最新中考英語作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

1、精品文檔河南中招英語作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)評(píng)分原則：1. 總分 15 分，按 5 個(gè)檔次給分。中檔屬于第三檔（7-9 分）。2.評(píng)分時(shí)，先跟據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要 求來衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。3. 總詞數(shù)不足的，可在本題總得分中扣去 1 分。4. 評(píng)分時(shí)應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn) |、應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和正確 性、上下文的連貫性及語言的得體性。各要素的權(quán)重大體為：卷面書寫（1 分），內(nèi)容9 分（其中要點(diǎn)5分，語意連貫4 分），語法結(jié)構(gòu)、單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)（ 4 分），詞數(shù)（1 分）。5.拼寫與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是語言正確性的一個(gè)方面，評(píng)分時(shí)應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影響程度予以考慮

2、。【各檔次的給分范圍和要求】第一檔（13-15 分）：寫出全部內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，語句流暢?；緹o語法和詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤，少數(shù)錯(cuò)誤主要是由于較高級(jí)詞匯或復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)所致。詞數(shù)達(dá)到要求?；?無單詞拼寫及標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。第二檔（10-12 分）：寫出大部分要點(diǎn)類容。語句較流暢。有少量語法和詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤，但不影響理解。有少量單詞拼寫及標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。第三檔（7-9 分）：寫出部分要點(diǎn)。語句基本通順。有一些語法和詞匯錯(cuò)誤，有少量單詞及標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。第四檔（4-6 分）：寫出少量內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，語句不通順。語法、詞匯、單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤較多。只有少量句子表達(dá)正確。第五檔（0-3 分）：基本上沒有寫出內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，語法、詞匯、單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤較多

3、?；旧蠜]有通順的句子。只寫出一些單詞，不知所云。【說明】1、要點(diǎn)可用不同方式表達(dá)。2、對(duì)緊扣主題的適當(dāng)發(fā)揮不予扣分。凡不寫任何內(nèi)容，抄襲、所寫內(nèi)容無法看清者一律給0分。2016 河南中考英語作文預(yù)測（一）1 每個(gè)人的成長都是一種蛻變的過程，從幼稚走向成熟，從逆境走向成功。請(qǐng)你用英語寫一篇80 詞以上的短文，談?wù)勀阍诔砷L過程中所經(jīng)歷的最大的一次蛻變。內(nèi)容要求：1.變化前后分別是什么樣子的？ 2.促成你轉(zhuǎn)變的主要原因是什 么？ 3.你為變化而付出了怎樣的努力？注意： 短文中不允許出現(xiàn)與考生本人相關(guān) 的真實(shí)姓名和校名等信息。I used to be a naughty boy and my mot

4、her used to be angry with me. NowI'l ike to say I''dvcehanged a lot. In fact, It is because of mymotherd iaries.sOne day I saw mymother 'dsiary book by accident while I was looking for my notebook. I wassurprised and began to read mmy otherd iaries. In her diaries, she showed her dee

5、p love for' sme. She also expressed her disappo in tme nt whe n I made mistakes. She said she loved me somuch and she believed I could be a good boy. I couldn 'help crying after reading my mother'diaries.Since that day, I have changed a lot. I work hard and share some housework. Ill try

6、tounderstand my mother ' s feeli ngs.精品文檔精品文檔2 最近，你們班就幸福是什么”進(jìn)行了一次討論，學(xué)生們發(fā)表了自己的看法，他們認(rèn)為： 1.認(rèn)真學(xué)習(xí)是幸福，父母總是關(guān)心他們的生活與健康，是幸福2.有時(shí)當(dāng)他們做錯(cuò)了事，周圍的人會(huì)幫助他們改正，他們感到幸福。3你同意同學(xué)們的看法，你認(rèn)為當(dāng)你做你也會(huì)感到幸福。要求：第三要點(diǎn)的內(nèi)容需用三到四句話展開合理想象，進(jìn)行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；詞數(shù)80 左右，開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Happ in ess is for every one. Some stude nts think happ in ess comes fr

7、om study ing hard at their lessons. Their parents are always taking good care of their life and their health. They feel happy.Some stude nts say whe n they do someth ing wrong, people around them will help them to correct it. They believe this is happ in ess.I agree with them. I love my friends cong

8、ratulating me when I enjoy success. When I do someth ing kind to others, like con gratulat ing them, I feel happy, too.Whe n we think of these thin gs, we realize that happ in ess is all around us.3. 安全你我他，幸福千萬家”，關(guān)愛生命，確保平安，讓我們的生活更加幸福安康。請(qǐng)以“Keepincsafe _(at home/ at school /on th?ad)為題寫一篇80 詞左右的英語短文。要

9、求：補(bǔ)全標(biāo)題：條理清晰，語言流暢；文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名。內(nèi)容包括： Is it important to keep safe？(2) Why do you think so?, (3)How can you be safe.?Keep ing safe at schoolIt ' important for us to keep safe at school and it will make us study better and live mo rehappily .In order to keep safe at school, we must do like these.F

10、irst, be in order wh en we aregoing upstairs or dow nstairs. Second, make sure to be safe whe n we are doi ng sports. Try notto be hurt. Third, know about some knowledge of safetyt' helpful to us.If we follow the advice, we' imake ourselves safe at school.4.醉酒駕車，已經(jīng)成為嚴(yán)重的社會(huì)問題，越來越受到人們的關(guān)注，根據(jù)下面提示

11、，寫一篇80 詞左右的短文，談?wù)勀愕目捶?。許多人不遵守交通規(guī)則，仍酒后駕車，對(duì)自己和他人的安全不負(fù)責(zé)任現(xiàn) 象因?yàn)榫坪篑{車，給自己和他人和很多家庭帶來傷害后 果為了自己和他人的安全，呼吁司機(jī)不要酒后駕車，呼吁更多嚴(yán)格的規(guī)則 和制建 議度出臺(tái)提示詞：酒后駕車 drunk driving 不負(fù)責(zé)的 irresponsible 交通事 故 traffic accident 對(duì)造成傷害 do harm to Every one should obey the traffic rules. Yet there are still many people drunk driv ing.It 'irr

12、esponsible 不負(fù)責(zé)任的 ）not only to the drivers themselves but also the others.Many drivers drive very fast in the street, or even in the crowded traffic while they are drunk.Drunk drivers caused a lot of accidents. Thousands of people were killed and many more wereinjured every year. In order to keep the

13、 public safe, wsehouldn't drunk drive. We must obey thetraffic rules. If you drink too much, you shouldn't drive by yourself. You'dbetter take a taxi or askothers for help. The government is supposed to make more serious rules and laws as soon as possible.5. Keep Healthy精品文檔精品文檔Every one

14、 wants to keep healthy today, especially our students. But wdeon't pay attention toour health. Some of them go to school without breakfast in the mornin g. Some students and pupils play computer games or watch TV all day, especially at w eekends. Many boys think it is cool to drink or smoke.It i

15、s important for us to have good habits. We should eat breakfast every morning . We canwatch TV or play games for a short time, then have a rest. We also can take part in some clubs. I think it is necessary for us to keep healthy.6. 以“ I want to do something for my schoO我想為學(xué)校做一件事）”為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符

16、號(hào)不占格。）（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）I want to make school clean. You may think it is very simple. But I don't think so. Our teacher said, "School is your home, you should keep it clean. "But I have never done anything to make school clean. For example, I have never told my classma

17、tes to pick up rubbish after he threw it on the ground. I also threw the rubbish on the ground. So I want to make school clean so that everyone can forgive me. During this summer holiday, I will go to school to make school clean. Of course, I will do it with my classmates. We will make school clean

18、every weekends next term as well. Now, do you think it is simple?7. 全國實(shí)施公共場所禁煙規(guī)定，針對(duì)這一話題，某中學(xué)對(duì)該校學(xué)生的吸煙情況進(jìn)行了一次調(diào)查，結(jié)果如圖所示。請(qǐng)就此話題用英語寫一篇短文。要求： 1. 對(duì)調(diào)查結(jié)果進(jìn)行描述；2表明自己的看法并提出建議；3詞數(shù)在80 左右。提示詞 ：do a survey about"做一個(gè)有關(guān) .的調(diào)查）3% of the students（百分之三的學(xué)生）A survey about smokers in a middle school tells that although 9

19、0% of all students never smoke, 3% of them often smoke and 7% sometimes do. In other words, 10% of the students smoke. Tha ' t s terrible.As we know, smoking is harmful to our health. Every year, thousands of people lose their livesbecauseof it. Smoking not only does harm to your health, but als

20、o wastes money. Because, a fire may be caused by cigarette ends. ' It s a pity to learn that one ends in death by smoking.In short, smoking is so dangerous that we should keep away from it.8. 目前，越來越多的中學(xué)生利用周末上各種各樣的培訓(xùn)班或請(qǐng)家教。對(duì)于這一現(xiàn)象，存在兩種不同觀點(diǎn)：有些人認(rèn)為有必要另一些人認(rèn)為沒有必要跟老師學(xué)比自己學(xué)好可以鞏固課堂所學(xué)內(nèi)容可以學(xué)到更多的東西容易養(yǎng)成依賴習(xí)慣學(xué)生需要時(shí)

21、間休息請(qǐng)您根據(jù)以上提示，以Is a Training Class of Family Teacher Necessary為題，寫一篇 120詞左右的短文，反映表中內(nèi)容，并簡要闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)。文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。要求：層次清晰，連貫流暢；表達(dá)靈活，不要逐字逐句翻譯。參考詞匯：鞏固strengthen；Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary?More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having familyt

22、eachers at the weekend. There are two different viewpoints about it._【參考范文】精品文檔精品文檔Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary?More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at weekend. There are two different viewpoints about it.Some th

23、inks it necessary. Firstly, i ' t s more effective to study with a teacher than by themselves. Secondly, it can strengthen what we learnt in class. Besides, they can learn a lot more. Others think it unnecessary. For one thing, students can easily form the habit of dependence. For another, stude

24、nts need time to relax from time to time. In my opinion, whether a training class or family teacher is needed just depends. If you are really very weak at or interested in a certain subject, maybe ' it s OK for you. But be sure to choose a good and suitable class or teacher, otherwise it would b

25、e a waste of time and money.9. 最近，你班同學(xué)就“父母是不是最好的老師”這一話題展開了討論。有些人認(rèn)為父母是最好的老師，有些人認(rèn)為也不盡然。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提示，寫一篇短文 介紹討論結(jié)果以及你的個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)。觀點(diǎn)原因 同意 不完全同意1 教會(huì)如何生活過分溺愛2 指出缺點(diǎn)，指明方向強(qiáng)加興趣、價(jià)值觀3 教會(huì)富有愛心希望值過高要求：1、根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文通順連貫；2、詞數(shù) 110 左右；3、開頭已給出，不計(jì)入單詞總數(shù)?！緟⒖挤段摹縍ecently, we have had a discussion in our class about whether parent

26、s are our best teachers. Some students agree to the point because they think parents help to point out their mistakes intheir lives. They teach them a lot about how to live a meaningful life. What' s more, parents 'lovehelps to teach them how to love others. So parents are their most importa

27、nt teachers.However, not all of us hold the same views. Some think that their parents give them too much love, and they are too eager to pass on their values and interests to them. Moreover, their parents sometimes expect too much of them, which makes them feel their goals too difficult to reach.In

28、my opinion, parents are our important teachers. But parents should also try to understand their children more and limit the generation gap.10.新農(nóng)村-A New VillageYesterday we went to visit a village. On our way to the village, we were glad to see a lot of nice rice, vegetablesand fruit in the fields. A

29、lso we saw new schools, factories and buildings.We got a warm welcome at the village. Some farmers invited us to their houses. They had moved to the new buildings. Their living room was large and bright. In it there were all kinds of new furniture. Nearly every family had color TV sets, fridges,wash

30、ing machines and some of them even have bought motorbikes. Everyone had a smile on their faces. It was said that some guests from a foreign country would come to visit it.We were very glad to find the farmers' life had changed a lot. We hope their life will become better and better.11. 許多學(xué)習(xí)生活中的煩

31、惱都會(huì)使人產(chǎn)生壓力,為了更好地發(fā)現(xiàn)及解決同學(xué)們中 存在的心理壓力問題 ，你們班特意開展了一次以"Less Pressure, Better Life"為主 題的英語演講比賽,請(qǐng)你準(zhǔn)備發(fā)言稿,談?wù)勀愕囊恍┚徑鈮毫Φ暮棉k法,與同學(xué)分享 ,內(nèi)容包括:?同學(xué)們中普遍存在的壓力是什么；?我的壓力是什么；?我是如何成功緩解我的壓力的。精品文檔精品文檔注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名。詞數(shù) 80100 ；短文的開頭已給出 （不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。Less Pressure, Better LifeHello, boys and girls! Pressure is a serious pro

32、blem in today's world. Students inour class are under too much pressure._That 's all. Thank you!參考范文: Less Pressure, Better LifeHello, boys and girls!Pressure is a serious problem in today' s wSotrul d.ents in our class are undertoo much pressure. Some students can' gt et on well wit

33、h their classmates, while others mayworry about their exams.I ' malways under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So theysend me to all kinds of training classes at weekends.Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt t

34、ired. I neededtime to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.That 's all. Thank you!12.你心目中的好老師是什么樣子的？一名受歡迎的老師應(yīng)該有什么樣的特點(diǎn)? 圍繞這個(gè)主題，用英語寫一篇80 詞左右的短文。The Good Teacher in Your HeartFirstly, a teacher should be able to play diffe

35、rent roles in school. He can care about us like a mother. He can give us knowledge. He can play games and discuss problems with us like a friend.Secondly, a teacher should be patient and helpful. When we are in trouble, he can always help us patiently.Thirdly, a teacher should be fair. He should hav

36、e the same rules for everybody. Fourthly, a teacher should be fun. He can make his class interesting and make us laugh.13. 愛是心中的太陽， 融化你我身邊的冰雪。 假設(shè)你是李明， 你們學(xué)校的 “ EnglishGarden”正在舉辦主題為 付出即是收獲”的征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你聯(lián)系自己平時(shí)的愛心 行為和感受寫一篇文章投稿。 要求： 1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名和校名等相關(guān)信息。2. 80 100 詞。標(biāo)題和文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Giving is ReceivingI am a

37、 student from Green Middle School. My name is Li Ming. I like helping others because I think it makes me very happy. I often help my classmates with their schoolwork. Sometimes I help clean up my house. I go to the old people's home and do some cleaning for them once a month. I often visit the Children's Hospital to cheer the sick kids up. I read stories and sing songsfor them. I also help people in trouble. I think giving is receiving. Helpi