高考英語(yǔ)寫作指導(dǎo)---感謝信

1、命題原則：合理性、交際性和實(shí)用性高考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)一是體裁多樣，提示靈活。記敘文、議論文、應(yīng)用文、說明文，開放式作文。提示形式有提綱式、圖表式、圖畫式、開放式，英語(yǔ)提示等。二是題材豐富，貼近生活。既適當(dāng)關(guān)注社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)及焦點(diǎn)關(guān)注社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)及焦點(diǎn)，又注重考生實(shí)際生活。三是注重語(yǔ)用，考查能力?？简?yàn)?zāi)芊襁\(yùn)用所學(xué)的英語(yǔ)知識(shí)和掌握的技能進(jìn)行書面交際，對(duì)語(yǔ)言的駕馭和運(yùn)用能力。這是一種命題趨勢(shì)。特點(diǎn)：詞匯詞匯短語(yǔ)短語(yǔ)句型句型謀篇謀篇漂亮、地道漂亮、地道adj.令人驚奇的surprisingamazingastonishing詞匯詞匯的選擇靈活新穎，出奇制勝的選擇靈活新穎，出奇制勝詞匯層面詞匯層面adj. 聰明的、腦

2、筋好的cleversmartwisebrightintelligent短語(yǔ)層面短語(yǔ)層面 短語(yǔ)優(yōu)先原則短語(yǔ)優(yōu)先原則 電腦在我們生活中的作用是十分重要的。電腦在我們生活中的作用是十分重要的。 1.Computers are very important in our life. 2.Computers play a very important role in our life. puters are of great importance in our life.句型層面句型層面 I had a good idea. A good idea occurred to / struck / hit

3、me. I came up with a good idea.在整篇文章中，避免只使用一兩個(gè)句式，要在整篇文章中，避免只使用一兩個(gè)句式，要靈活運(yùn)用以下結(jié)構(gòu)：靈活運(yùn)用以下結(jié)構(gòu)：倒裝句倒裝句強(qiáng)調(diào)句強(qiáng)調(diào)句主從復(fù)合句主從復(fù)合句分詞狀語(yǔ)分詞狀語(yǔ)With 復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)寫作五步驟寫作五步驟1.審題審題-忌跑題忌跑題 2.列提綱列提綱/要點(diǎn)要點(diǎn)-忌漏點(diǎn)忌漏點(diǎn)3.造句造句-句型結(jié)構(gòu)成分要完整句型結(jié)構(gòu)成分要完整,忌表達(dá)單一忌表達(dá)單一, 忌冗言或逐句硬譯，字詞堆砌忌冗言或逐句硬譯，字詞堆砌 4.連句成文連句成文-添加過渡詞添加過渡詞, 忌句子松散忌句子松散 5.檢查檢查 應(yīng)用文應(yīng)用文 日記日記 書信（書信（ 信

4、函、電子郵件信函、電子郵件） 通知（通知（書面通知書面通知、口頭通知）、口頭通知） 便條便條 說明文說明文（事物，人物，地點(diǎn)）（事物，人物，地點(diǎn)） 記敘文記敘文 議論文議論文（觀點(diǎn)、（觀點(diǎn)、建議建議）常見體裁常見體裁 相當(dāng)于中文的相當(dāng)于中文的“敬啟者敬啟者”。 (直接給別人寫信）直接給別人寫信） a. l beg to inform you that b. l beg to take this opportunity to inform you that c. I have the honor to address you that. d. l write in a hurry to info

5、rm you that e. I have the pleasure to tell you that. f. I am very delighted to inform you that.書信開頭語(yǔ)書信開頭語(yǔ) 相當(dāng)于中文的“接讀某月某日來(lái)信，一切知悉”。 a. l thank you very much for your letter of May 20th b.Your letter of May 20th has been received with thanks. c. It gives me great pleasure to receive your kind letter of

6、May 20th. d. ln answer to your kind letter of May 20th, l deeply regret that e. l have received your kind letter of May 20th. f. Words cant express my delight on finding your favor of yesterday on my desk this morning. g. Your letter dated May 20th has been received. 結(jié)尾語(yǔ)結(jié)尾語(yǔ) We are waiting for your g

7、ood news. I hope to receive your early reply. We look forward to your reply at your earliest convenience. Im looking forward to hearing from you soon. 1.生日賀信 2.圣誕節(jié)及新年賀信 3.感謝信 4.請(qǐng)求幫助信 5.申請(qǐng)信 6.道歉信信函分類信函分類 寫作格式 第一段：表達(dá)感謝之情并說明原因； 第二段：細(xì)述并贊賞對(duì)方給與的幫助； 第三段：再次闡述謝意并表達(dá)回報(bào)愿望。Vocabulary：(感謝) v. thank, appreciate; n

8、. thanks, gratitude, appreciation;adj. thankful, grateful, appreciative, obliged adj. 感激的owe v. 欠債, 感激 短語(yǔ)：因而感激sb.1.thank you for 2.appreciate ones doing 3.be grateful/thankful to sb. for 4.many thanks for 5.express my thanks/gratitude for 6.owe sb. a lot for 第一段：表達(dá)感謝之情并說明原因； 常用句式 I am writing this l

9、etter to thank you for I am writing to express my sincere thanks for I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt (adj. 衷心的) thanks to you for With deepest gratitude I write you this letter for I am obliged to you for. I owe you a great deal for 第二段：細(xì)述并贊賞對(duì)方給與的幫助； 常用句式 It was nice/kind/thoughtf

10、ul (adj. 考慮周到的) of you to. Thank you very much for your kind hospitality (n. 好客, 熱情招待) and the honor you showed me during my visit It was your kind help that (強(qiáng)調(diào)句型) If it had not been for your (help/guidance/ assistance), I wouldnt have (won the prize) (虛擬語(yǔ)氣) But for/Without 第三段：再次闡述謝意并表達(dá)回報(bào)愿望。 常用句式

11、Thanks again for your generous help. I appreciate it more than I can say. My true gratitude is beyond the words description. Please accept my sincere thanks for your help, which I will never forget. Nothing could ever return the favor you gave me. 第三段：再次闡述謝意并表達(dá)回報(bào)愿望。 常用句式 Please do not hesitate to le

12、t me know if there is anything I could do to pay you back (回報(bào)). Please have no hesitation in writing to me should you want (虛擬語(yǔ)氣倒裝) me to do something for you Please do allow me to return your favor (報(bào)答) Best wishes for your health and every happiness.假如你是一名失學(xué)兒童，名叫李華，你有幸得到在中國(guó)工作的假如你是一名失學(xué)兒童，名叫李華，你有幸得到

13、在中國(guó)工作的Mr. Brown的資助，可以重返校園。你給的資助，可以重返校園。你給Mr. Brown寫了一封信，寫了一封信，內(nèi)容如下：內(nèi)容如下： 收到錢和書后能重返校園，非常感激；收到錢和書后能重返校園，非常感激； 在老師的幫助下，學(xué)習(xí)有了很大的進(jìn)步，受到老師的表在老師的幫助下，學(xué)習(xí)有了很大的進(jìn)步，受到老師的表?yè)P(yáng)和鼓勵(lì)；揚(yáng)和鼓勵(lì)； 決心更加努力學(xué)習(xí)，取得更大的進(jìn)步；決心更加努力學(xué)習(xí)，取得更大的進(jìn)步； 盼望見到盼望見到Mr. Brown，希望他寄來(lái)一張照片。，希望他寄來(lái)一張照片。注意：注意：1. 書信應(yīng)包括以上所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行書信應(yīng)包括以上所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

14、文連貫；2. 詞數(shù)：詞數(shù)：100左右左右 假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，得知某英文報(bào)招聘兼職假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，得知某英文報(bào)招聘兼職記者，你有意應(yīng)聘，請(qǐng)按下列要點(diǎn)給報(bào)社寫一封自薦信。記者，你有意應(yīng)聘，請(qǐng)按下列要點(diǎn)給報(bào)社寫一封自薦信。* * 表示感興趣表示感興趣* * 說明優(yōu)勢(shì)：知識(shí)面、英語(yǔ)水平、合作精神、相關(guān)經(jīng)歷說明優(yōu)勢(shì)：知識(shí)面、英語(yǔ)水平、合作精神、相關(guān)經(jīng)歷* * 希望得到回復(fù)希望得到回復(fù)注意：注意：1 1詞數(shù)：詞數(shù)：100-120100-120左右左右2 2可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫Dear Mr. Brown，I am writing to expres

15、s my deepest gratitude for the money and books you sent me. I could not have returned to school without your help. Thank you so much. I have been working hard since I went back to school. I have made great progress in my studies with the help of my teachers. They often praise me and encourage me. Bu

16、t for your help, I might have left school and couldnt have got such a good education. I have made up my mind to study harder and make greater progress.How are you getting on with your life and work? I would like to meet you in person, but I have no opportunity to do so. Would you please send me a ph

17、oto of yourself? Thank you again for your generous help and best wishes!Yours Sincerely,Li HuaDear Sir or Madam, Im a student from Xinhua Middle School. Im glad tolearn that you want a few part-time English reporters. Imquite interested in it. I think Im fit for the job . As a student, Ive read a lo

18、t and have much knowledge in many fields. Im fond of English and do well in both speaking and writing. Besides,Im easy to get along with and enjoy working together withothers. Above all, I once worked as a reporter for myschool broadcasting station. So Im sure I can do the jobwell if I get the posit

19、ion. Im looking forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Li Hua 通知通知 通知可分為通知可分為書面通知書面通知和和口頭通知口頭通知兩種。兩種。 書面通知書面通知可采用布告形式或書信形式可采用布告形式或書信形式; 口頭通知口頭通知要求比較靈活，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)明扼要。要求比較靈活，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)明扼要?！緯嫱ㄖ０鍟嫱ㄖ０濉?Notice An activity will be held (1)_.In order to (2)_.Everyone who is interested in it is welcomed. (3)_ (4)_ 模

20、板說明模板說明 （1）時(shí)間，）時(shí)間， 地點(diǎn)地點(diǎn) （2）活動(dòng)目的）活動(dòng)目的 （3）通知發(fā)布單位）通知發(fā)布單位 （4）通知發(fā)布時(shí)間）通知發(fā)布時(shí)間書面通知常用的開頭語(yǔ)有：書面通知常用的開頭語(yǔ)有： All teachers and students will be required to(全體師生務(wù)必要) Notice is hereby given that(茲通知) Our school / The Student Union will / is going to hold A lecture will be given at 7:00 this evening in書面通知常用的結(jié)束語(yǔ)有：書面通

21、知常用的結(jié)束語(yǔ)有： Everybody is expected to attend it. Be sure to attend it on time. Please / Do be present on time. Dont miss the chance!【口頭通知模板口頭通知模板】 Ladies and gentlemen , May I have your attention , please . I have something to tell you .(1)_ Please remember : Time (2) Place (3)_ Thats all. Thank you fo

22、r listening . 模板說明（模板說明（1）具體內(nèi)容）具體內(nèi)容 （2）時(shí)間）時(shí)間 （3）地點(diǎn)）地點(diǎn)口頭通知要求：(1) 要有稱呼用語(yǔ)。如：在正式場(chǎng)合用的Ladies and gentlemen,對(duì)學(xué)生用的Boys and girls 等。 (2) 要有開頭語(yǔ)。 (3) 時(shí)態(tài)：以一般將來(lái)時(shí)為主。 (4) 人稱問題：第二人稱 (5) 要有結(jié)束語(yǔ)?？陬^通知常用的開頭語(yǔ)有： May I have your attention, please? Be quiet. There is something important I have to tell you. You need to know.

23、 I have something to tell you.口頭通知常用的結(jié)束語(yǔ)有： Thats all. Thank you. Any questions? Does everyone understand?【經(jīng)典例句】【經(jīng)典例句】1. Ladies and gentlemen, may I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make.2. Everybody is welcome to be present at the contest.3. The Students Union has decided to or

24、ganize a music week.4. Please sign your name/ fill in a.form (at the Service Room).5. The first six winners will be given awards.6. Please listen carefully and well have a discussion in groups.7. Come to the great fun!8. The place for the activities will be announced later.9. Theres been a change in

25、 our time schedule this week. The meeting will be put off until next week.10. Dont forget to bring your gifts with you.11. Please confirm your participation at your earliest convenience.你校學(xué)生會(huì)舉辦義賣活動(dòng)以資助貧困地區(qū)兒童上你校學(xué)生會(huì)舉辦義賣活動(dòng)以資助貧困地區(qū)兒童上學(xué)。請(qǐng)你寫一份通知：學(xué)。請(qǐng)你寫一份通知：介紹活動(dòng)的目的介紹活動(dòng)的目的號(hào)召大家踴躍捐獻(xiàn)不用物品，并參加義賣活動(dòng)號(hào)召大家踴躍捐獻(xiàn)不用物品，并參加義賣

26、活動(dòng)義賣時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)：周六上午義賣時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)：周六上午9 9點(diǎn)，校階梯教室點(diǎn)，校階梯教室注意：注意：1. 1. 詞數(shù)詞數(shù)100100左右；左右；2 2 可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫?？蛇m當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫。參考詞匯：義賣：參考詞匯：義賣：Charity SaleCharity Sale； 階梯教室：階梯教室：lecture halllecture hall NOTICE/Notice The Students Union of our school is scheduled to hold a Charity Sale on Saturday to raise mone

27、y for children in the poverty-stricken area. The efforts to be made are to support these children to continue their school education. You are kindly asked to donate some of your items temporarily not used by you and that might be of some use to others, such as some school supplies and used textbooks. At 9 a.m. this Saturday, the Charity Sale starts at the lecture hall of our school. We are expecting you to come and offer a helping hand. And remember all the money will go to the support of those needy children. The Students Union假如你是班長(zhǎng)，根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容和提示，寫一篇假如你是班長(zhǎng)，根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容和提示，寫一篇100100左左右的口頭通知，以便向同學(xué)們