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獨立作文body核心素材 -body 素材 -support -strong Body -論點論據(jù) 是是非非 For vs. Against CS1 First of all, I have to concede that X, at some / certain degree, is/ can First of all, I have to concede that doing some writing, at certain degree, is beneficial(與題目立場一致).！ mirror effect Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Many countries are paying attention to environmental problems. But the attention is not making the environmental situations better. ！ 限制級讓步避免喧賓奪主 n , to some / certain extent, n , at some/ certain degree, n , on some/ specific occasions,. n , in particular / certain cases, n , under some / particular circumstances, n , theoretically speaking, n , in short-terms, n is/ can somewhat n is/ can relatively CS2. against1不好(本質(zhì)使然）key phrases: be born withinherited intrinsic inborn the haunted the deeply rooted undermine problematic open to question misrepresentative # Nevertheless, X is problematic. # Nevertheless, X also suffers from several intrinsic / inborn / inherited defects. /不可避免：1inevitable - + v. + inevitably It can inevitably give rise to / trigger disasters. - It is inevitable that X can inevitably suffer from several intrinsic defects. It is inevitable that X suffers from several inherited defects. 2.immune -be not immune to Nevertheless, X is not immune to several inborn defects 否定：* makes the claim misrepresentative makes the claim fail to be representative. makes the claim open to question. #Nevertheless, X/ the assumption thatis not immune to several defects, which makes this claim / assertion open to question. /#Nevertheless, X/ the assumption that is not immune to several defects, which degrades this claim as problematic / misrepresentative./#Nevertheless, the assumption that is also contaminated with several defects, which degrades this claim as problematic / misrepresentative.Nevertheless, it is inevitable that the advance of technology also suffers from some intrinsic defects, which makes the claim that the quantum leaps in science and technology are beneficial open to question./ Nevertheless, the assumption that the quantum leaps in science and technology are beneficial is not immune to several defects, which makes this claim open to question. Nevertheless, the assumption that playing violent games are supposed to be encouraged is also not immune to several irrationalities, which degrades this claim as problematic. 同意或不同意：老師應(yīng)該每天給學(xué)生留作文。 Nevertheless, assigning daily writing tasks also suffers from several drawbacks. /Nevertheless, the proposal that teachers are supposed to assign daily writing tasks is not immune to several intrinsic defects, which makes this claim problematic / open to question. /Nevertheless, the proposal that teachers are supposed to assign daily writing tasks is also contaminated with several intrinsic flaws, which makes this claim problematic. 同意或不同意：司機(jī)在白天高峰期的時候開車應(yīng)該支付費用Nevertheless, paying for driving in rush hours also suffers from several intrinsic defects. / Nevertheless, the proposal that drivers are supposed to pay for driving in rush hours is not immune to several defects, which makes this claim open to question.Agree or disagree 做富有挑戰(zhàn)性的工作比作簡單工作更讓人覺得快樂。Doundertake Be engaged in Nevertheless, challenging work also suffers from several defects. /Nevertheless, the assumption that it is through undertaking challenging work, rather than easy work, that brings us more happiness is also not immune to/ is also contaminated with several inborn flaws, which degrades this claim as problematic. Do you agree with the following statement that the only way government can do to energy conservation is to increase the price of gasoline and electricity One point is that it is raising the price of gasoline and electricity that is accepted as the only way for government to conserve the energy. To large extent, however, I side on the opposite of this claim and reckon that it assumes a distortedly narrow view. To begin with, I have to concede that making the basic energy relatively more expensive, at some degree, is necessary. Nevertheless, the conclusion that raising the price by governmental decisions serves as the only approach is not immune to a multitude of intrinsic defects, which makes it open to question. Tip: 下定義A is B (B=n. A function) A serves as B / A functions as B Friends serve as companionships. media serve as sources of influence. 作判斷A is B (B=adj. / n.) A is accepted / acknowledged as B This proposal is accepted as beneficial.This proposal, to large extent, is accepted as beneficial. All in all, there is no point to claim that only through increasing the price can we effectively save basic energy. What is more, it is essential for us to have circumspection before any critical decision-makings. # 這樣做不可行 feasible = viable -It is not feasible * the feasibility of is open to question. -It is not viable *the viability of is open to question. *be vulnerable to - is vulnerable to any question or challenge. 同意或不同意：老師應(yīng)該每天給學(xué)生留作文。 One point is that teachers are supposed to assign daily writing work. In taking various factors into consideration, to large extent, I am on the opposite side of this claim and reckon that it assumes a distorted and narrow view. To begin with, I have to concede that doing some writing exercises, at certain degree, is beneficial.Nevertheless, the proposal that teachers are supposed to assign daily writing tasks is also contaminated with several intrinsic flaws, which makes this claim problematic. At last, the feasibility of imposing daily tasks for writing on students is open to question/ is vulnerable to any question or challenge. To sum up, there is no point to claim that it is necessary for students to do writing tasks day by day. What is more, it is essential for us to have circumspection over various factors before any critical decisions. Renewable resources of energy (Sun, wind, water) will soon replace fossil fuels such as gases, oil, and coal. Do you agree or disagree? take place vs take the place The feasibility of taking the place of fossil fuels by renewable resources right away is vulnerable to any question or challenge. 同意或不同意：司機(jī)在白天高峰期的時候開車應(yīng)該支付費用 The feasibility of drivers paying for the use of roads in busy hours is vulnerable to any question or challenge. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One should begin a project after finish another project.when . not until The feasibility of never starting / launching / commencing a project until the previous one has been accomplished is vulnerable to any question or challenge. # 即使有結(jié)果，也很難達(dá)到目的 -牽強(qiáng)的聯(lián)系 Step1 It can not solve this problem Step2 It fails to offer solutions to this problem.Step3For 建議*This proposal / solution/ approach/ X is awkward in serving as a key to. For 結(jié)論 *This definition/ conclusion/ X is awkward in serving as a reference for. Practice *This proposal / solution/ approach/ X is awkward in serving as a key to. 教師是否應(yīng)該根據(jù)他們的表現(xiàn)而支付薪水? Heading To large extent, however, I am on the opposite side of this claim. Body 1. I have to concede that the work of teachers, at certain degree, is supposed to be respected. 2. The inherited nature of relating the income of teachers to their performance determines a multitude of defects that run the risk of messing up our education. 3. The feasibility of is vulnerable to any question or challenge. 4. Paving the teachers in accordance with their teaching is awkward in serving as a key to enhancing education. # 后果很嚴(yán)重effect vs influence Negative influencedestructive consequences disastrous At last, the consequences/ influence of would be negative / destructive / pernicious. At last, the consequences that is expected to bring about would turn out to be destructive. 思路匯總CS1 For (讓步限制級) # First of all/ to begin with, I have to concede that X, at certain degree, is beneficial / is effective. CS2. against1本質(zhì)不好ii # Nevertheless, X also suffers from several intrinsic / inborn / inherited defects. iii # Nevertheless, the inherited/intrinsic /inborn defect of X can largely undermine the claim/ assumption that. iiii #Nevertheless, X/ the conclusion that/ the proposal that is not immune to several defects, which makes this claim/ assumption / assertion open to question. /#Nevertheless, X/ the conclusion that/ the proposal that is not immune to several defects, which degrades this claim as problematic / misrepresentative. CS3. against2.-可行性欠佳#The feasibility / viability of X is vulnerable to any question or challenge. CS4. Against3.Ineffective即使有結(jié)果，也很難達(dá)到目的 for 建議類話題#To carry the idea further, this proposal / solution/ approach is awkward in serving as a key that guarantees the effectiveness and efficiency. for 定義/結(jié)論類話題#To carry the idea further, this definition/ conclusion is awkward in serving as a convincing reference that can offer objective and accurate / reliable / trustworthy guidance. CS5. Against4.后果嚴(yán)重# At last, the consequences / the misleading that X is expected to bring about would turn out to be destructive. / disastrous/ pernicious. * Critical thinking - Question -Challenge # What, # Why, # How, # Really * Specific thinking *論點+論據(jù) CS1 First of all, I have to concede that, at some / certain degree, is/ can + For one thing, X, on some occasions, is/ can For the other, it is/ can also somewhat/ relatively / , on the ground that , for the reason that , for the sake that In this case, In this sense, First of all, I have to concede that doing some writing, at certain degree, is beneficial. For one thing, such exercises, on some occasions, contribute to promoting writing skills. For the other, writing can somewhat sharpen the mind. Edu:*修煉-accumulate the knowledge-train the skills -broaden the horizon -experience the defeats/ failures-strengthen the will -sharpen the mind -develop personalities -shape values -purify the soul -detach the view Do you agree or disagree the following statement: Successful people take new things and take risks rather than the thing that theyve done well. First of all, I have to concede that risk-taking and trying something fresh, at certain degree, serve as significant qualities in making a successful person. For one thing, such tendencies, under some circumstances, contribute to exploring the unknown territory. For the other, taking risks or something new poses challenges that are relatively effective in sharpening the minds. # 這樣不好/不應(yīng)該（本性/本質(zhì)使然）be born with / to be inherit intrinsic natureinborn problematicCS2. against1本質(zhì)不好iii # Nevertheless, the inherited/intrinsic /inborn defect of X can largely undermine the claim/ assumption that. iiii #Nevertheless, X/ the conclusion that/ the proposal that is not immune to several defects, which makes this claim/ assumption / assertion open to question. /#Nevertheless, X/ the conclusion that/ the proposal that is not immune to several defects, which degrades this claim as problematic / misrepresentative. +For 建議類話題：復(fù)