Unit 1《 Writing-Write a letter of advice》課件2023-2024學年高一上學期英語人教版（2019）必修第一冊

Writing—WritealetterofadviceUnit1TeenageLife欄目索引寫作指導話題詞匯話題句式典例展示寫作指導建議信是寫信人向收信人對某事提出的建議和忠告。建議信可能是寫給個人，也可能是寫給某個組織或機構，信的內(nèi)容要包括寫信的原因，建議的內(nèi)容，提出建議的理由。建議信要寫得簡明扼要、目的明確、具有合理性和說服力。具體寫作步驟一般是“三段式”，通常以firstly,secondly,thirdly或tobegin/startwith,then,later,lastbutnotleast等依次陳述建議，具體為：第一段：表明寫作意圖。陳述事由，簡單介紹自己，注意語氣。第二段：應該首先肯定對方的優(yōu)點，然后再寫需要改進的地方或針對具體情況提出具體的建議或忠告。注意千萬不要讓別人以為你是在投訴，而不是提建議。第三段：對提出的建議進行總結。要注意有禮貌，使讀者容易接受。話題詞匯feedbackn．反饋suggestionn.建議proposaln.建議venturev.冒昧做某事beneficialadj.有益的advisev.建議suggestv.建議recommendv.推薦，勸告wiseadj.明智的話題句式1．段首常用語(1)Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning...(2)Youhaveaskedformyadviceabout...andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.2．表達“建議”常用語(1)Ithinkthemostsuitable...foryouis...(2)Iwouldliketosuggestthat...(3)You'dbetter.../It'sbetterto...(4)AsfarasIamconcerned.../Inmyopinion...(5)Foronething...,foranother...(6)IfIwereyou,Iwould...(7)Itseemstomethatyoucould...3．段尾常用語(1)Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould...(2)Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.(3)Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestionspractical/useful/helpful.(4)Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.(5)Iwillbereadyforfurtherdiscussingthismatterintodetails.典例展示為了幫助中學生健康成長，某中學英文報開辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”專欄。假設你是該欄目的編輯Jamie，收到一封署名為Worried的求助信。信中該同學向你訴說了自己的困擾：近日容易發(fā)脾氣，使正常的學習和生活受到了影響。請用英文給該同學寫一封回信。內(nèi)容要點如下：1．表示理解并給予安慰；2．提出建議并說明理由。注意：1．詞數(shù)100個左右；2．信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關的信息；3．信的開頭與結尾已為你擬好，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：tempern．脾氣，情緒StepOne審題謀篇

體裁建議信話題對生活和學習的建議時態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時人稱第二人稱1．控制你的脾氣 ________________2．體育鍛煉 _______________3．有效的 ________4．去除 ________5．保持樂觀 ____________________6．積極的生活態(tài)度_________________________controlyourtemper

StepTwo詞匯運用

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1．完成句子①最重要的是學會控制你的脾氣Themostimportantthingis________________________________________________.②你不可能做或者說出你會后悔的事。Youmaynotdoorsay_______________________.to

StepThree句式表達learn

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③事實情況是人人都會有這樣的一段時期，在這期間事事不順，因此你不必擔心過多。______________isthateveryonewillhaveoneofthoseperiods________________________________________________________，soyoudon'thavetoworrymuch.The

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2．句式升級④用sothat/inorderthat合并句①和②。Themostimportantthingistolearntocontrolyourtemper________________youmaynotdoorsayanythingyou'llregret.⑤把句③用it改寫成主語從句。___________everyonewillhaveoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobegoingwrong，soyoudon'thavetoworrymuch.sothat/inorderthat

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StepFour連句成篇First，talktosomeoneyoutrustabouthowyoufeel.Thisisagoodwayoflettingyourangeroutwithouthurtingothersoryourself.Second，gooutdoorsandplayteamgameswithyourfriendsasphysicalexerciseisaneffectivewaytogetridofanger.Andthird，remainoptimisticabo