人教版八年級(jí)英語寫作課課件 Unit1(共26張PPT)

1、 My Weekend What do you usually do on weekends? exercise, eat breakfast do homework go shopping play basketball watch TV read books go to bed Activities: 1. 寫作第一步：寫作第一步： 審題審題，找出文章要表達(dá)，找出文章要表達(dá) 的中心、使用的主要時(shí)態(tài)，人稱。的中心、使用的主要時(shí)態(tài)，人稱。 My Weekend 一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí) 人稱：人稱：I 2. 寫作第二步：寫作第二步：列要點(diǎn)列要點(diǎn)。用簡(jiǎn)單的句子。用簡(jiǎn)單的句子 列出文章的要點(diǎn)。列出文章

2、的要點(diǎn)。 My Weekend I exercise. I eat breakfast. I do my homework. I go shopping. I play basketball. I watch TV . I read a book. I go to bed. 1. I exercise. 2. I eat breakfast. 3. I do homework. 4. I go shopping. 5. I play basketball. 6. I watch TV. 7. I read books. 8. I go to bed. 列出短文要點(diǎn)列出短文要點(diǎn) 3. 寫作第三步

3、：寫作第三步：加細(xì)節(jié)加細(xì)節(jié)。給簡(jiǎn)單的句子穿。給簡(jiǎn)單的句子穿 上衣服（加入時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、方式上衣服（加入時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、方式 等。）等。） In most countries, people usually eat traditional food on special holidays. I go shopping. On Saturday afternoon, I usually go shopping. On Saturday afternoon, I usually go shopping in the supermarket. On Saturday afternoon, I u

4、sually go shopping with my mother in the supermarket. I usually go shopping. 1. On Saturday morning, I often exercise for an hour. 2. I eat breakfast at 8 oclock. 3. I do my homework alone at home. 4. On Saturday afternoon, I usually go shopping with my mother. 5. On Sunday morning, I play basketbal

5、l with my friends in my school. 6. I watch TV for an hour in the afternoon. 7. In the evening I always read some story books. 8. I go to bed at ten oclock. 加細(xì)節(jié)加細(xì)節(jié) On Saturday morning, I often exercise for an hour. Then I eat breakfast at 8. After that, I do my homework alone at home. On Saturday aft

6、ernoon, I usually go shopping with my mother. My weekend is very colorful. I usually do lots of interesting things on weekend. I usually have a busy weekend. What about you? a nice head a nice tail a nice body 4. 寫作第四步：寫作第四步：巧相連巧相連。恰當(dāng)使用關(guān)聯(lián)詞。恰當(dāng)使用關(guān)聯(lián)詞 句，使文章清晰，上下銜接自然。句，使文章清晰，上下銜接自然。 1.表并列或遞進(jìn)表并列或遞進(jìn): and 2

7、.表轉(zhuǎn)折表轉(zhuǎn)折: but, however, although 3.表因果表因果: because, so, 4.表?xiàng)l件表?xiàng)l件: if , 5.表解釋表解釋: for example, such as, 6.表順序表順序: firstly, secondly, next, then, after that, finally, in the end; 7.表強(qiáng)調(diào)表強(qiáng)調(diào): also, too, either 8.表結(jié)論表結(jié)論: in a word, all in all On Saturday morning, I often exercise for an hour. Then I eat br

8、eakfast at 8 oclock. After that, I do my homework alone at home. On Saturday afternoon, I usually go shopping with my mother. On Sunday morning, I play basketball with my friends in my school. I watch TV for an hour in the afternoon. In the evening I always read some story books such as The Old Man

9、and The Sea. And I go to bed at ten oclock. 巧相連巧相連 5. 寫作第五步：寫作第五步：美化短文美化短文。選擇好的句型、。選擇好的句型、 詞句，給短文化化妝，戴上首飾。詞句，給短文化化妝，戴上首飾。 On Saturday morning, I often exercise for an hour, 2. I do my homework alone at home. 3. In the evening I always read some story books. because I think it is good for my health.

10、My parents have to work on weekends. So I can learn something new from them. 書面表達(dá)寫作技巧書面表達(dá)寫作技巧(writing skills) 列列加加連連美美 審題審題列要點(diǎn)列要點(diǎn)加細(xì)節(jié)加細(xì)節(jié)巧相連巧相連美化美化 My weekend is very colorful. I do lots of interesting things on weekend. On Saturday morning, I often exercise for an hour, because I think it is good for

11、 my health. Then I eat breakfast at 8 oclock. After that, I do my homework alone at home. On Saturday afternoon, I usually go shopping with my mother. On Sunday morning, I play basketball with my friends in my school. I watch TV for an hour in the afternoon. In the evening I always read some story b

12、ooks such as The Old Man and The Sea. I can learn something new from them. And I go to bed at ten oclock. I usually have a busy weekend. What about you? 范文展示范文展示 My Last Weekend 一般過去時(shí)一般過去時(shí) 人稱：人稱：I 1. 起床起床 2. 幫媽媽做家務(wù)幫媽媽做家務(wù) 3. 做作業(yè)做作業(yè) 4. 去看電影去看電影 5. 拜訪祖母拜訪祖母 6. 打籃球打籃球 7. 讀書讀書 8. 看電視看電視 1. get up 2. help

13、 mom do housework 3. do my homework 4. go to a movie 5. visit my grandma 6. play basketball 7. read a book 8. watch TV Last weekend, I _ up. I _ mom do housework. I _ my homework. I _ to a movie. I _ my grandma. I _ basketball. I _ a book. I _ TV. 列要點(diǎn)列要點(diǎn) got helped did went visited played read watch

14、ed 加細(xì)節(jié)加細(xì)節(jié)(時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、方式等時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、方式等) 1. I got up _. 2. _, I helped mom do housework. 3. I did my homework _. 4. I went to a movie _. 5. _, I visited my grandma _. 6. I played basketball _. 7. _, I read a book _. 8. I watched TV _. early on Saturday After breakfast in the afternoon with my best friend

15、 in the evening. On Sunday morning with my parents in the afternoon In the eveningabout future for an hour 加細(xì)節(jié)加細(xì)節(jié)(首尾首尾) I got up early on Saturday. After breakfast, I helped mom do housework. I did my homework in the afternoon. I went to a movie with my best friend in the evening. On Sunday morning,

16、 I visited my grandma with my parents. I played basketball in the afternoon. In the evening, I read a book about future. I watched TV for an hour. I had a busy weekend. I really had a good time last weekend. I had a busy weekend. On Saturday, I got up early. After breakfast, I helped mom do housewor

17、k. _ I _ did my homework _ in the afternoon. _ I went to a movie with my best friend in the evening. On Sunday morning, I visited my grandma with my parents. _ _ I played basketball in the afternoon. In the evening, I read a book about future. _ I watched TV for an hour. _ I really had a good time l

18、ast weekend. 巧相連和美化巧相連和美化 carefullyalso I was tired but happy. After that Because that day was her birthday. Then And In a word, I had a busy weekend. On Saturday, I got up early. After breakfast, I helped mom do housework. I was tired but happy. I also did my homework carefully in the afternoon. Af

19、ter that I went to a movie with my best friend in the evening. On Sunday morning, I visited my grandma with my parents, because that day was her birthday. I played basketball in the afternoon. In the evening, I read a book about future. And I watched TV for an hour. In a word, I really had a good ti

20、me last weekend. 范文展示范文展示 周末就要來了，你有什么打算嗎？請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格提周末就要來了，你有什么打算嗎？請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格提 示，以示，以“My weekend plan” 為題，寫一篇短文。為題，寫一篇短文。 SaturdaySunday 上午上午下午下午晚上晚上上午上午下午下午晚上晚上 做作業(yè)做作業(yè) 去書店去書店 買書買書 上英語上英語 課課 去圖書去圖書 館館 看書看書 陪媽媽陪媽媽 購物購物 看電視看電視 My Weekend Plan 提示一：一般將來時(shí)提示一：一般將來時(shí) be going to 人稱：人稱：I 提示二：提示二：do my homework go to t

21、he bookstore buy books take an English lesson go to the library read books go shopping watch TV Saturday Sunday Example my weekend plan 寫好英語書面表達(dá)，應(yīng)注意哪些問題？寫好英語書面表達(dá)，應(yīng)注意哪些問題？ 1、認(rèn)真審題，緊扣提示內(nèi)容、認(rèn)真審題，緊扣提示內(nèi)容 準(zhǔn)確理解題意是成功寫好作文的第一步，然后把要點(diǎn)一一寫清，不能丟三落準(zhǔn)確理解題意是成功寫好作文的第一步，然后把要點(diǎn)一一寫清，不能丟三落 四，一般情況下，寫清要點(diǎn)后，要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但必須緊扣主題，適可而止。四，一

22、般情況下，寫清要點(diǎn)后，要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但必須緊扣主題，適可而止。 2、做到語言基本無誤。、做到語言基本無誤。 要點(diǎn)確定了，就可以構(gòu)思文章的寫作框架，先寫什么，后寫什么，盡量不要要點(diǎn)確定了，就可以構(gòu)思文章的寫作框架，先寫什么，后寫什么，盡量不要 出現(xiàn)語法錯(cuò)誤。出現(xiàn)語法錯(cuò)誤。eg：名詞的復(fù)數(shù)、所有格、代詞的數(shù)與格，數(shù)詞的基數(shù)與序數(shù)、：名詞的復(fù)數(shù)、所有格、代詞的數(shù)與格，數(shù)詞的基數(shù)與序數(shù)、 形容詞的等級(jí)、動(dòng)詞的各種形式、句子的結(jié)構(gòu)語序、標(biāo)點(diǎn)等都要準(zhǔn)確。形容詞的等級(jí)、動(dòng)詞的各種形式、句子的結(jié)構(gòu)語序、標(biāo)點(diǎn)等都要準(zhǔn)確。 3、文章要通順連貫。、文章要通順連貫。 條理要清晰，句與句之間聯(lián)系要緊密，連接詞使用要恰當(dāng)。不能東一筆，西條理要清晰，句與句之間聯(lián)系要緊密，連接詞使用要恰當(dāng)。不能東一筆，西 一筆，讓人看了不知所云。一筆，讓人看了不知所云。 4、盡可能表達(dá)清楚，發(fā)揮想象力和創(chuàng)造力。、盡可能表達(dá)清楚，發(fā)揮想象力和創(chuàng)造力。 每個(gè)要點(diǎn)、句子都盡可能表達(dá)清楚明白，根據(jù)提示，選用自己最熟悉、最有每個(gè)要點(diǎn)、句子都盡可能表達(dá)清楚明白，根據(jù)提示，選用自己最熟悉、最有 把握的詞組、句型來寫每一句話，最好多用簡(jiǎn)單句，適當(dāng)運(yùn)用并列句、復(fù)合句，把握的詞組、句型來寫每一句話，最好多用簡(jiǎn)單句，適當(dāng)運(yùn)用并列句、復(fù)合句， 切記不用自己沒把握的、不熟悉的句式，以免寫