中考英語作文(綜合版).doc

中考英語作文訓(xùn)練【考點掃描】 書面表達(dá)是每年中考必考題型，是考查學(xué)生交際能力的一個重要組成部分。書面表達(dá)通常有三種形式：1、書信、日記、通知、留言、假條；2、看圖作文；3、根據(jù)漢語提示作文。 無論是那一種書面表達(dá)形式，考生所寫的短文都要緊扣主題、文理通順，要素完整，語言準(zhǔn)確、得當(dāng)、格式正確、無大、小寫和拼寫錯誤，標(biāo)點符號正確，能達(dá)到交際目的?！久麕熃怆y】一. 訓(xùn)練方法1. 記。認(rèn)真系統(tǒng)復(fù)習(xí)和背誦基礎(chǔ)知識和優(yōu)美的句子、句型。中國有句古話，叫“熟讀唐詩三百首，不會吟詩也會作”。同樣，要使自己具有較強(qiáng)的寫作能力，首先應(yīng)該熟讀和背誦一些句型和短文。許多同學(xué)寫出來的語言根本不符合英語的語言習(xí)慣，相當(dāng)一部分人有對照中文逐字翻譯的不良習(xí)慣，不去理會中英文的差異。大量的背誦和閱讀是提高寫作能力的有效辦法，同學(xué)們?nèi)粲写罅康默F(xiàn)成語言積累在腦海里，自己寫起文段來，就可以做到脫口而出，或是模仿、套用，甚至發(fā)揮。2. 練。每練一篇書面表達(dá)題，都要真正學(xué)到一點東西，不可貪多而邊學(xué)邊忘。平時可以采用循序漸進(jìn)、靈活多樣的練習(xí)方式。從根據(jù)提示詞寫單句開始，到寫單句，然后到寫幾句話，最后到寫流利的文段。盡量嘗試多種形式的寫作，如短信、說明、通知、便條、明信片、看圖寫作、根據(jù)表格或記錄寫短文等。3. 寫。要進(jìn)行實戰(zhàn)寫作。要求自己在20分鐘內(nèi)寫出100個詞的短文，并且質(zhì)量高、內(nèi)容全、形式正確。這樣形成習(xí)慣，考試時就能得心應(yīng)手。 二. 應(yīng)試策略1. 審題目：要切中題意。中考考試說明指出，書面表達(dá)要切中題意。怎樣才能切中題意？就是要認(rèn)真審題，看到考題后，先不要急于動筆，要仔細(xì)看清題目要求的內(nèi)容。在自己的頭腦中構(gòu)思出一個框架或畫面，確定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下筆，看懂題意，根據(jù)圖畫、圖表、提綱或短文提供的資料和信息來審題。審題要審格式、體裁、人物關(guān)系、故事情節(jié)、主體時態(tài)、活動時間、地點等。2. 圈要點：防止遺漏要點。要點是給分的一個重要因素。為了防止寫作過程中遺漏要點，同學(xué)們要充分發(fā)揮自己的觀察力，把情景中給出的各個要點逐條列出。3. 列提綱：為寫作做好準(zhǔn)備。根據(jù)文章要點短文的中心思想將主要句型、關(guān)鍵詞語記下，形成提綱。 4. 定基調(diào)：定出時態(tài)、人稱、順序、開頭、結(jié)尾。5. 寫全文：寫短文時要做到以下六個方面：(1)避免使用漢語式英語，盡量使用自己熟悉的句型。幾種句型可交替使用，以避免重復(fù)和呆板。(2)多用簡單句型，記事、寫人一般都不需要復(fù)雜的句型?？蛇m當(dāng)多使用陳述句、一般疑問句、祈使句和感嘆句。不用或少用非謂語或情態(tài)動詞等較復(fù)雜的句型。(3)注意語法、句法知識的靈活運用。1）語態(tài)、時態(tài)要準(zhǔn)確無誤。2）主謂語要一致，主語的人稱和數(shù)要和謂語一致。3）注意人稱代詞的賓格形式。4）注意冠詞用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能寫成a。5）注意拼寫、標(biāo)點符號和大小寫，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。(4)描寫人物時，要生動具體，例如：1）外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。2）服飾顏色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。3）內(nèi)心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。4）感情描寫：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。5）動作描寫：come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。(5)上下文要連貫。上下文的連貫性也是評分的一條原則，因此同學(xué)們應(yīng)把寫好的句子，根據(jù)故事情節(jié)，事情發(fā)生的先后次序（時間或空間），使用一些表示并列、遞進(jìn)等過渡詞進(jìn)行加工整理，使文章連貫、自然、流暢。同學(xué)們應(yīng)注意下面過渡的用法：1）表示并列關(guān)系的：and, as well as, or 2）表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的：but, yet, however 3）表示時間關(guān)系的：when, while, after, before, then, after that 4）表示因果關(guān)系的：so, therefore ,as a result 5）表示目的的：in order to, in order that , so as to, so that 6）表示列舉的：for example , such as 7）表示總結(jié)性的：in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking (6)不會表達(dá)，另辟蹊徑。中考作文給分是以要點和語言準(zhǔn)確度而定，不以文采打分。造句越簡單準(zhǔn)確越好，造復(fù)合句容易出錯，容易被扣分，閱卷場上有句話：“錯誤面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到個別要點表達(dá)不出來或難以表達(dá)，可采用變通的辦法，化難為易，化繁為簡。總之，所造句子要正確、得體、符合英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣。6.改病句：認(rèn)真檢查，改正錯誤。中考作文時，由于時間緊、內(nèi)容多，同學(xué)們出錯在所難免。因此，改錯這一環(huán)節(jié)必不可少。中考作文評卷是根據(jù)要點、語言準(zhǔn)確性、上下文的連貫性來給分，根據(jù)錯誤多少來扣分。因此，中考時花幾分鐘時間用來檢查錯誤顯得尤為重要。檢查錯誤應(yīng)從以下幾個方面入手：1）格式是否有錯。2）拼寫有無錯誤。3）語言是否用錯。4）時態(tài)、語態(tài)錯誤。5）標(biāo)點錯誤。6）人稱是否用錯。三. 注意事項書面表達(dá)要特別注意書寫工整，卷面整潔。每年閱卷老師在十來天的時間里要看十幾萬考生的作文，工作量之大，時間之緊，可想而知。書寫是否工整，卷面是否整潔與得分高低直接有關(guān)。部分范文1. 保護(hù)環(huán)境是人類永恒的話題，隨著環(huán)境的日益惡化，自然災(zāi)害越來越多，近來地震的破壞也日益頻繁，尤其是近日日本發(fā)生的大地震，使得我們認(rèn)為人類賴以生存的地球已經(jīng)面臨嚴(yán)重的威脅。如何保護(hù)環(huán)境就成為人類最重要的任務(wù)之一，人人應(yīng)該有責(zé)任保護(hù)環(huán)境保護(hù)我們這個地球家園。請以“How to Protect the Environment”為題寫一篇短文，闡述我們應(yīng)該如何從身邊做起來保護(hù)環(huán)境內(nèi)容提示：1 環(huán)境的現(xiàn)狀：越來越糟糕，自然災(zāi)害(natural disasters）越來越多，地震的危害嚴(yán)重威脅到了人類的安全； 2 好的環(huán)境能給人類帶來健康和快樂，改善環(huán)境意味著保護(hù)人類自己，提高生活質(zhì)量 3 環(huán)境保護(hù)的具體建議：要點自己擬定注意： 1 語句準(zhǔn)確、流暢，內(nèi)容要點完整 2 可根據(jù)實際情況適當(dāng)發(fā)揮 3 字?jǐn)?shù)：70個左右。How to Protect the Environment The environment is getting worse and worse. More and more natural disasters are appearing, and there have been happened so many strong earthquakes recently in the world, especially in Japan. Good environment can make people feel happy and fit. To improve the environment means improving our life. We mustnt cut down trees. Instead, we should plant more trees and flowers around us. Meanwhile, we should stop factories from pouring waste water into rivers and giving off waste gas into the air. Whenever we see litter on the ground, we should pick it up and throw it into dustbins. Never spit in public. Dont draw on public walls. Its everyones duty to protect the environment.2. 假定你是李華，最近你們班就“低碳”生活方式進(jìn)行了討論，你的美國朋友Jack來信向你詢問討論情況，請你用英語寫封回信，簡單參照作文地帶介紹的以下討論結(jié)果：1.節(jié)水節(jié)電；2.垃圾分類；3.少用紙巾，重拾手帕；4.步行，騎自行車或乘坐公交車。參考詞匯：低碳low carbon 紙巾tissue注意：詞數(shù)100以內(nèi)(不含開頭和結(jié)尾所給出的字?jǐn)?shù))；可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)了，以使行文連貫；開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Jack,Thank you for your letter asking about our discussion on low carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it._Best wishes,Li Bing參考范文：Dear Jack,Thank you for your letter asking about our discussion on low carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it. We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of low carbon life. First, wed better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also matters much. Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. ln addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world.3. 隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的發(fā)展和普及，網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物在中國也變得越來越普遍了，甚至已經(jīng)成了我們?nèi)粘Ｉ畹囊徊糠至耍幌嘈磐瑢W(xué)們身邊一定有不少同學(xué)已經(jīng)通過網(wǎng)絡(luò)進(jìn)行購物了，比如淘寶網(wǎng)，京東商城等；但是網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物究竟有何利弊呢？ 請寫一篇短文，談?wù)劸W(wǎng)上購物的好處與壞處。參考范文：We talked about the advantages and disadvantages of internet shopping these days. Some students think its very convenience for us to go shopping on the internet. The shop on Internet for example , 360 are open for almost 24 hours a day so we can buy something we want at any time if we like. Whats more, we neednt to wait in a queue.However, some students disagreed with them. we cant see the things while we are shopping. so we are not sure whether they are good or not. Besides, we cant enjoy the happiness of shopping with our friends. 4. 許多學(xué)習(xí)生活中的煩惱都會使人產(chǎn)生壓力,為了更好地發(fā)現(xiàn)及解決同學(xué)們中存在的心理壓力問題,你們班特意開展了一次以Less Pressure, Better Life為主題的英語演講比賽,請你準(zhǔn)備發(fā)言稿,談?wù)勀愕囊恍┚徑鈮毫Φ暮棉k法,與同學(xué)分享,內(nèi)容包括:同學(xué)們中普遍存在的壓力是什么；我的壓力是什么；我是如何成功緩解我的壓力的。注意:文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名。詞數(shù)80100；短文的開頭已給出(不計入總詞數(shù))。Less Pressure, Better LifeHello, boys and girls!Pressure is a serious problem in todays world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. _Thats all. Thank you!參考范文:Less Pressure, Better LifeHello, boys and girls!Pressure is a serious problem in todays world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students cant get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams. Im always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of after-classes at weekends. Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.Thats all. Thank you!5. 2011年全國實施公共場所禁煙規(guī)定，針對這一話題，某中學(xué)對該校學(xué)生的吸煙情況進(jìn)行了一次調(diào)查，結(jié)果如圖所示。請就此話題用英語寫一篇短文。要求：1. 對調(diào)查結(jié)果進(jìn)行描述； 2表明自己的看法并提出建議； 3詞數(shù)在80左右。提示詞: do a survey about(做一個有關(guān)的調(diào)查) 3% of the students (百分之三的學(xué)生)參考范文A survey about smokers in a middle school tells that although 90% of all students never smoke, 3% of them often smoke and 7% sometimes do. In other words, 10% of the students smoke. Thats terrible.As we know, smoking is harmful to our health. Every year, thousands of people lose their lives because of it. Smoking not only does harm to your health, but also wastes money. Because, a fire may be caused by cigarette ends. Its a pity to learn that one ends in death by smoking.In all, smoking is so dangerous that we should keep away from it.6. 請按照下面6幅圖和表格的提示，寫一篇題為“Changes in Our Hometown”的英語短文。（詞數(shù)：5080，不包括已經(jīng)給出的單詞） 內(nèi)容要點：過去 現(xiàn)在舊房 高樓河水污濁 河水清澈步行、騎自行車 乘公交車、小汽車Changes in Our HometownOver the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past,_ _范文: Over the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, the houses in our hometown were very poor, but now many people have moved into tall buildings (there are many tall buildings here and there). The water in the rivers was very dirty, but now the rivers are clean and people can swim in them. People used to walk or ride bikes, but now they can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work.7. 人們對于學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友持不同意見。請你用英語寫一篇關(guān)于學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友的短文，介紹人們的不同觀點，并表達(dá)自己的看法。贊成的理由反對的理由你的看法1廣交朋友1浪費時間？2可自由表達(dá)思想2影響學(xué)習(xí)3有利于外語學(xué)習(xí)3可能上當(dāng)受騙注：字?jǐn)?shù)100120之間。（書寫不整齊者，酌情扣分。）【參考范文】Should students make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies.Others, however, think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.人物描寫類：1.請根據(jù)下面所給李玲的個人小檔案，以My good friend為題，寫一篇英語短文，介紹李玲的基本情況。要求條理清楚，語句通順，體現(xiàn)表中的全部內(nèi)容，不得少于12句話。中文名：李玲 英文名：Susan 性別：女 年齡：15 祖籍：青海 學(xué)校： 第八中學(xué) 年級：三 班級：二 特長：數(shù)學(xué)、英語 愛好：唱歌、看電視、打排球 優(yōu)點：友好，善良，樂于助人，學(xué)習(xí)努力 【參考范文】My Good Friend I have a good friend. Her Chinese name is Li Ling, and Susan is her English name. She is from Qinghai. Li Ling is fifteen years old. She studies in No. 8 Middle School. She is in Class Two, Grade Three. Li Ling is good at math and English. She likes singing and playing volleyball very much. And she sings quite well. She likes watching TV, too. Li Ling is very kind and friendly. She studies very hard and always likes helping others. What a good girl she is! I like her! 2.某英文雜志就“建立和諧家園、和諧社會”為主題征文。請以“My family and I”為題，為該報寫一篇征文。征文應(yīng)包括以下要求：.家庭成員及其基本情況。 .家庭成員對你的關(guān)心、幫助、理解。(舉例說明).家庭對你的重要性。注意：1.詞數(shù)：100詞左右。 2.文章中不能出現(xiàn)學(xué)校名稱、姓名等個人信息?！緟⒖挤段摹?My family and I I live in a happy family. My father is a doctor. My mother is a teacher. They are the closest people to me. All the memories of my childhood, in one way or another connected with them. I can still remember clearly the day when I had my first exam. I didnt pass it. I felt so scared that I even didnt want to go to school again. My parents looked at my test paper and said,“My child, youve finished half of it. Were very glad. You can do better next time. We never expect you to do the best at the first time.We hope you can make progress gradually.”What they said made me feel I could do things well. From then on, I concentrasted more on my studies. Now Im a middle school student. Im always full of confidence in my studies because I know my parents are always behind me. I love my family. Without my family, I can do nothing. In my heart, family is the most important forever.3.根據(jù)提示詞語，以My English Teacher為題寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯的一段話。(10分)提示要點: .劉穎, 35 ,北京人, 中等個,教書12年 .興趣廣泛,喜歡彈鋼琴, 打乒乓球 ,游泳.對學(xué)生友好,和藹和親. 課上的好,深受同學(xué)們喜愛.My English Teacher My English teacher is Liu Ying. She is 35 years old. She comes from Beijing. She isnt tall or short. She has long hair and two big eyes. She has taught English for ten years. She has many interests. She likes playing the piano. She is good at playing pingpong. She is interested in swimming. She is not only our teacher but also our friends. She teaches us so well that we all like her.說明、敘事類1.課余時光是我們忙碌學(xué)習(xí)生活的調(diào)節(jié)劑。你是如何支配自己閑暇時間的呢？看電視、做運動、聽音樂、閱讀書報、郊游、幫父母做家務(wù)，還是請你以 “ My Free Time” 為題，描述一下自己的課余生活。注意：條例清楚,字跡公工整,詞數(shù)80個左右。【參考范文】My Free Time I have lots of things to do in my free time. Usually I take exercise after school. I like basketball and volleyball very much. Sports help me to keep healthy and studybetter. I often watch TV or do some reading in the evening. Sometimes I listen to the music for a while. I find it is a good way to relax myself. Of course , I help myparents with the housework at the weekends .I clean the house, wash clothes and learn cooking. Sometimes I go on a field trip with my friends. We always have a good time.2.現(xiàn)在,因特網(wǎng)對人們來說越來越重要了。請根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容向人們介紹一下因特網(wǎng)。.看國內(nèi)新聞,獲取其它信息。 .發(fā)e-mail ，打電話。.閱讀各種書籍,自學(xué)外語。 .欣賞音樂,觀看體育比賽,玩棋、牌、游戲。.購物【參考范文】 Everyone knows that the internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life. On the internet we can watch news at home and from abroad and get as much information as we can. We often send e-mails for our friends and make telephone calls to them as well. Besides that , we can go to school on the Net, read all kinds of books and even teach us English. We also enjoy music, watch ball matches on the net and play computer games. We can do shopping even without leaving our home.3.某英文報舉辦“家鄉(xiāng)的變化”主題征文活動。請你根據(jù)下表提示，以“The Changes in My Hometown”為題，用英語寫一篇90字左右的短文。過去1.生活貧困，房屋破舊。2.污染嚴(yán)重，垃圾滿地。3.交通不便，游客很少。現(xiàn)在1.生活：住房寬敞、明亮；許多人有自己的汽車。2.環(huán)境：山更綠，水更清，天更藍(lán).3.旅游：每年有成千上萬來自世界各地的游客。將來請你展望家鄉(xiāng)的未來注意：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)具體的地名，否則扣分。2.標(biāo)題和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。3.生詞：環(huán)境environment; 污染pollution;方便convenient.【參考范文】The Changes of My Hometown In the past , My hometown was very small. People lived a poor life. The houses were old and small. Pollution was very serious, and there was rubbish everywhere. The traffic was not convenient, so few visitors came here. Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. The environment has become more beautiful. The mountains have turned greener, the rivers clearer and the sky bluer. There are trees, flowers and grass everywhere. People live a better life.Their houses are larger and bright. Many people have their own cars. Every year, thousands of people from all over the world come to visit our city. Im sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.書信類1.小明來信向小華詢問如何學(xué)好英語。請你以小華的名義給他寫封回信。內(nèi)容包括：學(xué)習(xí)英語的基本方法。 你的體會和其它建議。詞數(shù)：80詞左右。信的開頭已為你寫好,不計入總詞數(shù)。【參考范文】Dear Xiao Ming, Im glad to receive your letter. In your letter you asked me about how to learn English well, I think you must listen carefully and be active in class. Speak as much as possible. Dont be afraid of making mistakes. Youd better read widely and learn some important parts by heart.You should practice writing often. Of course there are many ways. You can also See English films , learn to sing English songs or make pen pals with foreigners .they are all very helpful. Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it. Im sure youll learn English well. Yours, Xiao Hua如何寫中考英語作文（附點評）命題作文即給出一個統(tǒng)一的題目，限定考生寫作的具體范圍，要求考生就同一主題展開敘述或評論。寫好命題作文的關(guān)鍵是緊扣主題、立意明確、觀點清晰。命題作文例1To be a lovely Shanghainese(2003年上海市英語中考題)審題：該題的重點在于闡述作為一個可愛的上海人，我們關(guān)鍵應(yīng)怎樣做？在2003年的考生作文中，有一部分同學(xué)發(fā)生了嚴(yán)重的偏題，把描述重點放在形容上海是怎樣的一個大都市，因此失分很多。由此看來，審題的準(zhǔn)確是非常重要的。學(xué)生作文：Shanghai is developing quickly everyday. Quite a few foreigners come to visit Shanghai. As the hosts of Shanghai, we must be lovely Shanghaineses to tell the visitors that Shanghai is an international city. To be a lovely Shanghainese, first, we should do our best to make the city more beautiful to show our enthusiasm. Next, we should be kind and friendly to everyone. We must do so to make our guests fell our zeal. Finally, we should study and work hard to rise our ability. Shanghai is developing and we should make progress to follow the epoch.教師評析：該篇作文行文流暢，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，以first，Next，F(xiàn)inally的結(jié)構(gòu)描述，層次感很強(qiáng)。不定式的恰當(dāng)運用體現(xiàn)了考生較好的語法功底。教師擬評分：9分例2Four years school life審題：該題要求考生對四年的初中生活進(jìn)行回顧和總結(jié)，適合以夾敘夾議的方式來寫作。（此外，從情感教育的角度來看，閱卷老師總希望讀到考生回憶自己美好、快樂的初中生活，而不是討厭自己的母校、老師、同學(xué)等消極情緒的體現(xiàn)。）學(xué)生作文：Ive been in my middle school for four years. Four years school life plays an important role in my life. I enjoy making friends, getting knowledge and having interesting time in my school. I have also made friendship with lots of classmates, and I have also been taught different lessons by lots of different patient teachers. I have grown up a lot in the past four years. I will never forget my four years school life.教師評析：整篇作文非常明快、流暢，體現(xiàn)了考生對母校依依不舍的情懷。由于是對初中生活的回顧和總結(jié)，考生恰當(dāng)?shù)剡x擇以現(xiàn)在完成時作為主要的時態(tài)來強(qiáng)調(diào)影響和結(jié)果,文中plays an important role這一詞組和被動語態(tài)的正確運用也體現(xiàn)了考生良好的詞匯和語法功底。教師擬評分：10分中考英語作文題型分析與例文評析：應(yīng)用文應(yīng)用文寫作應(yīng)用文主要包括信函、電郵、日記、通知、廣告、電話等形式，它要求考生不僅能表達(dá)題中的主要內(nèi)容，還能夠正確地運用各種文本格式進(jìn)行規(guī)范的書寫，這也是 考生對于英語傳統(tǒng)文化了解多少的反映。因此，考生應(yīng)在臨考前系統(tǒng)地復(fù)習(xí)各種文本格式以及打電話的規(guī)范用語，以做到處變不驚、百戰(zhàn)百勝。例3寫一封信給你在云南省西雙版納市的筆友李帆，告訴他你很愿意與他交朋友，并邀請他到上海來旅行。審題：該題要求考生以規(guī)范的信件格式來書寫，并把題中所出現(xiàn)的信息點都涵概在內(nèi)。建議考生可把題目中的信息點都一一劃出，以免發(fā)生遺漏。學(xué)生作文：LifanXishuangbanna Yunnan Province China May 25th, 2004Dear Lifan,Thank you for your letter. Im glad to be your pen-friend. We are the same years old, but we were born in different places. In my imagination, Xishuangbanna is a very beautiful place. There are a lot of plants and animals. You know I look forward to visiting Xishuangbanna. Would you like to come to Shanghai? Id like to invite you to Shanghai in summer holiday. Shanghai is also a beautiful place. It is a modern city. There are a lot of interesting places such as the Oriental Pearl TV Tower, the Bund, and Nanjing Road Walkway.If you come here, I will show you around Shanghai. You can live at my home and my mother will cook you much delicious food. Lets be best friends!Yours sincerely,Xiaomin教師擬評分：9分例4寫一篇題為A Visit To_的日記。審題：該題為半命題式作文?？忌艘⒁膺\用正確的日記格式，還可根據(jù)自己的經(jīng)驗和熟悉程度來選擇、確定文章的主題.學(xué)生作文：May 25th, 2004 sunnyA Visit To Jinmao BuildingJinmao Building has Chinese traditional styles and it is also modern. It is the signal construction of Shanghai. It is located in the center of Lujiazui Financial Area. Our family visited Jinmao Building today.The traffic there is very convenient. You can got here by tunnel and No.2 subway. And if you live near it, you can walk there just like our family. We went to the eighty-eighth floor of Jinmao Building. We saw the whole view of Shanghai there. Please come to Jinmao Building, and