中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá).ppt

English Writing 解析英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá),新的課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中關(guān)于五級(jí)水平（即初中畢業(yè)要求達(dá)到的水平）的要求是： A.能根據(jù)寫(xiě)作要求，收集、準(zhǔn)備素材； B.能獨(dú)立起草短文、短信等，并在教師的指導(dǎo)下進(jìn)行修改； C.能使用常見(jiàn)的連接詞表示順序和邏輯關(guān)系； D.能簡(jiǎn)單描述人物或事件； E.能根據(jù)所給的圖示或表格寫(xiě)出簡(jiǎn)單的段落或操作說(shuō)明。,1.新課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中關(guān)于寫(xiě)的要求,書(shū)面表達(dá)是一項(xiàng)能充分考查學(xué)生語(yǔ)言綜合能力的題型。,配合課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，使教師和學(xué)生對(duì)寫(xiě)的能力的培養(yǎng)引起足夠的重視，可以說(shuō)起到了一種導(dǎo)向作用。,是教材改革的發(fā)展趨勢(shì)。,2. 中考引入書(shū)面表達(dá)的意義,3. 處理好三個(gè)方面的關(guān)系,A. 學(xué)生與大綱(課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn))、教材的關(guān)系 B. 聽(tīng)、說(shuō)、讀與寫(xiě)的關(guān)系 C. 詞、句與篇的關(guān)系,3. A. 學(xué)生與大綱(課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn))、 教材的關(guān)系 大綱(課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn))對(duì)寫(xiě)作的任務(wù)、形式、范圍等方面作了具體的規(guī)定。,體裁、形式不離課本。 萬(wàn)變不離其宗，這個(gè)“宗”就是課本。把 握教材是提高我們英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)水平的根本。,3.B. 聽(tīng)、說(shuō)、讀與寫(xiě)的關(guān)系 這里的“聽(tīng)”是指“聽(tīng)寫(xiě)”。 原始習(xí)作。,其次，“說(shuō)” 增強(qiáng)語(yǔ)感,了解英漢差異, 熟悉日常用語(yǔ) 與習(xí)慣用語(yǔ)。,第三，“讀”是寫(xiě)的基礎(chǔ)。 讀課文 , 課外閱讀,3.C.詞、句與篇的關(guān)系,Word Sentence Paragraph Composition,C,P1 P2 P3 P4 .,S1 S2 S3 S4.,w1w2w3w4.,3.C.詞、句與篇的關(guān)系,選詞：根據(jù)圖上信息，選用關(guān)鍵詞來(lái)表達(dá)。,用詞：選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~來(lái)表達(dá)。 e.g. borrow & lend, stop to do sth. & stop doing sth.,掌握多種變通方式，可以用一句多譯的練習(xí)來(lái)達(dá)成。,(1).I spent twenty yuan on my new watch. (2).The new watch cost me twenty yuan. (3).I paid twenty yuan for the new watch.,如“我花二十元買(mǎi)了塊新手表”可以譯為：,4. 書(shū)面表達(dá)的兩種主要形式和具體要求,A. 記敘文(尤其是故事性的),注意五個(gè)“W”，即：,when, where, who, what, why,Time order:,In the library, The pan, The accident,Place order:,A visit to the factory,Today we visited a farm. Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together. The farm workers gave us a warm welcome. Then the head of the farm showed us around. How glad we were to see the crops and vegetables growing well. At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes or stories. Two of us even played a game of chess. The time passed quickly. Before we knew it, we had to say good-bye to the workers.,范文 1,Class 1 Junior 3 Zhejiang Hongda School December 2nd Dear Mr Smith, I was so pleased to hear from you and writing to tell you something about my school. You are right. Quite a few changes have taken place(發(fā)生). On one side of the road there is a new classroom building. On the other side, where the playground used to be now stands another new building-our library. In it there are all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines（雜志）. The playground is now in front of the school. We have also planted a lot of trees in and around the school. I hope you come and see for yourself some day. Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua,范文 2,4.書(shū)面表達(dá)的兩種主要形式和具體要求 B. 其它應(yīng)用文, 包括：書(shū)信、日記、通知、便條(請(qǐng)假條、電話留言、留言條)及賀卡等 。,C. 幾種文體的結(jié)合, 這是很值得我們關(guān)注的一個(gè)趨向。如上面舉例中的范文，是在信中進(jìn)行說(shuō)明，是一封信，但又是一篇以空間為順序的說(shuō)明文。,把范文1改用日記形式寫(xiě)：,December 2nd Sunday sunny,Today we visited a farm. Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together. The farm workers gave us a warm welcome. Then the head of the farm showed us around. How glad we were to see the crops and vegetables growing well. At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes or stories. Two of us even played a game of chess. The time passed quickly. Before we knew it, we had to say good-bye to the workers.,5. 應(yīng)引起重視的幾種呈現(xiàn)形式,圖片式 :,單幅畫(huà)： 多幅畫(huà)：,多幅圖的可能是按順序排列，也有可能要我們先排列，再寫(xiě)作。,單幅畫(huà)：,多幅畫(huà)：,文字式：提供的是幾點(diǎn)文字信息，如：,假如你叫Dick，兩個(gè)月前去英國(guó)的一所高中讀書(shū)，前天收到了Michael的一封信。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一封回信，信中要涉及以下內(nèi)容：,1.祝賀他在校運(yùn)會(huì)上獲得了男子400米冠軍； 2.你已給他寄了一本英英詞典,讓他收到后告訴你； 3.你在英國(guó)和同學(xué)們相處得很好； 4.告訴他你新申請(qǐng)了個(gè)E-mail, D,申請(qǐng)register,圖表式：(standing room only),范文 3,10,000 years ago, the worlds population was very small. For several thousand years it grew quite slowly. But during the last three or four hundred years it has grown very quickly. Today, it is still growing faster than ever before. This means we must grow more food, and have smaller families with fewer, but healthier children. If we dont do these things, the results will be very bad. There will not be enough space even to stand in on the earth.,6、平時(shí)訓(xùn)練中的幾個(gè)注意點(diǎn),海寧市2001年中考英語(yǔ)看圖表達(dá)部分的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) .定性標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 第五檔（1215）：能寫(xiě)明全部或絕大部分要點(diǎn)；表達(dá) 清楚，行文連貫，語(yǔ)言基本無(wú)誤。 第四檔（9 11）：能寫(xiě)明大部分要點(diǎn)；表達(dá)基本清楚， 行文基本連貫，語(yǔ)言有少量錯(cuò)誤。 第三檔（ 68 ）：能寫(xiě)明基本要點(diǎn)；語(yǔ)言有較多錯(cuò)誤， 尚能達(dá)意。 第二檔（ 35 ）：能寫(xiě)明部分要點(diǎn)；語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤多，影響 意思表達(dá)。 第一檔（ 02 ）：白卷或文不對(duì)題，或錯(cuò)誤百出，不知 所云。,. 定量標(biāo)準(zhǔn) A. 全部或絕大部分要點(diǎn)-5個(gè)； 大部分要點(diǎn)-4個(gè)； 基本要點(diǎn)-3個(gè)； 部分要點(diǎn)-2個(gè)；,B. 語(yǔ)言基本無(wú)誤-只允許1-2個(gè)小錯(cuò)，無(wú)大錯(cuò)； 語(yǔ)言有少量錯(cuò)誤-1個(gè)大錯(cuò)或3-4個(gè)小錯(cuò)； 語(yǔ)言有一些錯(cuò)誤-2個(gè)大錯(cuò)或5-6個(gè)小錯(cuò)； 語(yǔ)言有較多錯(cuò)誤-3個(gè)大錯(cuò)或7-8個(gè)小錯(cuò)； 語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤多-4個(gè)大錯(cuò)或7-8個(gè)小錯(cuò)； 語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤很多-5個(gè)大錯(cuò)或10個(gè)以上小錯(cuò)；,注： 大錯(cuò)誤指： 句子結(jié)構(gòu)，謂語(yǔ)構(gòu)成，詞序，語(yǔ)態(tài)，時(shí)態(tài)等方面； 小錯(cuò)誤指： 名詞單復(fù)數(shù)，第三人稱(chēng)單數(shù)，拼寫(xiě)，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)， 大小寫(xiě)方面。,2001中考答案中的范文 Its Sunday today. Its a nice day. Jims family are spending their holiday on a small island. They get there early with some nice food and drink. They are enjoying themselves. Look, Jims playing with the sand and his parents are drinking and talking happily beside him. Behind them we can see two people lying on the sand and enjoying the sunshine. Some children are swimming in the sea. There are two boys playing with a model ship nearby and two girls playing with a model plane over there. The plane is flying high in the sky. Everyone is having a good time.,6、平時(shí)訓(xùn)練中的幾個(gè)注意點(diǎn) A. 平時(shí)注重解題技巧的養(yǎng)成,準(zhǔn)備工作 .仔細(xì)審題，明確要求。 羅列信息，認(rèn)真分析，審清題意，列出要點(diǎn)。,.緊扣要點(diǎn)，尋求思路。 草擬提綱，確定開(kāi)頭，選詞、選句，擬好結(jié)尾（可適當(dāng)發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)）。,寫(xiě)作之中,.開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山，緊扣主題 。,.語(yǔ)言正確, 規(guī)范地道。,參觀農(nóng)場(chǎng)的日記： 關(guān)于度假：,句型、結(jié)構(gòu)，避免中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)。 I spent 10 yuan buy the book. He by bike to school. 標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào),Last Sunday we visited West Hill Farm.,We had a happy holiday in Jiaxin last weekend.,.重短輕長(zhǎng), 就易避難。,.過(guò)渡自然, 表達(dá)流暢。,以寫(xiě)正確、通順為最基本要求。,正確使用連詞，保持行文的流暢。 不重復(fù)使用可置換的詞。,.適當(dāng)評(píng)論, 發(fā)表己見(jiàn)。,How friendly they are! We can learn from them. They enjoyed themselves very much. What a happy family.,3.成文之后,. 一般語(yǔ)法項(xiàng)目的檢查,人稱(chēng): Mr. Green works hard, she is the best worker in their office. 時(shí)態(tài): One day, they are going to the island. 主謂一致: Everyone in our class work hard. 習(xí)慣用法: He helps me in my English.,. 注意語(yǔ)序 (感嘆句，疑問(wèn)句，賓語(yǔ)從句),Jim works very hard. So does Jack.(前后主語(yǔ)非一人) A: Jim works very hard. B: So he does.(前