專題12 中考書面表達(dá)-2023年江蘇省中考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)基礎(chǔ)知識過過過+高分題型練練練

專題12中考書面表達(dá)寫作的五個關(guān)鍵步驟：（一）仔細(xì)審題：看清要求，確定體裁、人稱、時態(tài)等。（二）列出提綱：根據(jù)要點(diǎn)列出英文短語形式提綱，避免遺漏。（三）擴(kuò)寫成句：將所列提綱形成“主+謂+賓?！焙汀爸?系+表?！被揪渥咏Y(jié)構(gòu)，注意定語和狀語修飾成分位置的使用以及避免中式英語出現(xiàn)。（四）連句成篇：使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞和過渡語將表達(dá)要點(diǎn)的句子連接成文。（五）自我修改：主要從以下幾個方面進(jìn)行自我修改：1.內(nèi)容是否完整。2.時態(tài)是否正確。3.拼寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)是否正確。4.主謂是否一致。5.格式和字?jǐn)?shù)是否符合要求。6.層次是否清楚。寫作中的好詞好句：越來越多的：agrowingnumberof.........人們普遍認(rèn)為：Itiswidelybelievedthat...........引起人們的關(guān)注：attractgeneral/public/worldattentiontosth.提出建議：comeupwithsuggestions作出努力：makeeffortstodosth.,takegreatpainstodo........產(chǎn)生影響：haveagood/badinfluenceon..........采取措施：takesteps/actiontodosth對……很好的了解：haveabetterunderstandingof培養(yǎng)對……的興趣或者信心：developone’sinterest/confidencein發(fā)揮重要作用：playanimportantrole/partin..........知識、經(jīng)驗豐富：berichinknowledge/experience克服困難：getoverdifficulty面臨危險、困難：inthefaceofdanger/difficulty發(fā)表看法：expressone’sopinion對..........有/沒有意義：makemuch/littledifferenceto.............奉獻(xiàn)于做某事：devoteoneselftodoingsth真正重要的是：Whatreallymattersis............實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的理想/愿望：realize/achieveone’sdream(hope/wish)減輕壓力：reducethestress提高能力：improveone’sability開闊眼界、興趣：broadenone’sinterest,broadenone’shorizons在某方面取得很大的進(jìn)步：makemuchprogressin........發(fā)揮能力：developone’sability可以使用的經(jīng)典名言警句：用于行動：Actionsspeaklouderthanwords.事實(shí)勝于雄辯。用于友誼：Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患難朋友才是真朋友。用于做事：Agoodbeginningishalfdone.良好的開端是成功的一半。用于意志：Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者事竟成。用于方法：AllroadsleadtoRome.條條大道通羅馬。用于行動：Easiersaidthandone.說起來容易，做起來難。用于事物的正反兩面：Everymanhashisweakside.人人都有缺點(diǎn)。用于堅持不怕困難：Failureisthemotherofsuccess.失敗是成功之母。用于做事：Lookbeforeyouleap.三思而后行。用于堅持：Nothingintheworldisdifficultifyousetyourmindtoit.世上無難事，只怕有心人。用于友誼：Alifewithoutafriendisalifewithoutasun.人若無友,就如同生命中沒有太陽，用于堅持：Allthingsaredifficultbeforetheyareeasy.萬事開頭難，用于堅持：Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧。寫作中要注意文采:如果學(xué)生有時間和精力，想把書面表達(dá)寫得更好,那么,還可注意以下幾點(diǎn):(1)句型多樣化,不要I(We)……到底，使人覺得乏味。(2)適當(dāng)使用一些并列句或主從復(fù)合句。(3)進(jìn)一步描繪人或事物時，適當(dāng)使用定語從句。(4)適當(dāng)使用分詞或分詞短語，烘托謂語動詞。(5)偶爾使用一下倒裝句，增加新鮮感。(6)適當(dāng)調(diào)換一下狀語在句子中的位置，使句子不雷同。(7)上下句子緊接時，其中完全相同的成分可以省略，以節(jié)省篇幅。同時也要注意語法、句法知識的靈活運(yùn)用:1)語態(tài)、時態(tài)要準(zhǔn)確無誤。2)主謂語要一致，主語的人稱和數(shù)要和謂語一致。3)注意人稱代詞的賓格形式。4)注意冠詞用法，例如：Heisanhoneststudent.中的an不能寫成a。5)注意拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號和大小寫。?？荚掝}案例：一、學(xué)習(xí)減壓生活節(jié)奏加快，競爭日益激烈，讓大多數(shù)中學(xué)生在生活和學(xué)習(xí)上或多或少產(chǎn)生了壓力，如何應(yīng)對壓力是大家不可回避的問題。為了更好地發(fā)現(xiàn)及解決同學(xué)們中存在的心理壓力問題,你們班特意開展了一次以"LessPressure,BetterLife"為主題的英語演講比賽,請你準(zhǔn)備發(fā)言稿,談?wù)勀銓τ诰徑鈮毫Φ目捶ê徒ㄗh。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn):1.同學(xué)們普遍存在的壓力是什么;2.我的壓力是什么;3.我是如何成功緩解我的壓力的。寫作要求:1.文中必須包括所給提示中內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可展開思路，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.不少于80詞。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】LessPressure,BetterLifeHello,boysandgirls：Pressureisaseriousproblemintoday’sworld.Studentsinourclassareundertoomuchpressure.Somestudentscan’tgetonwellwiththeirclassmates,whileothersmayworryabouttheirexams.I’malwaysunderpressure,too.Myparentswantmetobethetopstudentinclass.Sotheysendmetoallkindsofafter-classesatweekends.LastMondayevening,Ihadatalkwithmymother.ItoldherIwasnotlazy.Ireallyfelttired.Ineededtimetorelax.Mymotheragreedwithmeatlast.SoIthinkaconversationwithparentsisnecessarytosolvetheproblem.That’sall.Thankyou!二、校園生活假如你是李明，你的英國筆友Mary給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件，想了解一下你在學(xué)校的學(xué)習(xí)和生活方面的一些收獲、困惑和感受，請認(rèn)真閱讀下面的郵件，根據(jù)信中的內(nèi)容，結(jié)合你的實(shí)際用英語回復(fù)。To:liming@From:maryswift@Subject:SchoollifeDearLiMing,Howareyou?I'mgladtohearyouareaGrade9studentnow.I'dliketoknowsomethingaboutyou.Wouldyoupleasetellmesomethingaboutyourlife?●WhatproblemsdoyouhaveasaGrade9student?●Whodoyouoftenaskforhelpandwhatadvicewillhe/shegiveyou?●Whohasinfluencedyoumost?Why?I'mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Bestwishes.Yourssincerely,Mary注意:1.字?jǐn)?shù)90詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總字?jǐn)?shù);2.回復(fù)須包括所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、順暢;3.文中不得提及真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。DearMary,I'mgladtohearfromyou.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Allthebest,LiMing【范文】DearMary，I'mgladtohearfromyou.AsaGrade9student,Ifeelstressedfromtimetotime.Ihavesomeproblemsthesedays.Forexample,IhavesomuchhomeworktodothatIhavetostayuplateeveryday.Asaresult,IoftenfeelsleepyinclassandIdon'thaveenoughtimeformyhobbies.WheneverIamintrouble,IalwaysaskmyEnglishteacherforhelp.Sheasksmetogotobedandgetupearly.Shealsotellsmehowtoachieveabalancebetweenmyschoolworkandhobbies.MyEnglishteacheristhepersonwhohasinfluencedmemost.Sheisalwayskindandshecaresaboutallthestudents.IwanttobeateacherlikeherwhenIgrowup.Allthebest,LiMing三、成長學(xué)習(xí)每年的4月23日是世界讀書日，這個紀(jì)念日的意義在于推動更多人去閱讀。假如你校將開展“讀好書，促成長”活動，請你根據(jù)這項活動的主題，向全校同學(xué)發(fā)出倡議。讀書的意義：1.獲取知識，開闊視野2.使人愉悅，益于學(xué)習(xí)3.……（自由發(fā)揮）現(xiàn)狀：1.作業(yè)多，無良好讀書習(xí)慣2.不知道讀什么書，不會選擇倡議：……（至少兩點(diǎn)）注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.短文須包括所有要點(diǎn)，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；3.短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。Dearclassmates,Readingisveryimportantinourdailylife._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’sstartreadingnow!【范文】Dearclassmates,Readingisveryimportantinourdailylife.Firstofall,readingcanhelpusgetknowledgefromallkindsofbooks.Itcanalsohelptoopenupawholenewworldtous.Second,readingcanmakeuscleverandhappy.Itisgoodforourstudyanditcanhelpusgrowup.Third,readingcanhelpusthinkmoreandfurtherandmakeourlifemorecolourful.However,thereisusuallysomuchhomeworkforustodothatwedon’thaveenoughtimeforreading.Moreover,someofusdon’thaveagoodhabitofreadingbutoftenspendtoomuchtimewatchingTVandsearchingtheInternet.Inmyopinion,ourschoolcanhavea“ReadingWeek”onceaterm.Teachersshouldencouragestudentstoborrowbooksfromthelibrary.Wemustspendmoretimereadingsomeusefulbooks.Asaresult,wecanhaveabetterfuture.Let’sstartreadingnow!四、旅游交通越來越多汽車進(jìn)入我們的家庭生活，改善了我們的生活，但同時也帶來了很多問題，如塞車和車禍，給家庭和社會帶來極大的危害。作為中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該怎樣做呢?請寫一篇有關(guān)交通安全的短文(80字左右)，內(nèi)容包含：1.遵守交通規(guī)則，如走人行道/過斑馬線。2.別在街道上或馬路上玩耍和踢球。3.勸父母不能酒后駕車。你可以適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容，讓短文通順，過渡自然。參考詞匯：sidewalk人行道zebra-crossing斑馬線注：第一段已給出，不計入總數(shù)__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】Withmoreandmorecarscomingintoourfamilies,wearehappythatithasgreatlyimprovedourlife.Butunluckily,ithasalsobroughtmanyproblems,suchasheavytrafficandtrafficaccidents.Trafficsafetyiseverybody'sbusiness.Wemustobeytherules.Forexample,wemustwalkonsidewalks,whenwecrosszebra–crossing,stopandlookrightandleft,andthengoacrossfast.Don’tplayfootballontheroad.wecantellourparentsnottodrinkbeforetheydrive,nottorunthroughredlights,nottotalkandlaughwhiledrivingetc.Wecansaycarsarecomingintoourlife,butonlywheneverybodythinkstrafficsafetyiseverybody'sbusinesscanwebesafedrivingonroadsandwalkingonsidewalks.五、傳統(tǒng)文化傳統(tǒng)文化是近幾年中考的熱點(diǎn)，相信今年考它的可能性會很大。中國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日是傳統(tǒng)文化的一部分。假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國朋友MIKE想通過你了解中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。請你根據(jù)提示，給Mike寫一封e-mail，向他介紹我國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日春節(jié)的情況。內(nèi)容提示：1.春節(jié)是中國最重要的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日;2.春節(jié)期間人們的主要活動(節(jié)前準(zhǔn)備、除夕夜、節(jié)日期間活動)寫作要求：1.文中必須包括所給提示中內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可展開思路，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.不少于80詞。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】DearMike,Howareyou?I’mreallygladthatyouareinterestedintraditionalChinesefestivals.TherearemanytraditionalfestivalsinChina,suchasSpringFestival,Mid-AutumnDayandsoon.I’dliketointroducetheSpringFestivaltoyou.SpringFestivalisthemostimportanttraditionalholidayinChina.Itusuallylastsfor15days.Daysbeforethefestival,peoplecleantheirhouses.Theythinkcleaningsweepsanybadluck.Theydecoratetheirhouseswithpapercuts.Ontheeveofthefestival,familymembersgettogetherandhavebigmeals.ThentheywatchtheSpringFestivalGalaonTV.Atmidnight,theysetofffireworkstowelcometheNewYear.Duringthefestival,kidsgetluckymoneyfromoldpeople.Peoplevisittheirrelativesandfriends.Theywishoneanotherahappyyearandgoodluck.Howhappyweare.Yours,LiHua六、垃圾分類垃圾分類，人人有責(zé)。假如你是李華，你受學(xué)生會委托，向在校交換生發(fā)出參與垃圾分類的倡議。請你以"WasteSorting-AMustforEveryone"為題，用英文寫一封倡議書，談?wù)劺诸惖囊饬x，以及我們能做什么。提示詞語:wastesorting(垃圾分類),litter,recycle,protect,environment提示問題:

Whyiswastesortingimportant?Whatcanwedotohelpwithwastesorting?

WasteSorting-AMustforEveryoneDearstudents,Wastesortingisbecomingincreasinglycommonaroundourcountry.

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