高考英語二輪限時高效訓(xùn)練 短文改錯21.doc

2014高考英語二輪限時高效訓(xùn)練：短文改錯211.假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。 增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號()，并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。 刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。 修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。 注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。recently, as the development of the internet, there is a kind of language calling web language. some people even speak chinese mixed with english letters. the other day our class had a discussion about if we should welcome the web language.forty percent of the students think it ridiculous. they argue that it does no good to help people communicate, nor is it useful for learning english. besides, itll make chinese more standard and pure, finally ruining our mother tongue. however, 69% of our class is fond of it. they think it is simple, convenience and helpful in expressing them. whats more, it may make the language more interesting.personally, its not good habit to use the web language. it may be popular, but you may also make yourself be misunderstood.2.下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在該漏字符號下寫上該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（ ）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該橫線下寫上修改后的詞。 注意：1、每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2、只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。sports and games are very useful for character training. in their lessons at the school, boys and girls may learn about such virtues like unselfishness, courage, discipline and love of ones country. so what is learned in books cannot have the same deep effect on childs character as what is learned by experience. as most of the pupils time is spent in classes study lessons, the ordinary day school cant give many practical training for their lives in the future. so it is how the pupils do in the spare time that really prepare them to take their places in society as citizens when they grow up. unless each of them learns to work for his team, and not for himself on the football field, he will later find it naturally to work for the good of his country instead only for his own benefit.3.假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。 增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。when l was in high school, i had an awful experienceat that time l was so brave and outgoing as the othersbecause of that, a boy name big tom would do all kinds of bad things to mei was scaring to see himso yesterday, a friend told me that big tom wanted to see me and invited me to dine outi agreedwe met in a bar and i was so happy that nothing went wellby the end of that night, big tom apologized for what he has done to menow we have become close friendsin our life, everyone may make mistakeswhat counts most are that we have the courage to correct them4. 假如英語課上老師要求同學(xué)們交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，要求你在錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。 增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(/)，在其下面寫上該加的詞。 刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。 修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。 the other day i happen to read an eighty-word passage about details. i found it prettily good. one who wants to achieve great success should pay attentions to details. sometimes it is the details in that determine our success, for it has a great impact on what were doing. we should form the habit of being careful, so a careful person rarely overlooks details. whats more, we should learn to keep balance of quantity and quality. when facing with lots of work, the faster we do them, the more mistakes we usually make. in that case we are possible to neglect the details. so we should remember that quality comes first, without that quantity is of no importance.5.短文改錯this morning my parents took my sister and me to the zoo. at the noon we had a picnic on the grass. i eat too much, so i couldnt finish my sandwich. as i didnt know what to do with it, i asked my sister for advices. she pointed at the notice, that said, “ no litter.” and she asked me throw the sandwich into the litter-basket. just then i saw an elephant coming slow towards us. suddenly an idea came into her mind. i could feed the elephant by my sandwich and i did so in the end. seen this, my sister smiled and said, “what clever you are!”6.假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞。2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。once, when i was a teenager, my father and i were standing in line to buy tickets for the circus. finally, there was only one family among us and the ticket counter.this family made deep impression on me. there were eight children, both probably under the age of twelve. you could tell they didnt have a lot of money. their clothes was not expensive, and they were clean. the children were well-behaved, all of us standing in line, two-by-two behind their parents, held hands. they were excitedly talking about the clowns, elephants and another performances where that they would see that night. everyone could sense they have never been to the circus before.試卷答案1.recently, as （改為with）the development of the internet, there is a kind of language calling （改為called）web language. some people even speak chinese mixed with english letters. the other day our class had a discussion about if （改為whether）we should welcome the web language.forty percent of the students think it ridiculous. they argue that it does no good to help （改為helping）people communicate, nor is it useful for learning english. besides, itll make chinese more （改為less） standard and pure, finally ruining our mother tongue. however, 69% of our class is （改為are）fond of it. they think it is simple, (convenience)convenient and helpful in expressing them（改為themselves）. whats more, it may make the language more interesting.personally, its not（加a）good habit to use the web language. it may be popular, but you may also make yourself be （去be）misunderstood.2.1. at 后刪the，在學(xué)校用at school 2. like 改為 as, such 和as 連用 3. so 改為but，前后句是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系 4. study改為 studying，spend some time doing sth. 5. many 改為 much, training 不可數(shù)用much 修飾 6. how改為what，do 后需要賓語用what 7. prepare改為 prepares，prepare的主語是一件事情用單數(shù) 8. unless改為 if，句子意思應(yīng)該是“如果每個人學(xué)會為團(tuán)隊工作?！?9. naturally 改為 natural, find+it+形容詞 10. instead 后加of， instead是副詞，不能直接接賓語3.when i was in high school, i had an awful experience. at that time i was notso brave and outgoing as the others. because of that, a boy name big tom namedwould do all kinds of bad things to me. i was scaring to see him. scaredso yesterday, a friend told me that big tom wanted to see me and invited but inviteme to dine out. i agreed. we met in a bar and i was so happy that nothing went everythingwell. by the end of that night, big tom apologized for what he has done to me. at hadnow we have become close friends.in our life, everyone may make mistakes. what counts most are that we ishave the courage to correct them.4.the other day i happen to read an eighty-word passage about details. i found it prettily good. happened 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