題型21 書面表達(dá)之建議信（練習(xí)）

第21講書面表達(dá)之建議信（模擬精練+真題演練）模擬精練1．（2023·湖南永州）最近你的筆友Mike在與同學(xué)的交往中遇到了煩惱，他寫郵件向你尋求幫助，請你以李華的身份給他寫一封郵件，提出你的一些建議，幫助他解決煩惱。注意：1）文中請勿使用真實(shí)人名。2）詞數(shù)：不低于80詞，文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3）語句通順，意思連貫，表達(dá)正確，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。參考詞匯：share,solve,friendly,respect(尊重)DearMike,I’msorrytohearthatyouhavesomeproblemswithyourschoolworkandclassmates.I’mgladtohelpyou.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopeeverythingwillgowellwithyousoon.YoursLiHua2．（2023·陜西咸陽）假如你是李華，你的朋友王磊給你發(fā)郵件說他最近很不開心。請你根據(jù)下面的表格提示，用英語給他回一封電子郵件，給他提一些建議，幫助他盡快擺脫煩惱。問題1）家庭作業(yè)多，幾乎沒有時間休息；2）壓力大，經(jīng)常感到緊張。建議1）制訂學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃，找到適合自己的學(xué)習(xí)方法；2）學(xué)會放松；3）多與父母、老師或朋友交談。參考詞匯：nervous(緊張的),greatpressure(壓力大),makeaplan,goforawalk,relax…要求：1）參考提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2）語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；3）文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)信息；4）詞數(shù)：不少于50詞。（開頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）DearWangLei,Iamsorrytoknowthatyouareunhappythesedays.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua3．（2023上·陜西延安）青少年在成長過程中難免會遇到一些困惑。假如你是李華。昨天你收到你的美國筆友Jim的電子郵件。請你根據(jù)他提出的問題，給他回一封電子郵件，向他提出合理的建議。DearLiHua,How’severythinggoing?Iamnotgoodthesedays.IhavelotsofhomeworkeverydayandIhavenotimetodowhatIlike.AndIamalittlefat.Iworryaboutmyhealth.WhatshouldIdo?Canyougivemesomeadvice?Iexpecttoreceiveyourreply.Yours,Jim要求：（1）語句通順，邏輯合理，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；（2）意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范；（3）70詞左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。DearJim,

I’msorrytohearthatyouhavesomeproblemsinlife.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopeyoucanbebettersoon.Yours,LiHua4．（2023·浙江湖州）假設(shè)你是李華，以下是你的英國朋友Tony發(fā)給你的一封電子郵件，請根據(jù)該郵件內(nèi)容給他回復(fù)一封郵件。注意：（1）郵件中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息；（2）詞數(shù)80左右，開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。To:LiHuaFrom:TonyHi,LiHua,Longtimenosee.Ileftmyhometownwithmyparentsandwenttoanewschool.ButIdon’thaveanyfriendsnowsoIfeelupsetthesedays.LifeiskindofboringsoIwanttofindsomegoodwaystohavefun.Canyougivemesomeadvice?Hopetogetyourreplysoon.Yours,TonyHiTony,Iknowhowyoufeel.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopemyadvicecanhelpyou.Yours,LiHua5．（2023·江蘇常州）假如你是李蕾，剛剛收到一封來自英國朋友Sandy的郵件。她在郵件中說自己想上一門藝術(shù)課，但是不知道選什么好，想聽聽你的建議。請根據(jù)表格提示，選擇或自擬1—2門藝術(shù)課，給出建議并闡述理由，用英語給Sandy回復(fù)一封郵件。SuggestionsReasonspainting/drawinglessons.makeyoucreative…piano/violin/guitarlessonsmakeyourelaxed…dancing/singinglessonshelpyoustayhealthy…要求：1．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；2．詞數(shù)：100左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）DearSandy,Gladtohearfromyou.SinceI’mtakingartlessons,Ihavesomeideastosharewithyou.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursLiLei6．（2023·廣西·統(tǒng)考三模）假如你是李華，你的好朋友Lucy是月光中學(xué)的初三學(xué)生，中考將至，她寫郵件詢問你，如何緩解學(xué)習(xí)壓力。請你根據(jù)下面的導(dǎo)圖內(nèi)容，用英文給她回復(fù)一封郵件。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：Howtorelieve(緩解)studypressure?listentosomesoftmusicwatchsomeinterestingmoviesaskyourparentsorteachersforhelp……寫作要求：1.文中須包含以上要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不能提及本人的真實(shí)姓名、地名和校名；3.字?jǐn)?shù)80左右，開頭不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearLucy,Howareyouthesedays?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua7．（2023·安徽合肥·統(tǒng)考一模）假如你是李華，你的英國筆友Mike作為交換生，將于下個月來你校交流學(xué)習(xí)。請給他寫一封電子郵件，向他介紹你們學(xué)校并提出一些旅行建議。要點(diǎn)如下：（1）介紹學(xué)校：課程多樣，活動豐富；（2）旅行建議：綠色出行，體驗(yàn)文化……要求：（1）語句通順，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；（2）不可出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名與學(xué)校名稱；（3）詞數(shù)80—100。DearMike,I’mgladtoknowthatyou’llvisitourschoolasanexchangestudent.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mlookingforwardtomeetingyouhere.Allthebest!Yours,LiHua8．（2023·天津河西·統(tǒng)考模擬預(yù)測）假設(shè)你是戴安娜老師，你的學(xué)生Steve轉(zhuǎn)入另一個城市的一所高中。Steve給你發(fā)郵件，傾訴他在新學(xué)校的一些煩惱。請根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，給Steve回一封郵件，提出如下建議。(1)主動問候同學(xué)，課間和同學(xué)交談；(2)課上參與小組討論，表達(dá)自己的想法；(3)參加班級活動和學(xué)校社團(tuán)(如運(yùn)動會、歌詠比賽等)；(4)你希望……參考詞匯：小組討論groupwork

表達(dá)express要求：(1)詞數(shù)：80～100個。(2)開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。(3)要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。DearDiana,Ijustcametoanewschool.Imissyouallverymuch.Ifinditdifficulttogetonwellwithmynewclassmates.WhatshouldIdo?Steve※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※DearSteve,Ihavelearnedaboutyourproblems.Ithink________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes,Diana9．（2023·浙江杭州·統(tǒng)考二模）美國朋友Sam發(fā)來的郵件，請閱讀后以電子郵件的形式回復(fù)。要求：①可適當(dāng)添加內(nèi)容讓行文通順、連貫。②字?jǐn)?shù)不少于80詞。To:LiPingFrom:SamSubject:WhatshouldIdo?DearLiPing,Howiseverythinggoingwithyou?I’mstressedoutthesedays.MylastexamresultsdroppedonceagainandIreallydon’tknowhowtoimprovemygrades.What’sworse,myparentsalwayscomparemewithothersandexpecttoomuchfromme.It’sdifficulttogetonwellwiththem.Iamsoupset.WhatshouldIdo?Pleasegivemesomeadvice.Lookingforwardtoyourquickreply!Yours,Sam________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．（2023·浙江杭州·校聯(lián)考二模）假定你是李平，你的筆友Rose發(fā)來一封郵件，她計(jì)劃九月份來杭州觀看第19屆亞運(yùn)會。請根據(jù)Rose在電子郵件中的提問，給她寫回信。詞數(shù)80左右。To

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liping@DearRose,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiPing真題演練11．（2023·河北·統(tǒng)考中考真題）王梅的英國朋友Tony要來中國學(xué)習(xí)漢語，下面是Tony給她發(fā)來的電子郵件的部分內(nèi)容。請你根據(jù)所給內(nèi)容，以王梅的名義回復(fù)。Youknow,inEnglish,givennames(名字)comefirstandfamilynames(姓)comelast.HowaboutChinesenames?AndcanyouhelpmechooseaChinesenameandtellmeitsmeaning?注意：（1）回復(fù)郵件須回答所給郵件內(nèi)容中的兩個問題，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。（2）回復(fù)郵件中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名，所起名字只限于備選名字。（3）詞數(shù)80個左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。備選名字：王?。╓angJian）；李聰（LiCong）；張友好（ZhangYouhao）HiTony,I’mveryhappytoknowthatyou’llcometoChinatolearnChinese.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoseeingyou.Yours,WangMei12．（2023·山東濱州·統(tǒng)考中考真題）假如你是李華，近日你的英國筆友Amy發(fā)來郵件，向你訴說她最近的困擾；自己體型微胖，想通過節(jié)食減肥，以更美的面貌進(jìn)入新的學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)。請你根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容用英語給她回封郵件，談一談你對這問題的見解。參考詞匯:diet(v.節(jié)食),appearance(n.外貌),innerbeauty(內(nèi)在美)DearLiHua,IhavebeenabitlargerthanothergirlssinceIwaslittle.Foralongtime,thisreallytroubledme.IfeelmoreworriedbecauseIwillstartmyseniorhighschoollifesoon!IamafraidthatthestudentsinthenewschoolwilllaughatmebecauseIam“big”.Idecidetolookmorebeautiful,soIwanttoloseweightbydieting.Whatdoyouthinkofmyplan?Canyougivemesomeadvice?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,Amy要求：1.要點(diǎn)齊全，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名與校名；3.卷面整潔，書寫美觀，可適當(dāng)加2—3分；4.80詞左右。開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearAmy,

Ihavereceivedandreadyourletter,inwhichyousaidyouwantedtoloseweightbydieting.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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LiHua13．（2022·廣西河池·統(tǒng)考中考真題）今年4月，教育部頒發(fā)了《義務(wù)教育勞動課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)（2022年版）》。從2022年秋季學(xué)期起，多種勞動技能將納入中小學(xué)課程，引發(fā)同學(xué)們的熱議和關(guān)注。假如你是李華，請根據(jù)下面內(nèi)容對即將開設(shè)的勞動課（laborclasses）寫一封信給校長，提出你的想法及建議。1.感覺非常高興及興奮。從中可以學(xué)到一些勞動技能，學(xué)會照顧自己（learnsomelaborskills,lookafter）。2.希望學(xué)校能提供給每班勞動課的場地。每周開課兩節(jié)。由生活經(jīng)驗(yàn)豐富的老師教授同學(xué)們?nèi)绾巫鲲垺⒎N菜……（補(bǔ)充兩個內(nèi)容）（provide...for,withrichexperience,teach）。3.希望學(xué)校在期末舉行各種勞動技能比賽；邀請家長們參觀并分享勞動課成果（attheendof,hold,laborachievements）。寫作要求：1.不得使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名；2.內(nèi)容需包含以上所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫；3.字跡工整，語言精練，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，條理清晰；4.詞數(shù)100左右。（信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。）Dearheadmaster,

MynameisLiHua.I’minClass6,Grade8.Itissaidthatwearegoingtohavelaborclassesnextterm.Allmyclassmatesareinterestedinit.I’mwritingtoyoutosharemyideasaboutthecominglaborclasses.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

That’sallmyopinions.We’relookingforwardtotheclasses.Thankyou!Yours,LiHua14．（2022·湖北十堰·統(tǒng)考中考真題）假設(shè)你叫李華，即將從初中畢業(yè)。請你根據(jù)下面表格中的信息給校長寫一封信，談?wù)勀銓W(xué)校的一些看法。優(yōu)點(diǎn)不足優(yōu)秀的老師課外活動少友好的同學(xué)休息時間短美麗的校園……你的建議……提示詞：schoolyard校園要求：1.短文應(yīng)涵蓋上述所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.行文連貫，條理清楚，語句通順，書寫規(guī)范。3.不得在文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校名稱和人名。4.詞數(shù)80-100，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總數(shù)。DearMr./Ms.Headmaster,IamwritingtoshowmysinceregratitudetoyoufortheprogressIhavemadeinthepastthreeyears._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes.Sincerelyyours,LiHua15．（2022·四川自貢·統(tǒng)考中考真題）假定你是李華。你的英國朋友Mike來信說他在人際交往方面感到迷茫，希望得到你的幫助。請寫封回信，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示理解和安慰；2.建議：正確認(rèn)識自己的不足；處理好和父母的關(guān)系；處理好與同學(xué)、朋友之間的關(guān)系；3.表達(dá)祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearMike,How’severythinggoing?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua16．（2022·北京·統(tǒng)考中考真題）假定你是李華，你的英國筆友Chris對中國文化很感興趣，他給你發(fā)來郵件，詢問中國人日常生活中的基本社交禮儀，如待人接物、餐桌禮儀等。請你用英語回復(fù)一封郵件，介紹你所知道的相關(guān)禮儀。提示詞語：manners,shakehands,polite,gift,chopsticks提示問題：·Whatdowedowhenwemeetpeopleforthefirsttime?Howdowebehaveproperlyattable?DearChris,I’mgladtoknowthatyou’reinterestedinChinesesocialmanners.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopetheaboveishelpful.Pleasefeelfreetoaskformoreinformation.Yours,LiHua17．（2022·浙江金華·統(tǒng)考中考真題）假如你是LiHua，你的外國好友Frank來信告知他將成為你校七年級新生。請根據(jù)下列表格中的內(nèi)容，結(jié)合自己初中階段學(xué)習(xí)、生活等方面的經(jīng)歷，回一封郵件，供他參考。注意：1.文中必須包含所給的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；參考詞匯供選擇使用；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校等信息；3.詞數(shù)：80~100；4.郵件的格式及正文首句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；正文首句僅供選擇使用。正文首句：I’mgladtoknowyou’recomingtostudyinourschool.內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)參考詞匯Thingsneedednotebook,dictionary,…Attitude（態(tài)度）totakehard-working,active,happy,…Relationshiptodeveloprespect,getalongwith,…Others…DearFrank,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua18．（2022·浙江紹興·統(tǒng)考中考真題）假設(shè)你是劉軍，在上周末的鄉(xiāng)村旅游中，你發(fā)現(xiàn)了一些游客的不文明行為。請根據(jù)下表信息給某英文報VOICE欄目的編輯寫一封郵件，反映這些問題并提出建議。UncivilizedbehaviorsSuggestions●threwrubbisheverywhere●pickedflowers●climbedtrees●putrubbishintobins●…注意：（1）郵件內(nèi)容必須包括上表所有信息，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；（2）你的建議至少兩條；（3）詞數(shù)：80—100；（4）郵件開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：不文明行為uncivilizedbehavior；編輯editorDeareditor,IwasshockedtoseesomeuncivilizedbehaviorswhenItookatriptoavillagelastweekend.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________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第21講書面表達(dá)之建議信（解析版）（模擬精練+真題演練）模擬精練1．（2023·湖南永州）最近你的筆友Mike在與同學(xué)的交往中遇到了煩惱，他寫郵件向你尋求幫助，請你以李華的身份給他寫一封郵件，提出你的一些建議，幫助他解決煩惱。注意：1）文中請勿使用真實(shí)人名。2）詞數(shù)：不低于80詞，文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3）語句通順，意思連貫，表達(dá)正確，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。參考詞匯：share,solve,friendly,respect(尊重)DearMike,I’msorrytohearthatyouhavesomeproblemswithyourschoolworkandclassmates.I’mgladtohelpyou.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopeeverythingwillgowellwithyousoon.YoursLiHua【答案】例文DearMike,I’msorrytohearthatyouhavesomeproblemswithyourschoolworkandclassmates.I’mgladtohelpyou.First,whenyouhavedifficulties,youshouldtalktoyourparents,yourteachersoryourfriendsandshareyoursadnessandhappinessswiththem.Theywillhelpyousolvetheproblem.Second,whenyougetalongwithyourfriends,youaresupposedtorespectthem.Third,youshouldbefriendlytopeoplearoundyou.Youcanhelpeachother.Lastbutnotleast,youhavetobehonesttoyourfriends.Thenyouwillmakemorefriends.Ihopeeverythingwillgowellwithyousoon.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一封郵件；②時態(tài)：主要時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏注意事項(xiàng)中“提示信息”的幾個要點(diǎn)均要一一闡述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。[寫作步驟]第一步：表明寫作意圖。借用“很抱歉聽到你與同學(xué)的交往中遇到了煩惱”來引出重點(diǎn)介紹的內(nèi)容。第二步：具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。依照提示詞匯得到的要點(diǎn)——與同學(xué)分享悲傷和快樂、尊重對方、友善待人等均要一一闡述。第三步：書寫結(jié)語。表達(dá)“我希望你很快好起來”的愿望。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①shareyoursadness分享你的悲傷②befriendlyto對……友好③Lastbutnotleast最后的但不是最不重要的[高分句型]①whenyouhavedifficulties,youshouldtalktoyourparents,yourteachersoryourfriendsandshareyoursadnessandhappinesswiththem.(when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句)②Ihopeeverythingwillgowellwithyousoon.(賓語從句)2．（2023·陜西咸陽）假如你是李華，你的朋友王磊給你發(fā)郵件說他最近很不開心。請你根據(jù)下面的表格提示，用英語給他回一封電子郵件，給他提一些建議，幫助他盡快擺脫煩惱。問題1）家庭作業(yè)多，幾乎沒有時間休息；2）壓力大，經(jīng)常感到緊張。建議1）制訂學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃，找到適合自己的學(xué)習(xí)方法；2）學(xué)會放松；3）多與父母、老師或朋友交談。參考詞匯：nervous(緊張的),greatpressure(壓力大),makeaplan,goforawalk,relax…要求：1）參考提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2）語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；3）文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)信息；4）詞數(shù)：不少于50詞。（開頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）DearWangLei,Iamsorrytoknowthatyouareunhappythesedays.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearWangLei,Iamsorrytoknowthatyouareunhappythesedays.Yousayyouhavetoomuchhomeworkeverydayandhavelittletimetorest.Becauseofgreatpressure,youoftenfeelnervous.Nowletmegiveyousomeadvice.First,youshouldmakeaplanforyourstudyandtrytofindyourownwaysofstudying.Second,trytofindtimetorelax,suchaslisteningtolightmusicandgoingforawalk.Third,whynottalkmorewithyourparents,teachersorfriendswhenyoufeelnervous?Theymayhelpyoufeelbetter.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏表格中給出的關(guān)鍵信息，回復(fù)電子郵件給王磊提一些能解決他的煩惱的建議。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫信目的，簡述王磊的問題并引出自己的建議；第二步，分條給出建議。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①everyday每天②becauseof因?yàn)棰踫uchas例如④helpsb.dosth.幫助某人做某事[高分句型]①Nowletmegiveyousomeadvice.（let祈使句）②Third,whynottalkmorewithyourparents,teachersorfriendswhenyoufeelnervous?（whynotdosth.?固定句式；when引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句）3．（2023上·陜西延安）青少年在成長過程中難免會遇到一些困惑。假如你是李華。昨天你收到你的美國筆友Jim的電子郵件。請你根據(jù)他提出的問題，給他回一封電子郵件，向他提出合理的建議。DearLiHua,How’severythinggoing?Iamnotgoodthesedays.IhavelotsofhomeworkeverydayandIhavenotimetodowhatIlike.AndIamalittlefat.Iworryaboutmyhealth.WhatshouldIdo?Canyougivemesomeadvice?Iexpecttoreceiveyourreply.Yours,Jim要求：（1）語句通順，邏輯合理，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；（2）意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范；（3）70詞左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。DearJim,

I’msorrytohearthatyouhavesomeproblemsinlife.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopeyoucanbebettersoon.Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearJim,

I’msorrytohearthatyouhavesomeproblemsinlife.Yousaythatyouhavesomuchhomeworkthatyouhavenotimetodowhatyoulike.Whydon’tyoutalktoyourteachers?Ifyoudo,theywillknowmoreaboutstudents’problemsandgiveyoulesshomework.Also,youcanmakegooduseofyourtime.Youarealsoworriedaboutyourhealth.Ithinkdoingsportscanhelpyoualot.What’smore,youshouldeatmorefruitandvegetables.You’dbetternotstayuplate.Itisnormaltohaveproblemsinlife.Whenyouhaveone,thefirststepistofindsomeonetotalkto.Sharingaproblemislikecuttingitinhalf.Hopeyoucanbebettersoon.Yours,

LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時；③提示：寫作材料已給出，注意不要遺漏材料中的要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作要點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，先針對郵件中的第一個問題，作業(yè)很多，沒有時間做喜歡的事情給出建議。第二步，再針對郵件中的第二個問題，身體健康問題提出合理的建議。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①makegooduseof充分利用②hadbetternotdo最好不要做某事③stayup熬夜[高分句型]①Ifyoudo,theywillknowmoreaboutstudents’problemsandgiveyoulesshomework.（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）②Whenyouhaveone,thefirststepistofindsomeonetotalkto.（when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句）4．（2023·浙江湖州）假設(shè)你是李華，以下是你的英國朋友Tony發(fā)給你的一封電子郵件，請根據(jù)該郵件內(nèi)容給他回復(fù)一封郵件。注意：（1）郵件中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息；（2）詞數(shù)80左右，開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。To:LiHuaFrom:TonyHi,LiHua,Longtimenosee.Ileftmyhometownwithmyparentsandwenttoanewschool.ButIdon’thaveanyfriendsnowsoIfeelupsetthesedays.LifeiskindofboringsoIwanttofindsomegoodwaystohavefun.Canyougivemesomeadvice?Hopetogetyourreplysoon.Yours,TonyHiTony,Iknowhowyoufeel.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________