高中英語(yǔ)人教版選修7Unit3UndertheSeaperiod4教案2

PeriodFourWriting寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)抱怨信屬于書(shū)信的一種，要求簡(jiǎn)潔、清楚、易懂。英文信一般由稱(chēng)呼、正文、結(jié)束語(yǔ)、署名組成。稱(chēng)呼(Greeting)：收信人的稱(chēng)呼寫(xiě)在左上角，頂格寫(xiě)。寫(xiě)給熟悉的人用逗號(hào)(，)。例如：DearAuntie，。正文(Body)：此為信的主體部分，從稱(chēng)呼的下一行寫(xiě)起。抱怨信的正文一般先說(shuō)明抱怨的原因，然后提出要求。應(yīng)特別注意使用委婉語(yǔ)氣的句子，例如：Wouldyoupleasenotmakesomuchnoise？(請(qǐng)你別弄出那么大的噪音好嗎？)Wouldyoumindnotstandingthere？(請(qǐng)你別站在那兒好嗎？)結(jié)束語(yǔ)(Closing)：抱怨信的結(jié)束語(yǔ)一般寫(xiě)在正文的下方，另起一行。常見(jiàn)的結(jié)束語(yǔ)有：Yourssincerely；Yourstruly等。署名(Signature)：寫(xiě)信人自己的姓名，寫(xiě)在結(jié)束語(yǔ)的下面一行。常用句式1．It’sagreatpitythatwefoundthereissomethingwrongwith...2．Ihopethatmyproblemwillgetyourkindconsideration.3．Iamsuretherearetechnicalorman-madeerrorsinvolved.4．Ihopeyoucanmakeaninvestigationintothismatterassoonaspossible.5．Iamwritingtomakeaplainton...6．Ifitisnotproperlysettled，Iwouldaskyoutogivemymoneyback，orIwouldplaintotheconcernedauthorities.7．Oneannoyingaspectofyourserviceis...8．Ihavebeenpleasedwithyourservicesforyears，butnowIfeelverydisappointed.9．Iwishtoexpressmydissatisfactionabout...10．Itwouldbehighlyappreciatedifyoucould...典題示例假設(shè)你是李華，上個(gè)星期天去市圖書(shū)館看書(shū)時(shí)發(fā)現(xiàn)了一些問(wèn)題。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示，用英語(yǔ)給圖書(shū)館館長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)一封100詞左右的信，反映情況。1．新書(shū)太少；2．書(shū)架上的書(shū)比較混亂；3．管理員工作時(shí)彼此閑聊，讀者無(wú)法安心看書(shū)；4．閱覽室的一盞燈壞了，桌椅有些也被損壞。注意：1.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；2．信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。寫(xiě)作步驟Step1審題謀篇寫(xiě)作要求是寫(xiě)一封抱怨信，寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意下面幾點(diǎn)：1．確定文體：這是一封抱怨信。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意書(shū)信的寫(xiě)作特點(diǎn)；2．主體時(shí)態(tài)：文章應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主；3．主體人稱(chēng)：由于是向市圖書(shū)館指出存在的問(wèn)題，所以人稱(chēng)應(yīng)該以第三人稱(chēng)為主。Step2聯(lián)想詞匯1．令人不愉快的事情2．發(fā)表我的觀點(diǎn)3．管理圖書(shū)館4．按正確順序5．提供好的服務(wù)6．集中注意力于Step3句式升級(jí)1．首先，架子上新書(shū)不多，其中大多數(shù)現(xiàn)在都不流行了。First，therearenotenoughnewbooksontheshelvesand.(and并列句)First，therearenotenoughnewbooksontheshelves,.(定語(yǔ)從句)2．其次，一些書(shū)沒(méi)有按正確順序分類(lèi)，使得讀者很難快速找到想要的書(shū)。Second，somebooksarenotsortedinproperorder.whatwewantquickly.(兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句)Second，somebooksarenotsortedinproperorder，whatwewantquickly.(定語(yǔ)從句)Step4連句成篇DearSir/Madam，LastSunday，Iwenttodosomereadinginthelibrary.Ifoundsomethingunpleasant.Therefore，I’dliketovoicemyopinions，hopingitwillbeofhelptoyoutomanagethelibrary.Yours，LiHua

答案Step21．somethingunpleasant2.voicemyopinions3.managethelibrary4.inproperorder5.offergoodservice6．concentrateonStep31．mostofthemarenotpopulartoday；mostofwhicharenotpopulartoday2．Itmakesitdifficultforusreaderstofind；whichmakesitdifficultforusreaderstofindStep4DearSir/Madam，LastSunday，Iwenttodosomereadinginthelibrary.Ifoundsomethingunpleasant.Therefore，I’dliketovoicemyopinions，hopingitwillbeofhelptoyoutomanagethelibrary.First，therearenotenoughnewbooksontheshelves,mostofwhicharenotpopulartoday.Second，somebooksarenotsortedinproperorder，whichmakesitdifficultforusreaderstofindwhatwewantquickly.Third，theassistantsdon’toffergoodservice.Theyarechattingwhilewearereadingquietly，whichmakesitdifficultforustoconcentrateonbooks.Moreover，thereissomethingwrongwi