上海歷年中考英語(yǔ)作文試題大評(píng)析預(yù)測(cè)-白金版.doc

上海中考作文真題+預(yù)測(cè)白金版典藏2010上海中考英語(yǔ)作文題:Im proud of myself上海中考英語(yǔ)作文題:Im proud of myself1、What kind of person are you?2、What makes you proud of yourself(Give an example/examples)3、Why are you proud of yourself?要求：至少60字范文：I am a boy of less confidence. I always hate running .But as we all know, the students of Grade nine have to take part in the sports exam. At that moment, I just wanted to give up .but my parents encouraged me: “Impossible is nothing, ” “you could challenge yourself!” so with the encouragement of them，,I tried my best to run and insisted on running. When I got to the finishing line ,I felt proud of myself,though I didnt get the good mark, I knew ,I won. I created a miracle for myself and I was so proud of myself!2009年上海中考英語(yǔ)作文試題評(píng)析(以“I want to do something for my school（我想為學(xué)校做一件事）” 為題寫(xiě)篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。）（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。） 學(xué)生習(xí)作1I want to make school clean. You may think it is very simple. But I dont think so. Our teacher said, School is your home, you should keep it clean. But I have never done anything to make school clean. For example, I have never told my classmate to pick up rubbish after he threw it on the ground. I also threw the rubbish on the ground. So I want to make school clean so that everyone can forgive me. During this summer holiday, I will go to school to make school clean. Of course, I will do it with my classmates. We will make school clean every weekends next term as well. Now, do you think it is simple?評(píng)析此文分三層，先提出自己的觀點(diǎn)，然后寫(xiě)出自己怎么做的，最后寫(xiě)了我可以讓我的學(xué)校變得干凈讓每個(gè)人寬恕我，結(jié)尾緊扣全文，寫(xiě)出我會(huì)怎么做。全文立意新穎，區(qū)別于傳統(tǒng)的作文，有自己的生活背景，寫(xiě)出了從我原來(lái)是怎么做到現(xiàn)在的轉(zhuǎn)變過(guò)程，沒(méi)有重大的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，是一篇值得參考的好文章。中考作文給力預(yù)測(cè)假期利弊范文2008年政府取消了五一黃金周（May golden week），但是，最近有些人又提出要恢復(fù)7天的長(zhǎng)假。同學(xué)們也在校園網(wǎng)的自由論壇上展開(kāi)了激烈的討論。請(qǐng)你選用下面表格所提供的信息，寫(xiě)一篇短文，談?wù)劵謴?fù)長(zhǎng)假的假期利弊 范文2008年政府取消了“五一”黃金周（“May golden week”），但是，最近有些人又提出要恢復(fù)7天的長(zhǎng)假。同學(xué)們也在校園網(wǎng)的“自由論壇”上展開(kāi)了激烈的討論。請(qǐng)你選用下面表格所提供的信息，寫(xiě)一篇短文，談?wù)劵謴?fù)長(zhǎng)假的利與弊，并簡(jiǎn)述你的觀點(diǎn)，給出一至兩條理由。AdvantagesDisadvantageshave a good restspend more time with cause a lot of troublebe crowded everywhereIn 2008， May golden week was canceled， but this year people have discussed the problem whether we should renew May golden week or not.Some people think the 7-day holiday is very important. Firstly， we could have a good rest and refresh ourselves after several months of hard work. Secondly， we could spend more time staying with our family. Thirdly， we will be able to use the one-week vacation to travel to some farther places such as foreign countries.However， other people hold the opposite view. They think it causes a lot of problems. It may lead to traffic jam and visitors will not enjoy themselves if the travelling spots are over-crowded.As a student， I prefer a 7-day holiday. Not only can I sleep well and do exercise， but also I can read some interesting books. How I wish a 7-Day holiday would come soon and we will have a 7-day holiday then！公共規(guī)則 范文Its not allowed to throw litter anywhere in the public places. Everyone should obey the rules. Speaking loudly in the reading room is seemed to be very rude. Remember not to do anything that might make other people uncomfortable. We should stand in line when we are waitiing for the bus. Try hard to give up the bad habits and develop good ones. We should respect the senior people and talk to them politely. Especially， we should give our seat to old people or women with babies on the bus. I think helping others can not only make us happy but also help us get more experience in life. Please cherish the public property.使用手機(jī) 范文關(guān)于中學(xué)生使用手機(jī)贊成意見(jiàn)：1.現(xiàn)在是信息社會(huì)，手機(jī)是最快的信息交流的工具之一。2.應(yīng)充分利用好手機(jī)。如偶遇突發(fā)事故，可立即撥打手機(jī)求助。3.可在每天學(xué)習(xí)之余利用手機(jī)游戲放松一下自己。4.只要正確使用好手機(jī)，緊跟時(shí)間并無(wú)過(guò)錯(cuò)，追求時(shí)尚可以理解，但學(xué)習(xí)是首要任務(wù)。反對(duì)意見(jiàn)：1.學(xué)校已提供了公共電話，因此手機(jī)并不能帶來(lái)更多的方便，而且花費(fèi)較多。2.若課堂接聽(tīng)手機(jī)會(huì)影響上課。3.學(xué)生玩手機(jī)游戲或接發(fā)短信，將無(wú)法集中精力學(xué)習(xí)。Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students. Some think it is good for students to bring a mobile phone. But some people do not think so. They think it is bad for students to bring a mobile phone. Because the students will use mobile phones to play games， sent text messages， watch movies， etc which will do harm to their study. And if a mobile phone ring in the class， the teacher and students would be disturbed. In my opinion， we can bring mobile phones to school.As we know， the 21st century is a modern age and full of information. A mobile phone is one of the quickest tools for us to exchange information. The mobile phone is a fashionable and useful invention， so we ought to make the best use of it. Suppose theres a sudden accident， it is more convenient for us to dial for help immediately. Therere also some games in the mobile phone. We can relax ourselves by playing them when were tired of our studies. In my opinion， its not wrong to follow the fashion， but the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way and do not disturbed others.網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲 范文沉迷網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲題目：李小虎沉迷于電腦游戲中，影響了學(xué)習(xí)。作為他的好朋友，你打算怎么幫他呢？請(qǐng)用下面所給的提示詞寫(xiě)一篇短文。提示詞： give up concentrate on be （become）interested inLi Xiaohu spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others. As a good/close friend of his， I must do something to help him.First， I think its very important for him to learn lessons well. He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games. Secondly， I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health， especially for his eyes. So he must give it up. I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games. And then Ill ask him to concentrate more on his study. Of course， I will try my best to help him with all his subjects. I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying. At the same time， Ill ask both his parents and our teachers to help him，too. If I try these， Im sure he will make great progress soon.突發(fā)事件問(wèn)題是中考書(shū)面表達(dá)的熱點(diǎn)話題，從非典到雪災(zāi)，從地震到甲型HINI流感病例（A/HINIflucases），近幾年時(shí)事熱點(diǎn)都頻頻出現(xiàn)在各地中考試卷中，因此必須重視。但這類(lèi)文章的寫(xiě)作有一定的難度，掌握基本句式和寫(xiě)作突發(fā)事件問(wèn)題是中考書(shū)面表達(dá)的熱點(diǎn)話題，從非典到雪災(zāi)，從地震到甲型HINI流感病例（A/HINI flu cases），近幾年時(shí)事熱點(diǎn)都頻頻出現(xiàn)在各地中考試卷中，因此必須重視。但這類(lèi)文章的寫(xiě)作有一定的難度，掌握基本句式和寫(xiě)作技巧非常必要。典型例句：1. one +of + 形容詞最高級(jí)+ 名詞復(fù)數(shù)One of the biggest events in China in 2008 is that the earthquake happened inWenChuan.2. It“s our duty to do sthIts our duty to help them.3. As.as possibleWe should help them as much as possible.4. here be。.Here are lots of things we can do.5. We should keep calm instead of being afraid.我們要保持冷靜而不能害怕。6. make +sb+ 形容詞It makes many people homeless.7. too to= so thatThey are too young to look after themselves例文：1、汶川大地震2008年5月12日，四川省汶川地區(qū)發(fā)生了罕見(jiàn)的大地震，那里的人們痛失親人和家園。全國(guó)人民眾志成城，抗震救災(zāi)。作為一名中學(xué)生，請(qǐng)你談?wù)勀愕淖龇ê透惺?。要求：文章語(yǔ)言流暢，邏輯清晰，用詞準(zhǔn)確，80100字左右;詞匯參考：地震earthquake，悲痛sorrow，受到感動(dòng)be deeply moved，安慰comfort，重建rebuild，自愿做某事volunteer to do sth參考范文：On May 12th， a big earthquake happened in Wenchun， Sichuan. Many people lost their relatives and their homes. All the Chinese people feel quite sorrow.A lot of people volunteer to help them. Some people raise money for them， some people buy something for them， some people go there to comfort the sad children. Thousands of soldiers help them to save their relatives and rebuild their homes Even foreign friends also give them a hand. Im deeply moved by these people. So Ill use my pocket money to buy some food and school things for the children there. I think all of us should try our best to help them to get out of the trouble together.2、雪災(zāi)2008年春節(jié)期間，我國(guó)大部分地區(qū)遭受雪災(zāi)，特別是南方，室?guī)资晡从?。公路、鐵路、機(jī)場(chǎng)都被迫關(guān)閉，電網(wǎng)癱瘓，數(shù)百萬(wàn)人不能回家過(guò)年。部分山區(qū)人民生活異常困難，在各級(jí)政府的帶領(lǐng)下，人民群眾、解放軍戰(zhàn)士英勇抗擊雪災(zāi)，涌現(xiàn)出大批可歌可泣的英雄事跡。作為一名中學(xué)生，你有何感想？有何打算？能不能改變這種狀態(tài)？As we know， our country suffered heavy snow last Spring Festival. Everything was covered with heavy snow. It made the buses， trains and planes stop. Millions of people couldn”t go home. Many people suffered trouble. There was no food，water or light in some places. Our government called on people to fight against heavy snow. As a student， I think we should learn from those heroes. We must study hard at school. We should learn all kinds of knowledge to make our motherland stronger， better and richer.3.甲型H