2017_2018學(xué)年高中英語(yǔ)Unit5MusicSectionⅤWriting_咨詢信教學(xué)案新人教版.docx

Unit 5 Music Section Writing咨詢信咨詢信是指寫(xiě)信人就某一個(gè)問(wèn)題向收信人征求或征詢建議，希望收信人就寫(xiě)信人提出的問(wèn)題給出針對(duì)性的解決方法或提出合理的建議。一、基本框架1開(kāi)頭簡(jiǎn)單敘述寫(xiě)咨詢信的目的或意圖，清楚表明要尋求什么樣的幫助。2主體言明要咨詢的具體問(wèn)題和存在的困難，并請(qǐng)求對(duì)方給出一些建議。3結(jié)尾誠(chéng)懇地提出希望，表達(dá)需要得到幫助的迫切心情并表示感謝。二、增分佳句1Im writing totell you some advice on how to form a music band.2Nowadays, bothtraditional and modern music are enjoyed by people in China.3For a long time, traditional music has played an important part in peoples life.4I was at a loss what to do with this situation. 5I find it really hard to learn English well and I almost lost heart.6I would appreciate it if you could give me some precious advice.7Im sorry to trouble you, but I feel that I must write you this letter.8Would you like to give me some advice on it so that I can make rapid progress?題目要求假如你是李華，你打算與你的朋友組建一個(gè)樂(lè)隊(duì)。門(mén)基樂(lè)隊(duì)的成功給了你很大的鼓舞。但你和朋友對(duì)樂(lè)隊(duì)的名字、主唱、樂(lè)器的選擇及樂(lè)隊(duì)的類(lèi)型存在分歧，這讓你不知所措，你決定給門(mén)基樂(lè)隊(duì)寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，告訴他們你的想法，并征求他們的建議，如何才能使樂(lè)隊(duì)更加成功。注意：可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)就某一方面或幾個(gè)方面的問(wèn)題征求他們的建議。第一步：審題構(gòu)思很關(guān)鍵一、審題1確定體裁：本文為咨詢信；2確定人稱：本文的主要人稱應(yīng)為第一人稱；3確定時(shí)態(tài)：本文的主要時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。二、構(gòu)思開(kāi)頭：自我介紹并提出問(wèn)題。主體：具體描述自己遇到的問(wèn)題、困難等。結(jié)尾：再次提出希望，希望對(duì)方給自己提出建議。第二步：核心詞匯想周全1form_a_band組建一個(gè)樂(lè)隊(duì)2inspire 鼓舞；激勵(lì)3instrument 樂(lè)器4lead_singer 主唱5type_of_music 音樂(lè)類(lèi)型第三步：由詞擴(kuò)句雛形現(xiàn)開(kāi)頭：自我介紹并提出問(wèn)題。1我叫李華。我打算與我的另外三個(gè)朋友組建一個(gè)樂(lè)隊(duì)。My name is Li Hua. Im_going/planning_to_form_a_band with my other three friends.2你們(門(mén)基)樂(lè)隊(duì)的成功給了我們很大的鼓舞。可是，我們以前沒(méi)有在樂(lè)隊(duì)里待過(guò)。Your bands success inspired us greatly. However, we have_never_been_in_a_band_before.3你能給我們一些建議嗎？Could you please give_us_some_advice/suggestions?主體：具體描述自己遇到的問(wèn)題、困難等。4我們都喜歡流行音樂(lè)，但是我和我的三個(gè)朋友無(wú)法決定給樂(lè)隊(duì)取什么名字，誰(shuí)主唱以及選擇什么樣的樂(lè)器等。My three friends and I like pop music. We_cant_decide the bands name. We cant decide the lead singer. We cant decide what_instruments_we_choose.5此外，我們?cè)撗葑嗍裁礃拥囊魳?lè)？我們是該只演奏一種音樂(lè)還是各種音樂(lè)都嘗試一下呢？In_addition/Besides,_what type of music should we play? Should we only play one kind or try_every_type_of_music?6你們樂(lè)隊(duì)是如何決定演奏什么的呢？How did your band decide what_to_play?結(jié)尾：再次提出希望，希望對(duì)方給自己提出建議。7我們真的希望你們能給我們一些建議。We really hope you can give_us_some_advice.第四步：句式升級(jí)造亮點(diǎn)1用but, as well as等把句4合并成一個(gè)含轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的并列句My_three_friends_and_I_like_pop_music,_but_we_cant_decide_the_bands_name,_the_lead_singer_as_well_as_what_instruments_we_choose.2對(duì)句7的謂語(yǔ)部分進(jìn)行強(qiáng)調(diào)We_do_hope_you_can_give_us_some_advice.第五步：過(guò)渡銜接聯(lián)成篇Dear_Monkees,_My_name_is_Li_Hua._Im_going_to_form_a_band_with_my_other_three_friends._Your_bands_success_inspired_us_greatly._However,_we_have_never_been_in_a_band_before._Could_you_please_give_us_some_advice/suggestions?My_three_friends_and_I_like_pop_music,_but_we_cant_decide_the_bands_name,_the_lead_singer_as_well_as_what_instruments_we_choose._In_addition/Besides,_what_type_of_music_should_we_play?_Should_we_only_play_