新教材適用2024-2025學(xué)年高中英語(yǔ)Unit5MusicSectionⅣ寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)學(xué)案新人教版必修第二冊(cè)

SectionⅣ寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)寫(xiě)一篇與音樂(lè)有關(guān)的演講稿寫(xiě)作儲(chǔ)備閱讀教材P56演講稿，提煉演講稿的寫(xiě)作特點(diǎn)。Ⅰ.演講稿的特點(diǎn)演講稿屬于特別的說(shuō)明文或爭(zhēng)論文的范疇。Ⅱ.演講稿的架構(gòu)Ⅲ.演講稿的語(yǔ)言特點(diǎn)1．時(shí)態(tài)上多用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)；2．語(yǔ)言符合口語(yǔ)的特點(diǎn)，要有勸服力，真實(shí)、可信，能夠引起聽(tīng)眾的共鳴。Ⅳ.演講稿的常用詞匯1．deliveraspeech發(fā)表演講2．sharesth.withsb.與某人共享某事3．haveanimpactonsb.對(duì)某人有影響4．makeadifferencetoone'slife對(duì)某人的生活產(chǎn)生影響5．what'smore此外，另外Ⅴ.演講稿的常用句型1．Goodafternoon!I'mverygladtostandhereandgiveyouashortspeech.下午好！我很興奮站在這里給你們做簡(jiǎn)短的演講。2．Helloeveryone.It'sagreathonourtobeheretosharesomethingwithyou.大家好，很榮幸能在這里和你們共享一些東西。3．Today,mytopicismusic.今日我(演講)的主題是音樂(lè)。4．Ihopemyspeechtodaywillgiveyousomethinginyourfuturelife.我希望我今日的演講能給你將來(lái)的生活帶來(lái)一些啟示。5．Thankyouforyourpresence/attention!感謝你的到來(lái)/傾聽(tīng)！典例剖析假設(shè)你是李華，學(xué)校邀請(qǐng)你本周三下午在全校大會(huì)上給同學(xué)們發(fā)表演講。演講的內(nèi)容是音樂(lè)如何變更你的生活。請(qǐng)你依據(jù)自身的經(jīng)驗(yàn)寫(xiě)一篇演講稿。留意：詞數(shù)80左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。審題謀篇Ⅰ.定框架→好的起先，勝利的一半體裁演講稿人稱第一人稱時(shí)態(tài)一般過(guò)去時(shí)框架首段：稱呼、自我介紹、點(diǎn)題中段：音樂(lè)變更你的生活的詳細(xì)內(nèi)容尾段：希望、祝福Ⅱ.定要點(diǎn)、關(guān)鍵詞及動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)→打造一篇要點(diǎn)全面、用詞精確得體、時(shí)態(tài)多樣的極優(yōu)作文要點(diǎn)一：很榮幸被邀請(qǐng)到這里發(fā)表一篇關(guān)于音樂(lè)如何變更了我的生活的演講。It'sagreathonourtobeinvitedheretodeliveraspeechabouthowmusicchangedmylife.要點(diǎn)二：每次我被要求在課堂上回答問(wèn)題時(shí)，我都感到特別驚慌，不能流暢地說(shuō)話。EverytimeIwasaskedtoanswerquestionsinclass,Ifeltverynervousandcouldn'tspeakfluently.要點(diǎn)三：我很懊喪，不知道該如何處理這種狀況。Iwasdiscouragedanddidn'tknowhowIcoulddealwiththesituation.要點(diǎn)四：音樂(lè)激發(fā)了我的自信。Musicinspiredmewithconfidence.要點(diǎn)五：我心想：“我有音樂(lè)天賦，為什么不英勇地在公眾面前唱呢？”Ithoughttomyself，“Ihadatalentformusic.Whynotsingitinpublicbravely？”要點(diǎn)六：我常常在教室里或其他數(shù)百名同學(xué)面前唱歌。Ioftensangsongsinmyclassroomorinfrontofhundredsofotherschoolmates.要點(diǎn)七：上學(xué)期我參與了學(xué)校的音樂(lè)會(huì)，并因精彩的表演而獲獎(jiǎng)。LasttermItookpartinaschoolconcertandwasawardedaprizeformywonderfulperformances.要點(diǎn)八：音樂(lè)給了我信念和成就感。Musicgavemeconfidenceandasenseofachievement.要點(diǎn)九：我認(rèn)為我應(yīng)當(dāng)把勝利歸功于音樂(lè)。IthinkIshouldowemysuccesstomusic.要點(diǎn)十：我希望我們都能把音樂(lè)當(dāng)成摯友。它能治愈你的弱點(diǎn)。Ihopeallofuswillmakemusicourfriend.Itcancureyouofyourweaknesses.Ⅲ.詞匯、句式升級(jí)→創(chuàng)建極優(yōu)作文的倩詞靚句升級(jí)句式一：用so...that...改寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)二EverytimeIwasaskedtoanswerquestionsinclass,IfeltsonervousthatIcouldn'tspeakfluently.升級(jí)句式二：用疑問(wèn)詞＋todo形式改寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)三Iwasdiscouragedanddidn'tknowhowtodealwiththesituation.升級(jí)句式三：用強(qiáng)調(diào)結(jié)構(gòu)改寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)四Itwasmusicthatinspiredmewithconfidence.升級(jí)句式四：用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞把要點(diǎn)五中引號(hào)里的內(nèi)容改寫(xiě)成一句話Ithoughttomyself，“NowthatIhadatalentformusic,whynotsingitinpublicbravely？”升級(jí)句式五：把要點(diǎn)十改寫(xiě)成定語(yǔ)從句Ihopeallofuswillmakemusicourfriendwhocancureyouofyourweaknesses.Ⅳ.組建極優(yōu)作文→水到渠成的成就感：動(dòng)力的源泉Goodmorningeveryone,Thankyou!參考范文：Goodmorningeveryone，IamLiHua.It'sagreathonourtobeinvitedheretodeliveraspeechabouthowmusicchangedmylife.OnceIwasashygirl.EverytimeIwasaskedtoanswerquestionsinclass,IfeltsonervousthatIcouldn'tspeakfluently.SoIwasdiscouragedanddidn'tknowhowtodealwiththesituation.Itwasmusicthatinspiredmewithconfidence.Ithoughttomyself，“NowthatIhadatalentformusic,whynotsingitinpublicbravely？”Therefore,Ioftensangsongsinmyclassroomorinfrontofhundredsofotherschoolmates.LasttermItookpartinaschoolconcertandwasawardedaprizeformywonderfulperformances.Musicgavemeconfidenceandasenseofachievement.IthinkIshouldowemysuccesstomusic.Ihopeallofuswillmakemusicourfriendwhocancureyouofyourweaknesses.Thankyou！J即學(xué)即練假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)摯友Alice來(lái)信與你探討音樂(lè)話題。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)封回信，主要內(nèi)容包括：1．你喜愛(ài)的音樂(lè)；2．你對(duì)音樂(lè)的看法。留意：1.詞數(shù)80左右，信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearAlice，I'mmorethandelightedtohearfromyou.Yours，LiHua參考范文：DearAlice，I'mmorethandelightedtohearfromyou.I'mgladyoulikemusiclikeme.Totellyouthetruth，Ilikealmostallkindsofmusic.Inordertorelaxfromthepressureofstudy,Ialwayslistentolightmusic.MyfavoritemusicispopularmusicandI'mafanofmanyfamoussingers.Ialsolikeclassicalmusic,bothhomeandabroad.AndIhavealsomadealotoffriendsbecauseofmusic.Differentpeopleha