作文13 江西卷-五年（2017-2021）中考英語滿分作文解讀+素材積累

作文13江西卷2021年江西中考英語書面表達(dá)TheValueofNegativeResultsWeallavoidfailure（失?。?andmostofusfearit.However,withoutfailure,progresswouldbeimpossible.Whatdoessuccessusuallycomeafter?Failure.Itseemsthatonecannotexist（存在）withouttheother.Acceptingfailureisnoteasyformany,thoughweareoftenunwillingtoacceptfailurebecauseourprofessionalfamedependsonsuccess.______Inthepasttenyears,forexample,somescientificmagazineshavepublishedreportsoffailedtests.Itisbelievedthatscientistscanlearnmore“negative（負(fù)面的）”resultsandthatthiscanfinallyleadtopositiveresults._______TheABNAMRObankstartedanInstitute（機(jī)構(gòu)）ofBrilliantFailurestolearnmoreaboutwhatworksandwhatdoesn’tinbanking.EliLillyandCompanyhadfailurepartiestostudythedrugs（藥物）thatdon’twork.Infact,oneofthebusinessworld’smostfamousfailuresbecameoneofitsbiggestsuccesses,inpartbecausetheproduct’smakerslearnedfromtheirmistakes._____Theproduct,thoughunique（獨特的）atthetime,wasexpensiveandheavy;besides,someofitsmostimportantfeatures（特點）didn’tworkproperly.Asaresult,Apple’sCEO,SteveJobs,believedintheproductandhebegantofindoutwaysofimprovingit.Intime,thisledtotheproductionoftheiPhoneandtheiPad,twoofthecompany’smostsuccessfulproducts.______Notonlyshouldwetrytolearnfromitifwewanttosucceed,wemustalsobepersistent（執(zhí)著的）.ThoughApplestoppedsellingtheNewtonin1998,thefirstiPhonewasn’tavailableuntil2007.IttookalotofresearchandhardworktogofromtheAppleNewtontoiPhonebutintheend,theeffortbecamesuccessful.Allinall,thereisalotwecanlearnbystudyingmistakes.Perhapsthemostimportantlessonisthatfailureandsuccessaretwosidesofthesamecoin.______A．Onetrulycannotexistwithouttheother.B．Wearebraveenoughtofacedifficulties.C．Intheearly1990s,ApplecreatedaphonecalledtheAppleNewton.D．Thebusinessworldalreadyunderstandsthevalueofnegativeresults.E.TheAppleNewtonhaswonpopularitywithpeopleallovertheworld.F.However,thingsareslowlychanging,especiallyinbusinessandscience.G.ThestoryoftheAppleNewtoncanteachusanimportantlessonaboutfailure.1．_______2．_______3．______4．_______5．_______6、書面表達(dá)失敗乃成功之母。本卷閱讀理解部分文章討論了失敗對于獲取成功具有重要的價值請你根據(jù)下面提示，寫一篇英語短文，談?wù)勀闳绾谓梃bApple的成功經(jīng)驗，采取有效行動，失敗為成功。寫作要點：1WhathaveyoulearnedfromApple’sstory?2Haveyoueverexperiencedafailure?Whatwasit?3Whatwillyoudototurnitintoasuccess?要求：1短文應(yīng)包括提示中所有的寫作要點，條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名和地名；3詞數(shù)不少于80。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】1．F2．D3．C4．G5．A

6、例文Failurecanleadtosuccess.Weshouldstudyitandlearnwhywemakemistakes,thenfindwaystosolveourproblems.Also,weshouldnevergiveup!Ioncetriedoutforaspeechcompetition.Ipracticeditmanytimes.Unexpectedly,Ifailed.I’veneverspokeninfrontofthepubliceversince.Apple’sstoryisquiteaninspirationforme.WhatcanIdotomakeit?First,beconfidentandtrytospeakinpublicplaces.Second,askmyteachersorfriendsforsomeadviceandimprovemylanguageskills.Finally,bepersistentandpracticespeechesoverandoveragain.I’msureIwillsucceedsomeday.【分析】本文介紹了人們對待錯誤不同態(tài)度，過去的時候人們害怕錯誤，避免錯誤；現(xiàn)在人們正面錯誤，從錯誤中吸取教訓(xùn)，改進(jìn)產(chǎn)品。1．根據(jù)上一句“Acceptingfailureisnoteasyformany,though.Weareoftenunwillingtoacceptfailurebecauseourprofessionalfamedependsonsuccess.”可知人們并不愿意接受失敗，但通過空格后的內(nèi)容可以知道，人們開始接受失敗，并在科技和商業(yè)界做一些與失敗有關(guān)的研究。前后存在轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，F(xiàn)選項“然而，事情在慢慢地改變，尤其是在商業(yè)和科技方面?！?，符合題意。故選F。2．根據(jù)空格后“TheABNAMRObankstartedanInstitute(機(jī)構(gòu))ofBrilliantFailuretolearnmoreaboutwhatworksandwhatdoesn’tinbanking.Similarly,EiLilyandCompanyhadfailurepartiestostudythedrugs(藥物)thatdon’twork.”可知商界已有人士認(rèn)識到失敗的價值，并進(jìn)行相應(yīng)的研究，D選項“商界早已領(lǐng)悟到了負(fù)面結(jié)果的價值?！保项}意。故選D。3．根據(jù)下文“Theproduct,thoughunique(獨特的)atthetime,wasexpensiveandheavy”可知這個產(chǎn)品在那個時候是昂貴且笨重的，盡管很獨特，此處在介紹一個新的產(chǎn)品。C選項“在二十世紀(jì)九十年代初期，蘋果公司創(chuàng)造了一款名為蘋果牛頓的手機(jī)?！?，符合題意。故選C。4．根據(jù)前文“However,Apple’sCEO,SteveJobs,believedintheproductandhebegantofindoutwaysofimprovingit.Intime,thisledtotheproductionoftheiPhoneandtheiPad,twoofthecompany’smostsuccessfulproducts.”舉蘋果公司由失敗到成功的例子，可知失敗極為重要，與后文“Notonlyshouldwetrytolearnfromit;ifwewanttosucceed,wemustalsobepersistent(執(zhí)著的).如果我們想要獲得成功，不僅要從中學(xué)習(xí)，還要堅持不懈。”相銜接。G選項“蘋果牛頓的故事告訴我們一個與失敗有關(guān)的重要道理?！狈项}意。故選G。5．根據(jù)前文“Perhapsthemostimportantlessonisthatfailureandsuccessaretwosidesofthesamecoin?！笨芍∨c成功是同一枚硬幣的兩面，所以二者相互依存，A選項“失敗與成功無法離開彼此而存在。”，符合題意。故選A。6．（1）.題干解讀：本文要求根據(jù)閱讀理解B部分文章，談?wù)勅绾谓梃bApple的成功經(jīng)驗，結(jié)合所給寫作要點寫一篇文章。內(nèi)容包括從Apple的故事中學(xué)習(xí)到了什么，你的失敗經(jīng)歷，要如何將失敗變?yōu)槌晒?。?）.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用第一人稱寫作，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時。第一部分介紹從Apple的成功中學(xué)習(xí)到了什么，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時；第二部分描寫自己的失敗經(jīng)歷，時態(tài)為一般過去時；第三部分為如何把失敗變?yōu)槌晒?，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時。寫作時要行文連貫，條理清晰，語言準(zhǔn)確。2020年江西中考英語書面表達(dá)為了幫助學(xué)生迎接中考，在中考前幾個月，老師一般都會進(jìn)行復(fù)習(xí)教學(xué)。一家英語教學(xué)研究中心(EnglishTeachingResearchCenter)正在對中考英語復(fù)習(xí)教學(xué)現(xiàn)狀進(jìn)行調(diào)查。請你根據(jù)下面提示，寫一篇英語短文，向他們介紹你們班的英語復(fù)習(xí)課的情況，談?wù)勀銓τ⒄Z復(fù)習(xí)課的感受及看法，并提出建議。寫作要點：1.YourfeelingsaboutyourEnglishrevisionclasses.2.Classactivities:a.WhatdidyourEnglishteacherusuallydoinclass?b.Whatdidyouusuallydoinclass?3.YouradviceonEnglishrevisionclassestoyourEnglishteacher.要求：1.短文應(yīng)包括提示中所有的寫作要點，條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名和地名；3.詞數(shù)不少于80，短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。IthinkmyEnglishrevisionclasseswere_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IthinkmyEnglishrevisionclasseswereusefulbuttiring.Inclass,myEnglishteacherorganizeddifferentkindsofactivitiestohelpusreviewwhatwehadlearnt.Sometimessheexplainedhowtousethekeywordsandsentencepatterns.Wetooknotesandmadesentences.Withtheteacher'shelp,wepracticedlistening,readingandwritinginclass.Butweoftendidexercisesandhadexams,whichmademestressedout.IhopeEnglishrevisionclassescanbemoreenjoyable.Wecanplaygamesandrole—playconversations.It’sagoodideatohavediscussionswithmypartnersinEnglish.What’smore,Iliketeacherswhoarealwayswithasmile.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料類作文，要求寫一篇關(guān)于中考英語復(fù)習(xí)教學(xué)現(xiàn)狀的文章，談?wù)勀銓τ⒄Z復(fù)習(xí)課的感受及看法、復(fù)習(xí)課上老師及同學(xué)開展的一些活動、個人對于英語復(fù)習(xí)課的一些建議，以上寫作要點缺一不可。根據(jù)題目要求可知，本文時態(tài)以為一般過去時為主，人稱為第一人稱和第三人稱，注意主謂一致問題。2.例文點評：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，要點齊全。首段介紹了自己對英語復(fù)習(xí)課的感受以及老師在課堂上的教學(xué)活動和學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)情況；第二段介紹了個人對英語復(fù)習(xí)課的改進(jìn)意見。文章使用了正確的人稱和時態(tài)，符合表達(dá)的需要。3.高分亮點：短語：takenotes；makesentences；practicedoingsth；stressedout；what’smore。句型：疑問詞+動詞不定式；which引導(dǎo)的定語從句；it作形式主語。2019年江西中考英語書面表達(dá)文章討論了許多年輕人很在意自己外貌的問題，文章的最后指出：“Weneedtojudgepeoplebywhattheydo,notwhattheylooklike.”你同意文章最后提出的觀點嗎?對此觀點你有何看法?請根據(jù)下面提示寫一篇英語短文談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎU述理由，并舉例說明。寫作要點:I.Youropinion(agree/disagree/…);2.Reasons(looks,personality品性,ability…);3.Anexample(yourself/apersonaroundyou/afamousperson/…).要求:1.短文應(yīng)包括提示中所有的寫作要點，條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;2.如舉自己或身邊的人作為例子，不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名和地名;3.詞數(shù)不少于80。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________PossibleversionOne;Iagreewiththeopinion.Comparedwithlooks,personalityandabilityaremoreimportant.Becausewecan’tchangeourlookseasily,butwecandecideandcontrolwhatwedo.Thankstothekindandhard-workingpeople,oursocietyisbecomingbetterandbetter.Forexample,MaYun,awell-knownbusinessman,doesn’tlookhandsome,buthecreatedAlibabawhichhaschangedourlifestyleandmadeourlifemoreconvenient.Hehasbeendoingsomuchforoursocietythatwealladmirehim.Becauseofhiscontributiontooursociety,weeventhinkhelookssocool.Solet’stryourbesttodomoreusefulthingsforoursocietyandpaylessattentiontoourlooks.PossibleVersionTwoInmyopinion,IthinkweneedtojudgepeoplebybothwhattheydoandwhattheylooklikeAperson'spersonalityandabilityareveryimportant,butforsomejobs,looksarealsoimportant,suchasanactororanactress,awaiterorawaitress,orevenateacherBecauseit'senjoyabletoseeagood-lookingpersonForexample,myteachersinmyclassallteachverywell,andtheyarekindandhelpful.Allofuslikethem.ButthemostpopularteacherismyEnglishteacher,becauseshelooksreallybeautiful.ShedressesherselfupeverydayandalwayshasasmileonherfaceSolet'stryourbesttoimproveourability,personalityandlooks.【詳解】這是一篇要求根據(jù)文章中許多年輕人很在意自己外貌的問題，文章最后提出判斷一個人應(yīng)該根據(jù)他做了什么，而不是根據(jù)一個人的外貌來判斷，對這一觀點提出自己的看法。動筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點，圍繞要點組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。2018年江西中考英語書面表達(dá)假如國外中學(xué)生來你校進(jìn)行為期一周的交流學(xué)習(xí),期間計劃參加一項中國傳統(tǒng)文化的主題活動,為此向你們征求活動方案(plan)請你根據(jù)下面表格中的信息提示,寫一篇英語短文,介紹你提供的活動方案,內(nèi)容包括:茶或者民樂介紹,活動安排以及與之相關(guān)的理由。要求:1.從表格中任選一個主題,合理安排活動;2.短文條理清楚,行文連貫,內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;3.短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名和地名;4.詞數(shù)不少于80,開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。ChineseCultureIntroductionScheduleReasonsTeaPastandpresentTime:______Places:teafarm,teahouseActivities:1.teaprocessing2.ateaartperformance…FolkMusicMusicpiecesandtraditionalinstrumentsTime:_______Places:musicroom,schoolhallActivities:1.takemusicalinstrumentclasses2.attendafolkmusicconcert…Hello,friends.I'vegotaplanforyouwhichmayhelpyoulearnaboutChineseculture.Firstofall,I'dliketointroduce______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopeyouwillhaveagoodtime.Hello,friends.I'vegotaplanforyouwhichmayhelpyoulearnaboutChineseculture.Firstofall,I'dliketointroducetea.Ithasalonghistory.ItissaidthatShenNongdiscovereditasadrink.TeaisoneofthemostpopulardrinksinChina.Sowewillhavesomeinterestingactivitiesaboutitforyou.OnSaturdaymorning,youaregoingtovisitabigfarmwhereyoucanlearnaboutteaprocessing.OnSaturdayafternoon,youaregoingtoateahouseafterdinnerwhereyoucanwatchateaartperformance.Whydoweplanavisittoateahouseforyou?Becauseyoucanlearnalotmoreaboutteaculturethere.YouwillseeayoungladyinaChinesetraditionaldresswhoshowsyouhowacupofteaismadewithteasets.Youcanenjoyitandrelaxyourselveswhilelisteningtopiecesoftraditionalfolkmusic.Hopeyouwillhaveagoodtime.【詳解】亮點說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如helpsb.do，aboutChineseculture，I'dliketo，oneofthemostpopulardrinks，begoingto，afterdinner，alotmore，bemadewith，listento，haveagoodtime等。而ItissaidthatShenNongdiscovereditasadrink.TeaisoneofthemostpopulardrinksinChina./YouwillseeayoungladyinaChinesetraditionaldresswhoshowsyouhowacupofteaismadewithteasets,/Youcanenjoyitandrelaxyourselveswhilelisteningtopiecesoftraditionalfolkmusic.等多種復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運用，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣，是本文的最大亮點。點睛：書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。2017年江西中考英語書面表達(dá)微笑是人類最美的語言．某英文報以"Smiles"為題，舉辦中學(xué)生征文活動．請根據(jù)下面的圖表信息，寫一篇英語短文．內(nèi)容包括：微笑的力量、你的微笑故事以及故事給予你的啟示．

提示：短文應(yīng)包括圖表中的全部信息，條理清楚，行文連貫；短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名和地名；

詞數(shù)不少于80，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．Power?of?smiles

（get?on?well,bring?good?luck,…）Your?own?story?about?smiles↖Smiles↗↑

What?you've?learnt?from?the?storySmilesA?smile?is?the?most?beautiful?language?of?human?beings.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________????????????????????????????????????????????????

A?smile?is?the?most?beautiful?language?of?human?beings.First,Whenwehaveaproblem,conflictormisunderstanding,onlysmilecanhelpuscommunicateandrelease；whenwearefacingwithsomedifficulties,onlysmilecanhelpusovercome.Second,smilecanhelpusgetonwellwithotherpeople,whichmakesustrusteachother＜高分句型＞．Third,smilecanbringgoodlucktous,andwewill?thinkthatlifeissunnyandcolorful.＜高分句型＞

IrememberIfightwithmybestfriend,I?amsosadandIamafraidthat?wewillnevertrusteachother.Butasmilemakesusbegoodfriendsagain.＜關(guān)于微笑的故事＞Fromthattimeon,Iknowthatnomatterhowlargethedifficultiesare,nomatterhowmuchthesadnessis,youneedtokeeponsmilingandtry?to?useasmiletocreateyourconfidence.＜從故事中得到的啟示＞【分析】這是一篇圖表作文，讓我們寫一篇以smile為題的作文，這要求我們發(fā)揮自己的思維力和想象力，寫出微笑的力量，寫作時應(yīng)該用第三人稱，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時為主，內(nèi)容包括：首先詳細(xì)闡述一下微笑的力量，其次，寫一個關(guān)于自己的微笑的故事，并寫出從故事中得到的啟示．

重點句型：

Smilecanhelpusgetonwellwithotherpeople,whichmakesustrusteachother.譯為：微笑能幫助我們好好地與人相處，讓我們比此次信任．此句中短語特多，如helpsbdo

幫助某人做某事；getonwithsb

與人相處；makesbdosth讓某人干某事．一個句子中能有三個重要短語，不愧為高分句型

Smilecanbringgoodlucktous,andwewill?thinkthatlifeissunnyandcolorful.譯為：微笑能給我們帶來好運．我們會認(rèn)為生活是陽光的多彩的，此句中有個這個重要短語bringgoodluckto給．．帶來好運；and連接兩個句子，構(gòu)成復(fù)合句．

【點評】寫圖表作文時，我們最好不要漏掉其中的要點，行文注意簡化，不要拖沓冗長，適當(dāng)寫幾個復(fù)合句比較用易得高分，但同時注意，適當(dāng)用幾個人連接詞，first,besides,what'smore,last等，這樣會使文章顯得有層次感，同時，在作文完成的時候注意檢查，修改，如果有條件的話最好能夠先打個草稿，再抄到答題紙上，方能成為一篇好文章中考英語作文滿分必備的句型1.重點句型1).It’sadjforsbtodo做…對某人來說…2).…so…that…如此…以至于……too…todo太…而不能…

such…that…如此…以至于…

3).not…until…直到…才…

例：Ididn’tgotobeduntilmymothercameback。

4).Thereasonwhy+句子isthat+句子…的原因是…

Thereasonwhyhegotangrywasthatshetoldhimalie.(他生氣的原因是她對他說了謊。)5).Thatiswhy+句子那是…的原因6).Thatisbecause+句子那是因為…7).Itissaidthat+句子據(jù)說…

Itisreportedthat+句子據(jù)報道…

8).Thereisnodoubtthat