Module 8 Story time-2021-2022學(xué)年七年級英語下學(xué)期模塊話題滿分寫作（外研版）

2021-2022學(xué)年七年級英語下學(xué)期單元話題滿分寫作Module8:Storytime單元話題：講故事/描述過去發(fā)生的事情范文1《守株待兔》的故事家喻戶曉,請根據(jù)下面的提示詞,用英語寫出這個故事。提示詞：hare野兔；hole洞；knockagainst撞上；nolonger不再要求：1.表達(dá)正確,

邏輯清晰；2.不少于60個詞。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onceuponatime,therewasafarmerworkinginhisfield.Soonhewasverytired.Sohesatnearabigtree.Thesunwasveryhotanditwasverycoolunderthetree.Ahareranoutofahole.Whenitsawthefarmer,itwasveryafraid.Itranquickly.Itransofastthatitsheadknockedagainstanothertree.Itdiedsoon.Thefarmerwasveryexcitedtoseeit.Hepickedupthedeadhareandtookithomefordinner.Fromthatday,henolongerworked.Hestayedbythattree,waitingforharestocomeagain.【解析】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作，寫作時要按記敘文格式寫。在寫作時開頭介紹一個農(nóng)民在田里勞動；接下來講述他看見一只撞在樹上而死的兔子；最后他站在樹邊，不勞動，只等著兔子再次來。2.例文點(diǎn)評：例文采用兩段式；用第三人稱來敘述故事內(nèi)容；時態(tài)采用一般過去時為主，介紹這個兔子如何撞在樹上死的，敘述完整且條理清晰。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：inthefield；runoutof；knockagainst；pickup；nolonger。句型：therebe句型therebetherewasafarmerworkinginhisfield；時間狀語從句Whenitsawthefarmer；結(jié)果狀語sofastthatitsheadknockedagainstanothertree。范文22．從前，森林里住著狐貍媽媽和小狐貍。有一天小狐貍餓了，狐貍媽媽去給他找食物，后來發(fā)生了什么事呢?媽媽去了山里的一個村子，終于找到了食物。它拿著葡萄（grapes），趕快往家跑，快到家時，它聽到了獵狗（huntingdog）的叫聲，馬上大聲喊道:“孩子!快跑!”小狐貍聽見媽媽的聲音，它趕快跑進(jìn)了山，結(jié)果狐貍媽媽被獵人（hunter）抓到殺死了。請你根據(jù)以上所給情節(jié)，寫篇70詞左右的英語小作文。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Onceuponatime,therewasafoxandherbabyintheforest.Onedaythebabyfoxwasveryhungryandcried.Motherfoxdecidedtogetsomefoodforherbaby.Soshewenttoavillageinamountain.Shegotsomegrapesandhurriedtoherhouse.Whenshewasnearthehouse,suddenlysheheardthenoisesofthehuntingdog.Sherealisedthehunterwascomingtokillherson.Motherfoxshouted,“Mydearson,itisdangerous.Runaway.Bequick.”BabyfoxranawaybutMotherfoxwascaughtandkilledbythehunter.【解析】本文需要寫一則英文小故事，情節(jié)已經(jīng)給出，重點(diǎn)的單詞也相應(yīng)給了出來，要注意在描述過去的事情的時候正確使用過去時態(tài)，可以用到的短語搭配表達(dá)有：Onceuponatime曾經(jīng)；decidedtodo決定去做；getsomefoodfor為…找一些食物；avillageinamountain大山里的一個小村莊；hurriedto匆忙去…；nearthehouse在房子附近；Runaway跑掉。總體來說寫作難度不大，重點(diǎn)是正確把握時態(tài)的應(yīng)用，語句連貫，這篇范文完成了要求的寫作任務(wù)。范文33．從前，樹林里住著一只老虎。所有的動物都怕他，因?yàn)槔匣⒂幸惶鞎缘羲鼈儭Ｒ恢缓镒記Q定不再讓老虎住在這里。最后，猴子想了一個辦法，把老虎引到河邊，老虎在河里看到了另一只老虎……請續(xù)寫下面這個故事。Onceuponatime,therelivedatigerintheforest.Alltheanimalswereafraidofhim.Amonkeydecidednottoletthetigerlivehere….__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onceuponatime,therelivedatigerintheforest.Alltheanimalswereafraidofhim.Amonkeydecidednottoletthetigerlivehere.Oneday,themonkeysaidtothetiger,“Hey,Mr.Tiger.Doyouknowthatanothertigeralsoliveshere?Hesaidhewasn’tafraidofyouatall.”Thetigerwasveryangry.Heaskedthemonkeytotakehimtoseeit.Themonkeytookthetigertoariver.“Lookintotheriver,Mr.Tiger.Thereheis.”Thetigerlookedintotheriverandfoundanothertigerwaslookingathimangrily.Hejumpedintotheriveranddied.【解析】本文是一篇給材料作文，要求就所講的故事續(xù)寫下面的故事，而且故事的開頭已經(jīng)給出。本文時態(tài)為一般過去時，人稱主要為第三人稱。在寫作前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，寫作時可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象力，使文章更加的豐富，充實(shí)，增加文章的可讀性。要注意語句通順，連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性；同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，避免句式單一；最后要認(rèn)真檢查，看有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。范文44．花木蘭替父從軍的故事家喻戶曉。請你根據(jù)下列提示，寫一篇英語短文。60詞左右。從前，有一個女孩，名叫花木蘭，因家中沒有男孩，她只好代替（insteadof）父親參軍（jointhearmy）。在軍隊(duì)里沒有人發(fā)現(xiàn)她是個女孩，她作戰(zhàn)（fight，fought）非常勇敢（bravely）。戰(zhàn)爭結(jié)束后（afterthewar），她回到家鄉(xiāng)，她的伙伴們（partner）才知道她是女兒身。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Onceuponatime,therewasagirlcalledHuamulan.Herfatherdidn’thaveason,soshehadtojointhearmyinsteadofherfather.Inthearmy,noonenoticedthatshewasagirl.Shefoughtverybravely.Afterthewar,shereturnedherhometown.Thenherpartnersknewshewasagirl!【解析】題干解讀：這篇作文要求學(xué)生們根據(jù)提示，敘述花木蘭替父從軍的故事。題目中已有了完整的故事情節(jié)，還有一些詞匯和短語，學(xué)生們可以用上這些單詞，并將這些內(nèi)容用英語表達(dá)出來。寫作指導(dǎo)：審題可知，這篇短文敘述的是一個故事，文章應(yīng)用一般過去時態(tài)，注意謂語動詞過去式的變化，尤其是一些不規(guī)則動詞。寫作時應(yīng)注意英語句子的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，以簡單句句型為基礎(chǔ)，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語。還可以穿插一些并列句或復(fù)合句的使用，提升作文檔次。范文55．下面四幅圖片描述了一個小故事，請你根據(jù)圖片內(nèi)容及所給詞語提示，適當(dāng)展開想象，寫一篇70詞左右的小故事。要求：語句規(guī)范、通順，情節(jié)合理、完整。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Onceuponatime,amonkeyplayedinthetreenearariver.Itwashappyandjumpedagainandagain.Then,itfellintotheriver.Itcriedforhelpbecauseitcouldn’tswim.Adoghappenedtoplayneartheriverandsawit.Thedogjumpedintotheriverandhelpedthemonkeyoutofthewater.Theybecamegoodfriendslater.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇看圖作文。根據(jù)所給的四張圖片寫一篇小故事。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文采用第三人稱，時態(tài)采用一般過去時。在講述故事時，要生動有趣，注意主謂要保持一致，邏輯性要強(qiáng)，做到無語法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯誤。范文66．以“HowdidyouspendlastSunday?WhatwereyoudoingatdifferenttimeslastSunday？”為內(nèi)容,寫一篇60詞左右的短文。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。提示：watchamovie,climbmountains,playbasketball,visitfriends,playcomputergames,dohousework…

happy,excited,sad.IhadahappydaylastSunday._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文IhadahappydaylastSunday.From6:30to7:00,IclimbedLianhuaMountainwithmyfather.At8:00am,Iwasdoinghouseworkbecausemyparentswereout.At9:50,Iwaswatchingamoviewithmyfriend,HanXingxing.Thefilmwasveryinteresting,anditmadeusexcited.At2:20,IvisitedmyfriendsandIwasplayingbasketballwithmyclassmatesonourschoolplaygroundat4:30.At6:00pmmygrandparents,myparentsandIwerehavingabigdinnertogetherinarestaurant.Weallfeltveryhappyandenjoyedit.Whenwegothome,Iplayedcomputergames.Butitonlytookmefifteenminutes,soIwassadandthenIwenttobed.【解析】1.

題干解讀：文章屬于話題作文，主要是介紹自己上周末是如何度過的，內(nèi)容可以按照題目中提出的問題進(jìn)行描寫，也可以適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫作時要運(yùn)用正確的英語表達(dá)，要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語。2.

寫作指導(dǎo)：文章主要用一般過去時，人稱用第一人稱展開描述。主要是介紹自己的周末情況，包括一些具體的活動以及自己的感受等。寫作時語言要簡單易懂，文章結(jié)構(gòu)要完整，多使用簡單詞語表達(dá)，意思要通俗易懂。范文77．親愛的同學(xué)們，首先祝賀大家順利完成了七年級課程學(xué)習(xí)！在這一年的學(xué)習(xí)中，大家經(jīng)歷了開心、緊張、感動、無助、傷感、難忘的一天天、一日日。請以Adaytoremember為題，根據(jù)下面的圖表信息，寫一篇英語短文，介紹下你印象深刻、難忘的一天。要求：1.短文必須包括圖表中的所有信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.詞數(shù)不少于50，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。AdaytorememberItwasanunforgettable(難忘的)dayforme,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________