(全國新課標(biāo)Ⅰ卷)2016年高考英語母題題源系列 專題01 書面表達(dá)(含解析)

1、.母題一 書面表達(dá)【母題來源】2016年全國新課標(biāo)卷【母題原題】【2016全國新課標(biāo)I】書面表達(dá)（滿分25分） 假定你是李華，暑假想去一家外貿(mào)公司兼職，已寫好申請書和個人簡歷（resume）。給外教Mr Jenkins 寫信，請她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）注意： 1. 詞數(shù)100左右; 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，已使行文連貫。【答案】Dear Ms Jenkins,I am Li Hua, I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want

2、 you to do me a favor.In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I havealready finished my application and resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume, so I dont know if there are s

3、omething to pay attention to. So, Im writing you the letter, hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can do me the favor.Looking forward to your reply. And Id be really thankful.Yours,Li Hua【試題解析】本文是一篇考生們熟悉的書信類體裁的書面表達(dá)，內(nèi)容貼近學(xué)生生活，所以人人有話可說。文章沒有給出開頭和結(jié)尾，所以考生要注意書信的格式，包括稱呼語，正文以及結(jié)束語等

4、。在寫作時要注意先列出寫作要點(diǎn)，而且要注意將來時、現(xiàn)在時以及現(xiàn)在完成時的交錯使用；注意高級句式和多種結(jié)構(gòu)的使用，而且語氣要委婉禮貌?！久}意圖】本題考查了學(xué)生的語言的運(yùn)用能力和發(fā)揮想象的能力。從微觀上考查了學(xué)生寫句子的能力。【考試方向】把語言知識和能力結(jié)合起來，綜合考查學(xué)生的語言運(yùn)用能力和臨場發(fā)揮的能力。【得分要點(diǎn)】格式正確，要點(diǎn)全面，語言通順流暢。高級表達(dá)：不定式短語In order to get some practical experience,、現(xiàn)在分詞短語hoping you can give me some help、賓語從句if there are something to pa

5、y attention to等。經(jīng)典句式this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume 【母題1】【2016石家莊二?！考俣闶抢钊A。你將參加本周六主題為An Unforgettable Experience in High School的英語演講比賽。你寫了一篇演講稿，請外教Jason給予指導(dǎo)。根據(jù)下面的提示，給他寫一封郵件。1.說明情況；2.指導(dǎo)內(nèi)容（詞匯、語法、結(jié)構(gòu)等）；3.回復(fù)時間；4.表示感激。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.信的格式已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Ja

6、son，_Yours LiHua【答案】【名師點(diǎn)睛】本題的命題立意和高考題全國新課標(biāo)I卷的，基本一致?；久械母呖碱}。文章題干要求樸素，簡單明了。以電子郵件的形式，讓外教修改演講稿。符合學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)生活實(shí)際，學(xué)生有話可說。范文使用了高級表達(dá)：Its about an English speech contest with the title An Unforgettable Experience in High School, which Im going to take part in this Saturday. I find it still far from satisfactory.

7、If its convenient to you, please send it back by Thursday afternoon.Id appreciate it if you could give me your guidance.【母題2】假定你是李明，上網(wǎng)時發(fā)現(xiàn)有外籍教師在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上輔導(dǎo)英語口語，因此發(fā)帖向在線外籍教師Peter尋求幫助。要點(diǎn)包括：1自我介紹（姓名、身份及年級）；2英語學(xué)習(xí)情況、困難及感受；3請求給予幫助。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，不要逐句翻譯；3 開頭和結(jié)束語已為你寫好。Dear Peter,_YoursLi Ming【答案】Dear Peter,Im

8、 Li Ming, a senior student from China. Im very happy to find that some foreign teachershelp students with oral English online along with your contact information. So I cant wait to post this message to you.Ive learnt a lot from my school teachers in the past six years and known about three thousandE

9、nglish words and some basic grammar. I can do some reading and writing in English now. But I still have difficulty in listening and speaking. I always feel nervous when talking with native speakers.Thats why I am writing to you. It would be nice if you could do me a favour. Im lookingforward to chat

10、ting with you often.YoursLi Ming【亮點(diǎn)說明】Im very happy to find that some foreign teachers help students with oral English online along with your contact information.句中運(yùn)用賓語從句；Im very happy to find that some foreign teachershelp students with oral English online along with your contact information.句中使用現(xiàn)在完成時態(tài)；But I still have