Unit 4 《Writing-Write a Summary of a News Report》課件2023-2024學年高一上學期英語人教版（2019）必修第一冊

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寫作指導技法點撥文體分析把握寫作動脈本單元的寫作任務是寫新聞報道的摘要。寫此類文章時要注意以下幾點：1.快速把握新聞報道的主要內容，找出新聞的六要素。2.以自然段為基礎進行概括會防止遺漏信息并判斷主要信息。3.要注意包含關鍵的支撐性信息，過于細節(jié)的信息要略過。4.新聞報道中會有一些核心詞，這些詞是報道的核心，寫概要時不必替換。5.新聞報道的時態(tài)一般為過去時，寫概要時，要以一般過去時為主；表達對事件的預測可用一般現(xiàn)在時或一般將來時。新聞報道一般使用第三人稱，所以概要也用第三人稱。常用表達1.Thisarticle/passagemainlytells(astory)about...2.Thispassagemainlydealswith/discusses/explores...3.Thisarticlefocusesonthetopicsof...4.Thisessaypresentsknowledgethat...5.Thispaperprovides/givesanoverviewof...6.Inthispassage(about...)，theauthor...7.Theauthorbegantheessay/passagebytelling/presenting...8.First/Firstly/Inthebeginning/Inthefirstpart，theauthorargues/explains/mentions/states/pointsout(that)...返回9.Secondly/Next/Furtheron/Then/Inthenextpart/Inthemainpart，theauthorgoesonwith...10.Finally，theauthorstressesthat...寫作訓練弄清文路寫作妙筆生花閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內容寫一篇60詞左右的內容概要。An8.2-magnitudeearthquakestruckoffthecoastofnorthernChilelateonTuesday，cuttingpowerandleadingtosmalllandslidesandatsunami.Fourmenandonewomandied—twowhosufferedheartattacksandthreewhowerecrushed(壓死).About300prisonersescapedfromthenorthernportcityofIquiqueintheimmediateaftershock.Thequakestruckatabout8：46p.m.localtime，some60milesnorthwestofIquique.Ithadadepthof12.5miles.Chile’sNationalEmergencyOfficeaskedcoastalresidentstoleaveforsafeplaces.“Thefactis，wewillknowtheextentofthedamageastimegoesbyandwhenweinspecttheareasinthelightofday，”Chile’sPresidentMichelleBacheletsaidearlyonWednesday.“Thecountryhasfacedthesefirstemergencyhoursverywell.”ResidentsintheportcityofAntofagastawalkedcalmlythroughthestreetstohighergroundastrafficbecameheavyinsomeplaces.“Manypeoplearefearfulafterexperiencingthepowerfulearthquakein2010，sotheyimmediatelyrushedtohighergroundwhentheyheardthetsunamiwarning，”saidagovernmentofficial.“Therehavebeenlotsofaftershocksandcommunicationshavebeencutoffinmanyoftheaffectedareas.Sopeoplearewaitinginthedarkhills，notknowingwhatistocome，andhopingtheywillbeabletoreturntotheirhomessafely.”ThePacificTsunamiWarningCentersentoutseveraltsunamiwarnings，butcalledoffallofthembyearlyWednesday.TsunamiwavesofmorethansixfeetcausedbytheearthquakewashedashoreonthecoastofPisagua.Iquique，withapopulationofmorethan200,000，sawseven-footwaves.審題謀篇審題本文的要求是寫一篇關于智利地震的新聞報道的摘要。寫作時要注意：1.確定文體：新聞報道的摘要。2.主體時態(tài)：以一般過去時為主。3.主體人稱：以第三人稱為主。謀篇要點1：地震發(fā)生的時間、地點；要點2：地震導致的結果：電力中斷、人員傷亡等；要點3：余震導致的結果；要點4：地震導致了海嘯。遣詞造句核心詞匯1.襲擊2.電力中斷3.余震4.切斷5.超過_____________________________________________strikepowercutaftershockcutoffover/morethan連詞成句1.一場8.2級的地震在當?shù)貢r間晚上8：46襲擊了智利北部海岸。(strike)___________________________________________________________________________________2.這場地震導致了電力中斷、五人死亡。(cause)_____________________________________________3.在很多地震災區(qū)通信中斷。(cutoff)__________________________________________________________4.地震導致了六英尺多高的海嘯波浪。(cause)____________________________________________________________An8.2-magnitudeearthquakestruckoffthecoastofnorthernChileat8：46p.m.localtime.Theearthquakecausedpowercutsandfivedeaths.Communicationswerecutoffinmanyoftheearthquake-hitareas.Tsunamiwavesofmorethansixfeetwerecausedbytheearthquake.5.這些海浪席卷了皮薩瓜沿岸。(wash)_____________________________________________ThesewaveswashedashoreonthecoastofPisagua.句式升級1.用非謂語動詞連接句1和句2。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.用非謂語動詞連接句4和句5。__________________________________________________________________________________________An8.2-magnitudeearthquakestruckoffthecoastofnorthernChileat8：46p.m.localtime，causingpowercutsandfivedeaths.TsunamiwavesofmorethansixfeetcausedbytheearthquakewashedashoreonthecoastofPisagua.組句成篇用適當?shù)倪^渡詞語，把以上詞匯和句式，組成一篇60詞左右的英語短文。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考范文An8.2-magnitudeearthquakestruckoffthecoastofnorthernChileat8：46p.m.localtime，causingpowercutsandfivedeaths.Therewerelotsofaftershocksandcommunicationswerecutoffinmanyoftheearthquake-hitareas.TsunamiwavesofmorethansixfeetcausedbytheearthquakewashedashoreonthecoastofPisagua.返回Thebestclassroomintheworldisatthefeetofanelderlyperson.世界上最好的課堂在老人的腳下.Havingachildfallasleepinyourarmsisoneofthemostpeacefulfeelingintheworld.讓一個孩子在你的臂彎入睡,你會體會到世間最安寧的感覺.Beingkindismoreimportantthanbeingright.善良比真理更重要.Youshouldnevers