專題08 書面表達熱點話題10篇-2023年中考英語逆襲沖刺名校模擬真題特快專遞（云南專用）

2023中考英語逆襲沖刺名校模擬真題特快專遞（云南專用）第二期專題08書面表達熱點話題10篇一、話題作文1．（2023·云南昆明·昆明市第三中學?？级＃㏕hePersonWhoHelpsMeGrowup提示：茫茫人海中，總有一些或熟悉或陌生的身影出現(xiàn)在你成長的時光故事里，為你指點迷津，助你健康成長。請以“ThePersonWhoHelpsMeGrowup”為題，用英語寫一篇短文，記敘一位幫助你成長的人的故事，并談談你的感受。要求：1.語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個；2.文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計；3.書面表達必須寫在答題卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：ThePersonWhoHelpsMeGrowup

Duringthepastthreeyears,whenIgotintotrouble,manypeoplewouldliketogavemeahand.Lindaisoneofthem.Letmetellyousomethingabouther.

WhenIalmostwantedtogiveuplearningEnglish,ImetLinda,agirlfrommystudygroup.Shetoldmethateveryonemeetstroubles,butweshouldnevergiveupeasily.Instead,weshouldfindoutasuitablewayandthenworkhard.Withherhelp,Iadjustedmyattitudeandwordedharderthanbefore.Finally,ImadegreatprogressinEnglish.Now,IamanEnglishloverandIwon’tgiveupanythingeasily.

IamthankfultohaveafriendlikeLinda.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文，圍繞“幫助自己成長的人”展開；②時態(tài)：一般過去時為主；③提示：本文寫作要點已經(jīng)給出，考生應注意不要遺漏，并適當補充發(fā)揮，注意語句的通順，使用正確的詞匯和句型，使得行文連貫有邏輯。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖，介紹背景，以“讓我告訴你一些關于她的事情”引出下文；第二步，介紹發(fā)生的故事，注意時態(tài)應以過去時為主，突出對自己的幫助和自己的成長；第三步，結尾總結，表達自己的感受。[亮點詞匯]①getintotrouble陷入困境②givesbahand幫助某人③giveup放棄④withone’shelp在某人的幫助下[高分句型]①Duringthepastthreeyears,whenIgotintotrouble,manypeoplewouldliketogavemeahand.（when引導的時間狀語從句）②Shetoldmethateveryonemeetstroubles,butweshouldnevergiveupeasily.（賓語從句）2．（2023·云南昆明·統(tǒng)考二模）在三年的初中生活中，一定有那么一個人或一件事，就像一縷陽光，照進你的心靈，照亮你的前路。請以“SunshineinMyLife”為題，用英語寫一篇短文，敘述給你帶來溫暖或希望的一件事或一個人。要求：1.語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個；2.文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計；3.請將短文寫在答題卡上，寫在本試題卷上無效。SunshineinMyLife______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：SunshineinMyLife

Duringthepastthreeyears,Imetsomanywarm-heartedpeople.TheygavemeahandwhenIgotintotrouble,especiallymygoodfriendLinda.Letmetellyousomethingabouther.

BecauseofmypoorEnglish,Lindabecamemypartnerinourstudygroup.Everydayafterschool,shewouldstaywithmetohelpmepracticeEnglish.IfIhavesomequestions,shewouldlendmehernotebookandexplainpatiently.Littlebylittle,ImadeprogressinEnglish.NowIamconfidentinlearningEnglish.

Iamhappytohaveafriendlikeher.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文，圍繞“生活中的陽光”來展開，介紹溫暖自己的人或事情；②時態(tài)：一般過去時；③提示，要點提示已經(jīng)給出，考生應注意不要遺漏，并適當補充發(fā)揮，注意語句的通順，使用正確的詞匯和句型，使得行文連貫有邏輯。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖，介紹背景，以“讓我告訴你一些關于她的事情”引出下文；第二步，具體闡述所發(fā)生的事情，注意時態(tài)應以過去時為主，且注意與主題相關；第三步，結尾總結，表明自己的感受。[亮點詞匯]①warm-hearted熱心腸的②becauseof由于③littlebylittle逐漸地④makeprogress取得進步[高分句型]①BecauseofmypoorEnglish,Lindabecamemypartnerinourstudygroup.（短語becauseof做原因狀語）②IfIhavesomequestions,shewouldlendmehernotebookandexplainpatiently.（if引導的條件狀語從句）3．（2023·云南·模擬預測）MakeaChange提示：世界是美好的，但很多時候總有些事情不如人意。如果你想改變世界，就先改變自己。請以“MakeaChange”為題寫一篇英語短文，敘述你做出的一次改變以及你的感悟。要求：1.語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個；2.文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計；3.請將短文寫在答題卡上，寫在本試題卷上無效。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MakeaChangeItisimportantforustomakeachangewhenthingsdon’tfitus,sothatwecangetbetterandbetter.IstillrememberedwhathadhappenedonthedayofanEnglishspeechcontest.Beforegettingonthestage,everyonewassonervousthattheykeptmumblingtheirspeechestogetthemselveswell-prepared.ButIfeltveryconfidentsinceIhadwonmanyawardsinsuchcontestsbefore.Ididn’tdoanythingandjustwaitedonmyseat.However,whenitwasmyturntogivethespeech,mymindsuddenlywentblankandItotallyforgotwhatIwasgoingtosay.Theterribleexperiencemademerealizesomething.Fromthatdayon,Imadeachange.IknowundernocircumstancesshouldIbeoverconfident.Practicemakesperfectandbeinghumbleandhungryisalwaysthebestpolicy.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為話題作文；

②時態(tài)：敘事部分時態(tài)為“一般過去時”；感悟部分時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點給出了兩個，敘述經(jīng)歷以及談談感悟，注意敘事部分是寫作重心，且要突出變化。

[寫作步驟]第一步，引出“變化”這個主題；第二步，描寫自己的經(jīng)歷，突出前后的變化；第三步，文章結尾，談談自己做出變化的感悟。

[亮點詞匯]①getoneselfwell-prepared讓自己做好充分準備

②goblank變得空白③fromthatdayon從那天起

[高分句型]①However,whenitwasmyturntogivethespeech,mymindsuddenlywentblankandItotallyforgotwhatIwasgoingtosay.（when引導的時間狀語從句及what引導的賓語從句）

②IknowundernocircumstancesshouldIbeoverconfident.（部分倒裝句型）③Practicemakesperfectandbeinghumbleandhungryisalwaysthebestpolicy.（運用了諺語“熟能生巧”）4．（2023·云南·模擬預測）Happinessfrom_______提示：幸福源于什么？是老師的教誨、父母的關愛、朋友的關心、自我的突破……不同的人會有不同的感受。請以“Happinessfrom________”為題，用英語寫一篇短文，敘述在你生活或?qū)W習中，給予過你幸福的人或你經(jīng)歷過的一件令你感到幸?？鞓返氖?。要求：1.請先將題目補全后，再作答；2.語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個；3.文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計；4.請將短文寫在答題卡上，寫在本試題卷上無效。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文HappinessFromHardWorkOurlifeisfullofhappiness.Myhappinesscomesfromhardwork.IcangethappinesseverytimeIworkhard.Lastterm,IwaschosentotakepartintheEnglishSpeechContest.IwasnervouswhenIheardthenews,becauseIwasalwaysafraidofspeakinginpublic.IwonderedifIcouldsucceedandIwantedtogiveup.MyEnglishteachernoticedthat.Shehadalongtalkwithmeandencouragedmetochallengemyself.AfterthatIkeptpracticingeveryday.WhenIgotthefirstprizeinthecontest,Ifelthappyfrommydeepheart.Myhappinessisfromthesuccessthroughmyhardwork.TheharderIwork,themorehappinessIget.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為話題作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏，適當增加細節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹自己的快樂來自努力學習；第二步，分享自己的經(jīng)歷；第三步，表達感悟。[亮點詞匯]①fullof充滿②takepartin參加③giveup放棄[高分句型]①IwasnervouswhenIheardthenews,becauseIwasalwaysafraidofspeakinginpublic.（when引導時間狀語從句；because引導原因狀語從句）②IwonderedifIcouldsucceedandIwantedtogiveup.（if引導賓語從句）5．（2023·云南昆明·統(tǒng)考二模）AWalkwith________提示：生活中，總有人與你結伴而行，給予你關心、勇氣……誰曾與你同行？在同行路上發(fā)生了什么？請以“AWalkwith________”為題，用英語寫一篇短文，分享你的同行經(jīng)歷并談談你對這段經(jīng)歷的感受。要求：1.請先將題目補全后，再作答；

2.語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個；

3.文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計；

4.書面表達必須寫在答題卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文AWalkwithmyfriendIhaveafriendcalledSamwhomIwalkwithontheroadofgrowth.Wehavebeenfriendsfortwoyears.Afterschool,wealwaystalkaboutthingsthatwearebothinterestedin.Lookingback,Iwasneverboredonthewayhomeafterschoolsincewesharedmanyinterests.Wereachedanagreementtogoforarunintheparkeveryweekend.Byrunning,wegotrelaxed.Sometimes,wespentawholedayreadinginthelibrary.Afterthat,wetalkedaboutwhatweread.Welearnedalotfromeachother.Thetimethatwespenttogetherhaslitupmymiddlelife.I’msohappytohavesuchagoodfriend.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)主要為“一般過去時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏信息提示中的問題：誰曾與你同行？同行路上發(fā)生了什么？適當添加細節(jié)，并且突出寫作要點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。直接提出與我同行的人是誰；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。主要介紹了同行的經(jīng)歷以及感受；第三步，書寫結語。表達我對朋友的感謝。[亮點詞匯]①talkabout談論②beinterestedinsth.對……感興趣③reachanagreement達成一致④goforarun跑步⑤learn…from…從……學習[高分句型]Thetimethatwespenttogetherhaslitupmymiddlelife.（“that”引導的定語從句）6．（2023·云南曲靖·統(tǒng)考二模）_________MakesMeHappy提示：在你的學習生活中，一定做過很多讓自己感到幸?？鞓返氖?，如幫助別人、讀書、志愿服務等。請以“___________MakesMeHappy”為題，用英語寫一篇短文，講述你做某件事的經(jīng)歷和感受。要求：1.補全題目，用英語寫一篇不少于60詞的短文：2.語言流暢，內(nèi)容連貫，書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔：3.文中不能使用你的真實姓名和校名，否則以零分計：4.短文必須寫在答題卡上，如在試題卷上作答，一律不得分。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文HelpingOthersMakesMeHappyHelpingothersmakesmehappy.Ienjoyit.Iwenttotheoldpeople’shomewithmyclassmateslastmonth.Wecleanedtheirroomsandreadthemthenewspaper.Wecalledthemgrandpaorgrandma.Someofmyclassmatestalkedwiththemandaskedthemtotellustheirstories.Theirstorieswereveryinteresting.Seeingtheirsmilingfaces,Ifelthappyandproud.Ithinkhelpingothersisagreatthing.Itmakesmeahappypersonanditmakestheworldabetterplace.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為話題作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”和“一般過去時”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，不能遺漏信息，可適當發(fā)揮。[寫作步驟]第一步，補全題目；第二步，具體闡述你做某件事的經(jīng)歷；第三步，最后表達自己的感受。[亮點詞匯]①readsbsth給某人讀某事②talkwithsb和某人交談③asksbtodosth讓某人做某事[高分句型]①Seeingtheirsmilingfaces,Ifelthappyandproud.（現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語）②Ithinkhelpingothersisagreatthing.（省略that的賓語從句）7．（2023·云南·統(tǒng)考三模）提示：在你的生活中，能教你知識的不僅僅是你的父母或老師，身邊的朋友、豐富的閱歷、有趣的旅行等都可以教會你新的東西。請以“________islikeateacher”為題，寫一篇英語短文，談談你生活中像老師一樣的人或經(jīng)歷。要求：1.語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個；2.文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計；3.請將短文寫在答題卡上，寫在本試題卷上無效。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范例：LifeislikeateacherLifeislikeateacher.Itcangivememorethanknowledge.LetmesharealessonI’velearnedinlifewithyou.Thatwasasunnyday.MyfriendJackandIwenttothenearbyparktoflyakite.Werantogetherwhenthewindstartedtoblow.Buttooursurprise,thekitedidn’tflyashighaswethought.Itkeptfallingdowntothegroundagainandagain.Iwasupsetandwantedtogiveup.Jack,ontheotherhand,thoughtforawhileanddiscussedwithme,thenwetriedagain.Thistime,IranasfastasIcouldinthefront.Jackfollowedmyleadintheback,sendingthekitehigher.Becauseofourefforts,thekitefinallysoaredhighinthesky!Weweresohappyandproudofourselves.ThisisthelessonIhavelearnedfromlife—makingmistakesisOK.Whatmattersmostistothinkandactaftermistakes.Onlythencanyoulearnandmakeprogress.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時”，敘述經(jīng)歷時使用過去時；③提示：本文是話題作文，考生應把題目補充完整，以話題為中心，發(fā)揮想象，添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，總寫。直接敘述生活就像一位老師。它能給你知識。和大家分享你的經(jīng)歷；第二步，具體闡述你的經(jīng)歷；第三步，書寫感悟，結束全文。你從經(jīng)歷中獲得的啟發(fā)，犯錯誤是可以的，最重要的是在錯誤之后思考和行動。只有這樣，你才能學習并取得進步。[亮點詞匯]①sharesth.withsb.和某人分享某事②tooursurprise令我們驚訝的是③notas…as…不像……④keepfallingdowntotheground一直摔倒在地⑤becauseof因為，由于⑥(be)proudof為……感到驕傲⑦makeprogress取得進步[高分句型]①LetmesharealessonI’velearnedinlifewithyou.（省略引導詞的定語從句）②Werantogetherwhenthewindstartedtoblow.（when引導時間狀語從句）③Whatmattersmostistothinkandactaftermistakes.（what引導主語從句）⑤Onlythencanyoulearnandmakeprogress.（倒裝句）8．（2023·云南紅河·統(tǒng)考一模）IWillRemember________在我們成長的過程中，總會有讓我們難以忘懷的人。請以“IWillRemember________”為題，用英語寫一篇短文，介紹一位你難以忘懷的人，說說你和他（她）之間發(fā)生的事，并且談談你的感受。要求:1.將所給題目補充完整，并寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)不少于60個；2.語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔；文中不得使用你的真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計；3.書面表達必須寫在答題卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文:IWillRememberMyEnglishTeacherMyEnglishteacherMr.Greenislikemyhero.HenotonlyteachesmeEnglish,butalsocaresformeallthetime.HeisthepersonIwillrememberforever.Istillrememberitwasarainyday.IfoundIdidn’ttakeanumbrellaafterschool.IstoodinfrontoftheschoolgateandthoughtIwouldbeallwetwhenIgothome.Suddenly,Isawafamiliarfigurecomingtowardsme.ItwasMr.Green.Hesawmeandhegavemealiftalthoughhewasbusyandhelivedfarawayfrommyhome.Howkindandwarmheis!IloveMr.GreenandIhopetobethepersonthatheisproudof.AlthoughIwillgraduatesoon,hewillalwaysbeinmyheart.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文，圍繞“會記得某人”來展開，介紹自己難忘的人；②時態(tài)：一般過去時；③提示：要點提示已經(jīng)給出，考生應注意不要遺漏，并適當補充發(fā)揮，注意先把題目補充完整，交代人物，注意寫作中語句的通順，使用正確的詞匯和句型，使得行文連貫有邏輯。[寫作步驟]第一步，補充完整題目，表明自己會記得的人是誰，從而引出下文；第二步，簡要介紹人物身份，然后介紹發(fā)生的事情，注意時態(tài)應以過去式為主，注意語法的正確，突出其為何難忘，可從對自己的影響等角度出發(fā)；第三步，結尾總結，強調(diào)對人物的難忘，以及自己會積極向上的態(tài)度。[亮點詞匯]①notonly...butalso不僅……而且②infrontof在……前面③afamiliarfigure一個熟悉的身影④farawayfrom遠離[高分句型]①AlthoughIwillgraduatesoon,hewillalwaysbeinmyheart.（although引導的讓步狀語從句）②HenotonlyteachesmeEnglish,butalsocaresformeallthetime.（并列短語notonly...butalso連接的并列謂語）9．（2023·云南昆明·統(tǒng)考一模）My________Trip提示：讀萬卷書，行萬里路。旅途中，我們經(jīng)歷難忘的事，遇見可愛的人，感受醉人的景....請以“My________Trip”為題，用英語寫一篇短文，敘述一次你出游的經(jīng)歷，并談談你的感受。要求：1.請先將題目補全后，再作答；2.語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個；3.文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計；4.請將短文寫在答題卡上，寫在本試題卷上無效。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyUnforgettableTripIhavetravelledalotandIhavemanytravelexperiences.Letmetellyouoneofthemostunforgettableexperiences.Lastsummervacation,IwenttoQingdaobytrain.Theweatherwasfine.Itwasalwayssunny.Ienjoyedthefreshairthere.First,Iwenttotheseaside.Theseawasasblueasthesky.Itwasreallyanenjoyablethingtotakeabathinthesunshineonthebeach.ThenIalsopickedupalotofcolorfulshells.AfterthatItastedthelocalfamousfood.Iatemanythingsthere,suchasfishandprawns.Whatdeliciousfoodtheyare!

Travellingislikeapoem.Weuseourfootprintstofillineverywordandeverysentence.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般過去時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意在寫作時注意時態(tài)的使用。介紹自己的經(jīng)歷時要用一般過去時。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖，引出要重點介紹的內(nèi)容；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。介紹自己的一次旅行經(jīng)歷，可以從時間、交通方式、旅途風景等方面描述；第三步，書寫結語。表達此次旅行的收獲。[亮點詞匯]①mostunforgettableexperiences最難忘的經(jīng)歷②asblueasthesky和天空一樣藍③pickup撿起[高分句型]Whatdeliciousfoodtheyare!（感嘆句）10．（2023·云南昆明·統(tǒng)考一模）學校英語專欄正在以“AJoyfrom________”為主題征稿，請你用英語寫一篇短文投稿，敘述一次讓你收獲到快樂的經(jīng)歷。要求：1.請先將題目補