南京英語中考復(fù)習(xí)——寫作文指導(dǎo)

1、 WritingHow to write good compositions?1.認(rèn)真審題認(rèn)真審題2.列出提綱列出提綱3.連詞成句連詞成句4.連句成文連句成文5.細(xì)心檢查細(xì)心檢查 a good composition時(shí)態(tài)時(shí)態(tài)人稱人稱體裁體裁內(nèi)容內(nèi)容字?jǐn)?shù)字?jǐn)?shù)自從實(shí)施規(guī)范辦學(xué)后，中學(xué)生有了更多自主支配的自從實(shí)施規(guī)范辦學(xué)后，中學(xué)生有了更多自主支配的時(shí)間，但有些同學(xué)不知如何利用好這些時(shí)間，針對(duì)時(shí)間，但有些同學(xué)不知如何利用好這些時(shí)間，針對(duì)這種現(xiàn)象，你校廣播室這種現(xiàn)象，你校廣播室“校園英語之聲校園英語之聲”欄目就欄目就“如何更好地利用課余時(shí)間如何更好地利用課余時(shí)間”進(jìn)行征文。請(qǐng)你用英進(jìn)行征文。請(qǐng)你用英語給

2、該欄目寫一篇廣播稿。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：語給該欄目寫一篇廣播稿。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括： 不良現(xiàn)象和行為不良現(xiàn)象和行為 （至少（至少3點(diǎn)）點(diǎn)）1. 花太多時(shí)間在興趣愛好上花太多時(shí)間在興趣愛好上2. 迷戀網(wǎng)吧，上網(wǎng)打游戲迷戀網(wǎng)吧，上網(wǎng)打游戲3. 看法看法我認(rèn)為我認(rèn)為 建議（至少建議（至少3條）條）1.合理安排時(shí)間合理安排時(shí)間2.參加興趣小組參加興趣小組 3. 注意注意: 100詞左右，廣播的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)詞左右，廣播的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)體裁體裁人稱人稱內(nèi)容內(nèi)容時(shí)態(tài)時(shí)態(tài)字?jǐn)?shù)字?jǐn)?shù)以一般現(xiàn)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主在時(shí)為主Introduction Main body Conclusion不良現(xiàn)象同行為不良現(xiàn)象同

3、行為看法看法建議建議Write an outline1. 花太多時(shí)間在興趣愛好上花太多時(shí)間在興趣愛好上2. 迷戀網(wǎng)吧，打電腦游戲迷戀網(wǎng)吧，打電腦游戲3. -1. 合理安排時(shí)間合理安排時(shí)間2. 參加興趣小組參加興趣小組3. - 已給出已給出 總結(jié)全文，再次點(diǎn)題總結(jié)全文，再次點(diǎn)題列關(guān)鍵詞列關(guān)鍵詞Problemsspend too much time on their hobbies , be crazy about, play computer games ,watch too much TV , refuse to do homework,列關(guān)鍵詞列關(guān)鍵詞Opinionsnot good for

4、 our health and study, pay more attention to 列關(guān)鍵詞列關(guān)鍵詞Suggestionsplan time carefully, join interest groups , achieve a balance between study and bobbies, take part in different after-school activities, do some sports , do some housework列關(guān)鍵詞列關(guān)鍵詞ConclusionLets, I hope并列句并列句復(fù)合句復(fù)合句結(jié)果狀語從句結(jié)果狀語從句Some studen

5、ts spend too much time on their hobbies. They cant finish their homework on time.Some students spend too much time on their hobbies and they cant finish their homework on timeSome students spend so much time on their hobbies that they cant finish their homework on timeHow to make better sentences?變換

6、句式變換句式連詞成句連詞成句連句成文連句成文There are many things we can do. we can plan our time carefully and try our best to achieve a balance between our study and hobbies. can set up and join different kinds of interest groups, take part in some good social activities. we can do some sports. If we have time, we shou

7、ld help parents do some housework.However, how can we make better use of our spare time? For exampleBesides these,And alsoWe添加連詞或添加連詞或句子！句子！suggestionslHow do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.lAccording to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home.

8、They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. lCome and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.方法一：善用連詞連接句子，使文章更流暢。方法一：善用連詞連接句子，使文章更流暢。 1、表轉(zhuǎn)折的連詞、表轉(zhuǎn)折的連詞: but , although ,however2 2、表因果的連詞、表因果的連詞: : because, so, so that,

9、as a result 3 3、表順序的連詞、表順序的連詞: : at first , to begin with , then , later , at last 三類連詞三類連詞:1._ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight.2.He didnt go to movies, he went to the concert _.3.We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming, running and hiking.4._, he stood up. Then he got out. _, he went b

10、ack. _, he smiled.ThoughAlthoughinstead such asFirstNextFinallyAt lastA. A lot of people travel.B. Most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.A . Some people visit their friends and parentsB . To visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. 方法二方法二: :善用詞匯善用詞

11、匯 甚至善用甚至善用高級(jí)詞匯高級(jí)詞匯Some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.方法三：妙用引文和方法三：妙用引文和例子例子，多用于，多用于“正文正文”, ,有時(shí)用有時(shí)用for example/such asfor example/such as We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report. According to it, most peo

12、ple choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People

13、who relax well work well.Read loudlyl（the ending）Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. 只會(huì)用功不玩耍，聰明孩子也變傻只會(huì)用功不玩耍，聰明孩子也變傻Proverb（諺語）（諺語）加入英語俱樂部是學(xué)習(xí)英語的好方

14、法加入英語俱樂部是學(xué)習(xí)英語的好方法Joining the English club is a good way to learn English.As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” So joining the English club is a good way to learn English.方法四：加諺語，Enjoy some proverbs1.Practice makes perfect.2.Think twice before you do.4.Do as the Romans do.6.Failure is the mot

15、her of success. 三思而后行。三思而后行。熟能生巧。熟能生巧。有志者事竟成。有志者事竟成。失敗是成功之母。失敗是成功之母。 1.短語及句子結(jié)構(gòu)不對(duì)，人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)誤用，均為大錯(cuò)。一處大短語及句子結(jié)構(gòu)不對(duì)，人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)誤用，均為大錯(cuò)。一處大 錯(cuò)扣錯(cuò)扣1分。分。 2.通篇人稱錯(cuò)誤，統(tǒng)扣通篇人稱錯(cuò)誤，統(tǒng)扣2分。分。 3.拼寫拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)、冠詞、介詞等方面的錯(cuò)誤為小錯(cuò)。標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)、冠詞、介詞等方面的錯(cuò)誤為小錯(cuò)。3個(gè)小錯(cuò)相當(dāng)個(gè)小錯(cuò)相當(dāng) 于于1個(gè)大錯(cuò)。個(gè)大錯(cuò)。 4.相同錯(cuò)誤，只扣一次。字?jǐn)?shù)過多或過少詞扣相同錯(cuò)誤，只扣一次。字?jǐn)?shù)過多或過少詞扣2分。分。 5.文中若出現(xiàn)自己及老師、學(xué)校等真

16、實(shí)姓名扣文中若出現(xiàn)自己及老師、學(xué)校等真實(shí)姓名扣2分。分。 6. 書寫潦草，卷面不清，扣書寫潦草，卷面不清，扣2分。分。 第五檔（第五檔（1315分）：能寫明全部要點(diǎn)，語言基本無誤或有少量拼寫錯(cuò)誤，分）：能寫明全部要點(diǎn)，語言基本無誤或有少量拼寫錯(cuò)誤， 行文流暢，表達(dá)清楚。行文流暢，表達(dá)清楚。第四檔（第四檔（1012分）：能寫明大部份要點(diǎn)，語言有一些錯(cuò)誤（句子結(jié)構(gòu)或分）：能寫明大部份要點(diǎn)，語言有一些錯(cuò)誤（句子結(jié)構(gòu)或 動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤12處處),但行文基本流暢，表達(dá)基本清楚。但行文基本流暢，表達(dá)基本清楚。第三檔（第三檔（79分）：能寫明一些要點(diǎn)，語言錯(cuò)誤較多（句子結(jié)構(gòu)或動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)分）：能寫明一

17、些要點(diǎn)，語言錯(cuò)誤較多（句子結(jié)構(gòu)或動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài) 錯(cuò)誤錯(cuò)誤34處）但意思基本連貫，表達(dá)基本清楚。處）但意思基本連貫，表達(dá)基本清楚。第二檔（第二檔（46分）：能寫明少數(shù)要點(diǎn)，語言錯(cuò)誤多，意思不連貫，影響意思表達(dá)。分）：能寫明少數(shù)要點(diǎn)，語言錯(cuò)誤多，意思不連貫，影響意思表達(dá)。第一檔（第一檔（13分）：只能寫出若干單詞，無可讀的句子。分）：只能寫出若干單詞，無可讀的句子。二、評(píng)分檔次：二、評(píng)分檔次：一、評(píng)分原則：一、評(píng)分原則：細(xì)心檢查細(xì)心檢查Now, we have much free time than before. But many students dontknow how should they s

18、pend the time. They spend so much time to play that they cant finish homework on time. Also some of them watch too many TV, Some are crazy about play computer games. I dont think its good for their study and health.However, how can we make better use of our spare time? First, we can plan our time ca

19、reful and try to achieve a balance between our study and hobbies. Second, we can take part in interest groups. Besides these, we should help parents do some houseworks.Lets make better use of our free time and make our life colorful!morethey shouldplayingmuchplayingcarefullyjoinhousework4 大錯(cuò)，大錯(cuò)，4小錯(cuò)。

20、小錯(cuò)。-5分分4.Checking4.CheckinguSpelling(拼寫拼寫)uTense(時(shí)態(tài)時(shí)態(tài))uGrammar (語法語法)uHandwriting(書寫書寫)uPunctuation marks(標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào))通覽全文仔細(xì)檢查通覽全文仔細(xì)檢查Correct mistakes1.Everyone knows that health is very important for ourself.2.Our study is getting more and more hard.3.They think travelling that can make people feel re

21、laxed and happy.4.I think it is unhealthy because people dont have enough time to relaxed themselves.5.Today many people are suffer from stress6.And there are a few people still work on the holiday.7.People can have a good rest will be health. .ourselvesharder and harderthat travellingrelaxsufferwor

22、kingwhohealthyr15分分From Susan11分分卷面整潔不一定加分，卷面整潔不一定加分，卷面潦草一定要扣分！卷面潦草一定要扣分！假如上周一你班舉行了假如上周一你班舉行了“愛護(hù)水、節(jié)約水愛護(hù)水、節(jié)約水”的主題活的主題活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)為你校校報(bào)寫一篇活動(dòng)報(bào)道。動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)為你校校報(bào)寫一篇活動(dòng)報(bào)道?；顒?dòng)內(nèi)容活動(dòng)內(nèi)容邀請(qǐng)王老師作報(bào)告；全班討論如何邀請(qǐng)王老師作報(bào)告；全班討論如何節(jié)水和愛護(hù)水。節(jié)水和愛護(hù)水?；顒?dòng)收獲活動(dòng)收獲我們知道我國一些地方水源受到污染；我市我們知道我國一些地方水源受到污染；我市雖有一些河流和湖泊，但也缺水。所以雖有一些河流和湖泊，但也缺水。所以( (節(jié)水

23、和愛護(hù)水的方法至少各發(fā)揮一點(diǎn)節(jié)水和愛護(hù)水的方法至少各發(fā)揮一點(diǎn)) )?；顒?dòng)感受活動(dòng)感受 要求：要求：1. 詞數(shù)不少于詞數(shù)不少于90，文章的開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)；，文章的開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)； 2. 要點(diǎn)完整、層次清晰、語法正確、上下文連貫；要點(diǎn)完整、層次清晰、語法正確、上下文連貫； 3. 文中不得使用真實(shí)的人名、校名。文中不得使用真實(shí)的人名、校名。Introduction Main body Conclusion內(nèi)容內(nèi)容收獲收獲Write an outline1. 邀請(qǐng)王老師作報(bào)告邀請(qǐng)王老師作報(bào)告2. 全班討論如何節(jié)水和愛護(hù)水全班討論如何節(jié)水和愛護(hù)水1.我國一些地方水源受到污染我

24、國一些地方水源受到污染2.我市也缺水我市也缺水3.節(jié)水和愛護(hù)水的方法節(jié)水和愛護(hù)水的方法 舉行主題班會(huì)舉行主題班會(huì) 活動(dòng)感受活動(dòng)感受列關(guān)鍵詞列關(guān)鍵詞Introductionhold an activity aboutsave and protect water列關(guān)鍵詞列關(guān)鍵詞Contentinvite sb to dogive sb a talkhave a discussion abouthow to save and protect water 列關(guān)鍵詞列關(guān)鍵詞Achievementsome of the riversbe pollutedbe short ofas a resultthro

25、w rubbish intodumpintouse less water列關(guān)鍵詞列關(guān)鍵詞Feeling:take part inthe importance ofprotect the environmentLast Monday our class held an activity.We talked about saving and protecting water.How to make better sentences?變換句式變換句式連詞成句連詞成句Last Monday our class held an activity about saving and protecting water.After taking part in the activity, we had a better unders