人教九年級(jí) Unit寫作課

1、會(huì)計(jì)學(xué)1人教九年級(jí)人教九年級(jí) Unit 寫作課寫作課-23中九（4）班 Xu MinHow a passage?How to write an article?wordphraseparagraph passage ？ ？ ？ ？ ？sentencewordphrasetake shoppingdo photosget my dreamachieve ears piercedmake part-time workgo a choicephrasesentence worry about _ .+sth.my schoolworkMy parentsgo go shoppingI like go

2、ing shopping.She said she liked going shopping. .educatehug lift talk regret cry cry love die steal divide smell avoid heat interview rush punish warn How to make up a passage?How to write an article?wordphraseparagraph passage ？ ？ ？ ？ ？sentenceHow to write an article? ？ ？ ？ ？ ？1.認(rèn)真審題認(rèn)真審題-確立確立時(shí)態(tài)人稱時(shí)態(tài)

3、人稱，題材格式題材格式。2.找全信息點(diǎn)找全信息點(diǎn)-緊扣緊扣主題主題，突出，突出重點(diǎn)重點(diǎn)。3.成文成文-表述正確，文字流暢表述正確，文字流暢。4.出彩出彩-文章文章結(jié)構(gòu)結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，重點(diǎn)清晰，重點(diǎn)句型句型出彩。出彩。5.檢查檢查-信息點(diǎn)信息點(diǎn)是否全面；是否全面；時(shí)態(tài)人稱時(shí)態(tài)人稱是否一致是否一致。 句子結(jié)構(gòu)句子結(jié)構(gòu)是否清晰；是否清晰；短語(yǔ)單詞短語(yǔ)單詞是否正確。是否正確。Writing steps:Rules at homeRules at home.What ? / Where ? / Who? /Why? watch TVplay computer gamesstay outside lateuse

4、 my mobile phone What cant you do ?What do you have to do ?3a3a日記日記1.認(rèn)真審題認(rèn)真審題-確立時(shí)態(tài)人稱，題材格式。確立時(shí)態(tài)人稱，題材格式。一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)第一人稱第一人稱Thursday, November 3rd_【日記格式日記格式】周，周，月月日日2.找全信息點(diǎn)找全信息點(diǎn)-緊扣主題，突出重點(diǎn)。緊扣主題，突出重點(diǎn)。 Ruleagree or disagreecant play computer gamesagree I thinkplaying too many computer games isnt good for e

5、yes3.成文成文-表述正確，表述正確， 文字流暢文字流暢。cant watch TVDisagree- I (dont) thinkall theTV programs are bad for students; need to relax should spend all the time studying4.出彩出彩-文章文章結(jié)構(gòu)結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，重點(diǎn)清晰，重點(diǎn)句型句型出彩。出彩。常用連接詞；長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合使用；常用連接詞；長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合使用；動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)；動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)；Its 結(jié)構(gòu)要出現(xiàn)；結(jié)構(gòu)要出現(xiàn)；盡量來(lái)句名言或俗語(yǔ)；。盡量來(lái)句名言或俗語(yǔ)；?！緟⒖挤段膮⒖挤段摹?Thursday, November

6、 10th There are many rules in my house. One of them is that I mustnt make my own decisions. For example, I like playing the piano very much. But my parents think I shouldnt like that. I should spend more time on my schoolwork. Whats worse, I cant I think Because I 5.檢查檢查-信息點(diǎn)信息點(diǎn)是否全面；是否全面； 時(shí)態(tài)人稱時(shí)態(tài)人稱是否一

7、致是否一致； 句子結(jié)構(gòu)句子結(jié)構(gòu)是否清晰；是否清晰； 短語(yǔ)單詞短語(yǔ)單詞是否正確。是否正確。 八、書面表達(dá)八、書面表達(dá) 評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)一類（一類（13-15分）語(yǔ)句流暢、格式正確、無(wú)或基本無(wú)單詞分）語(yǔ)句流暢、格式正確、無(wú)或基本無(wú)單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，字?jǐn)?shù)達(dá)到要求；拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，字?jǐn)?shù)達(dá)到要求；二類（二類（10-12分）寫出大部分內(nèi)容，語(yǔ)句較流暢，基本無(wú)分）寫出大部分內(nèi)容，語(yǔ)句較流暢，基本無(wú)格式、語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，有個(gè)別拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤；格式、語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，有個(gè)別拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤；三類（三類（7-9分）分） 寫出部分要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)句基本通順，有少量拼寫出部分要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)句基本通順，有少量拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、格式、語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤

8、，但不影響句意理解；寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、格式、語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，但不影響句意理解；四類（四類（4-6分）分） 寫出少量?jī)?nèi)容要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)句不夠通順，寫出少量?jī)?nèi)容要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)句不夠通順， 語(yǔ)法、拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤較多；語(yǔ)法、拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤較多；五類（五類（1-3分）基本上沒(méi)有寫出內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)法、拼寫錯(cuò)分）基本上沒(méi)有寫出內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)法、拼寫錯(cuò)誤多。誤多。 基本上沒(méi)有通順句子?；旧蠜](méi)有通順句子。Chinglish !Often change the sentence patterns ! Too long! The longer you write , maybe the more mistakes youll make ! 寫夠字?jǐn)?shù)即可，最好不超過(guò)規(guī)定十個(gè)字。 ？ ？How to make up a passage?How to write an article?wordphraseparagraph passage ？ ？ ？ ？ ？sentence watch TVplay computer gamesstay outside lateuse my mobile phone What cant you do ?Thursday, November 3rd_【日記格式日