2014-2018高考英語試題分項版解析專題23文字提綱式含解析.doc

專題23 文字提綱式2018高考題【2018天津卷】書面表達（滿分25分）61. 假設(shè)你是晨光中學的機器人興趣小組組長李津，你的美國朋友Chris就讀于天津某國際學校，他普在機器人技能競賽中獲獎。你打算邀請他加入你的團隊，參加即將于7月底在天津舉行的世界青少學機器人技能競賽。請根據(jù)以下提示代表興趣小組給他寫一封電子郵件。 （1）比賽的時間、地點；（2）邀請他的原因；（3）訓練計劃將發(fā)送其郵箱，請他提出建議。注意：（1）詞數(shù)不少于100；（2）可適當加入細節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實、行文連貫；（3）開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：世界青少年機器人技能競賽 the World Adolescent Robotics petitionDear Chris,I have good news to tell you. _Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Jin【參考范文】Dear Chris, I have good news to tell you. The World Adolescent Robotics petition will be held in Tianjin at the end of July so as to promote the development of robotics. What I would like to stress is that it is looking for new members at this moment. I would like to invite you to take part in it, since I know youve just won first prize in the Robotics petition held in your institute and have shown great talent in designing robotics. Therefore, you are the most suitable person, I suppose.The training schedule, in addition to regular training, includes joining in a variety of activities, such as participating in some national petitions. I will send its details to you by e-mail. I would appreciate it if you give us some advice on how to make it perfect. Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Jin【點睛】書面表達考查大家所熟悉的提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來。動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點比較具體，故需要準確表達。考生寫完之后要檢查是否有語法錯誤，看能否運用所學的知識將簡單句變?yōu)閺碗s句，當然，沒有把握的句子不要寫?！?018北京】假設(shè)你是紅星中學高三學生李華，你的英國朋友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他對中國文化感興趣，計劃明年來北京上大學。他向你咨詢相關(guān)信息。請給他回郵件，內(nèi)容包括：(1) 表示歡迎；(2) 推薦他上哪所大學；(3) 建議他做哪些準備工作。注意：(1). 詞數(shù)不少于50；(2). 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Jim,_Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jim, Im so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my warmest wele to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing. Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be pletely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance in needed like The Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment. I sincerely hope your dream will e true and its my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day es. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.Yours,Li Hua亮點說明：文章中巧妙使用非謂語Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, 使句子結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。使用定語從句Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be pletely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. 使句子表達更完美；巧妙使用連接詞while引出來中國前的準備，使句子結(jié)構(gòu)對稱。 【2018全國III】假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Peter 來信詢問你校學生體育運動情況。請給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：1. 學校的體育場館；2. 主要的運動項目；3. 你喜歡的項目。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右：2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_【答案】Dear Peter, I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.To begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built up, which has bee the new landmark in our school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as running petitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, Im intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life.All in all, I sincerely invite you to e to our school and see for yourself.Yours, Li Hua【解析】本題作文為提綱式作文，形式依然是書信，即給英國朋友Peter介紹學校體育運動情況，屬于學校生活話題。這一話題貼合學生生活的實際，學生并不陌生，有話可說。2017高考題【2017天津卷】書面表達（滿分25分）假設(shè)你是李津，與你以前的外籍教師Mrs. Green 一直保持聯(lián)系。近日她來信詢問你的近況，請根據(jù)以下提示給她回復一封郵件。（1）簡要介紹自己的學習和生活；（2）告知你已成為八月底在津舉辦的第十三屆全運會的志愿者，并介紹為此所做的準備（如深入了解天津等）；（3）希望她有機會重訪天津。注意：（1）詞數(shù)不少于100；（2）可適當加入細節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實、行文連貫；（3）開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：第十三屆全運會 the 13th National GamesDear Mrs. Green,Im glad to hear from you. _Yours,Li Jin【答案】略【考點定位】考查提綱作文【名師點睛】這篇作文屬于典型的提綱類作文。根據(jù)要求確定要點，適當對要點進行發(fā)揮。關(guān)鍵在于詞匯和句式的選用，盡量使用簡潔準確的語言。【2017北京卷】你的英國朋友Jim所在的學校要組織學生來中國旅行，有兩條線路可以選擇：“長江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim來信希望你能給些建議。請你給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：1.你建議的線路；2.你的理由；3.你的祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于50；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Jim, Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jim, Im happy receive your letter and know youre ing to China.Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly remended. Personally, I prefer the your along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots. Thats why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.Hope youll have a good time in China.YoursLi Hua【亮點說明】本文內(nèi)容齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴謹，層次分明，布局合理，語言精練，同時運用高級句子。表語從句的使用：Thats why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.高級詞匯的使用：highly remended。連接詞的合理使用：Personally，moreover?！?017浙江卷6月考】應用文寫作(滿分15分)假定你是李華，計劃組織一次郊游，請給你的英國朋友Chris寫封郵件邀請他參加。內(nèi)容包括：1. 參加者；2. 時間、地點；3. 活動：登山、野餐等。注意：1. 詞數(shù)80左右；2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_【參考范文】Dear Chris, How are you doing? I am writing to invite you to a tour to the Green Hill this Saturday. As planned, we will leave by bus at 7：00 am at the school gate. About two hours will be spent climbing the mountain. After that we will have a picnic by the lake at the foot of the mountain.Up till now, 3 boys and 4 girls have joined the team. I do hope that you could join us because Green Hill is such a fun place to relax and surely we will have a great time. However, if you dont have spare time for this trip, it is fine. Its just up to you. Looking forward to hearing from you.Yours，Li Hua2016高考題1.【2016天津】書面表達（滿分25分）假設(shè)你是晨光中學的學生會主席李津。一批來自英國的高中生與你校學生開展了為期兩周的交流活動?，F(xiàn)在，他們即將回國，你將在歡送會上致辭。請根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇發(fā)言稿。（1） 回顧雙方的交流活動（如學習、生活、體育、文藝等方面）；（2） 談談收獲或感情；（3） 表達祝愿語期望。注意：（1） 詞數(shù)不少于100；（2） 可適當加入細節(jié)，是內(nèi)容充實、行文連貫；（3） 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear friends,How time flies! Thank you.【答案】One possible version: Dear_friends,_How_time_flies! Two weeks went by before we realized that our exchange activities ended. On behalf of our school, I would like to express my feelings.As scheduled, we took part in several instructive activities. We have learnt many Chinese characters and often took exercise together. We went to the restaurant to taste the Chinese traditional food. The food was extremely delicious and different from our food. While visiting the art exhibition, we discussed the great artists works.As far as Im concerned, everyone here is a member of our big family. And at last I sincerely wish you a pleasant trip to your country. I hope well get together again next year. Thank_you. 【考點定位】考查提綱作文【名師點睛】這篇作文屬于典型的提綱類作文。根據(jù)要求確定要點，適當對要點進行發(fā)揮。關(guān)鍵在于詞匯和句式的選用，盡量使用簡潔的語言。2.【2016北京】書面表達 第一節(jié)（15分） 假設(shè)你是紅星中學高三學生李華。你的英國朋友Jim 在給你的郵件中提到他對中國歷史很感興趣，并請你介紹一位你喜歡的中國歷史人物。請你給Jim回信，內(nèi)容包括：1. 該人物是誰； 2. 該人物的主要貢獻； 3. 該人物對你的影響。 注意：1. 詞數(shù)不少于50；2. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。 Dear Jim, _ _Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jim, Its great to hear from you. I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history. As for my favourite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty. He, in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi (Mps and Records of the World), introduced modern technologies and ideas to China. That opened our eyes to the world. In fact, he inspires me to major in English in college to be a bridge between China and the world. Interested in knowing more? I can find you some books! Just let me know. Cheers!Yours,Li Hua【解析】試題分析：題材新穎，要求介紹中國歷史人物，內(nèi)容包括喜歡的歷史人物、他的貢獻和對你的影響。不少于50詞，使用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時以及第一人稱和第三人稱進行寫作。亮點說明：范文使用了詞組hear from, As for, In fact和搭配 inspire sb to do sth等，豐富了作文內(nèi)容；范文注意上下文的語意連貫。 考點：應用文寫作【名師點睛】題材偏向于信息介紹類的開放式寫作，對于應用文格式的要求并不高，但對于語言組織和詞匯積累的要求極高。本次應用文并沒有限定考生必須寫某一位歷史人物，但是談及人物的貢獻和對自己的影響時，考生有可能會遇到大量的詞匯障礙，故難度較去年明顯提升。2015年高考試題 書面表達之文字提綱式1.【2015新課標全國II】書面表達（滿分25分）假如你是李華，計劃和同學去敬老院（nursing home）陪老人們國重陽節(jié)（the Double Ninth Festival）。請給外教Lucy寫封郵件，邀她一同前往，內(nèi)容包括：1. 出發(fā)及返回時間；2. 活動：包餃子、表演節(jié)目等。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 結(jié)語已為你寫好。_ Looking forward to your reply.Yours Li Hua【參考答案】 Dear Lucy, Id like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival. It is the day for the elderly in our culture. Well go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there. Well also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy. We should be back around 4 oclock in the afternoon. If you are able to e with us, please let us know and well wait for you at the gate at 9 in the morning.Looking forward to your reply.Yours Li Hua【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明。Well also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy.中用了which引導的定語從句和句式spend time doing。此外，還有if從句以及一些短語如invite you to join us，for a visit to，make dumplings等。【考點定位】考查提綱作文?！久麕燑c睛】本作文從實際生活出發(fā)，以英語的交際性和實用性為目標，兼顧尊老敬老和做志愿者的教育意義。體現(xiàn)了課程標準要求的以知識運用為教學目標的要求。在高三備考時，應該多從把語言作為交流的工具的角度去準備書面表達。2.【2015新課標全國I】第2節(jié) 書面表達（滿分25分）假定你是李華，你校英文報“外國文化”欄目擬刊登介紹美國節(jié)日風俗和中學生生活的短文。請給美國朋友彼得寫信約稿，要點如下：1. 欄目介紹；2. 稿件內(nèi)容；3. 稿件長度：約400詞；4. 交稿日期：6月28日前。 注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫的；3. 開頭語已為你寫好?！敬鸢浮緿ear Peter,Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper.The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially wele articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as its interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28?Im looking forward to hearing from you.Yours,Li Hua【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.運用了過去分詞作后置定語， And we would especially wele articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students.運用了賓語從句。此外，文章還使用了大量習語和短語，如be popular among, so long as, look forward to , hear from等?！究键c定位】考查提綱作文?！久麕燑c睛】書面表達考查大家所熟悉的提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來. 動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。文中巧妙地使用了一些固定句式和過渡詞語，不僅增強了表達效果，而且實現(xiàn)了形式與內(nèi)容的統(tǒng)一。3.【2015北京】假如你是紅星中學高三李華，請給你的美國朋友Jim寫一封信，告訴他你打算參加龍舟訓練營，希望他一起參加，郵件的內(nèi)容包括： 1. 介紹訓練營的相關(guān)內(nèi)容（例如；時間，地點，參加者等）； 2. 說明你打算參加的原因； 3. 詢問對方的意向。 注意： 1. 詞數(shù)不少于50； 2. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出， 不計入總詞數(shù)。 提示詞：龍舟訓練營 Dragon Boat Training CampDear Jim,_Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jim,Im writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday. I want to join a Dragon Boat Training Camp. I wonder if youd like to go with me.This camp will open on July 20th, It offers teenagers like you and me a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture. If you are interested in it, let me know and Ill send you more information.Hope to meet you at the training camp this summer. 【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，運用了一些邀請信里常用的句型。如：Im writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday；I wonder if youd like to go with me.文中注意使用了一般將來時、一般現(xiàn)在時等不同的時態(tài)來敘述不同的事情，對時態(tài)有較好的把握?！究键c定位】應用文類書面表達【名師點睛】本題是一篇考的是邀請信，龍舟的一個藝術(shù)節(jié)，仍然是傳統(tǒng)文化的主題。采分點主要是三個板塊，第一個板塊是相關(guān)細節(jié)的處理。因為在第一個要點當中寫到，學生要自己設(shè)計時間、地點以及參賽人員，這使學生需要自行發(fā)揮得，編纂的時候要合理一些。第二個板塊提到你的參加原因，原因必然是考官會關(guān)注的，為什么要參加龍州藝術(shù)界的活動。第三，他提到兩個字，就是詢問，希望學生在寫作的時候盡量避開一些非常生硬的詞匯。注意寫邀請信常用句型：On behalf of, I am writing to invite you to take part in the；Id like to be involved indue to the fact that；I am looking forward to your reply/ arrival/ing/ attendance等考生在應用文寫作中一定要體現(xiàn)出交際功能，重視該文體的寫作結(jié)構(gòu)，除稱呼與落款必須寫齊全外，正文部分一般開頭應道明寫作目的，中間呈現(xiàn)具體細節(jié)，結(jié)尾處補充禮貌性話語。另外，應用文的語言結(jié)構(gòu)忌過于復雜，用詞忌過難過偏，少用倒裝從句嵌套等長難句。語言與用詞做到適用應用場合，準確到位即可。只要做到以上幾點，應用文部分即可拿到一個不錯的分數(shù)。4.【2015廣東】基礎(chǔ)寫作（共1小題，滿分15分）你接受了一項寫作任務，為英語校報寫一篇科技報道。寫作內(nèi)容請根據(jù)以下信息，介紹國外醫(yī)療行業(yè)出現(xiàn)的一項新技術(shù)。內(nèi)容包括：技術(shù)名稱：DNA檢測檢測方法：唾液樣本分析檢測費用：125英鎊檢測時長：4到6周檢測用途： 1. 預測重大疾病2. 預知食物偏好3. 提示合適的鍛煉方式檢測影響： 1. 增強健康意識2. 易引起過度焦慮*唾液樣本：saliva sample寫作要求只能用5個句子表達全部內(nèi)容；評分標準句子結(jié)構(gòu)準確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章連貫。【答案】第一節(jié)DNA DetectionWe can use saliva sample to detect whether people have major illnesses, predict whether people are particular about food and remind people to take proper exercise. People should pay 125 pounds for it. It takes four to six weeks to finish the report. After detection we can realize we should strengthen our bodies. It may cause too many worries.【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如I will explain to them that studying hard is very important運用了賓語從句，以及Sally was a teacher.who taught some students full of problems.定語從句。副詞Therefore的使用使文章內(nèi)容更具有層次感，也使語言更加連貫?！究键c定位】考查提綱作文?！久麕燑c睛】本題所給用5個句子概括醫(yī)療新技術(shù)的材料是學生不太熟悉的內(nèi)容，所以要盡量使用學生熟悉的句式來寫，還必須用5個句子表達所有的信息。此題主要考查閱讀概括能力及語言的組織的能力。需要用一些高級句式及詞匯來增加文章的亮點。 5.【2015陜西】 書面表達（滿分30分）假定你是李華。在校報英語專欄看到了學?！坝⒄Z文化節(jié)”的一則招募啟事，請閱讀啟事，并根據(jù)寫作要點和寫作要求寫一封應征郵件。 Volunteers WantedOur annual English Festival, which will be held on June 15-17, 2015, is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show, Speech Contest, and English Debate. If you are interested, please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms.Chen at chenlaoshiaef.寫作要點：1.表示寫信意圖；2.陳述應征目的；3.說明應征條件（性格、能力等）。寫作要求： 1.郵件詞數(shù)不少于100；2.開頭和結(jié)尾部分已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；3.可根據(jù)情況增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫4.不能使用真實姓名和學校名稱。Dear MS Chen , Im Li Hua, a student from Class2, Grade 3. _ Looking forward to your reply. Yours truly, Li Hua【參考答案】Dear MS Chen , Im Li Hua, a student from Class2, Grade 3. Im writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer. I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because, by offering my service, I will