4.1寫(xiě)作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)課件

1、I : typical English paragraph ii : requirements of cet-4 6 iii : requirements of tem-48 iv : different sorts of writing v 3330how to prepare for writing tests (1)、I : typical English paragraph、conclusion :Computers have become popular in thefrom business transactions to office management，computers a

2、re playing very important parts . more over，Daily lives such as shopping and tted57分鐘-基本切割問(wèn)題。表達(dá)思想不夠明確，一致性差。有更多嚴(yán)重的語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。810分-基本問(wèn)題。表達(dá)思想更明確，文字仍然一致。但是語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤比較多，其中有少量嚴(yán)重的錯(cuò)誤。1113分-問(wèn)題。思想明確，文字一致，但有一些語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。1415分鐘-問(wèn)題。表達(dá)思想明確，文字流暢，連貫性比較好。基本無(wú)語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。In 710，l白紙，作文與題目無(wú)關(guān)，或者只有幾個(gè)孤立的單詞，如果不能表達(dá)思想，就給零分。2只寫(xiě)一段0-4分，只寫(xiě)兩段0-9分。分支或殘點(diǎn)、語(yǔ)

3、境-論點(diǎn)細(xì)節(jié)和論點(diǎn)文檔(language use and appropriate word)厭煩2。疲勞(tired) 3。討厭，Most of us may have such experience : when You go to some place far away from the city You live in and think You know、cet-4 writing samples the world is getting smaller and smaller、why is the world getting smaller and smaller？For one t

4、hing，modern technology has made various means of transportation more and more advanced . busses，trains，planes，taxisthey carry goods and passengers to and from every corner of the world .for another thing，With the development of modern society，People are contacting With one another more frequently we

5、 must deal With a lotthe more advanced a Society，the more contacts with others wemake。so we draw to The conclusion that as long as technology makes progress，The world will be getting smaller and smaller。band 5 14 170 ws，with the progress of science And technology，More And More modern forms of transp

6、ortation appear nowledges . bussesand communication between peo Ple is also beoming more consenient and frequent。from my point of view，not only the，the world is getting smaller and smaller，Communication in ones country，But the communicationthis is a great era full of information and communication。no

7、 one can deny thi S point.so，I think，in such a great era，we should unite as one to face anyshing that would occur to us human being .to sum up，What we need most in the epoch-making days are unity，friend-ship and progress，band 3 10 141 ws，專(zhuān)業(yè)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)寫(xiě)作要求，2 .Passage writing 45ms 200ws 20ps 1)剪切文章內(nèi)容，豐富，表達(dá)流暢

8、2)流暢3)系統(tǒng)和邏輯。4)文章模式多樣化，語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)正確。5)適當(dāng)、恰當(dāng)、豐富地使用單詞。語(yǔ)法正確。7)拼寫(xiě)和標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確，寫(xiě)作整潔。II:專(zhuān)業(yè)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)寫(xiě)作要求，專(zhuān)業(yè)4種寫(xiě)作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)14-15:完美，組織清晰，嚴(yán)格的文章結(jié)構(gòu)，正確的語(yǔ)法，適當(dāng)?shù)恼Z(yǔ)言，文章模式，豐富的單詞變化，“閃點(diǎn)”，基本沒(méi)有語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。11-13分鐘：內(nèi)容的剪切、完整、條理清晰，句子結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，語(yǔ)法正確，語(yǔ)言溫順，語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤少。8-10分：內(nèi)容基本上是多學(xué)科的，完整的，條理基本清晰，文章結(jié)構(gòu)基本嚴(yán)格，語(yǔ)法基本正確，語(yǔ)言基本上是溫順的，有少量嚴(yán)重的錯(cuò)誤，有些單詞使用不當(dāng)。5-7分鐘：內(nèi)容的基本章節(jié)、完整、條理不清、明顯的母語(yǔ)標(biāo)記、更多的

9、語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤、很多單詞的不當(dāng)使用2-4分：內(nèi)容的編制、未完成、思想的混亂、句子的不完整、只有少數(shù)句子可以理解，詞匯的拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤很?chē)?yán)重。students with“hot”degrees like computer science or finance are more likeley to get a job than studens with a“cold”degree likewrite on answer sheet three a composition of about 200 words on the following topic : should universities give

10、priority to practical courses for should universities give priority、tem-4 writing samples、you are to write in three parts : in the first part、state specifically what your idea is。in the second part，Provide one or two reasons to support your idea or describe your idea . in the last part，Bring what yo

11、u have written to a nature，tem-4 writing samples，With the advent of information technology，the traditional media are pushed to the corner and are strugglingsurprisingly，Not all people are hailing the birth of online version news . some people believe that traditional printed new paper is irreplace a

12、acehowever，Others believe that the demise of printed version is at hand。being faster and more conventient，Cell phones and personal computers have led us to a paper-free life style，the irresistable trend of onlineas the modern life picks up speed，News is reported at every turn。news is no longer new when printed on paper。while the printing process of traditional new paper takes hours，And its distribution may take Even longer time，the electronic transmission I firmly hold the idea that the online new paper will dominat