CE寫作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)+各類模板+模仿訓(xùn)練

1、CET 4 寫作部分一、 寫作部分的要求：根據(jù)2004年1月試行大學(xué)英語(yǔ)課程教學(xué)要求：一般要求的書面表達(dá)能力較高要求的書面表達(dá)能力更高要求的書面表達(dá)能力二、 評(píng)分方法及標(biāo)準(zhǔn)1 正確表達(dá)思想；2。 意義連貫3. 無(wú)重大語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。 評(píng)分原則：“總體評(píng)分，綜合評(píng)判”總體評(píng)分：就總的印象給出獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)分，而不按語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)的錯(cuò)誤樹木扣分；綜合評(píng)判：作文是否切題， 是否充分表達(dá)思想，英語(yǔ)是否清楚確切的表達(dá)了思想。評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：2分條理不清，思路紊亂，語(yǔ)言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯(cuò)誤，且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤；5分基本切題。表達(dá)思想不清楚，連貫性查，有較多的嚴(yán)重語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤；8分基本切題。有些地方表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，文字勉強(qiáng)連貫； 但

2、語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤較多，其中有一些是嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。11分切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。14分切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好?；緹o(wú)語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)。白卷，作文與題目毫不相關(guān)，或者有幾個(gè)孤立的詞而無(wú)法表達(dá)思想，給0分。詞數(shù)不足扣分。CET 累計(jì)詞數(shù)90-9980-8970-7960-6950-59< 49扣分123579百分制作文分151413121110987654321得分率100948780746760544740342720147作文最低基本分為零分。倒扣分原則：1） 作文分為0分，則最后成績(jī)一律計(jì)為59分；2） 作文分為1-6分者，最后得分=出作文外統(tǒng)計(jì)總分-

3、6+ 加作文實(shí)得分。三、常見作文模式：1 段首句作文：這是一種控制性作文（Guided Writing）， 旨在控制考生的寫作范圍，它也是目前比較流行的一種命題形式，即給出每一個(gè)段落的第一句或第一句的開始部分，要求考生在此基礎(chǔ)上續(xù)寫成一篇短文。段首句一般為主題句，稱為提示句。 例：Women in the Modern WorldWomen are palying an increasing important part in the society today._Part Writing (30 minutes) Directions:For this part,you are allowe

4、d 30 minutes to write a c omposition on the topic:Sounds in three paragraphs You have been given the first sentence of each paragraph.You should write at least 120 words. Sounds 1)The world is filled with many sounds_ 2)Some sounds are useful_ 3)But some sounds are harmful_2. 提綱式作文（訓(xùn)練重點(diǎn)）最常見的題型。 提綱可能

5、是漢語(yǔ)，可能是英語(yǔ)的。例：PartI Writing (30 minutes)Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter in reply to a friend's inquiry about applying for admission to your college or university. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 1建議報(bào)考的專業(yè)及

6、理由 2報(bào)考該專業(yè)的基本條件 3應(yīng)當(dāng)如何備考PartI Writing (30 minutes)Directions:For this part ,you are allowed 30minute to write a short essay on the topic of students selecting their fectures.You should write at least 120 words following the outline when bellow: 1.有些大學(xué)允許學(xué)生自由選擇某些課程的任課教師 2.學(xué)生選擇教師時(shí)所考慮的主要因素 3.學(xué)生自選任課教師的益處和可

7、能產(chǎn)生的問題On Students Selecting Lecturers3 圖表式作文Writing (30 minutes) （2002） Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Student Use of Computers. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the chart and the outline given below: 1.

8、上圖所示為1990年、1995年、2002年某校大學(xué)生使用計(jì)算機(jī)的情況，請(qǐng)描述其變化； 2. 請(qǐng)說(shuō)明發(fā)生這些變化的原因（可從計(jì)算機(jī)的用途、價(jià)格或社會(huì)發(fā)展等方面加以說(shuō)明）； 3. 你認(rèn)為目前大學(xué)生在計(jì)算機(jī)使用中有什么困難或問題。 Student Use of Computers4 規(guī)定情景作文例：Writing (30 minutes) Directions For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction.

9、You should write at least 120 words acc, ording to the following guidelines Your role a tour guide Your audience a group of foreign tourists Your introduction should include some welcoming words the schedule for the day a description of the place the tourists will be visiting (e.g. a scenic spot or

10、a historical site, etc.) You should make the introduction interesting and the arrangements for the day clear to everybody.5書信式作文Part V Writing (20 munutes) Directions: For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter.Suppose you are Zhang Ying.Write a letter to Xial Wang,a schoolmate o

11、f yours who is going to visit you during the week-long holiday.You should write at least 100 words according to the suggestions given below in Chinese. 1.表示歡迎 2.提出過(guò)度假安排的建議 3. 提醒應(yīng)注意的事項(xiàng) 范文 A Letter to a Schoolmate英語(yǔ)四級(jí)作文四類題型：現(xiàn)象解釋型、應(yīng)用文、記敘文、和圖表文章四種題型。這四種題型既是對(duì)四級(jí)作文的科學(xué)分類，又是對(duì)四級(jí)作文考點(diǎn)的高度概括。 A現(xiàn)象段落模仿練習(xí)：當(dāng)前校園中存在許多作

12、弊的現(xiàn)象. Currently, college students in growing numbers are seeking to cheat in exams. According to a recent survey made by Mary Wang, head editor of the 21st Century, there are about 38.6% who had some cheating behaviors at college, even in College English Test. Such an phenomenon has caused wide publ

13、ic concern. 主題句 1. Recent years, become more and more .Its estimated that . 2. Currently, people have to face the problem of . 3. Nowadays more and more people are beginning to realize that . For example, . B對(duì)比段落模仿練習(xí)： 1. 有些人決定畢業(yè)后讀研. 2. 有些人決定畢業(yè)后工作. 3. 我的看法. “Should college students go to work immedia

14、tely or pursue their post graduate study after graduation? ” When it comes to such a question, people opinion varies widely from person to person. Some people consider . In their eyes, . Besides, is also an important factor for However, some other hold that . According to them, . And, . Personally,

15、I am in favor of the former/later idea. For one thing, . For another, . Therefore, as mentioned above, will be my choice. 主題句 1. Currently, college students in growing numbers are seeking to cheat in exams, and peoples opinions/attitudes/views are mixed/divided on this point. 2. Different people hav

16、e different views on 3. There is no complete agreement among people as to C原因段落模仿練習(xí): 許多大學(xué)生畢業(yè)后找不到工作這一現(xiàn)象的原因是. . . After careful consideration, we can find three possible reasons to account for this trend. First of all, the expansion and amalgamation of universities provide chances for more students to

17、 receive higher education, but the job market cannot develop at the same speed. Whats more, the situation is even worse with those students who unanimously chose the “hot” majors such as economics and accounting. In the third place, many students think too highly of themselvesthey choose not to work

18、 at all if they are not satisfied with the job. They may think the pay is not satisfactory or the job is not decent at all. 模仿練習(xí): Video Games 1.許多學(xué)生沉迷于電子游戲/網(wǎng)絡(luò)聊天. 2.這一現(xiàn)象的原因是 3.解決辦法是 主題句 1. Three reasons, in my mind, can account for this social phenomenon. 2. Several reasons can account for this pheno

19、menon, 3. In my mind, the reasons why the Internet surfers are on the rise are as follows. 4. Have you ever thought of the famous proverb “A man is known by the company he keeps”? To me, it is meaningful and significant in three respects. 句式聯(lián)系法 Firstly,Secondly,Thirdly, For one thing,For another,Fin

20、ally, In the first place,In the second place,Finally, On one hand,On the other hand, First of all,In addition,Consequently, To begin with, whats more, last but not the least, F圖表作文模仿練習(xí)： 1. 電影觀眾越來(lái)越少 2. 電視觀眾越來(lái)越多, 因?yàn)? . . 3. 然而還是有人喜歡看電影，因?yàn)? . . During the period between 1975 and 1985, film-goers declin

21、ed abruptly from 85,000 to about 12,000, while TV-watchers increased sharply from 5,000 to more than 100,000. Several reasons can account for this phenomenon, Compared with a film, TV is much cheaper and more convenient-you dont have to leave your house at all. Apart from that, you have many choices

22、 while watching TV, but film concentrates on a certain topic. However, there are still a number of people who enjoy going to the cinema, generally for two reasons. On the one hand, the audiovisual effect of a cinema is much better. On the other hand, in quiet and comfortable place such as a cinema,

23、you can concentrate on what you are watching and get the most of the film. 開頭段主題句 1. From / According to the above picture /table/ chart/ diagram/ graph, we can see that/ it can be learned/ estimated/ predicted that 2. As can be seen from the above picture /table/ chart/ diagram/ graph, great / dram

24、atic changes have taken place in in/from to . 3. As demonstrated/ shown / illustrated / described / seen from the chart / table / graph, we can see that . G作文預(yù)測(cè) 四級(jí)以應(yīng)用文為主準(zhǔn)備，其次是現(xiàn)象解釋型。 1. 應(yīng)用文：你一個(gè)正讀大學(xué)的好朋友給你來(lái)信說(shuō)他想放棄四級(jí)考試，請(qǐng)你給他寫一封信，勸說(shuō)他不要放棄。 2. 應(yīng)用文：因?yàn)閷W(xué)生證丟失，申請(qǐng)補(bǔ)辦，并說(shuō)明其對(duì)你的重要性 3. 現(xiàn)象解釋：自行車丟失現(xiàn)象很嚴(yán)重；其原因是；如何解決。 4. 記敘文：

25、The experience of my first job 5. 祝賀信：祝賀你的同學(xué)李明得到獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金 1、勸說(shuō)信：不要放棄四級(jí)考試。 Dear Mary, Thank you for your letter dated June 2 which I reached me today. In the letter you said you wanted to give up the CET4 exam, and I am writing in the hope that you could hold up your spirit to take the exam and eventually

26、pass it. As you mentioned, English listening is your terrible dream. You can try the tape I sent to you with this letter. The tape was made by our college English teacher, which helped me a lot. You can also do some listening in the morning everyday. As for your vocabulary, you need to remember the

27、words with sentences. Thirdly, you need to read at least 2 passages every day for the reason that reading takes much marks in the CET 4, and it can enlarge your vocabulary at the same time. I wish you can take my advice and pursue your English study. May you get a high mark in the coming CET 4. If t

28、here is anything I can help, please let me know. Sincerely yours, Li Ming 2. 應(yīng)用文：因?yàn)閷W(xué)生證丟失，申請(qǐng)補(bǔ)辦，并說(shuō)明其對(duì)你的重要性 Dear Sir or Madame, My name is Li Ming, a student of Business Department at our university. I am writing to re-question a new student identification card. A thief stole my wallet where I put it y

29、esterday. I have made every efforts to seek it back. However my dear card just simply disappeared with the thief. As you know, the student identification card is extremely useful for us. First of all, the CET 4 is drawing near, and I need it to enter the national test, which is held only two times a

30、 year. Besides, the student identification card is also required in the library and it is a “must” for me to withdraw money from the bank. Please inform me when you have come to a decision. I am looking for your earlier reply. My telephone number is 54567xx. If further materials are required, I am only too willing to