2016年高三市導課素材

1、五（2014新課標I） 假段定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用()劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；1 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。 Nearly five years before ,and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry to

2、matoes（圣女果）in our back garden, since then-for all these year-we had been allowing tomatoes to self seed where they please . As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors .Although we allow

3、 tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problem. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at on cost! 1. 【答案】before改為ago 【試題解析】一段時間和before連用的時候常常和完成時連用。一段時間和age連用，常常和過去時連用。句義：大約5年前，在父親的幫助下，妹妹和我種了一些圣女果。2. 【答案】by改為of 【試題解析】考察固定搭配with the

4、help of在的幫助下。3. 【答案】year改為years 【試題解析】本句前面的形容詞these常常修飾可數(shù)名詞復數(shù)形式，所以使用名詞years。4. 【答案】had改為have 【試題解析】本句的時間狀語是all these years，通常和現(xiàn)在完成進行時連用。所以使用have been doing的形式。5. 【答案】As后面加a 【試題解析】考察固定搭配as a result結果是；句義：結果，圣女果長得到處都是。6. 【答案】somewhere改為everywhere 【試題解析】根據(jù)上下文可知我們讓圣女果自己繁殖，所以到處長得都是圣女果。7. 【答案】taste改為tasty

5、 【試題解析】本句中的形容詞juicy和tasty都是形容詞和前面的small一樣都和系動詞are構成系表結構。這些水果很小，但是多汁而且味道很好。8. 【答案】much改為many 【試題解析】本句中的many指代可數(shù)名詞cherry tomatoes的復數(shù)形式，所以不能使用much修飾。9. 【答案】but改為yet或者去掉but 【試題解析】連詞although不能和but連用，因為這兩個詞都是連詞，不能一起連用?？梢园裝ut改為副詞yet。10. 【答案】wonderfully改為形容詞wonderful 【試題解析】本句中使用形容詞wonderful做定語來修飾后面的名詞tomato

6、es。二、短文改錯(2015·全國卷·短文改錯)話題:環(huán)境詞數(shù):105W難度:When I was a child,I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city,but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately,on the development of industrialization,the envir

7、onment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so,well live to regret it.答案:

8、 When I was a child,I hoped to live in the city.I I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city,but I miss my home incountryside.There the air is clean the mountains are green.Unfortunately,the development of industrialization,the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that

9、 global warming has already become a very problem.The we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. rare animals are dying out.We must ways to protect environment.If we fail to do so,well live to regret it.1.【解析】第二句中的thinkthought。此處指小時候的想法,應該使用一般過去時。2.【解析】第三句中的countryside前加the。in the countryside意為“在

10、農村”。3.【解析】第四句中的orand。此處是并列句,連接the air is clean和the mountains are green,應該使用連接詞and。4.【解析】第五句中的onwith。with the development of意為“隨著的發(fā)展”。5.【解析】第六句中的been去掉。主語studies和謂語show是主謂關系,應該使用主動語態(tài)。6.【解析】第六句中的seriouslyserious。此處應該使用形容詞作定語修飾名詞problem。7.【解析】第七句中的airsair。air意為“空氣”,是不可數(shù)名詞,沒有復數(shù)形式。8.【解析】第八句中的MuchMany。復數(shù)名

11、詞animals前應該用many修飾。注意:首字母應該大寫。9.【解析】第九句中的foundfind。情態(tài)動詞must后使用動詞原形。10.【解析】第九句中的yourour/the。此處應該是特指,根據(jù)主語we可知改為our或定冠詞the。練習1My name is Julie. As a nurse I work in a school to make sure that our children are health and able to learn. I work with teachers, school doctors and other to offer them some ad

12、vices and help them when they had difficulties. I enjoy my job because I love being with children. They are very active and lovely. I am very glad stay with them so I feel much young than before. Theyare honest about what they feel - glad or sad. When children are ill, I try my best to take a good c

13、are of them. When they are sad, I always make them happy. They also love me but sometimes give me apples and candies by return.練習2 What is known to all ,some parents would rather their children rent houses outside the school instead of living in a dorm. There are advantage for both. Living in a dorm

14、 must strengthen relationship or cooperation between classmates. A dorm is more like a society, which enables students learn to adapt to each other, thus makes them prepared for the social life later. However, some students find that more convenient for them to live outside the school on their own t

15、han living in a dorm. And its better for their studies as they wont be interrupted by other. As a consequence, they can devote a plenty of time to studying. But it is impossible that they will meet some safety problems when living outside the school.練習3My car just wouldnt move any farther. It was co

16、mplete dead, and I was a few miles away from my home in that cold, wet night. I decided walk around a little before accepting Id have to spend the night in the car. Maybe I can find a telephone. Actually, I didnt have to walk far before I found the small house standing in a field with a light shone

17、from the sitting room. I knocked at the door and was delighting when a pleasant old man opened the door but listened to my story carefully. He said he had no telephone and that it wasnt any within walking distance, but the old man who offered to go to repair my car.練習1 答案health-healthy other-others

18、had-have advices-advice glad后加to young-younger what-how 去掉a but-and by-in練習2 答案1What -as 2rent-rented/或rent前加should 3must-can/may 4or -and 5learn前加to 6makes -making 7that-it 8other-others 9去掉 plenty of 前的 a 10 impossible -possible練習3答案My car just wouldnt move any farther. It was complete dead, and I was a few miles away from completelymy home in that cold, wet night. I decided walk around a little before accepting Id have to spend ontothe night in the car. Maybe I can find a telephone. Actually, I didnt have to walk far before Icouldfound the small house standing in a field with a light sho