2024-2025學(xué)年九年級(jí)英語(yǔ)全冊(cè)單元寫(xiě)作訓(xùn)練Unit6Whenwasitinvented含解析新版人教新目標(biāo)版

PAGEPAGE1Unit6Whenwasitinvented？本單元的話題是“獨(dú)創(chuàng)”，涉及科普學(xué)問(wèn)與技術(shù)等內(nèi)容，是學(xué)生最感愛(ài)好的話題之一。寫(xiě)作體裁多為說(shuō)明文，寫(xiě)好這類文章肯定要抓住事物的特征、功能和用途。寫(xiě)作此類話題作文的常用表達(dá)有：(1)

Whenwas…invented?(2)

Itwasinvented…(3)

Theyareusedfor…有用短語(yǔ)：1.It’smypleasure.=Mypleasure.

我的榮幸2.seem

to

do

sth.

似乎要做某事3.suchagreatinvention

如此宏大的一項(xiàng)獨(dú)創(chuàng)4.thinkof=thinkabout

想到，考慮5.inourdailylives

在我們的日常生活中6.inmydailylife在我的日常生活中7.haveapoint

有道理8.byaccident

偶然地，意外地9.overanopenfire

在篝火上10.Itissaidthat...

據(jù)說(shuō)……11.Itisbelievedthat...

人們信任……12.fallinto(過(guò)去式fellinto)=dropinto

掉進(jìn)……13.inthe19thcentury

在19世紀(jì)14.spreadtoothercountries

傳播到其他國(guó)家15.atalowprice

以很低的價(jià)格16.bring(brought)sth.tosomeplace把某物帶到某處17.allofasudden

突然地18.lessthan少于，不到morethan=over

超過(guò)19.withoutdoubt

毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)20.atthattime

在那時(shí)21.advisesb.

(not)todosth.

建議某人(不要)做某事22.startdoingsth.

起先做某事23.workonsth.

致力于某事24.(be)similarto

與……相像25.bymistake

錯(cuò)誤地，無(wú)意地26.makeamistake

犯錯(cuò)27.divide...into…

把……分成……28.intheend=atlast=finally

最終29.atthesametime

同時(shí)30.

takeplace

發(fā)生【典型例題】從古至今,多數(shù)的獨(dú)創(chuàng)走進(jìn)了我們的生活。例如:電燈泡(lightbulb)、電視(TV)、電腦(computer)、電話(telephone)、自行車(bicycle)、雨傘(umbrella)等,這些獨(dú)創(chuàng)給我們的生活帶來(lái)了諸多便利,使我們的生活水平不斷地提高。請(qǐng)依據(jù)表格提示,以“MyFavoriteInvention—Computer”為題目寫(xiě)一篇短文。獨(dú)創(chuàng)時(shí)間1946用途1.上網(wǎng)查信息2.發(fā)郵件3.聽(tīng)音樂(lè)、玩嬉戲、購(gòu)物等4.廣泛應(yīng)用于銀行、學(xué)校、公司、醫(yī)院等地方要求:1.內(nèi)容充溢,語(yǔ)言通順,意思連貫,表達(dá)清晰;2.書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范,不少于80個(gè)詞;3.可自由發(fā)揮。MyFavoriteInvention—Computer____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路點(diǎn)撥】(1)體裁:說(shuō)明文；(2)人稱:第三人稱；(3)時(shí)態(tài):一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)?！緦?xiě)作模板】【參考范文】MyFavoriteInvention—ComputerInthepastfewyears,moreandmoreinventionshavecomeintoourlife.Ofalltheinventions,myfavoriteisthecomputer.Thecomputerwasinventedin1946.Itisusedtodomanythings.PeoplecangoonlineandsearchtheInternettogettheinformationtheyneed.Peoplecansende-mailstoeachotherinsteadofwritingletters.Sendinge-mailsismuchmoreconvenientandfasterthanwritingletters.Peoplecanalsousecomputerstolistentomusic,playgames,shopordomanyotherthings.Nowadayscomputersarewidelyusedinoffices,banks,schools,companies,hospitalsandmanyotherplaces.Computersarealsousedinscientificresearchfieldstoday.Thecomputerissousefulthatitisbecomingoneofthemostimportantpartsofpeople’slife.【?？碱愋汀浚?024·浙江紹興·初三期中）獨(dú)創(chuàng)變更世界。過(guò)去，我們的主要聯(lián)系方式依靠寫(xiě)信，自獨(dú)創(chuàng)了手機(jī)，變更了我們的聯(lián)系方式。請(qǐng)你依據(jù)表格，以“TheMostUsefulInvention”為題，寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的短文，介紹手機(jī)的獨(dú)創(chuàng)時(shí)間、人物，手機(jī)的三個(gè)用途，并至少談兩點(diǎn)作為青少年的你們?nèi)绾魏侠淼乩檬謾C(jī)，使它真正成為最有用的獨(dú)創(chuàng)之一。TheMostUsefulInventionInventionMobilePhoneInventorAmerican,MartinCooperTime1973Usage(用途)1.…2.…3.…Youropinionsabouthowtousethemwell1.…2.…3.…TheMostUsefulInventionMobilephonesarewithoutdoubtoneofthemostusefulinventions.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________例文TheMostUsefulInventionMobile

phones

are

without

doubt

one

of

the

most

useful

inventions.ItwasinventedbyanAmericancalledMartinCooperin1973.Ishouldsaythatthemobilephoneshavereallychangedourlives.First,it’smoreconvenienttocommunicatewithothersbyusingthemobilephones.Second,peopleareusedtotakingphotoswithmobilephonesinsteadofcameras.Andwecanevengoshopping,listentomusicandwatchmoviesonthephone.Third,wecaneasilylearnsomethingusefulbysurfingonline.Inthisway,ithelpsusstudy.Inmyopinion,weteenagersshouldbeallowedtousemobilephones,butnotonweekdays.Andit’snecessarytousethemintherightwaywiththehelpofourteachersandparents.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇話題作文。文中以“最有用的獨(dú)創(chuàng)”為題，介紹手機(jī)的獨(dú)創(chuàng)時(shí)間，獨(dú)創(chuàng)者及手機(jī)用途，并談?wù)撊绾魏侠淼乩檬謾C(jī)。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文采納三段式：第一段介紹手機(jī)獨(dú)創(chuàng)時(shí)間及獨(dú)創(chuàng)者，其次段介紹手機(jī)的用途，第三段談?wù)撊绾魏侠淼乩檬謾C(jī)。人稱主要采納第一人稱和第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要采納一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。精確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，并保持主謂一樣。邏輯性強(qiáng)，句子通順。2．（2024·山東陽(yáng)信·初三期末）獨(dú)創(chuàng)創(chuàng)建變更了世界。作為一名中學(xué)生，假如你幻想當(dāng)一名獨(dú)創(chuàng)家，應(yīng)當(dāng)怎樣做才能實(shí)現(xiàn)幻想呢？請(qǐng)依據(jù)下面的要點(diǎn)提示，以“HowtoBecomeanInventor”為題，寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的短文。短語(yǔ)提示：1.Getmoreknowledge.2．Haveaninterest.3．Becreative.4．Nevergiveup.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】HowtoBecomeanInventorAsamiddleschoolstudent,Ialwaysdreamofbecomingagreatinventor.Howtobeaninventor?Thefollowingadvicemayhelpusalot.First,wemuststudyhardtogetmoreknowledge.It'simpossibleforustoinventanythingwithoutknowledge.Second,weshouldhaveaninterestininventing.Whenweareinterestedinsomething,wecandoitwell.Third,weneedtobecreative.Weshouldalwayscomeupwithnewideas.Mostimportantly,weshouldkeeponandnevergiveup.Ifweworkhard,ourdreamwillcometrue.【解析】這是一篇話題作文，話題是“怎樣才能成為一名獨(dú)創(chuàng)家”，我們須要把寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)放在“怎么實(shí)現(xiàn)”即實(shí)現(xiàn)的方法。所以作文開(kāi)頭首先擺出自己的幻想是什么，然后再圍繞所給提示逐一列出為了實(shí)現(xiàn)幻想，須要做的事情。最終可以寫(xiě)出自己對(duì)將來(lái)的期望。本篇作文，首先寫(xiě)出自己的幻想是什么“Asamiddleschoolstudent,Ialwaysdreamofbecomingagreatinventor.”，接下來(lái)怎么成為一個(gè)獨(dú)創(chuàng)家呢，Thefollowingadvicemayhelpusalot.First,….,Second,……Third,…Mostimportantly,…特別有條理有次序地依據(jù)題目要求逐一列出我們所要做的事情，最終以“Ifweworkhard,ourdreamwillcometrue.”結(jié)尾，做到收尾呼應(yīng)，是一篇特別優(yōu)秀的作文。3．（2024·全國(guó)初三單元測(cè)試）小小獨(dú)創(chuàng),大大變更。我們的生活因?yàn)楦鞣N科技獨(dú)創(chuàng)而日益便捷,請(qǐng)你以“MyFavoriteInvention”為題,寫(xiě)一篇100詞左右的英語(yǔ)文章,介紹你最寵愛(ài)的獨(dú)創(chuàng)。參考詞匯:widely,beusedfor,convenient,communicate...MyFavoriteInvention__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】MyFavoriteInventionThemobilephoneismyfavoriteinvention.Asweallknow,mobilephonesarebeingmoreandmorewidelyusedinourdailylife.Theyareusedinmanyways.First,theyofferfastandconvenientserviceforcommunication.Theyareusedforcalling.Wecantalkwithourfriendsorparentsforalongtime.It’squiteeasyforustocarrythemeverywhere.Theycanalsobeusedforsendingshortmessagestoshowourfeelingstoourfriends.What’smore,wecansurftheInternetonmobilephones.Andwhenwearetired,wecanlistentomusictorelaxourselves.Ourlifebecomesmorecolorfulbecauseoftheinventionofthemobilephone.Thereisnodoubtthatthemobilephoneplaysanimportantpartinourdailylife.【解析】作者首先介紹了自己最寵愛(ài)的獨(dú)創(chuàng)—手機(jī)，然后介紹了手機(jī)在日常生活中的功能和作用：加強(qiáng)溝通和溝通，在疲憊時(shí)，可以放松自己，使我們生活多彩。最終總結(jié)得出結(jié)論，手機(jī)在生活中起重要作用?！军c(diǎn)睛】短文依據(jù)總分總的思路綻開(kāi)，運(yùn)用不同句式增加短文的多樣性，并運(yùn)用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，讓文章邏輯性強(qiáng)。（2024·廣東潮陽(yáng)·初三一模）在2024年，同學(xué)們體驗(yàn)了網(wǎng)課學(xué)習(xí)；其中有各種各樣的學(xué)習(xí)軟件，比如“釘釘”、“云班課”等；云公司為了開(kāi)發(fā)一款適合中學(xué)生網(wǎng)課學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的智能app，邀請(qǐng)你一起參加設(shè)計(jì)。請(qǐng)依據(jù)下文提示，用英語(yǔ)向云公司介紹你的軟件設(shè)計(jì)。內(nèi)容包括：軟件名稱

EnglishCloud

Learning內(nèi)容英語(yǔ)類的新聞、測(cè)試等；好處幫助學(xué)生擴(kuò)大詞匯量；有利于提高英語(yǔ)聽(tīng)力；……（自主發(fā)揮，至少兩點(diǎn)）其他方面……（自主發(fā)揮，至少一點(diǎn)）作文要求：1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實(shí)名稱、老師和同學(xué)的真實(shí)姓名。2.語(yǔ)句連貫，詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。作文的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Hereismydesignforthenewapp.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】Hereismydesignforthenewapp.ItsnameisEnglishCloudLearning.ItcanprovideEnglishlearnerswithmorecontents,suchasEnglishmovies,Englishtests,Englishgames,Englishnewsandsoon.TheappcanmakeEnglishlearningeasier,happierandmoreinteresting.Firstly,westudentscanlearntogether.Secondly,itcanhelpusenlargeourvocabulary,whichisverypracticalanduseful.Thirdly,wecanimproveourlisteningskillsbywatchingEnglishnewsandmovies.Besides,ifwemeetwithsomeproblemsinlearning,itcanhelptosolvethem.Inmyopinion,somequizzesshouldalsobeprovidedbytheappinordertotestourselveshowwellwelearnEnglish.Ihopemyideaswillbevaluabletoyourcompany.【解析】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于材料作文。要求用英語(yǔ)向云公司介紹你設(shè)計(jì)的軟件名稱、好處以及其它建議。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)當(dāng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)介紹所設(shè)計(jì)產(chǎn)品，要層次分明地介紹產(chǎn)品的名稱、好處及其它的建議，不要漏掉提示的內(nèi)容。書(shū)寫(xiě)時(shí)文句表述要正確，緊扣話題中心，適當(dāng)運(yùn)用連詞使文章提高檔次。

5．（2024·南京外國(guó)語(yǔ)學(xué)校初三單元測(cè)試）依據(jù)下面的表格內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇文章。要求：80詞左右。InventionsWhenWhoBeusedforabacusinthesixthcenturyChinesepeoplecountingbicycle1880speopleinEnglandtravelingpotatochips1853GeorgeCrumeatingteaoverthreethousandyearsagotheChineseEmperorShenNongdrinking__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】Theabacuswasinventedinthesixthcentury.ItwasinventedbyChinesepeople.Anditwasusedforcounting.ThebicyclewasinventedbypeopleinEngland.Itwasinventedinthe1880s.Andthebicyclewasusedfortraveling.ThepotatochipswereinventedbyGeorgeCrumin1853.Ofcourse,itwasusedforeating.Teawasinventedoverthreethousandyearsago.ItwasinventedbytheChineseEmperorShenNongbyaccident.Itwasusedfordrinking.Untilnowtheyhavebeenveryusefultous.【解析】這是一篇材料作文，依據(jù)下面的表格內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇文章，介紹算盤(pán)、自行車、薯?xiàng)l和茶葉是什么時(shí)候獨(dú)創(chuàng)的，誰(shuí)獨(dú)創(chuàng)的和用途的什么。結(jié)合所給材料可知本文人稱主要是第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)是一般過(guò)去時(shí)。運(yùn)用的句型主要有sth.were/wasinventedby…，beusedfordoing。仔細(xì)閱讀表格內(nèi)容，審清主題，依據(jù)表格提示要點(diǎn)，列出本文的寫(xiě)作提綱。寫(xiě)作中可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用連詞，留意表達(dá)依次，表達(dá)要有條理性，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，要符合邏輯關(guān)系，字?jǐn)?shù)要在80詞以上，不要寫(xiě)的太少。寫(xiě)完以后，留意再讀一遍，看看有無(wú)拼法、語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一樣等）。本文提綱：算盤(pán)是六世紀(jì)獨(dú)創(chuàng)的。它是中國(guó)人獨(dú)創(chuàng)的。它被用來(lái)計(jì)數(shù)。自行車是英國(guó)人獨(dú)創(chuàng)的。它是十九世紀(jì)八十年頭獨(dú)創(chuàng)的。自行車是用來(lái)旅行的。薯片是由喬治·克魯姆于1853年獨(dú)創(chuàng)的。當(dāng)然，它是用來(lái)吃的。茶是三千多年前獨(dú)創(chuàng)的，它是中國(guó)皇帝神農(nóng)偶然獨(dú)創(chuàng)的。它用來(lái)喝的。到目前為止，它們對(duì)我們特別有用?！军c(diǎn)睛】本書(shū)面表達(dá)較簡(jiǎn)單，只須要把所給材料依據(jù)語(yǔ)法連詞成句即可，但要留意語(yǔ)態(tài)和時(shí)態(tài)。這篇文章語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，敘述清晰條里，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。（1）學(xué)習(xí)中留意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。（2）列好提綱和要點(diǎn)及須要的重要短語(yǔ)或句型。（3）切忌堆砌詞語(yǔ)、句子，留意運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞使句子流暢、連貫。留意表達(dá)的依次。（4）留意書(shū)寫(xiě)的規(guī)范：大小寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等的正確運(yùn)用。（5）留意檢查：?jiǎn)卧~拼法、語(yǔ)法、動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)序、主謂一樣等。（2024·山東初三單元測(cè)試）針對(duì)現(xiàn)在學(xué)生坐姿不正確，玩電腦、看電視時(shí)間過(guò)長(zhǎng)的現(xiàn)狀，你想獨(dú)創(chuàng)一種特殊的椅子來(lái)解決這些問(wèn)題。假設(shè)下周你們學(xué)校的英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部將實(shí)行英語(yǔ)演講競(jìng)賽，主題為“Iwanttoinvent...”。請(qǐng)你依據(jù)下面的要點(diǎn)提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇演講稿為競(jìng)賽作打算。要點(diǎn)提示：1.材料是木頭；2.座位與靠背安裝有感應(yīng)器(sensor)。沒(méi)有坐直的時(shí)候，椅子會(huì)提示學(xué)生；坐在椅子上超過(guò)一小時(shí)，椅子也會(huì)發(fā)出噪音。要求：1.演講稿需包括以上要點(diǎn)提示，也可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容；2.80詞左右，演講稿的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。IwanttoinventachairHi,everyone.Asweallknow,manygreatinventionshavebroughtgreatchangestoourlife.Ithinkwestudentscanalsoinventsomething.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________