽(yù)為/認(rèn)可為 _______________________8.對(duì)……做出巨大貢獻(xiàn) _________________________bebornto/intobedeterminedtodobeadmittedinto/topayoffapply/devote/commitoneselftobeawarded...behonored/recognisedasmakegreatcontributionsto[連詞成句]1.居里夫人是一位世界著名的科學(xué)家，她于1867年出生在波蘭的一個(gè)教師家庭，1934年去世。MadameCurieis

，andshe______________________________inPolandin1867anddiedin1934.2.在她還是一名學(xué)生時(shí)，她很勤奮，并決心成為一名科學(xué)家。Whenshewasaschoolgirl，shewasdiligentand_____________________________.aworld-famousscientistwasborntoateacher’sfamilydeterminedtobecomeascientist3.她一生致力于科學(xué)研究，1903年獲得諾貝爾物理學(xué)獎(jiǎng)，1911年獲得諾貝爾化學(xué)獎(jiǎng)。

andwasawardedNobelPrizeinPhysicsin1903andNobelPrizeinChemistryin1911.4.因?yàn)樗龑?duì)科學(xué)做出了巨大的貢獻(xiàn)，她被譽(yù)為最偉大的科學(xué)家和女性之一。Because

，she__________________________oneofthegreatestscientistsandwomen.Sheapplied/devoted/committedherselftoscientificresearchshehasmadegreatcontributionstoscienceishonored/recognisedas第三步句式升級(jí)1.用同位語(yǔ)把句1轉(zhuǎn)化為一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.用過(guò)去分詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)改寫(xiě)句2。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.用現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)改寫(xiě)句3。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________MadameCurie，aworld-famousscientist，wasborntoateacher’sfamilyinPolandin1867anddiedin1934.Determinedtobecomeascientist，shewasdiligentwhenshewasaschoolgirl.Havingapplied/devoted/committedherselftoscientificresearch，shewasawardedNobelPrizeinPhysicsin1903andNobelPrizeinChemistryin1911.4.把句4升級(jí)為定語(yǔ)從句。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Shehasmadegreatcontributionstoscience，f