顧家北100句翻譯

1、翻譯 1：經(jīng)常做運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)提高人的自信 錯(cuò)誤的句子：Exercise regularly can rise ones confidence. 錯(cuò)誤 1 Exercise 如果這里是動(dòng)詞，應(yīng)該用動(dòng)名詞，如果是名詞，不能用副詞修飾 錯(cuò)誤 2 rise 不及物動(dòng)詞 正確的句子：Regular exercise can increase ones self-confidence. 句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語(yǔ)+及物動(dòng)詞+賓語(yǔ)(confidence) 可以用定語(yǔ)從句擴(kuò)充： Participating in sports frequently can boost peoples confidence, which is i

2、mportant not only to the youth but also to the elderly. 注： 不可以說(shuō)“regular doing exercise”，因?yàn)樾稳菰~ regular 不可以修飾 doing 中文：經(jīng)常參加體育活動(dòng)能夠提高人們的自信心，這不但對(duì)年輕人而且對(duì)老人很重 要。 翻譯 2：教學(xué)的質(zhì)量對(duì)學(xué)生成績(jī)有很大的影響。 錯(cuò)誤的句子 ：Teaching qualities are important to students improve academic performance 錯(cuò)誤 1 quality 表示質(zhì)量的時(shí)候不可數(shù) 錯(cuò)誤 2 to 是介詞，后面不用加句

3、子 正確的句子：The quality of teaching can make a huge difference to students academic performance. 句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主謂賓 也可以用并列句拓展The quality of teaching can make a huge difference to students academic performance. and therefore, parents prefer to choose prestigious schools for children. 中文：教學(xué)的質(zhì)量被認(rèn)為是決定學(xué)生成績(jī)的關(guān)鍵，因此，家長(zhǎng)喜歡為

4、孩子選擇名校。 翻譯 3：家長(zhǎng)和老師應(yīng)該努力去減少小孩看電視的時(shí)間。 錯(cuò)誤的句子：parents and teachers should do their efforts to curb the time of watching TV on children. 錯(cuò)誤 1 make an effort to 固定表達(dá) 錯(cuò)誤 2 curb 一般是抑制某種行為，而不是接 time. 錯(cuò)誤 3 “watching TV on children”也不通。 正確的句子：parents and teachers should make an effort to limit childrens screen

5、time. 句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語(yǔ)（parents and teachers）+及物動(dòng)詞(make)+賓語(yǔ)(effort) 拓展的句子：Parents and teachers should make an effort to limit childrens screen time, thereby protecting childrens eyesight and encourage them to do more out-door activities. 錯(cuò)誤：protecting 和 encourage 不對(duì)稱 正確的句子：Parents and teachers should make an

6、effort to limit childrens screen time, thereby protecting childrens eyesight and encouraging them to do more outdoor activities. 注：這句話的分詞最好不要改成定語(yǔ)從句，因?yàn)榍懊娌恢朗切揎棥皊creen time”還是 “l(fā)imit screen time” 中文：家長(zhǎng)和老師應(yīng)該努力去減少孩子看電視的時(shí)間，這樣會(huì)保護(hù)孩子的視力，鼓 勵(lì)他們做戶外運(yùn)動(dòng)。 翻譯 4：經(jīng)濟(jì)的下滑（economic slowdown）導(dǎo)致失業(yè)率的上升 錯(cuò)誤的句子：Economic slowdo

7、wn made the climbing unemployment rate.錯(cuò)誤 1 不要用過(guò)去時(shí) 錯(cuò)誤 2 用不定冠詞好一點(diǎn)，因?yàn)檎谏仙氖I(yè)率一般不可能是唯一的。 正確的句子：Economic slowdown has led to a climbing unemployment rate. 句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語(yǔ)+及物動(dòng)詞+賓語(yǔ) 拓展的句子： Economic slowdown has led to a climbing unemployment rate, in view of the fact that employers are reluctant to recruit new emp

8、loyees so as to cut overhead. 錯(cuò)誤： 可能產(chǎn)生歧義，” recruit new employees” 是雇傭，“reluctant to recruit new employees”是不愿意雇用。到底是哪個(gè)事情導(dǎo)致“cut overhead”? 正確的句子：Economic slowdown has led to a climbing unemployment rate because employers intend to cut overheads and refuse to recruit new employees. 中文：經(jīng)濟(jì)下滑已經(jīng)導(dǎo)致失業(yè)率上升，因?yàn)?/p>

9、雇主打算裁員而且拒絕雇用新員工。 另外一個(gè)豆瓣的學(xué)生寫的句子也不錯(cuò)，我發(fā)出來(lái)： Economic slowdown has led to a climbing unemployment rate, as people balk at starting up new businesses and a number of giant companies downsize their workforce. 中文：經(jīng)濟(jì)下滑已經(jīng)導(dǎo)致失業(yè)率上升，因?yàn)槿藗儗?duì)開展新失業(yè)猶豫不決，而且很多 大公司裁員。 翻譯 5：經(jīng)濟(jì)的發(fā)展需要年輕的勞動(dòng)者 錯(cuò)誤的句子：The economic development requ

10、ires a great number of fresh working forces 錯(cuò)誤 1 working force 沒(méi)有這個(gè)表達(dá) 正確的句子：A countrys economic development relies on a supply of young workers 句子結(jié)構(gòu)： 主語(yǔ)+及物動(dòng)詞+賓語(yǔ) 也可以用分句擴(kuò)充，“the problem is that”是表語(yǔ)從句 A countrys economic development relies on a supply of young workers, but the problem is that the aging

11、society has an adverse impact on the labour force.中文：一個(gè)國(guó)家的經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展依靠一定量的年輕勞動(dòng)力，但是問(wèn)題是老齡化的社會(huì)對(duì) 勞動(dòng)力有負(fù)面影響。翻譯 6：工作很多的人沒(méi)有時(shí)間去休息 錯(cuò)誤的句子：People do with heavy workload cannot have adequate times to rest and recharge batteries 錯(cuò)誤 1 do 不知道功能是干嘛的。 錯(cuò)誤 2 time 不可數(shù) 錯(cuò)誤 5 cannot 是表示不可能，這里應(yīng)該是 do not 正確的句子：People with a heavy

12、workload do not have adequate time to rest 句子結(jié)構(gòu)： 主語(yǔ)+及物動(dòng)詞+賓語(yǔ)，“to rest and recharge batteries”不定式充當(dāng) time 的后置定語(yǔ) 也可以用定語(yǔ)從句擴(kuò)充 People with a heavy workload do not have adequate time to rest, which can be harmful to their fitness. 中文：工作很多的人沒(méi)有足夠的時(shí)間去休息和充電，這樣對(duì)他們的健康有害。翻譯 7: 在中國(guó)，很多學(xué)生晚上都要自習(xí) 錯(cuò)誤的句子：Large number of

13、students in China have to study at night. 錯(cuò)誤 1 “a large number of ” 固定搭配 正確的句子：A large number of students in China have to do self-study at night. 句子結(jié)構(gòu)： 主語(yǔ)+及物動(dòng)詞+ 賓語(yǔ) 也可以用狀語(yǔ)從句來(lái)擴(kuò)充 A large number of students in China have to do self-study at night, so extra-curricular activities have to give way to stud

14、ies. 中文：在中國(guó)，許多學(xué)生都要在晚上自學(xué)，所以課外活動(dòng)不得不給學(xué)習(xí)讓路。 翻譯 8: heritage sites 因?yàn)槌鞘邪l(fā)展而受到威脅 錯(cuò)誤的句子：The development of cities have pose a threat on heritage sites. 錯(cuò)誤 1 have pose 動(dòng)詞錯(cuò)誤而且主謂不一致 錯(cuò)誤 2 pose a threat to 固定搭配 正確的句子：The development of cities has posed a threat to heritage sites. 句子的結(jié)構(gòu): 主語(yǔ)（development）+ 及物動(dòng)詞(pose

15、)+ 賓語(yǔ)(threat) 還可以用并列句擴(kuò)充 The development of cities has posed a threat to heritage sites, but the government has no idea whether to protect or demolish these constructions. 中文：城市的發(fā)展已經(jīng)威脅到歷史遺跡，但是政府還沒(méi)有辦法是否去保護(hù)還是毀壞 這些建筑。 翻譯 9：我們不能夠忽視面對(duì)面的交流 錯(cuò)誤的句子：It cannot be ignored by people to have some face-to-face comm

16、unication. 錯(cuò)誤 1 it 指代不清楚 錯(cuò)誤 2 “to have face-to-face communication”不定式一般是表示沒(méi)有發(fā)生而有可能發(fā)生的 事情。 正確的句子：We should not ignore face-to-face communication. 句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語(yǔ)+ 及物動(dòng)詞+賓語(yǔ)（communication） 還可以用狀語(yǔ)從句擴(kuò)充 We should not ignore face-to-face communication because this has a direct impact on social relationships. 還可以用并列

17、句擴(kuò)充 Internet can enrich our social lives, but we should not ignore face-to-face communication, because this has a direct impact on social relationships. 中文：網(wǎng)絡(luò)能夠豐富我們的生活，但是我們不應(yīng)該忽視面對(duì)面的交流因?yàn)樗鼘?duì)社會(huì) 關(guān)系有直接影響。 翻譯:10：有些公共服務(wù)很難收支平衡 錯(cuò)誤的句子：Some public services have problems in break even. 錯(cuò)誤 1 break 是動(dòng)詞，在這里 in 是介詞，

18、后面應(yīng)該加動(dòng)名詞 正確的句子：Some public services have problems in breaking even. 句子結(jié)構(gòu)： 主語(yǔ)+ 及物動(dòng)詞(have)+ 賓語(yǔ)(problems) 還可以用并列句擴(kuò)充 Some public services have problems in breaking even and need government funds. 中文：一些公共服務(wù)很難收支平衡，需要政府資金。 翻譯 11：我們需要考慮社會(huì)和經(jīng)濟(jì)的環(huán)境 錯(cuò)誤的句子：We have to consider about social and economic context. 錯(cuò)誤

19、 1 consider 及物動(dòng)詞，后面不需要加介詞 正確的句子：We have to consider the social and economic context. 句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語(yǔ)+ 及物動(dòng)詞+ 賓語(yǔ) 還可以用分詞結(jié)構(gòu)擴(kuò)充 We have to consider the social and economic context when analysing the root causes of juvenile delinquency. 中文：當(dāng)分析青少年犯罪的根本原因的時(shí)候，我們應(yīng)該考慮社會(huì)和經(jīng)濟(jì)環(huán)境。 翻譯 12：密度種植對(duì)生物多樣性造成了威脅 錯(cuò)誤的句子：Intensive farmi

20、ng poses a threat to stemming the lose of bio-diversity. 錯(cuò)誤 1 pose a threat to stemming the loss of bio-diversity， 太羅嗦了。 錯(cuò)誤 2 lose 是動(dòng)詞，OF 前后一般要有名詞 正確的句子：Intensive farming can pose a threat to bio-diversity. 句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語(yǔ)+ 及物動(dòng)詞+ 賓語(yǔ)（threat） 還可以用并列句擴(kuò)充 Intensive farming has a great impact on natural flora and

21、 can pose a threat to bio-diversity. 中文：密集種植對(duì)野生植物有巨大影響，對(duì)物種多樣性有巨大威脅。 其他選擇 Intensive farming has a seriously negative impact on natural flora, and this may pose a threat to sustainable development of agriculture. 中文：密集種植對(duì)天然植物有嚴(yán)重的負(fù)面影響，這可能對(duì)農(nóng)業(yè)的可持續(xù)發(fā)展有威脅。 翻譯 13：平等的教育能幫助解決學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)不好 錯(cuò)誤的句子：Equal access to educ

22、ation can overcome educational underachievement. 錯(cuò)誤 1 overcome educational underachievement 搭配不好 ；“educational underachievement” 是指學(xué)生成績(jī)不好的意思。 正確的句子：Equal access to education can help tackle educational underachievement. 句子的結(jié)構(gòu)：主語(yǔ)+ 及物動(dòng)詞（help）+ 賓語(yǔ)（to tackle .這里省略了 to） 還可以用定語(yǔ)從句擴(kuò)充 Local authorities shoul

23、d ensure equal access to education, which can help tackle educational underachievement, a problem found among disadvantaged children. a problem 在這里是個(gè)同位語(yǔ)，指代前面的“educational underachievement”；而“found among disadvantaged children” 過(guò)去分詞，充當(dāng)定語(yǔ)。 中文：當(dāng)?shù)卣畱?yīng)該保證平等教育，這樣能夠幫助落后學(xué)生去解決學(xué)習(xí)的落后。 翻譯 14：接觸不同的文化可以促進(jìn)創(chuàng)新 錯(cuò)誤的句子：

24、Contacting with a wide variety of cultures can promote the creativity of native culture. 錯(cuò)誤 1 Contacting with 中國(guó)式英文 錯(cuò)誤 2 native culture 別扭，不知道為什么要說(shuō)本土文化 正確的句子：Exposure to different cultures can encourage creativity. 句子的結(jié)構(gòu)：主語(yǔ)+ 及物動(dòng)詞+ 賓語(yǔ) 還可以用定語(yǔ)從句擴(kuò)充 Exposure to different cultures can encourage creativity

25、, which is an asset for enterprises or countries. 中文：接觸不同的文化能夠促進(jìn)創(chuàng)新，這是企業(yè)或者國(guó)家的財(cái)富。翻譯 15：政府應(yīng)該重視社會(huì)福利(welfare services)，尤其是醫(yī)療服務(wù)。 錯(cuò)誤的句子：The government should give a priority to social welfare, especially the healthcare 錯(cuò)誤 1 give priority to 沒(méi)有 a 正確的句子：The government should give priority to welfare services

26、, especially the healthcare. 句子的結(jié)構(gòu)：主語(yǔ)+ 及物動(dòng)詞+ 賓語(yǔ) 還可以用名詞性從句，定語(yǔ)從句擴(kuò)充 some people suggest that the government should give priority to welfare services, especially the healthcare, which helps stop the disadvantaged population dying needlessly. 中文：一些人認(rèn)為政府重視社會(huì)福利，尤其是醫(yī)療服務(wù)，這會(huì)幫助阻止弱勢(shì)群體無(wú) 助地死去。 翻譯 16：教育或許決定了人的工作機(jī)會(huì)

27、。 錯(cuò)誤的句子： Education may do hold the key to ones job prospect. 錯(cuò)誤：may 和 do 不能連用。 正確的句子：Education may hold the key to ones job prospect. 句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語(yǔ)（education）+及物動(dòng)詞 hold)+賓語(yǔ)(the key) 拓展的句子：可以使用狀語(yǔ)從句 Education may hold the key to ones job prospect, especially when people intend to find jobs in the hi-tech in

28、dustry. 翻譯 17：使用化石資源對(duì)環(huán)境會(huì)造成破壞。 錯(cuò)誤的句子：Use fossil fuels can cause damage to the environmental problem . 錯(cuò)誤：USE 是動(dòng)詞，不能作為主語(yǔ)。 錯(cuò)誤：cause damage to 已經(jīng)表示出對(duì)環(huán)境的破壞，不需要再說(shuō) problem 正確的句子：The use of fossil fuels can cause damage to the environment. 句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語(yǔ)(use）+及物動(dòng)詞(can cause)+賓語(yǔ)(damage) 拓展的句子：可以使用狀語(yǔ)從句 The use of fo

29、ssil fuels can cause damage to the environment, possibly because it creates air pollution. 翻譯 18：建造住宅樓有助于解決城市的擁擠問(wèn)題。 錯(cuò)誤的句子：Building apartment blocks contribute to solve the crowed problem in cities 錯(cuò)誤 1 building 是動(dòng)名詞，主謂不一致 錯(cuò)誤 2 contribute to 后面要加名詞，而不是動(dòng)詞原形 錯(cuò)誤 3 crowed problem 沒(méi)有這個(gè)表達(dá) 正確的句子：Building ap

30、artment blocks helps solve overcrowding in cities. 句子結(jié)構(gòu)： 主語(yǔ)+及物動(dòng)詞(helps)+賓語(yǔ)(solve overcrowding， 省略了 to, 本來(lái)是不定式 to solve overcrowding) 拓展的句子：Building apartment blocks helps solve overcrowding in cities，because it can contain more people with limited space. 錯(cuò)誤：contain more people 搭配不是很好 正確的句子：Apartment

31、 blocks, which make the most of land and space, help solve overcrowding in cities. 中文：住宅樓由于其能最大限度地利用土地和空間，所以有助于解決城市的擁擠問(wèn) 題。 翻譯 19：貧窮的人可以通過(guò)努力工作來(lái)提高社會(huì)地位 錯(cuò)誤的句子：People at disadvantage are likely to improve their social status by working hard, studying hard. 錯(cuò)誤 1 at disadvantage 沒(méi)有這個(gè)表達(dá) 錯(cuò)誤 2 working hard, s

32、tudying hard 沒(méi)有連詞 正確的句子：People from disadvantaged backgrounds can improve their social status by working hard. 句子結(jié)構(gòu): 主語(yǔ)（people）+ 及物動(dòng)詞 (improve)+ 賓語(yǔ) (status)， “from disadvantaged backgrounds”是 people 的定語(yǔ) 還可以用并列句擴(kuò)展 People from disadvantaged backgrounds can improve their social status by working hard a

33、nd this seems an arduous but rewarding process. 中文：貧窮的人可以通過(guò)努力工作來(lái)提高社會(huì)地位，這看起來(lái)是一個(gè)辛苦但有效的 過(guò)程。 翻譯 20：因?yàn)槿蚧?，人們需要和?lái)自不同背景的人工作。 錯(cuò)誤的句子：Because of the globalisation, people should work with others who comes from different backgrounds. 錯(cuò)誤 1 the globalization 的 the 比較多余 錯(cuò)誤 2 who comes from 沒(méi)有必要用定語(yǔ)從句 錯(cuò)誤 3 should 有

34、點(diǎn)過(guò)分了，“必須”的意思 正確的句子：Because of globalisation, people need to work with those from diverse backgrounds. 注：這里的 those 就是其他人的意思，不能說(shuō) those people，這樣會(huì)和主語(yǔ)重復(fù)。 句子結(jié)構(gòu): 主語(yǔ)(people)+ 及物動(dòng)詞（need）+ 賓語(yǔ)(to work)，“because of globalisation” 介賓短語(yǔ)充當(dāng)狀語(yǔ) 翻譯 21：我們需要采取措施去解決一些棘手的問(wèn)題。 錯(cuò)誤的句子：We must take measurement to tackle thorn

35、y problems. 錯(cuò)誤 measurement 的意思是測(cè)量 正確的句子： We need to take action to solve some intractable problems. 句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語(yǔ) （we）+及物動(dòng)詞(need)+賓語(yǔ)(to take .) 翻譯 22：媒體通過(guò)夸大受害者的傷痛去吸引觀眾。 錯(cuò)誤的句子 ：Medias exaggerate the hurt of victims to attract public attentions. 錯(cuò)誤 1：Media 本身就是復(fù)數(shù)。 錯(cuò)誤 2：hurt 是動(dòng)詞，OF 前后要加名詞。 錯(cuò)誤 3：attentions 不可

36、數(shù)名詞。 正確的句子：The media attract public attention by sensationalising victims suffering. 句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語(yǔ)（the media）+及物動(dòng)詞 (attracts)+賓語(yǔ) (attention)；“by+ ”方式狀語(yǔ) 拓展的句子：The media attract public attention by sensationalising victims suffering, while ignore harmful consequences bring to them, such as their exposure to

37、 the public. 錯(cuò)誤 1： while 是從屬連詞，后面不能直接加動(dòng)詞原形。 錯(cuò)誤 2 ignore 和 bring 兩個(gè)動(dòng)詞。 錯(cuò)誤 3 them 指代不清楚 正確的句子：The media attracts public attention by sensationalising victims suffering, while ignoring harmful consequences to these individuals, such as their exposure to the public. 中文：媒體通過(guò)夸大受害者的傷痛去吸引觀眾，而忽視對(duì)這些觀眾的有害結(jié)果，比

38、如將他們?cè)诠娒媲捌毓?。?及物動(dòng)詞+賓語(yǔ)+賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ) 翻譯 23：基因工程讓人們能培養(yǎng)新品種農(nóng)作物 錯(cuò)誤的句子：Genetic engineering allows people to nurture new species crops. 錯(cuò)誤 1 species crops 語(yǔ)序有問(wèn)題 正確的句子：Genetic engineering allows people to nurture crop varieties. 句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語(yǔ)+ 及物動(dòng)詞+ 賓語(yǔ)（people）+賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)（to nurture） 拓展的句子： Genetic engineering allows people to

39、 nurture crop varieties that are resistant to drought， thereby improving land productivity. 中文：基因工程使人們能培育出抗旱的農(nóng)作物品種，因此可以提高土地利用率。 翻譯 24：經(jīng)常運(yùn)動(dòng)使得人們保持健康的心態(tài) 錯(cuò)誤的句子：Doing exercises regularly helps people maintain a healthy state of mind. 錯(cuò)誤 1 Doing exercises 一般是不可數(shù) 正確的句子：Doing exercise regularly helps people

40、 maintain a healthy state of mind. 句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語(yǔ)+ 及物動(dòng)詞+ 賓語(yǔ)（people）+賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)（to maintain省略了 to） 還可以用并列句擴(kuò)充 Doing exercise regularly helps people maintain a healthy state of mind and makes it easier for them to cope with stress. 中文：經(jīng)常做運(yùn)動(dòng)幫助人們保持一個(gè)健康的心態(tài)，是他們更容易應(yīng)對(duì)壓力。 翻譯 25：不健康的生活方式讓人們處于生病的危險(xiǎn)之中。 錯(cuò)誤的句子： Unhealthy life

41、style is likely to make people at risk of illness. 錯(cuò)誤 1： make somebody do something 或者是 make somebody +形容詞是更常見(jiàn)的用法。 錯(cuò)誤 2：lifestyle 可數(shù)名詞，要加冠詞，或者復(fù)數(shù) 正確的句子：An unhealthy lifestyle may put people at risk of illness. 句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語(yǔ)（An unhealthy lifestyle）+及物動(dòng)詞（put）+賓語(yǔ)（people）+賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足 語(yǔ) （at risk of illness） 翻譯 26：獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金可

42、以鼓勵(lì)更多的學(xué)生去學(xué)習(xí)研究生課程。 錯(cuò)誤的句子： Scholarship could be regarded as something to inspire more students to take postgraduate curriculum. 錯(cuò)誤 1 scholarship 可數(shù)名詞，應(yīng)該有復(fù)數(shù)或者冠詞 錯(cuò)誤 2 regarded as something 太過(guò)羅嗦 錯(cuò)誤 3 curriculum 不是 course 的替換詞，curriculum 的意思是課程大綱 正確的句子：Government grants could encourage more students to ta

43、ke postgraduate courses. 句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語(yǔ) (government grants)+及物動(dòng)詞(encourage)+賓語(yǔ)(students)+賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)(to take postgraduate courses) 翻譯 27：社區(qū)改造為罪犯提供了獲得職業(yè)技能的機(jī)會(huì) 錯(cuò)誤的句子：Replacing the long sentence by working for the locals provides offenders with transferable skills. 錯(cuò)誤 1 主語(yǔ)很別扭， 兩個(gè)東西沒(méi)有替換性 正確的句子：Community service provi

44、des offenders with opportunities to acquire transferable skills. 句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語(yǔ)+ 及物動(dòng)詞+ 賓語(yǔ)（offenders）+賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)（with opportunities to） 還可以用并列句擴(kuò)充 Community service provides offenders with opportunities to acquire transferable skills and gives them a flying start when they are released. 中文：社區(qū)服務(wù)給犯人提供獲得實(shí)用技能的機(jī)會(huì)，給他們好

45、的起點(diǎn)當(dāng)他們被釋放后。 翻譯 28：法律應(yīng)該將醉駕變成刑事犯罪。 錯(cuò)誤的句子 ：the government should introduce a law which is drunk driving a criminal offence. 錯(cuò)誤 定語(yǔ)從句還原是“a law is drunk driving”顯然不對(duì)。 中國(guó)學(xué)生有個(gè)誤區(qū)，就是一定 要寫個(gè)從句，才能加分。 正確的句子：Legislation should make drink driving a criminal offence. 句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語(yǔ)（legislation） +及物動(dòng)詞(make)+賓語(yǔ)(drink driving

46、)+賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)(a criminal offence) 翻譯 29：鄉(xiāng)村地區(qū)給人們提供機(jī)會(huì)去遠(yuǎn)離現(xiàn)代生活的壓力和噪音。 錯(cuò)誤的句子 ：rural area provides people with opportunity to escape pressure and noises of modern life. 錯(cuò)誤 1：rural area 可數(shù)名詞，沒(méi)有冠詞，或者復(fù)數(shù)。 錯(cuò)誤 2：opportunity 在這里用復(fù)數(shù)比較好。 正確的句子：Rural areas provide people with opportunities to escape pressure and noises o

47、f modern life. 句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語(yǔ)(rural areas)+及物動(dòng)詞(provide) +賓語(yǔ)(people)+賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)(with opportunities) 拓展的句子： Rural area is beneficial to peoples fitness, because it provides people with opportunities to escape pressure and noises of modern life. 錯(cuò)誤：rural area 可數(shù)名詞，沒(méi)有冠詞，或者復(fù)數(shù)。 兩個(gè)句子的主語(yǔ)都一樣，還不如用分詞 正確的句子：Rural areas ar

48、e beneficial to peoples health, providing people with opportunities to escape pressure and noises of modern life. 中文：鄉(xiāng)村地區(qū)對(duì)人們的健康有益，因?yàn)樗o人們提供機(jī)會(huì)去遠(yuǎn)離現(xiàn)代生活的壓力 和噪音。 翻譯 30：人口老齡化促使國(guó)家去提高法定退休年齡（statutory retirement age）。 錯(cuò)誤的句子：Compulsory retirement age will be abolished, and the reason is attributed to populatio

49、n aging and urban. 錯(cuò)誤 1：retirement age 是可數(shù)名詞 錯(cuò)誤 2：reason is attributed to 這個(gè)搭配不好 正確的句子：The ageing population has prompted countries to raise the statutory retirement age. 句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語(yǔ)(ageing population)+及物動(dòng)詞(prompt)+賓語(yǔ)(countries)+賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)(to raise) 拓展的句子：The ageing population leads to a shortage of skillful

50、 workers, a problem which has promote countries to raise the statutory retirement age. 錯(cuò)誤：應(yīng)該是 skilled workers. Skillful 表示人們做某事的時(shí)候所展示的技藝嫻熟正確的句子：The ageing population leads to a shortage of highly skilled workers, a problem which has prompted countries to raise the statutory retirement age. 注：a probl

51、em 在這里是同位語(yǔ)，指代前面的 shortage 中文：人口老齡化導(dǎo)致高級(jí)技術(shù)工人的短缺，這個(gè)問(wèn)題已經(jīng)促使國(guó)家提高了法定退 休年齡。主+及物動(dòng)詞+間接賓語(yǔ)+直接賓語(yǔ) 翻譯 31：政府提供一些城市很多資金去保護(hù)歷史建筑（historic buildings）。 錯(cuò)誤的句子：Many areas now pay attention to protect historic buildings. 錯(cuò)誤：pay attention to 的 to 是介詞，后面不能加動(dòng)詞 正確的句子：Governments should offer some cities funds to preserve histo

52、ric buildings. 句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語(yǔ)（areas）+及物動(dòng)詞(offer)+間接賓語(yǔ)(some cities)+直接賓語(yǔ)（funds） 拓展的句子：可以使用定語(yǔ)從句 拓展的句子：Governments should offer some cities funds to preserve historic buildings, which are part of our cultural heritage. 被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài) 翻譯 32：學(xué)校應(yīng)該允許老師強(qiáng)制搗蛋的小孩離開教室。 錯(cuò)誤的句子：Schools should allow teachers to make the children wi

53、th disruptive behaviours go out of classrooms. 錯(cuò)誤：children with disruptive behaviours 略顯羅嗦 正確的句子：Teachers should be permitted to use force to remove disruptive children from the classroom. 原句：Schools should permit teachers to use force to remove disruptive children from the classroom. 句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語(yǔ)（school

54、s） +及物動(dòng)詞(permit)+賓語(yǔ)(teachers)+賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ) (to use force) 翻譯 33：農(nóng)村的失業(yè)問(wèn)題在某種程度上可以通過(guò)城鄉(xiāng)轉(zhuǎn)移 （rural-to-urban shift）解決。 錯(cuò)誤的句子：Unemployment in rural areas can be address by rural-to-urban shift. 錯(cuò)誤 1 被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)沒(méi)有過(guò)去分詞 錯(cuò)誤 2 shift 是可數(shù)名詞，最好要有冠詞 正確的句子：Unemployment in rural areas can be addressed partially by the rural-to-urba

55、n shift. 句子結(jié)構(gòu)：（主語(yǔ)+及物動(dòng)詞+賓語(yǔ)）的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài) 拓展的句子：Unemployment in rural areas can be addressed partially by the rural-to-urban shift, because rural areas are lack of industry and services, which causes high unemployment rate. 錯(cuò)誤 1：because 后面的內(nèi)容只是解釋了為什么鄉(xiāng)村的失業(yè)率很高，但是沒(méi)有解釋為什么 城鄉(xiāng)轉(zhuǎn)移可以解決這個(gè)問(wèn)題。 錯(cuò)誤 2：rate 可數(shù)名詞 錯(cuò)誤 3：一般不要 la

56、ck of 充當(dāng)表語(yǔ) 正確的句子：The lack of infrastructure and government funding in rural areas is the main cause of unemployment, which can be addressed partially by the rural-to-urban shift. 中文：農(nóng)村失業(yè)問(wèn)題的主要原因是缺少基礎(chǔ)建設(shè)和政府資助，這個(gè)問(wèn)題在某種程度 可以通過(guò)城鄉(xiāng)轉(zhuǎn)移解決。 翻譯 34：高層建筑有時(shí)候被認(rèn)為是城市的 eyesore。 錯(cuò)誤的句子（4.5 分）：Occasionally，highrise buildings are tend to be regarded as the eyesore of a city. 錯(cuò)誤 1 Occasionally 表示的意思是“偶爾地，很少地” 錯(cuò)誤 2 “be + do”永遠(yuǎn)是錯(cuò)的 正確的句子：High-rise buildings are sometimes regarded as eyesores of the city. 注：這句話里如果說(shuō)“the eyesore”就是特指，意思就是城市只有一處難看的地方，事實(shí) 上未必如此。 句子結(jié)構(gòu)：“somebody regards something as something”是“主語(yǔ)+及物動(dòng)詞+賓