作文19 遼寧盤錦卷（滿分作文+同類作文+素材積累）-備戰(zhàn)2022年中考英語滿分作文+萬能模板+熱點素材

2021年中考滿分作文特快?？骖}在線作文19遼寧盤錦卷真題在線（遼寧省盤錦市2021年中考英語試題）在初中三年的時光里,你不僅學到了知識，也具備了一定的能力。當你克服困難第一次成功地完成某件事情時，這份與眾不同的經(jīng)歷一定在你的腦海里留下了深刻的印象。請你以“Myfirsttimeto________”為題，寫一篇英語作文，分享你的經(jīng)歷并談談你的感受。寫作要求：（1）補全標題，詞數(shù)80-100；（2）語言準確，行文連貫，層次清晰，書寫規(guī)范；（3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名和地名。Myfirsttimeto________考題解析________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________考題解析1.題干解讀：題目是半命題作文，要求以“Myfirsttimeto…”寫一篇作文，分享自己第一次做某事的經(jīng)歷并談談自己的感受。2.寫作指導：寫作時要以第一人稱為主，記敘過去的經(jīng)歷用一般過去時。文章可采用三段式，第一段引出這次經(jīng)歷，第二段詳細敘述經(jīng)歷，最后一段講感受。要做到無單詞拼寫和語法錯誤。滿分范文滿分范文MyfirsttimetoswimAsweallknow,everyonehashisunforgettablememories.IstillrememberthefirsttimeIlearnedtoswim.Lastsummerholiday,Iwantedtolearnhowtoswim.Iaskedmyfathertoteachme.Iwenttotheswimmingpoolwithmyfather.Hetaughtmehowtoswim.Atfirst,Iwasafraidofdivinginthewater.AndIfeltuncomfortableinthewater.Butmyfatheralwaysencouragedme.Hesaidhewouldprotectme.ThenIbegantoswim,butIcouldn’tswimforwardatall.Itmademeupset.Thenmyfathertoldmehowtomove,howtostretchoutmyhandsandlegs.SlowlyIcouldmovealittle.Ittookmeaboutfourhourstolearntoswim.Ifeltquitehappy.Whatanunforgettableexperienceitwas!名師點評名師點評2021年盤錦卷中考英語書面表達，與20年相比沒有很大變化，皆是半命題作文，在書面表達考查形式上有一定變化，19年及以前為兩個作文，是以小作文+大作文的形式進行考查的，但近兩年作文難度有所下降，由兩篇減少為一篇，題目類型均為半命題或者命題作文，學生在學習中可多關(guān)注此類型的作文書寫及相關(guān)素材積累。佳句積累1.Asweallknow,everyonehashisunforgettablememories.【亮點】asweallknow：眾所周知。2.IstillrememberthefirsttimeIlearnedtoswim.【亮點】Ilearnedtoswim為定語從句，修飾先行詞time。3.Thenmyfathertoldmehowtomove,howtostretchoutmyhandsandlegs.【亮點】howtomove,howtostretchoutmyhandsandlegs為賓語從句，作told的賓語。4.Ittookmeaboutfourhourstolearntoswim.【亮點】Ittakessb.sometimetodosth.花某人多長時間做…5.Whatanunforgettableexperienceitwas!【亮點】本句為感嘆句，作為結(jié)尾，對第一次的游泳經(jīng)歷作了很好的結(jié)尾和升華。舉一反三相似題①人生中有很多第一次：第一次學游泳；第一次跟家人外出旅行；第一次做家務；第一次贏得比賽；第一次……。請根據(jù)提示，就你的第一次……寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容包括：1.第一次……的整個過程；2.你的感受。要求：1.詞數(shù)：80-100（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的校名和人名。Asweallknow,everyonehashisunforgettablememories.Istillrememberthefirsttime__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】ThefirsttimetolearntoswimAsweallknow,everyonehashisunforgettablememories.Istillrememberthefirsttimetolearntoswim.Lastsummervacation,myfathertookmetotheswimmingpoolinourneighborhoodandtaughtmetoswim.Itwasthefirstformetoswim.Atfirst,Icouldnotswimatall.Myfatherwasverypatient.Heencouragedmeandtaughtmehowtoswim.Hetaughtmehowtobreatheinthewaterfirst.Then,Hethrewmeintothedeepestpartoftheswimmingpool.IwassofrightenedthatIcouldn’tmove.ButInevergaveup.Ifeltsafewithmydadaround.Threehourslater,withthehelpofmyfather,Icouldswimbymyself.AlthoughIcouldn'tswimverywell,Iwasveryhappy.Iwillneverforgetthisexperience,becauseInotonlylearnedhowtoswim,butalsolearnedtobebrave!【考題解析】這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)提示信息，選擇給你印象深刻的第一次活動進行描述并談談自己的感受。時態(tài)主要為一般過去時，人稱主要為第一、三人稱。寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文。首先開門見山，介紹自己的第一次活動是什么，接下來詳細介紹第一次活動的整個過程，最后談一談自己的感受。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達具有條理性。注意：注意緊扣主題，意思連貫，語言通順，書寫規(guī)范，避免出現(xiàn)拼寫錯誤；詞數(shù)在80—100。相似題②人生中有很多第一次：第一次學游泳；第一次跟家人外出旅行；第一次做家務；第一次贏得比賽；第一次……。請根據(jù)提示,用英語寫一篇短文,描述你最難忘的一次經(jīng)歷。提示：(1)Whichthingisthemostunforgettableforyou?(2)Whatdidyoudo?(3)Howdidyoufeel?要求：(1)短文須包含所給提示,可適當發(fā)揮。(2)短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名和地名。(3)詞數(shù)80個左右。(開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù))Asweallknow,everyonehashisunforgettablememories.Istillrememberthefirsttime____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】As__we__all__know,__everyone__has__his__unforgettable__memories.__I__still__remember__the__first__timeIclimbedthemountain.Threeyearsago,allwestudentswereaskedtoclimbthemountain.Itwasmyfirsttimetotryclimbingamountain.Ifeltveryexcited.Wesetoffat8aminthemorningandIsupposeditmightbeaneasyjourney.However,astimewentby,someonewantedtogiveup.Theteacherencouragedustoreachthetopofthemountain.Whenwegottothetopofthemountain,thefeelingcouldn'tbeexpressedbywords.Fromthenon,Ilearnedthatweshouldn'tgiveupwhenfacingdifficulties.Onlywhenwekeepdoingsomething,canwehaveasenseofachievement.相似題③人生中有很多第一次做的事，如第一次游泳，第一次贏得比賽……你記憶最深的是什么呢？請根據(jù)以下要點和要求用英語寫一篇短文。1.要點：1)這件事情是什么；2)這件事情發(fā)生的過程；3)你的感受。2.要求：1)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱；2)詞數(shù)100左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Asweallknow,everyonehashisunforgettablememories.IstillrememberthefirsttimeIclimbedthemountain.Threeyearsago,allstudentsinmyclasswereaskedtoclimbamountain.Itwasmyfirsttimetodothingslikethis.Ifeltveryexcitedatfirst.Wesetoffat8a．m.inthemorningandIsupposeditmightbeaneasyjourney.However,astimewentby,someonewantedtogiveup.Theteacherencouragedustoreachthetopofthemountain.Althoughintheendweweretired,wewerereallyattractedbythesceneryatthetopandourfeelingscan'tbeexpressedbywords.Fromthattime,Ilearnednottogiveupwhenfacingdifficulties.OnlywhenIkeepdoingitandfinishitcanIhaveasenseofachievement.相似題④你們班將舉行一次英語主題班會來討論自己第一次做某事的難忘經(jīng)歷。比如：第一次獨自旅行，第一次做飯……。請你以“MyFirstTimeTravelingAlone”為題寫一篇英語短文，敘述一下自己第一次單獨旅行的經(jīng)歷。要求：1.語言表達準確，短文連貫通順；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱；3.100詞左右。MyFirstTimeTravelingAlone___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】MyFirstTimeTravelingAloneIstillrememberthefirsttimeItraveledalone.Lastsummervacation,Iwenttothesummercamp.ThatwasthefirsttimeIlefthomealone.Atfirst,IwasalittleafraidbecauseIhadneverlefthomebefore.Butmyparentsencouragedmealot.Imetalotofchildren.Wewenttoclimbthemountaintogether.Theywerebraveandwebecamegoodfriends.Weoftenhelpedeachother.Atlast,wegottothetopofthemountain.Wewereveryexcited.Ilearnedalotfromtheexperience.IknewwhattodowhenIhadproblems.Thatwasthemostimportant.【考題解析】審題指導：細讀所給的文字提示，提取信息：

1.敘述一下自己第一次單獨旅行的經(jīng)歷，以記敘文為主；

2.需要寫“我”的第一次單獨旅行，用第一人稱；

3.記敘自己的單獨旅行經(jīng)歷，發(fā)生在過去，以一般過去時為主；抒發(fā)個人情感及感悟用一般現(xiàn)在時；我的第一次獨自旅行要點提示素材串聯(lián)開頭：概括我的第一次經(jīng)歷1.還記得我的第一次單獨旅游(stillrememberthefirsttimeItraveledalone)2.去年暑假我參加了夏令營(lastsummervacation,gotothesummercamp)正文：詳細敘述此次經(jīng)歷的過程1.起初有點害怕，因為之前從未離開過家(atfirst,alittleafraid,neverleavehomebefore)2.父母鼓勵，遇見了許多勇敢的孩子，與他們一起爬山，相互幫助，最后到達山頂(encourage,meetalotofchildren,climbthemountaintogether,helpeachother,thetopofthemountain)結(jié)尾：總結(jié)自己的感受學到了許多，知道了遇到困難做什么(learnalotfromtheexperience,knowwhattodo)相似題⑤（2021原創(chuàng)）烹飪會給人帶來愉悅，你的第一次烹飪經(jīng)歷是怎樣的呢？請以“Myfirstcookingexperience”為題，用英語寫一篇短文描述你的第一次烹飪經(jīng)歷。1.要點：1)描述具體的經(jīng)歷；2)你的感受。2.要求：1)文中不要出現(xiàn)所在學校的校名和師生姓名；2)詞數(shù)100左右。Myfirstcookingexperience________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】MyfirstcookingexperienceAsweall