2025年高考英語(yǔ)應(yīng)用文課后應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作第10講 求助信（講義）-解析版

2025年高考英語(yǔ)應(yīng)用文課后應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作第10講求助信（講義）-（解析版)第10講求助信目錄01考情透視·目標(biāo)導(dǎo)航 102知識(shí)導(dǎo)圖·思維引航 203考點(diǎn)突破·考法探究 2一求助信寫(xiě)作技巧 2知識(shí)點(diǎn)1命題規(guī)律 2知識(shí)點(diǎn)2寫(xiě)作技巧 2二求助信經(jīng)典必背 3知識(shí)點(diǎn)1好詞好句積累 3知識(shí)點(diǎn)2滿分模板必背 404真題練習(xí)·命題洞現(xiàn)1.真題實(shí)戰(zhàn) 52.命題演練 7近年高考真題求助信考點(diǎn)細(xì)目表年份卷區(qū)話題命題形式2019浙江卷錢(qián)包丟失，給航空公司寫(xiě)一封郵件說(shuō)明情況并尋求幫助求助信2011全國(guó)卷在英國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)暑期課程，遇到困難，希望得到學(xué)校輔導(dǎo)中心的幫助。求助信一寫(xiě)作技巧知識(shí)點(diǎn)1命題規(guī)律在學(xué)習(xí)或日常生活中碰到困難時(shí)，向他人尋求幫助。信件需寫(xiě)明請(qǐng)求幫助的理由，求助的具體內(nèi)容。信文語(yǔ)言表達(dá)要準(zhǔn)確，措辭要得體。知識(shí)點(diǎn)2寫(xiě)作技巧第一段：交代求助背景及寫(xiě)信目的。第二段：詳細(xì)描述求助的具體內(nèi)容。第三段：表達(dá)希望得到對(duì)方的幫助并表示感謝。二求助信經(jīng)典必背知識(shí)點(diǎn)1好詞好句積累【必背開(kāi)頭段】IamLiHua,a…我是李華，一個(gè).......I’mwritingtoaskyoutodomeafavor.我寫(xiě)信是想請(qǐng)你幫我個(gè)忙。Onbehalfof...,I’dliketorequestyourunreservedhelp.代表……我想請(qǐng)求你的幫助。Iamsorry/regretfultotellyouI’mhavingtroublewithsth/doingsth.我很遺憾地告訴你我有......困難。I’mgladtotellyouthatI’mplanningajourneyto…,butIhavedifficulty…我很高興地告訴你，我正在計(jì)劃一段旅程，去……，但我有困難。I’mwritingtoseekyourgeneroushelp/unselfishassistance/patientguidanceduring...我寫(xiě)信是為了尋求你的慷慨的幫助/無(wú)私的幫助/病人的指導(dǎo)?！颈乇持黝}段】Itworriesmethat....這讓我很擔(dān)心。Pleaseletmeknowif…請(qǐng)告訴我，如果。I’mlackingin…,addingtomydifficultyindoing…我缺少…，增加了我......的困難。It’ssuchabigheadache/sobigaheadacheformeto...that...這對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)是太頭疼了。Forlackof...,Ihavegreatdifficulty/findmyselfstumpedby...因?yàn)槿狈Α?，我有很大的困難/發(fā)現(xiàn)自己被（被難倒）難住了。(Doing)sth.isachallengeforme,leadingto.../resultingin.../makingitimpossibleformeto...（做）sth.對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)是一個(gè)挑戰(zhàn)，導(dǎo)致…/導(dǎo)致…/讓我不可能做到。Whattroublesmemostissth.最困擾我的是......Whatworriesmemostwasthat+...最讓我擔(dān)心的是+句子（表語(yǔ)從句）I’dliketoparticipatein….However,Ifinditdifficultto…我想?yún)⑴c其中。然而，我發(fā)現(xiàn)它很難……。Ilongto…butIdon'tknowhow,whichmakesmeupset.我渴望……但我不知道該怎么做，這讓我很難過(guò)。【必背結(jié)尾段】Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldgivemeahand.如果你能幫我一把，我將不勝感激。Yourhelp/assistancewouldbegreatlyappreciated.我們將非常感謝您的幫助/幫助。Iwouldbeextremelygratefulifyoudomethefavor.如果你幫了我這個(gè)忙，我會(huì)非常感激的。Iwouldappreciateitifyouarekindandgeneroustodothisforme.如果你能慷慨地為我做，我將不勝感激。Iwouldbemorethanpleasedifyoucouldgivemesomesuggestions.如果你能給我一些建議，我會(huì)非常高興的。Iwouldbegratefulifyoucoulddomethefavor.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.如果你能幫我這個(gè)忙，我會(huì)很感激的。期待著你的提前回復(fù)。Shouldyoubekindenoughtogivemeanyhelp,Iwouldbegratefultoyou.如果你能給我任何幫助，我會(huì)很感激你的。知識(shí)點(diǎn)2滿分模板必背Dear__________(寫(xiě)信對(duì)象),Mynameis___________________，I’mwritingtoaskwhetheryoucoulddomeafavour.Ihavehadmuchdifficulty/troublein___________________(交代自己面臨的困難).Besides,I’mveryupsetthat___________（提出令自己苦惱的問(wèn)題）.What’smore,Idon’tknow___________________（進(jìn)一步說(shuō)明自己的困境）I’mwonderingifyoucouldbesokindasto___________________sothat___________________（再次請(qǐng)求對(duì)方的幫助）.I’dappreciateitifyoucouldlendmeahand.I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.YourSincerely,LiHua一、真題實(shí)戰(zhàn)1．（2019·浙江·高考真題）假定你是李華，乘坐FL753航班抵達(dá)倫敦后發(fā)現(xiàn)錢(qián)包遺失。請(qǐng)給航空公司寫(xiě)一封郵件說(shuō)明情況并尋求幫助。內(nèi)容包括：1.行程信息；2.錢(qián)包特征；3.聯(lián)系方式。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearSir/Madam,Iamwritingtoreportthelossofmywallet.On1stNovember,2018Iflewbusinessclassonyourflight753fromChinatoLondon.IclearlyrememberitwaswithmeimmediatelyIboardedtheplane.However,onarrivalinLondonHeathrowAirport,Ifounditgone.Iguessitmusthaveslippedoutofmypocketduringtheflight.Itisablackleatheronewitharound200dollars,myIDcard,and2creditcardsinit.Alongwiththeitemsmentionedabove,thewalletcontainsafamilyphoto,mypreciousmemory.Asyoucanimagine,thesematteralottome.Hasanybodyhappenedtofindit?Pleaseemailmeatxxx@Thankyouforyourtimeandsupport.Yourssincerely,LiHua【分析】本篇考查的寫(xiě)作類型是求助信【詳解】第一步：根據(jù)提示可知，本文是一封求助信。李華乘坐FL753航班抵達(dá)倫敦后發(fā)現(xiàn)錢(qián)包遺失，要求給航空公司寫(xiě)一封郵件說(shuō)明情況并尋求幫助。內(nèi)容包括：1.行程信息；2.錢(qián)包特征；3.聯(lián)系方式。第二步：根據(jù)寫(xiě)作要求確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：Iamwritingtoreportthelossofmywallet.boardedtheplane,onarrival…,Ifounditgone.itmusthave……Hasanybodyhappenedtofindit?Thankyouforyourtimeandsupport.第三步：根據(jù)提示和關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，一般過(guò)去時(shí)為輔。第四步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接和過(guò)渡，書(shū)寫(xiě)一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的?！军c(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】What’sworse,mycash,IDcard,and2creditcardswereinit.更糟的是，里面有我的現(xiàn)金，身份證和兩張信用卡。What’sworse意為“更糟糕的是”，連接并列兩個(gè)壞的東西，且后面一個(gè)更嚴(yán)重?！靖叻志湫?】I’dappreciateitifyoucouldhelpmetogetitback.如果你能幫我把它拿回來(lái)，我會(huì)很感激的。I’dappreciateitif…如果……我會(huì)很感激的。2．（2011·全國(guó)·高考真題）假定你是李華，正在一所英國(guó)學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)暑期課程，遇到一些困難，希望得到學(xué)校輔導(dǎo)中心(LearningCenter)的幫助。根據(jù)學(xué)校規(guī)定，你需書(shū)面預(yù)約，請(qǐng)按下列要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一封信：1.本人簡(jiǎn)介；2.求助內(nèi)容；3.約定時(shí)間；4.你的聯(lián)系方式(Emailaddress：ihua@126.com；Phonenumber：12345678)。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;3.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好。DearSir/Madam,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【答案】DearSir/Madam,I’mLiHua,aChinesestudenttakingsummercoursesinyouruniversity.I’mwritingtoaskforhelp.Icameherelastmonthandfoundmycoursesinteresting.ButIhavesomedifficultieswithnote-takingandIhavenoideaofhowtousethelibrary.IwastoldtheLearningCenterprovideshelpforstudentsandI’manxioustogethelpfromyou.IhavenoclassonTuesdaymorningsandFridayafternoons.PleaseletmeknowwhichdayisOKwithyou.Youmayemailorphoneme.Herearemyemailaddressandphonenumber:lihua@1236.com;12345678.Lookforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【分析】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，假定你是李華，正在一所英國(guó)學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)暑期課程，遇到一些困難，希望得到學(xué)校輔導(dǎo)中心(LearningCenter)的幫助。根據(jù)學(xué)校規(guī)定，你需書(shū)面預(yù)約，請(qǐng)按提示寫(xiě)一封信?！驹斀狻吭~匯積累請(qǐng)求：askfor→applyfor有困難：havesomedifficultieswith→havetroublewith提供：provide→offer焦急的：anxious→worried2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：I’mLiHua,aChinesestudenttakingsummercoursesinyouruniversity.拓展句：I’mLiHua,aChinesestudent,whoistakingsummercoursesinyouruniversity.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]IwastoldtheLearningCenterprovideshelpforstudentsandI’manxioustogethelpfromyou.

(省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句)[高分句型2]PleaseletmeknowwhichdayisOKwithyou.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句)二、命題演練1．（2024·江西·模擬預(yù)測(cè)）假如你是李華，剛剛獲悉你的澳大利亞筆友Jessica在她學(xué)校的“漢語(yǔ)歌唱比賽”活動(dòng)中獲得一等獎(jiǎng)，請(qǐng)給她寫(xiě)一封英文信表示祝賀，并表示自己即將參加學(xué)校舉行的英語(yǔ)歌唱比賽，請(qǐng)她為自己備賽提出建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)：80左右；2.開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已寫(xiě)出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearJessica,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourstruly,LiHua【答案】Onepossibleversion:DearJessica,Howareyou?Iwantedtoextendmyheartfeltcongratulationsonwinningthefirstprizeinthe“ChineseSingingCompetition”atyourschool!Whatanincredibleachievement!Yourdedicationandtalentshinebrightly.I’malsowritingtosharemyexcitementaboutanupcomingEnglishsingingcompetitionatourschool.Assomeonewithexperienceincompetitions,Iwouldgreatlyappreciateanyadviceortipsyoucouldoffertohelpmeprepare.Thankyouinadvanceforyourguidance,andonceagain,congratulationsonyourwell-deservedsuccess!Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.

Yourstruly,LiHua【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生以李華的身份，就剛剛獲悉你的澳大利亞筆友Jessica在她學(xué)校的“漢語(yǔ)歌唱比賽”活動(dòng)中獲得一等獎(jiǎng)一事，給她寫(xiě)一封英文信表示祝賀，并表示自己即將參加學(xué)校舉行的英語(yǔ)歌唱比賽，請(qǐng)她為自己備賽提出建議。【詳解】詞匯積累想要做某事：wantedto→intendedto衷心的：heartfelt→sincere成就：achievement→accomplishment感激：appreciate→begratefulfor句式拓展同義句改寫(xiě)原句：Iwantedtoextendmyheartfeltcongratulationsonwinningthefirstprizeinthe“ChineseSingingCompetition”atyourschool!拓展句：Iwouldliketoexpressmysincerecongratulationsonsecuringthefirstprizeinthe“ChineseSingingCompetition”heldatyourschool!【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】I’malsowritingtosharemyexcitementaboutanupcomingEnglishsingingcompetitionatourschool.

（使用了動(dòng)詞不定式作狀語(yǔ)）【高分句型2】Assomeonewithexperienceincompetitions,Iwouldgreatlyappreciateanyadviceortipsyoucouldoffertohelpmeprepare.（使用了介詞短語(yǔ)作定語(yǔ)以及省略關(guān)系詞的限制性定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞為adviceortips）2．（24-25高三上·湖南·開(kāi)學(xué)考試）假定你是李華，你校一年一度的藝術(shù)節(jié)即將來(lái)臨。你們班為藝術(shù)節(jié)準(zhǔn)備了一個(gè)英語(yǔ)短劇。請(qǐng)給外教MissEllis寫(xiě)一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.介紹你校的藝術(shù)節(jié)：2.你班的準(zhǔn)備：3.請(qǐng)求指導(dǎo)。注意：1.寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearMissEllis,I’mwritingtoaskforyourhelp._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YourssincerelyLiHua【答案】DearMissEllis,I'mLiHua,andI'mwritingtoseekyourvaluableguidance.Ourschool'sannualArtsFestivalisapproaching,andourclasshasdecidedtopresentanEnglishshortplay.We'vebeenhardatwork,selectingthescript,assigningroles,andpracticingourlines.However,werecognizetheimportanceofnativeEnglishspeakers'inputandwouldgreatlyappreciateyouradviceonourperformance.Yourfeedbackonourpronunciation,intonation,andoveralldeliverywouldbeimmenselyhelpful.Wehopethatwithyourguidance,wecanbringourshortplaytolifeandtrulycaptivateouraudience.Thankyouforconsideringourrequest,andweeagerlyawaityourresponse.Yourssincerely,LiHua【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)是一封求助信，要求考生以李華的身份給外教MissEllis寫(xiě)信，介紹學(xué)校藝術(shù)節(jié)的情況，班級(jí)的準(zhǔn)備情況，并請(qǐng)求對(duì)方給予指導(dǎo)?！驹斀狻吭~匯積累請(qǐng)求：askfor→seek到來(lái)：iapproach→drawnear表演：present→perform投入：input→contribution句式拓展同義句改寫(xiě)原句：Ourschool'sannualArtsFestivalisapproaching.拓展句：ThetimewhenourschoolcelebratesitsannualArtsFestivalisdrawingnear.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】I'mLiHua,andI'mwritingtoseekyourvaluableguidance.（使用了動(dòng)詞不定式作狀語(yǔ)）【高分句型2】Wehopethatwithyourguidance,wecanbringourshortplaytolifeandtrulycaptivateouraudience.（使用了連接詞that連接的賓語(yǔ)從句）3．（24-25高三上·廣西柳州·開(kāi)學(xué)考試）假定你是李華。你將參加學(xué)校舉辦的英文演講比賽。請(qǐng)你給外籍老師Mr.Johnson寫(xiě)一封郵件，請(qǐng)他給予指導(dǎo)。內(nèi)容包括：1.演講的主題；2.遇到的困難；3.請(qǐng)求指導(dǎo)。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3.開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearMr.Johnson,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearMr.Johnson,I’mLiHuafromyourEnglishclass.I’mpreparingforourschool’sEnglishspeechcontest,andIneedyourhelp.Myspeechtopicis“ThePowerofDreams.”Iwanttotalkabouthowdreamscanhelpussucceed.ButI’mhavingtroubleorganizingmyideasandmakingmyspeechflowsmoothly.Couldyoupleasegivemesomeadviceonhowtomakemyspeechbetter?I’dalsoliketoknowifmyEnglishsoundsgoodandifthere’sanythingIcanimprove.Thankyouforyourhelp!Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。李華將參加學(xué)校舉辦的英文演講比賽，要求考生以李華的名義給外籍老師Mr.Johnson寫(xiě)一封郵件，請(qǐng)他給予指導(dǎo)?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累比賽：contest→competition幫助：help→assistance困難：trouble→difficulty建議：advice→proposal/suggestion2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：I’mpreparingforourschool’sEnglishspeechcontest,andIneedyourhelp.拓展句：IneedyourhelpsinceIampreparingforourschool’sEnglishspeechcontest.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Iwanttotalkabouthowdreamscanhelpussucceed.(運(yùn)用了how引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句)[高分句型2]I’dalsoliketoknowifmyEnglishsoundsgoodandifthere’sanythingIcanimprove.(運(yùn)用了兩個(gè)if引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句和以及省略關(guān)系代詞that的定語(yǔ)從句修飾先行詞anything)4．（23-24高三上·福建福州·階段練習(xí)）假設(shè)你是李華，剛進(jìn)人高三，在英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)上遇到了困難。請(qǐng)你給外教Mr.Brown寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.說(shuō)明困難；2.尋求幫助。注意:1.寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearMr.Brown,IamLiHua,oneofyourstudents.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely;LiHua【答案】DearMr.Brown,lamLiHua,oneofyourstudents.Enteringthe12thgrade,IcameacrosssomeproblemsaboutEnglishlearning.Therefore,Iamwritingtoseekyourguidance.Mybiggestproblemishowtodowellinlisteningtasks.NativeEnglishspeakerstalksofastthatIcanhardlycatchanywords,nottomentionthemainidea.Ialsohavetroubleinrememberingnewwords.HardasIattempttomemorizethem,theyseemtodisappearfrommymindsometimelater.lwouldbegratefulifyoucouldgivemesomeadvice.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply!Yourssincerely,LIHua【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給外教Mr.Brown寫(xiě)封郵件，說(shuō)明自己在英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)上遇到的困難并向?qū)Ψ綄で髱椭??！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累遇到：comeacross→meetwith因此：therefore→thus做某事有困難：havetroubleindoing→havedifficultyindoing感激的：grateful→thankful2.句式拓展同義句轉(zhuǎn)換原句： lwouldbegratefulifyoucouldgivemesomeadvice.拓展句： lwouldappreciateitifyoucouldgivemesomeadvice.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Enteringthe12thgrade,IcameacrosssomeproblemsaboutEnglishlearning.（運(yùn)用了分詞Entering作狀語(yǔ)）【高分句型2】NativeEnglishspeakers

talksofastthatIcanhardlycatchanywords,nottomentionthemainidea.（運(yùn)用了so...that...引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句）5．（23-24高三上·廣東江門(mén)·階段練習(xí)）假如你是李華，暑假參加了某微信公眾號(hào)舉行的英語(yǔ)原版書(shū)閱讀活動(dòng)，并寫(xiě)了一篇書(shū)評(píng)。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給外教Sam寫(xiě)一封信，請(qǐng)求他幫你當(dāng)面批改書(shū)評(píng)，內(nèi)容包括：1.簡(jiǎn)要介紹閱讀活動(dòng)2.提出請(qǐng)求并提議見(jiàn)面時(shí)間。注意：1.寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearSam，_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearSam，I’mwritingtoaskforafavorfromyou.AsabookwormandEnglishlover,IsignedupforareadingactivityonaWeChatofficialaccountthiswinter,whereIwasexpectedtoreadsomeEnglishbooksandsubmitabookreview.IhavewrittenoneonWonderBoy.However,IamnotsurewhetherIhavegotmyideasacross,soIreallyhopeyoucanhelpmepolishupmyreview.Ifpossible,canIcometomeetyouonSundayafternoon?Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生用英語(yǔ)給外教Sam寫(xiě)一封信批改暑假參加的某微信公眾號(hào)舉行的英語(yǔ)原版書(shū)閱讀活動(dòng)寫(xiě)的一篇書(shū)評(píng)，希望他能幫你當(dāng)面修改書(shū)評(píng)?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累請(qǐng)某人幫忙：askforafavor→turntosb.forhelp報(bào)名參加：signupfor→enterfor然而：however→though答復(fù)：reply→response2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Ifpossible,canIcometomeetyouonSundayafternoon?復(fù)合句：IwouldappreciateitifIcometomeetyouonSundayafternoon.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】AsabookwormandEnglishlover,IsignedupforareadingactivityonaWeChatofficialaccountthiswinter,whereIwasexpectedtoreadsomeEnglishbooksandsubmitabookreview(運(yùn)用了where引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句)【高分句型2】However,IamnotsurewhetherIhavegotmyideasacross,soIreallyhopeyoucanhelpmepolishupmyreview.(運(yùn)用了whether引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句)6．（23-24高san·陜西西安·期末）假定你是李華，你班計(jì)劃與新西蘭姊妹學(xué)校某班級(jí)在線共上一堂介紹“傳統(tǒng)體育項(xiàng)目”的交流課。請(qǐng)你代表班級(jí)寫(xiě)到郵件給對(duì)方學(xué)生負(fù)責(zé)人Hans，內(nèi)容包括：1．告知相關(guān)事宜；2．征求意見(jiàn)。注意：1.寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearHans,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearHans,I’mLiHua.I’msoexcitedaboutourupcomingvirtuallessontointroduce“TraditionalSportsEvents”.Onbehalfofmyclass,I’mwritingtoproposesomeideasandconfirmrelateddetailsaboutit.Thelessonwillserveasachannelforstudentstorealizetraditionalsportsarenotonlytheessenceofaculture,butalsotheprideofacountry.Soforourpart,weareconsideringintroducingseveraltypicalsportsactivities,includingmartialarts,dragonboatraceandsoon.Toachievethebesteffect,interactiveforms,suchaspresentationsandliveshows,willbeadopted.Asforthetimeandway,we’dliketohavethelessonscheduledbetweenApril3andApril7,lasting3hoursthroughanonlineconferenceapplication.Doesourproposalworkwellonyourside?Lookingforwardtoyourearliestreply.Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于告知信。要求考生給班長(zhǎng)Hans寫(xiě)信，告知他考生所在班級(jí)計(jì)劃與新西蘭姊妹學(xué)校某班級(jí)在線共上一堂介紹“傳統(tǒng)體育項(xiàng)目”的交流課的活動(dòng)并征求其意見(jiàn)?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累即將到來(lái)的：upcoming→

forthcoming代表：onbehalfof→represent采用：adopt→use回復(fù)：reply→answer2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Soforourpart,weareconsideringintroducingseveraltypicalsportsactivities,includingmartialarts,dragonboatraceandsoon.拓展句：Soforourpart,weareconsideringintroducingseveraltypicalsportsactivities,whichincludemartialarts,dragonboatraceandsoon.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Toachievethebesteffect,interactiveforms,suchaspresentationsandliveshows,willbeadopted.（運(yùn)用了動(dòng)詞不定式Toachieve作目的狀語(yǔ)以及一般將來(lái)時(shí)的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)）【高分句型2】Asforthetimeandway,we’dliketohavethelessonscheduledbetweenApril3andApril7,lasting3hoursthroughanonlineconferenceapplication.（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞lasting作狀語(yǔ)）7．（2024·江蘇·模擬預(yù)測(cè)）假定你是李華，將擔(dān)任學(xué)校英文情景喜劇表演大賽的主持人，并正在設(shè)計(jì)節(jié)目串詞。請(qǐng)你給外教Mr.Smith寫(xiě)封郵件，請(qǐng)他給予指導(dǎo)。內(nèi)容包括：1.陳述問(wèn)題；2.請(qǐng)求指導(dǎo)。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：串詞programcue

情景喜劇sitcomDearMr.Smith,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearMr.Smith,IamwritingtoseekyourguidanceasI’mgoingtohostourschool’supcomingEnglishsitcomcompetition.Whatchallengesmemostisdesigningtheprogramcues,especiallywhenitcomestocreatingsmoothtransitionsbetweenprogramsandincorporatingappropriatehumor.Ihavelongheardofyourexpertiseindramaandperformance,soIwonderifyoucouldkindlyprovidemewithsuggestionsonstructuringtheprogramcueseffectivelyandmaintainingalivelyatmospherethroughoutthecompetition.Anyadviceonmyhostingworkwouldbegreatlyappreciated.I’meagerforyourpreciousguidance.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Sincerely,LiHua【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文?？忌鷮?dān)任學(xué)校英文情景喜劇表演大賽的主持人，并正在設(shè)計(jì)節(jié)目串詞。要求考生給外教Mr.Smith寫(xiě)封郵件，請(qǐng)他給予指導(dǎo)?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累合適的：appropriate→proper比賽：competition→contest建議：suggestion→advice維持：maintain→sustain2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：I’meagerforyourpreciousguidance.拓展句：Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldofferyourpreciousguidance.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Whatchallengesmemostisdesigningtheprogramcues,especiallywhenitcomestocreatingsmoothtransitionsbetweenprogramsandincorporatingappropriatehumor.(運(yùn)用了what引導(dǎo)主語(yǔ)從句)[高分句型2]Ihavelongheardofyourexpertiseindramaandperformance,soIwonderifyoucouldkindlyprovidemewithsuggestionsonstructuringtheprogramcueseffectivelyandmaintainingalivelyatmospherethroughoutthecompetition.(運(yùn)用了if引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句)9．（24-25高三上·湖北隨州·階段練習(xí)）假定你是李華，你和同學(xué)根據(jù)英語(yǔ)課文改編了一個(gè)短劇。給外教MissEvans寫(xiě)封郵件，請(qǐng)她幫忙指導(dǎo)。郵件內(nèi)容包括：1.劇情簡(jiǎn)介；2.指導(dǎo)內(nèi)容；3.商定時(shí)間地點(diǎn)。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)?shù)脑黾蛹?xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearMissEvans,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearMissEvans,IamLiHuafromyourEnglishclass.I’mwritingtoaskforyourguidanceonadaptingashortplayfortheEnglishFestivalnextmonth.We’reinterestedinonestoryfromourEnglishtextbook,TheMillionPoundBankNotebyMarkTwain.Itisabouttheadventureofapooryoungmanwhowasgivenamillionpoundbanknotebytworichgentlemen.Couldyoupleasegiveussomeadviceonhowtomakedialoguesbasedonthestory?Woulditbepossibleforustomeetinourclassroomat5p.m.thisFriday?Thankyouforyourkindness!Wearelookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)是一篇應(yīng)用文。要求考生給外教MissEvans寫(xiě)封郵件，請(qǐng)她幫忙指導(dǎo)自己和和同學(xué)根據(jù)英語(yǔ)課文改編的一個(gè)短劇。【詳解】1.詞匯積累對(duì)……感興趣：beinterestedin→takeaninterestin給某人某物：givesbsth→offersbsth建議：advice→suggestion可能的：possible→probable2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：I’mwritingtoaskforyourguidanceonadaptingashortplayfortheEnglishFestivalnextmonth.拓展句：I’mwritingtoaskforyourguidanceonadaptingashortplaywhichispreparedfortheEnglishFestivalnextmonth.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Itisabouttheadventureofapooryoungmanwhowasgivenamillionpoundbanknotebytworichgentlemen.（運(yùn)用了who引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句）[高分句型2]Couldyoupleasegiveussomeadviceonhowtomakedialoguesbasedonthestory?（運(yùn)用了“特殊疑問(wèn)詞+動(dòng)詞不定式”結(jié)構(gòu)作賓語(yǔ)）第10講求助信目錄01考情透視·目標(biāo)導(dǎo)航 102知識(shí)導(dǎo)圖·思維引航 203考點(diǎn)突破·考法探究 2一求助信寫(xiě)作技巧 2知識(shí)點(diǎn)1命題規(guī)律 2知識(shí)點(diǎn)2寫(xiě)作技巧 2二求助信經(jīng)典必背 3知識(shí)點(diǎn)1好詞好句積累 3知識(shí)點(diǎn)2滿分模板必背 404真題練習(xí)·命題洞現(xiàn)1.真題實(shí)戰(zhàn) 52.命題演練 6近年高考真題求助信考點(diǎn)細(xì)目表年份卷區(qū)話題命題形式2019浙江卷錢(qián)包丟失，給航空公司寫(xiě)一封郵件說(shuō)明情況并尋求幫助求助信2011全國(guó)卷在英國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)暑期課程，遇到困難，希望得到學(xué)校輔導(dǎo)中心的幫助。求助信一寫(xiě)作技巧知識(shí)點(diǎn)1命題規(guī)律在學(xué)習(xí)或日常生活中碰到困難時(shí)，向他人尋求幫助。信件需寫(xiě)明請(qǐng)求幫助的理由，求助的具體內(nèi)容。信文語(yǔ)言表達(dá)要準(zhǔn)確，措辭要得體。知識(shí)點(diǎn)2寫(xiě)作技巧第一段：交代求助背景及寫(xiě)信目的。第二段：詳細(xì)描述求助的具體內(nèi)容。第三段：表達(dá)希望得到對(duì)方的幫助并表示感謝。二求助信經(jīng)典必背知識(shí)點(diǎn)1好詞好句積累【必背開(kāi)頭段】IamLiHua,a…我是李華，一個(gè).......I’mwritingtoaskyoutodomeafavor.我寫(xiě)信是想請(qǐng)你幫我個(gè)忙。Onbehalfof...,I’dliketorequestyourunreservedhelp.代表……我想請(qǐng)求你的幫助。Iamsorry/regretfultotellyouI’mhavingtroublewithsth/doingsth.我很遺憾地告訴你我有......困難。I’mgladtotellyouthatI’mplanningajourneyto…,butIhavedifficulty…我很高興地告訴你，我正在計(jì)劃一段旅程，去……，但我有困難。I’mwritingtoseekyourgeneroushelp/unselfishassistance/patientguidanceduring...我寫(xiě)信是為了尋求你的慷慨的幫助/無(wú)私的幫助/病人的指導(dǎo)。【必背主題段】Itworriesmethat....這讓我很擔(dān)心。Pleaseletmeknowif…請(qǐng)告訴我，如果。I’mlackingin…,addingtomydifficultyindoing…我缺少…，增加了我......的困難。It’ssuchabigheadache/sobigaheadacheformeto...that...這對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)是太頭疼了。Forlackof...,Ihavegreatdifficulty/findmyselfstumpedby...因?yàn)槿狈Α?，我有很大的困難/發(fā)現(xiàn)自己被（被難倒）難住了。(Doing)sth.isachallengeforme,leadingto.../resultingin.../makingitimpossibleformeto...（做）sth.對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)是一個(gè)挑戰(zhàn)，導(dǎo)致…/導(dǎo)致…/讓我不可能做到。Whattroublesmemostissth.最困擾我的是......Whatworriesmemostwasthat+...最讓我擔(dān)心的是+句子（表語(yǔ)從句）I’dliketoparticipatein….However,Ifinditdifficultto…我想?yún)⑴c其中。然而，我發(fā)現(xiàn)它很難……。Ilongto…butIdon'tknowhow,whichmakesmeupset.我渴望……但我不知道該怎么做，這讓我很難過(guò)?！颈乇辰Y(jié)尾段】Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldgivemeahand.如果你能幫我一把，我將不勝感激。Yourhelp/assistancewouldbegreatlyappreciated.我們將非常感謝您的幫助/幫助。Iwouldbeextremelygratefulifyoudomethefavor.如果你幫了我這個(gè)忙，我會(huì)非常感激的。Iwouldappreciateitifyouarekindandgeneroustodothisforme.如果你能慷慨地為我做，我將不勝感激。Iwouldbemorethanpleasedifyoucouldgivemesomesuggestions.如果你能給我一些建議，我會(huì)非常高興的。Iwouldbegratefulifyoucoulddomethefavor.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.如果你能幫我這個(gè)忙，我會(huì)很感激的。期待著你的提前回復(fù)。Shouldyoubekindenoughtogivemeanyhelp,Iwouldbegratefultoyou.如果你能給我任何幫助，我會(huì)很感激你的。知識(shí)點(diǎn)2滿分模板必背Dear__________(寫(xiě)信對(duì)象),Mynameis___________________，I’mwritingtoaskwhetheryoucoulddomeafavour.Ihavehadmuchdifficulty/troublein___________________(交代自己面臨的困難).Besides,I’mveryupsetthat___________（提出令自己苦惱的問(wèn)題）.What’smore,Idon’tknow___________________（進(jìn)一步說(shuō)明自己的困境）I’mwonderingifyoucouldbesokindasto___________________sothat___________________（再次請(qǐng)求對(duì)方的幫助）.I’dappreciateitifyoucouldlendmeahand.I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.YourSincerely,LiHua一、真題實(shí)戰(zhàn)1．（2019·浙江·高考真題）假定你是李華，乘坐FL753航班抵達(dá)倫敦后發(fā)現(xiàn)錢(qián)包遺失。請(qǐng)給航空公司寫(xiě)一封郵件說(shuō)明情況并尋求幫助。內(nèi)容包括：1.行程信息；2.錢(qián)包特征；3.聯(lián)系方式。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．（2011·全國(guó)·高考真題）假定你是李華，正在一所英國(guó)學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)暑期課程，遇到一些困難，希望得到學(xué)校輔導(dǎo)中心(LearningCenter)的幫助。根據(jù)學(xué)校規(guī)定，你需書(shū)面預(yù)約，請(qǐng)按下列要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一封信：1.本人簡(jiǎn)介；2.求助內(nèi)容；3.約定時(shí)間；4.你的聯(lián)系方式(Emailaddress：ihua@126.com；Phonenumber：12345678)。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;3.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好。DearSir/Madam,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua二、命題演練1．（2024·江西·模擬預(yù)測(cè)）假如你是李華，剛剛獲悉你的澳大利亞筆友Jessica在她學(xué)校的“漢語(yǔ)歌唱比賽”活動(dòng)中獲得一等獎(jiǎng)，請(qǐng)給她寫(xiě)一封英文信表示祝賀，并表示自己即將參加學(xué)校舉行的英語(yǔ)歌唱比賽，請(qǐng)她為自己備賽提出建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)：80左右；2.開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已寫(xiě)出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearJessica,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________