八年級英語上學(xué)期 書面表達解題要點及專項訓(xùn)練（解析版）

專題09書面表達解題要點及專項訓(xùn)練應(yīng)試策略1.審題目：要切中題意。看到考題后，先不要急于動筆，要仔細看清題目要求的內(nèi)容。在自己的頭腦中構(gòu)思出一個框架或畫面，確定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下筆，看懂題意，根據(jù)圖畫、圖表、提綱或短文提供的資料和信息來審題。審題要審格式、體裁、人物關(guān)系、故事情節(jié)、主體時態(tài)、活動時間、地點等。2.圈要點：防止遺漏要點。要點是給分的一個重要因素。為了防止寫作過程中遺漏要點，同學(xué)們要充分發(fā)揮自己的觀察力，把情景中給出的各個要點逐條列出。3.列提綱：為寫作做好準備。根據(jù)文章要點短文的中心思想將主要句型、關(guān)鍵詞記下，形成提綱。4.定基調(diào)：定出時態(tài)、人稱、順序、開頭、結(jié)尾。5.寫全文：寫短文時要做到以下六個方面：(1)避免使用漢語式英語，盡量使用自己熟悉的句型。幾種句型可交替使用，以避免重復(fù)和呆板。(2)多用簡單句型，記事、寫人一般都不需要復(fù)雜的句型。可適當(dāng)多使用陳述句、一般疑問句、祈使句和感嘆句。不用或少用非謂語或情態(tài)動詞等較復(fù)雜的句型。(3)注意語法、句法知識的靈活運用。1）語態(tài)、時態(tài)要準確無誤。 2）主謂語要一致，主語的人稱和數(shù)要和謂語一致。3）注意人稱代詞的賓格形式。 4）注意冠詞用法，例如：Heisanhoneststudent.中的an不能寫成a。5）注意拼寫、標點符號和大小寫，例如：receive,believe,fourteen,forty,ninth,restaurant等。(4)描寫人物時，要生動具體，例如：1）外表特征：tall,short,fat,thin,strong,weak,ordinary-looking等。2）服飾顏色：red,yellow,blue,white,green,brown,black等。3）內(nèi)心境界：glad,happy,sad,excited,anxious,interested等。4）感情描寫：love,like,hate,feel,laugh,cry,smile,shout等。5）動作描寫：come,go,get,have,take,bring,fetch等。(5)上下文要連貫。上下文的連貫性也是評分的一條原則，因此同學(xué)們應(yīng)把寫好的句子，根據(jù)故事情節(jié)，事情發(fā)生的先后次序（時間或空間），使用一些表示并列、遞進等過渡詞進行加工整理，使文章連貫、自然、流暢。同學(xué)們應(yīng)注意下面過渡的用法：1）表示并列關(guān)系的：and,aswellas,or…2）表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的：but,yet,however…3）表示時間關(guān)系的：when,while,after,before,then,afterthat…4）表示因果關(guān)系的：so,therefore,asaresult…5）表示目的的：inorderto,inorderthat,soasto,sothat…6）表示列舉的：forexample,suchas…7）表示總結(jié)性的：ingeneral,inall,inaword,generallyspeaking…(6)不會表達，另辟蹊徑。中考作文給分是以要點和語言準確度而定，不以文采打分。造句越簡單準確越好，造復(fù)合句容易出錯，容易被扣分，閱卷場上有句話：“錯誤面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到個別要點表達不出來或難以表達，可采用變通的辦法，化難為易，化繁為簡?？傊炀渥右_、得體、符合英語表達習(xí)慣。(6)改病句：認真檢查，改正錯誤。中考作文時，由于時間緊、內(nèi)容多，同學(xué)們出錯在所難免。因此，改錯這一環(huán)節(jié)必不可少。中考作文評卷是根據(jù)要點、語言準確性、上下文的連貫性來給分，根據(jù)錯誤多少來扣分。因此，中考時花幾分鐘時間用來檢查錯誤顯得尤為重要。檢查錯誤應(yīng)從以下幾個方面入手：1）格式是否有錯。2）拼寫有無錯誤。3）語言是否用錯。4）時態(tài)、語態(tài)錯誤。5）標點錯誤。6）人稱是否用錯。注意事項書面表達要特別注意書寫工整，卷面整潔。閱卷老師工作量大，時間緊，可想而知。書寫是否工整，卷面是否整潔與得分高低直接有關(guān)。1.（23-24八年級上·浙江臺州·期末）新年將至，校刊開展以“人間煙火撫人心，千絲萬縷家鄉(xiāng)(Hometown)情”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請你結(jié)合自己的生活實際，根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語短文投稿。MyLovelyHometownWhatdoyoulikebestaboutyourhometown?(food,place,…)Whatimprovementdoesyourhometownneed?(environment,traffic(交通)...)Whatcanyoudotomakeitabetterplace?…要求：(1)內(nèi)容包括所有要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，要求語句通順、意思連貫。(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名、校名。(3)詞數(shù)：80詞（文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。MyLovelyHometown___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyLovelyHometownBeijingismyhometown.ItisthecapitalofChina.Therearemanyplacesofinterestinmyhometown.IliketheSummerPalacebestbecauseIthinkitisverybeautiful.AndIlikeBeijingduckbestanditisdelicious.However,Ithinkmyhometownalsoneedstotakemeasurestoimprovethetraffic.Therearesomanycarsontheroadthatwecan’tgotoschoolquickly.What’smore,theairpollutionisbecomingworseandworse,soitistimetodosomething.Iwillaskmyparentsnottodrivecarssooften.IcanridebikestoschoolandIcanalsocleanuptheparksinmyfreetime.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時；③提示：根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容介紹自己的家鄉(xiāng)，適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹喜歡家鄉(xiāng)的什么；第二步，介紹家鄉(xiāng)需要改善什么；第三步，介紹你可以做什么讓家鄉(xiāng)成為一個更好的地方。[亮點詞匯]①thecapitalof……的首都②takemeasures采取措施③cleanup打掃[高分句型]①IliketheSummerPalacebestbecauseIthinkitisverybeautiful.(because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句)②Therearesomanycarsontheroadthatwecan’tgotoschoolquickly.(so...that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句)2.（22-23八年級上·浙江金華·期末）假如你是李華，你的英國朋友Lucy發(fā)來郵件向你征求學(xué)好中文的建議。請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容給她回復(fù)郵件。MyadviceReasonslistentoChinesesongsimprovelistening...readaChinesebookeverymonthbuildupvocabulary;learnaboutChineseculture(文化)...…………注意：(1)短文內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的所有信息，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名等相關(guān)信息；(3)詞數(shù)：80~100；短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearLucy,Gladtohearfromyou.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopeyou’llhavefunlearningChinese.Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearLucy,Gladtohearfromyou.Inyourlastletter,youaskedmehowtolearnChinesewell.Hereismyadviceforyou.First,youcanlistentoChinesesongssothatyoucanimproveyourlistening.Second,readaChinesebookeverymonth.ItcanbuildupvocabularyandlearnaboutChineseculture.Third,youcanlistenChinesesongsandwatchTVprograms.Youcanlearnmorenewwordsbythem.Lastbutnotleast,toimproveyourspeakingskills,youcancommunicatewithlocalpeople.Hopeyou’llhavefunlearningChinese.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出“向?qū)Ψ教岢鰧W(xué)好中文”的建議；第二步，根據(jù)提示材料，提出自己的建議；第三步，表達希望。[亮點詞匯]①buildup建立②communicatewith與……溝通③havefundoingsth樂于做某事[高分句型]①Hereismyadviceforyou.（倒裝句）②First,youcanlistentoChinesesongssothatyoucanimproveyourlistening（sothat引導(dǎo)目的狀語從句）3.（23-24八年級上·山東濰坊·期末）下面是110熱線記錄下的一份交通事故報告表，請根據(jù)表格中提供的信息，用第三人稱將所發(fā)生的事故寫成一篇短文。提示：AccidentAmotorbikehitacar.Themotorbikewasbroken(損壞).Dateandtime6:30pm,October18thPlaceCambridgeRoadReasonRainyWeatherVictims(受害者)Jim(thedriverofthecar):OK,butfeltafraid.Nick(thedriverofthemotorbike):Hisrightarmwashurt.ActionThepolicearrivedat6:35pmandtookNicktothehospitalnearbyat6:50pm.要求：1.語句通順，語法正確，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.不少于80詞，首句已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。TherewasanaccidentonCambridgeRoadat6:30pmonOctober18th.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文TherewasanaccidentonCambridgeRoadat6:30p.m.onOctober18th.Amotorbikehitacarandthemotorbikewasbroken.That’sbecauseitwasarainyday.Asweknow,rainydaysalwaysbringaccidents.JimwasthedriverofthecarandNick,whoserightarmwashurt,wasthedriverofthemotorbike.WhenJimsawthebrokenmotorbikeandpainfulNick,hewasafraid.Fiveminuteslater,thepolicearrivedandtookNicktothehospitalnearbyat6:50p.m.Asastudent,everyoneofusshouldfollowthetrafficrules.Weshouldpayattentiontothetrafficaroundus,especiallyonrainydays.Becarefulwhileyouarewalkingorridingabikeontheroad.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文為一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般過去時”和“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：內(nèi)容要點已給出，注意不要遺漏，以第三人稱將所發(fā)生的事故寫成一篇短文。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹事故發(fā)生的時間及地點；第二步，具體介紹事故發(fā)生的起因、經(jīng)過及結(jié)果；第三步，呼吁人們遵守交通規(guī)則。[亮點詞匯]①trafficrules交通規(guī)則②payattentionto注意[高分句型]①That’sbecauseitwasarainyday.（because引導(dǎo)的表語從句）②JimwasthedriverofthecarandNick,whoserightarmwashurt,wasthedriverofthemotorbike.（whose引導(dǎo)的定語從句）③WhenJimsawthebrokenmotorbikeandpainfulNick,hewasafraid.（when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句）4.（23-24八年級上·海南?？凇て谀┠秤⑽木W(wǎng)站正在開展以“我最喜愛的中國城市”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，介紹你最喜愛的一座中國城市的概況（如：地理位置、人口、氣候等）、你喜歡它的原因、最佳游覽時間以及注意事項等。提示：1.Whatisyourfavouritecitylike?2.Whydoyoulikeit?3.Whenisthebesttimetovisitit?4....注意：1.包括所給提示內(nèi)容，并適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)；2.語言表達準確，語意通順、連貫；3.詞數(shù)100左右。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:MyfavouritecityisHaikou.ItisinthesouthofChinawithapopulationofabout2.9million.It’sasmallbutverybeautifulcity.ThebestthingtodoinHaikouistovisitQilou.YoucanknowalotabouthistoryandcultureofHaikouandatthesametime,youcanenjoydeliciouslocalfoodthere.Haikouisagoodplaceforfoods,soyoumusttryseafoodanddifferentkindsofsnackssuchas,Qingbuliang,Hainannoodlesandsoon.NotfarawayfromQilou,youcanseeZhonglouwhichisthelandmarkbuildinginHaikou.IfyouwalkalongtheseasidenearZhonglou,youcanseemodernbuildings:CenturyBridgeandYundongLibrary.TheweatherinHaikouisfineallyearround.Takeyourswimmingclothesbecauseyoucangoswimminginthesea,eveninDecember.SoyoucancometoHaikouanytimeyoulike.WelcometoHaikou.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，要求根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容進行寫作，適當(dāng)添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明自己最喜歡的城市是海口；第二步，具體介紹該城市是什么樣的，為什么喜歡它；第三步，介紹最佳參觀時間。[亮點詞匯]①inthesouthof在……的南部②atthesametime同時③differentkindsof不同種類的[高分句型]①YoucanknowalotabouthistoryandcultureofHaikouandatthesametime,youcanenjoydeliciouslocalfoodthere.（并列句）②IfyouwalkalongtheseasidenearZhonglou,youcanseemodernbuildings:CenturyBridgeandYundongLibrary.（條件狀語從句）5.（23-24八年級上·山東臨沂·期末）春晚歌曲《我和2035有個約》里唱到：“奇跡不斷地涌現(xiàn)，期待那時再相見，我和2035有個約，約在歡呼雀躍那一天，我親愛的祖國更加美麗和諧，昂揚屹立新世界?！庇H愛的同學(xué)們，假如你是李華，請以“MyLifein2035”為題暢想未來生活。請從以下幾個方面進行陳述。1.Whatwillyoubein2035?2.Wherewillyoulive?3.Whatwillyoudoinyourfreetime?4.Whatwilltheenvironment,cities,schoolsorotherthingswillbelike?要求：1.文中要包括問題所提到的內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，詞數(shù)80左右；2.語言通順，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；3.文中不要出現(xiàn)任何真實人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyLifein2035

Itisreallyhardtoimaginewhatmylifewillbelikeintheyear2035.ButI’msureitwillbegreatlydifferentfromwhatitisnow.

Iwillbeacomputerprogrammerandliveinaglasshouse.Allmyworkwillbedoneonlineathome.Iwillhavetworobotsandtheywillhelpmewiththehousework.Theywillcookthemeals,dothecleaningandevenbeabletobemydriver.Inmyfreetime,Iwilltravelallovertheworldbyhigh-speedtrainanditwillbefasterthantheplane.Inordertosavepaperandprotecttheenvironment,Iwillonlyreade-books.Therewillbelesspollutionandmoretrees.Thecitieswillbemorebeautiful.Studentswon’tgotoschool.They’llstudyathomeoncomputers.Peoplewillhavemorefreetimebecausetherewillbefewerthingstodo.

Idon’tthinkmylifein2035isadream.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：一般將來時；③提示：寫作提示已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要漏寫對環(huán)境、城市、學(xué)校的暢想，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使上下文連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，直切主題。通過說明2035年的生活將不同于現(xiàn)在的生活，引出下文對未來生活的具體描寫；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從“職業(yè)、住所、空閑活動、環(huán)境、城市、學(xué)校”等方面暢想未來的生活；第三步，書寫結(jié)語。表示相信自己對未來生活的暢想不會是夢。[亮點詞匯]①bedifferentfrom不同于②helpsb.withsth.在某方面幫助某人③beabletodosth.能夠做某事④allovertheworld全世界⑤inorderto為了[高分句型]①ButI’msureitwillbegreatlydifferentfromwhatitisnow.（賓語從句）②Peoplewillhavemorefreetimebecausetherewillbefewerthingstodo.（原因狀語從句）③Idon’tthinkmylifein2035isnotadream.（賓語從句）6.（23-24八年級上·河北石家莊·期末）自主學(xué)習(xí)，是學(xué)生打開知識大門的金鑰匙。學(xué)校英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“自主學(xué)習(xí)（autonomouslearning）”為主題的征文活動。假如你李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勀愫倨陂g將如何進行自主學(xué)習(xí)，以及這樣做的原因。提示詞語：makeatimetable,ask...forhelp,astrongwill,goal,keeptrying提示問題：·Whatwillyoudotobeanautonomouslearnerthiswintervacation?·Whywillyoustartautonomouslearning?注意：1.語法正確，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范，要點齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的地名、校名和人名；3.字數(shù)80左右，文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。MyAutonomousLearningPlanforWinterVacationIwillstartautonomouslearningthiswintervacation.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Iwillstartautonomouslearningthiswintervacation.Firstofall,Iwillmakeavacationplanandputituponthewall.Maybeit’sbetterformetostartwithsmalltasks,likereadingEnglishbooksfor30minuteseveryday.Second,Iwillsetatimetableformydailyactivitiestohelpmemakefulluseoftime.What’smore,ifIhavedifficultiesinlearning,IwillaskmyteachersorfriendsforhelponWeChat.Inordertoimprovemylearningefficiency,Iamgoingtostudywithmyfriendstogether.IbelieveIcanbenefitalotfromautonomouslearning.Itwillnotonlyhelpmetodevelopastrongwill,butalsohelpmetoachievemygoals.Iwillkeeptryingtobeasuccessfulautonomouslearner.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材:本文是一篇記敘文，談?wù)撟约涸诤倨陂g將如何進行自主學(xué)習(xí)。②時態(tài):本文以“一般將來時”為主。③提示:題目要求根據(jù)提示描述談一下自己在寒假期間將如何進行自主學(xué)習(xí)，并說明原因。寫作時，注意不要遺漏要點，并注意適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，使文章連貫、通順。[寫作步驟]第一步，開篇點題。（已給出）第二步，根據(jù)所給要點，依次講述自己在寒假期間將如何進行自主學(xué)習(xí)。第三步，對自主學(xué)習(xí)的原因進行分析說明。[亮點詞匯]①firstofall首先②putup張貼③setatimetable制作時間表[高分句型]①Maybeit’sbetterformetostartwithsmalltasks,likereadingEnglishbooksfor30minuteseveryday（it作形式主語）②Second,Iwillsetatimetableformydailyactivitiestohelpmemakefulluseoftime.（不定式作目的狀語）7.（23-24八年級上·北京豐臺·期末）假如你是李華，你的英國筆友Peter想和你交流上學(xué)路上安全的問題，請你用英語給他回復(fù)一封郵件，談?wù)勀氵x擇何種交通方式上學(xué)及原因，并給出安全出行的建議。提示詞語：e-scooter（電動自行車）,underground,dangerous,fast提示問題：●Howdoyouoftengotoschool?●Whydoyougotoschoolinthisway?●Whatadvicecanyougivetokeepsafeontheroad?DearPeter,I’mveryhappytosharesomethingaboutkeepingsafeonthewaytoschoolwithyou.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ifyouwanttoknowmore,befreetoemailme.Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearPeter,I’mveryhappytosharesomethingaboutkeepingsafeonthewaytoschoolwithyou.Myhomeisfarfromtheschool,soIoftengotoschoolbyunderground.Ittakesabout8minutestogettoschool,becauseitisveryfast.Anditisverysafe.Sometimes,mymothertakesmetoschoolbye-scooter.Andit’sconvenient.Wemustobeythetrafficrulestokeepsafeontheroad.Nomatterwhichwayyouchoosetogotoschool,wemustrealizethesetrafficrulesaregoodtokeepourlivessafe.Accordingtothesetrafficrules,wecanliveasafeandhappylife.Ifyouwanttoknowmore,befreetoemailme.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：根據(jù)所給的提示問題完成寫作，介紹自己上學(xué)采用的交通方式，并給出原因，以及出行建議，可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，注意語句通順，避免語法和拼寫錯誤。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作目的（已給出）；第二步，介紹自己上學(xué)采用的交通方式和原因，并給出出行建議；第三步，書寫結(jié)語（已給出）。[亮點詞匯]①befarfrom離……遠②byunderground乘地鐵③obeythetrafficrules遵守交通規(guī)則[高分句型]①Ittakesabout8minutestogettoschool,becauseitisveryfast.（動詞不定式作主語；because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句）②Nomatterwhichwayyouchoosetogotoschool,wemustrealizethesetrafficrulesaregoodtokeepourlivessafe（nomatterwhich引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句）8.（23-24八年級上·北京朝陽·期末）假如你是李華，你的美國筆友Mike要來北京體驗中國文化（Chineseculture），他想向你了解來北京旅游的最佳時間、出行方式以及在京期間能體驗中國文化的活動。請根據(jù)他的問題回復(fù)郵件。提示詞語：autumn,comfortable,tea,BeijingOpera提示問題：●WhenisthebesttimetovisitBeijing?●HowdoItravelaroundBeijing?●WhatcanIdotoexperienceChinesecultureinBeijing?DearMike,I’mgladthatyouaregoingtovisitBeijingandexperienceChineseculture.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mlookingforwardtoseeingyouinBeijing.Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearMike, I’mgladthatyouaregoingtovisitBeijingandexperienceChineseculture.I’dliketogiveyousomeadvicetohelpyoumakeaperfecttravelplan.IthinkthatthebesttimetovisitBeijingisinautumnbecausetheweatheristhemostcomfortableduringthistimeoftheyear.Itisneithertoohotnortoocold.YoucanvisitBeijingbysubwayorbus.IfyouwanttoknowmoreaboutChineseculture,theQianmenareaisworthvisitingbecausetherearealotofthingstodo.YoucandrinkteaandenjoyBeijingOperainLaoSheTeahouse.Youwillalsohaveachancetotastemanydeliciouslocalfoodsthere.ThePalaceMuseumisagoodplacetovisit,too. I’mlookingforwardtoseeingyouinBeijing.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是電子郵件；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹參觀北京的最佳時間；第二步，介紹環(huán)游北京的交通方式；第三步，介紹如何在北京體驗中國文化。[亮點詞匯]①thebesttimetodosth做某事的最佳時間②beworthdoingsth值得做某事③lookforwardto期待[高分句型]IthinkthebesttimetovisitBeijingisinautumnbecausetheweatheristhemostcomfortableduringthistimeoftheyear.（because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句）9.（23-24八年級上·黑龍江綏化·期末）人們學(xué)英語的原因和方法各有不同，請以“MyViews(觀點)onLearningEnglish”為題寫一篇文章，說說你對學(xué)習(xí)英語的看法。寫作要求：1.不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實的名稱或?qū)W生的真實姓名。2.語句連貫，詞數(shù)80個左右。作文的標題已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。MyViewsonLearningEnglish___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyViewsonLearningEnglishNowadays,moreandmorepeoplelearnEnglishwithdifferentreasonsandways.Inmyopinion,learningEnglishgivesusawaytoseetheworld.Wecanlearnnotonlyalanguagebutalsoculturesofdifferentcountries.Soit’snecessaryforustolearnEnglish.AndhowcanweimproveourEnglish?Herearetwosuggestions.Firstofall,listentotheteachersandtakenotescarefullyinclass.Ifyouhaveanyquestions,youcanaskyourteacherforhelpafterclass.Moreover,useyourEnglishmoreoften.TherearemanywaystopracticeyourEnglish,suchastalkingwithyourclassmatesandwritingmoviereviewsinEnglish.Asthesayinggoes,“Practicemakesperfect.”【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：本文主要是介紹你對學(xué)習(xí)英語的看法，適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)。[寫作步驟]第一步，明確提出學(xué)習(xí)英語的好處；第二步，逐條闡述提高英語的方法建議。[亮點詞匯]①inmyopinion依我看來②notonly...butalso…不但……而且……③firstofall首先[高分句型]①Soit’snecessaryforustolearnEnglish.（it作形式主語）②Ifyouhaveanyquestions,youcangoandaskyourteacherafterclass.（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）③Asthesayinggoes,“Practicemakesperfect.”（引用諺語）10.（22-23八年級上·陜西渭南·期末）假如你是李華，你喜歡旅行，你下周一要從家鄉(xiāng)去北京旅游。你可以乘飛機、長途汽車或火車。請你分析每個交通方式的優(yōu)缺點，并給出最佳的旅行方式。請根據(jù)以上提示寫一篇英語短文。（提示信息：from…to…從……到……，themostcomfortable最舒服的，coach長途汽車）要求：1.參考提示信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)你的任何真實信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；4,詞數(shù)：不少于70詞。（開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。）IamLiHuaandIenjoytravelling.I’mgoingtovisitBeijingnextMonday.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文IamLiHuaandIenjoytravelling.I’mgoingtovisitBeijingnextMonday.Therearethreewaystotravel.Icangotherebyplane,coachortrain.Theplaneisthefastestbutitisthemostexpensiveway.Coachistheslowestandtheleastcomfortableway.Buttravellingbytrainischeaperandfasterthantakingthecoach.Atthesametime,travelingbytrainisthemostcomfortableway,becausewecanenjoythesceneryalongtheroad.SoIwillchoosetogotoBeijingbytrain.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹去北京有三種交通方式；第二步，詳細描述三種方式的優(yōu)缺點。[亮點詞匯]①theleastcomfortable最不舒服的②Atthesametime同時③choosetodo選擇做[高分句型]Atthesametime,travelingbytrainisthemostcomfortableway,becausewecanenjoythesceneryalongtheroad.（原因狀語從句）11.（22-23八年級上·河南南陽·期末）假如你是張麗，你校下周要舉行主題為“暢想未來城市”的英語演講比賽，你對此很感興趣。請你根據(jù)以下提示，以Thecityinthefuture為題寫一篇演講稿，為比賽做準備。寫作要求：1)文中須包含上圖提示的所有信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2)文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3)詞數(shù)90左右。文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：environment環(huán)境ThecityinthefutureHello,everybody!Myname’sZhangLi.Ithinkthecityinthefuturewillbebetter._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________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