中考英語看圖作文.doc

3eud教育網(wǎng) 百萬教學(xué)資源，完全免費(fèi)，無須注冊(cè)，天天更新！中考英語作文面面觀-看圖作文最近幾年的中考英語當(dāng)中，很多省市已經(jīng)擺脫了單一作文模式，采用一大一小兩個(gè)作文相結(jié)合的模式。例如，去年遼寧沈陽中考英語作文就是一個(gè)小作文，應(yīng)用文-寫假條，加上一個(gè)大作文，漢語提示作文構(gòu)成。今年，北京中考英語作文也將是兩個(gè)，一個(gè)看圖作文在加上一個(gè)提示作文構(gòu)成。這一講，我們先來學(xué)習(xí)一下看圖作文的寫法。看圖作文要求考生按照所給圖畫，通過合理的聯(lián)想將一組畫面的內(nèi)容正確地表達(dá)出來?？磮D作文與其他類型作文的不同之處在于，它除了要求考生有英語語言表達(dá)能力，還要求考生有觀察能力、分析能力和想象能力。 寫好看圖作文應(yīng)注意的事項(xiàng)1、結(jié)合文字提示，正確理解圖意。一般情況下，看圖作文在提供圖畫的同時(shí)也附帶有簡要的文字提示，我們可以利用文字提示去正確地理解圖意，得到要點(diǎn)。切忌孤立地看圖而忽視文字提示。 2.寫作從圖畫的細(xì)節(jié)出發(fā)。所謂細(xì)節(jié)，就是指圖畫中的人物、事件、地點(diǎn)、環(huán)境、時(shí)間、動(dòng)作等。依據(jù)圖畫細(xì)節(jié)，就可以把圖畫的內(nèi)容用英語具體而生動(dòng)地表達(dá)出來了。 例題分析（例題）同學(xué)們，看到下面的四幅圖片及相應(yīng)的報(bào)道后，你感到最擔(dān)憂的是哪兩種情形？請(qǐng)簡述你擔(dān)憂的理由并提出建議或希望。要求： 從所給素材中任選兩種情形進(jìn)行闡述，不可多選或少選。 條理清楚，意思連貫，語句通順，標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確； 詞數(shù) 80 100。參考詞匯： 建議 suggest v. suggestion n.氣體 gas n. 污染 pollution n. THE POLLUTIONS One third of the worlds people dont have enough clean water. More and more diseases are caused by polluted air. People are disturbed quite often by kinds of noises. Every person in our city makes about 1.8 kilos of rubbish every day.這道看圖作文題，主題和圖片連接得不是很緊密。從考查的形式上來說，雖是看圖，實(shí)質(zhì)上卻屬于提示性的作文。這個(gè)作文應(yīng)該結(jié)合個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)，選擇的余地還是很大的。做這個(gè)題應(yīng)該注意幾個(gè)方面：1.認(rèn)真讀題。注意，題目雖然給了四幅圖，但是卻只要求寫其中的兩個(gè)就行。2、題意要求的是闡述個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)-最擔(dān)憂的兩種情形。而不是對(duì)圖片進(jìn)行描述。3、結(jié)合所給的提示。提示中，對(duì)每種污染都進(jìn)行了闡述，考生可以這些描述進(jìn)行寫作。4、注意字?jǐn)?shù)，語法，拼寫等，避免錯(cuò)誤。下面是兩個(gè)例文，大家可以參考一下。One possible version:The environment is becoming worse and worse. There are many kinds of pollution I worry about. The most serious two are water pollution and air pollution, because people cant live healthily with dirty water and polluted air, nor can animals. More and more diseases are caused by polluted air.I think factories should not pour dirty water into the river directly or produce more waste gas. Wed better go on foot or by like instead of by car, because more cars mean more waste gas. We should make our world more and more beautiful.Another possible version:The first fact I worry about is noise pollution. People cant sleep well if there is too much noise. Thats why so many people prefer to live in the countryside rather than live in the noisy city. I suggest all the factories and cars shouldnt make terrible noises. If they make terrible noise that isnt allowed, they will be fined, and we can also produce the cars which cant make terrible noise.The other pollution is rubbish pollution. If everyone makes so much rubbish, one day we may live in a world filled with rubbish. Some people throw the waste paper about. I suggest rubbish should be put into different kinds of dustbins or paper bags. 下面，我們來看看這道題的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。一般來說，各地的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)都和下面的這個(gè)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)差不多。這個(gè)最高的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，實(shí)際上也就是我們寫作的目標(biāo)。評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：1. 內(nèi)容完整，語句流暢，無語法錯(cuò)誤，書寫規(guī)范，給9-10分；2. 內(nèi)容較完整，語句較流暢，基本無語法錯(cuò)誤，書寫較規(guī)范，給6-8分；3. 內(nèi)容不完整，語句欠流暢，語法錯(cuò)誤較多，書寫較規(guī)