英語(yǔ)應(yīng)用文教學(xué)

①Goodmorning!Welcometoourschool!I’mLiHua,thepresidentofourschoolstudentunion.I’mgladtomeetallofyouandtellactivitiesarrangement!First,I’llleadyoutotheScienceHallat9o’clock.Thereyoucanseelaboratoriesofourschool.Thenat10o’clock,youcangotovisitTeachingHallandknowaboutstudents’dailyclasses.Afterlunch,youcanwalkaroundthewholeschoolandexchangeyourideaswithourschoolstudents.Haveagoodtime!Hopethatourschoolwon’tletyoudown!語(yǔ)言較為自然，較符合此類文體要求，有些語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，但意義傳達(dá)不受影響（13分）②Ladiesandgentlemen,It'smyhonortostandhererepresentingthestudentuniontoextendwelcometoyou.NowI'mofferingsomeinformationoftheactivityarrangements.Firstly,wewillshowyouaroundourschool,learningourschoolhistoryandculture.AndthenyouwillcatchaChineseopera,whichwillundoubtedlygiveyouatasteofthecharmofChineseculture.ThenyouwillvisittheTaiLakemuseumwhereyoucanexperienceancientfisherman'slife.Idohopetheseactivitieswillleaveyouafabulousmemory.(代表學(xué)生會(huì)13分）③Distinguishedguests，I'mLiHua,it’smyprivilegetostandhere,representingourschool,conveyingmycordialwelcometoyou.Alecture,aimingtointroduceChinesehistorywillbeconductedatthebeginningofyourvisit.Inthefollowingdays,colorfulcourseswillserveasplatformswhereyoucanattendin-depthcomprehensionofChineseschoollife.It'searnestlyhopedthatwecouldfeastyoureyeswithfruitfulactivitiesandestablishintimatefriendship.Hopingyoucanenjoyyourvisithere!Thanksforlistening.要求的內(nèi)容均已經(jīng)包含，意義傳達(dá)清晰，但文風(fēng)與該題文風(fēng)要求不符。（12分）④Dearfellowstudents，I'mLiHua,chairmanofstudentunion.It'sagreatprivilegeformetodeliveraspeechonbehalfofallthestudentstoextendoursincerestwelcometoexchangestudentsfromNewZealand.Nextweekwilldefinitelybeacolorfulandenjoyableweek.Awell-organizedEnglishrecitationcontestisarrangedfornextMonday,whichwillprovideuswithamarvelousopportunitytohaveatasteofthecharmofEnglishlanguage.Inaddition,it’sscheduledtoholdanexhibitionfeaturingtraditionalChineseart,includingcalligraphy,papercutting,andChinesebrushpainting.WishyouafulfillingandfruitfulWeekahead!（102詞）（13-2）⑤Dearstudents,It’smyprivilegetostandhereandextendmycordialwelcometoallofyouonbehalfofourschool.We’vearrangedvariousactivitiesforyou.We’llshowyouaroundourcampusfirstandbriefyouonthehistoryofourschool.Afterthat,specialpaper-cuttingcourseswillbeheldtoofferyouaglimpseoftraditionalChineseculture.Also,aswithmusicfestivalrunninginfullswing，如火如荼進(jìn)行中It‘shopedyouwouldenjoythefeastforyourearsandevensingwithourstudents.It'sgreatlyhopedthatyoucouldharvestapleasantandfruitfulexperienceinourschool.Thankyou.(109詞）（13-2）⑦Tothenewstudents，I’mLiHua,chairmanofthestudentsunion,onbehalfofourschool,Iextendmycordialwelcometoyouandwishyouallthebest.Aimedatformingadeepinsightintoourschool,variousactivitieswillbeheldforyou.RangingfromlearningChinesecharacterstomakingdeliciousChinesefoodinperson.Additionally,thetraditionalChineseoperaisscheduledtobeheldnextweek,whichisboundtoaddfueltoyourenthusiasm.Makeyourlifeeasyandcomfortablehere.Now,let'sstartthejourney!Bestwishes,thanks.內(nèi)容完整，言語(yǔ)有些許問(wèn)題，稱謂不當(dāng)。（10分）=8\*GB3⑧Dearfriends,I’mLiHua,onbehalfofourschool.Here,I’mshowingmywarmestwelcometoyoutocometomyschool.Now,I’mtellingyousomeinformationabouttheactivitiesinthefollowingdays.Tobeginwith,wewillhaveaspeechcompetitionabout“WhywelearnEnglish”（活動(dòng)設(shè)計(jì)不佳）intheafternoon.What’smore,asportsmeetingwillbeheldtomorrow.Andyourparticipationiswelcomed.Last,wewillshowyouaroundtheprettyschoolwhereweliveandstudy.專家點(diǎn)評(píng)：覆蓋了所有主要內(nèi)容，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)單，但不影響意義表達(dá)。次重點(diǎn)添加不夠合理，語(yǔ)言不妥帖現(xiàn)象。（9分）=9\*GB3⑨Dearteachersandstudents,I’mLiHua,I’mheretoexpressourheartfeltwelcometothestudentsfromNewZelandonbehalfofallstudents.Tostartwith,we’resodelightedforyourcomethatwehavearrangedmanymeaningfulactivities,whichincludesholdingaGala,eatingtogetherfordinnerandsinginganddancing.Moreover,asit’syourfirstthere,wewillsparenoefforttomakeyoufeelathome.Onnoaccountwillwedisappointyou!Hopefully,youcanhaveagoodtimethere.Wishyougoodluck.信息傳達(dá)對(duì)象未正確對(duì)接，第二條不是具體的活動(dòng)安排，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)錯(cuò)誤。（8分）=10\*GB3⑩Myfellowschoolmates,I’mLiHua,I’mheretoconveymyearnestwelcomeforyourvisitandbriefyouonthoseelabroate(elaborate詳盡的）activitiesonbehalfofourschool.Asscheduled,afleamarketfeaturingChinesetraditionalculturewillbeheldtomorrow,whereyoucanbuysmallidemsatalowpriseaswellasgetaglimpseofsplendidculture.ItalsoneverfailstopracticeyourChineseduringthemarket.Besides,highrecommandedistheperformanceorganizedbystudentsfromtwoschools,includingrangingfromGuzhengtoorganperformance.Bestwishesforourfriendshipandenjoyyourself.專家點(diǎn)評(píng)：基本達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的，沒(méi)有遺漏主要要點(diǎn)，但稱呼不妥，主要活動(dòng)的安排銜接不太好，有幾處表達(dá)和拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤。（8分）Dearinternationfellows,Thrilledaboutyourvisit.I,onbehalfofourschool,wouldliketoextendmysincerewelcomeforyourarrivalaswellassharetheplanswithyou.First,you’llbetreatedwithourschool’scalligraphycourses,strollingbesidestheamazingandfantasticcalligraphyworks.You’lldefinitelybedeeplyimpressedbythebeautyofthequitessenseofChineseculture.Furthermore,asfordinner,you’llenjoyvariousdelicaciesinvolvingdumplingsrepresentingfortuneandreunionaswellasricecakesmeaningaflourishinacademicperformance.Topromotetheculturalexchangebetweenourcountries,I’minanticipationtocreatebeautifulmemorieswithyou.Thanksforyourlistening.要點(diǎn)齊全，語(yǔ)言做作，不符合所要求的文體，超詞（115詞）8分5分Dearstudents,Iamsincerelywelcomeyourcomehere.Wewillholdsomea